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The romance was full in air for them…….. After their proposal and acceptance it was getting very difficult for them to stay away from each other……… By some or the other reason either would come to each other cabin or room….. Every thing was going very smoothly in their life….. Adi and Palak were very happy for them….. Palak would not leave a single chance to tease them when they were caught……… Adi also started feeling for Anvesha…….. he was waiting for right opportunity to propose her……..

Maan and Geet had decided that they will get married soon but they also said that the marriage will be a simple court marriage and then they will give a grand reception for everyone….

Geet was all shy thinking that she will get married to a person whom she loves…… But before they get married Geet insisted that Palak should get married…. Maan was also of a same opinion……… But Palak was just avoiding this…… One day finally Geet asked her directly as she came home quite early as it was less pressure of work in office and Maan was also out of town for some meeting ……

Geet: Palak……. I want to talk to you………

Palak: Ha bolna……

Geet: I want to know why are you every time avoiding the question of your marriage……..

Palak: If you want to talk about this I am not interested……….

Geet: But why??? Tell us if you love someone……..

Palak: I told you Geet I don't want to discuss this…. What is your problem ha……. Why are you behind me for my marriage……. I have never told you that you and bhai get married only after I get married…….. Why do you want me to go away from my own house…….

Geet had tears in her eyes : Palak why would I want you to go away from your house….. This will always remain yours…….

Palak: Then leave me alone…… I don't want to discuss this thing again………. So it is better you leave me alone……..

Geet was hurted for the first time with Palak's words…… She just ran away from there……..

After Geet left Palak realized what has she done…….. What is wrong with her….. Why did she screamed on her…. How can she talk in such a manner…….

Palak (self talk): I should have told her that I love someone and she would have understood and I cannot tell Bhai at present because even I am not sure whether he loves me or not….. Yeh maine kya kar diya…….

Palak went in search of Geet in the whole house but she was not to be seen anywhere……….. She had tears in her eyes…… Yeh kaha chali gayi…….

She waited for quite a long time but called her several time but she was not responding to any of her calls……. She decided to call Maan thinking that maybe she would be with him unaware to her that Maan is out of town as he left from the office……. She will say sorry to her……. But to her bad luck Maan's phone was unreachable……..

The time started passing but there was no sign of Geet…… Now Palak was getting more and more worried….. She started cursing herself that how can she even think of speaking to Geet in such a manner…….. She is her best friend.. She should have told her the reason………. She would have given a solution……..

Palak (with tears in her eyes): Geet where are you??? Please come back please…..

It was late evening when Maan entered Palak went to him and hug him tight……

Maan: Palak…. Kya hua…… why are you crying so much???

Palak: Bhai Bhai……..

Maan: Kya hua choti…….

Palak: Where is Geet???

Maan: She is not with me…….. I was not in office since afternoon……. She must be in office……. Let me call her on her mobile…….

Palak: Bhai I am trying Geet's no since long but I am not able to reach her….. Where is she??? Bhai Where is Geet???

She hugs him tightly……. I am sorry Bhai I am sorry…….. She went away because of me……

Maan: What are you saying??? Why would she go because of you???

Palak tells everything to Maan and says it is she who is responsible……

Maan: No Palak she cannot be ever angry on you…. Don't worry she must be here only….. I will go and search her…… I will check in office also……

Palak: I will also come……..

Maan: No you stay here…. If she comes here???

Palak agrees and decides to stay at home only……. While Maan took his phone and car keys and moved out of the house….. He kept on trying Geet's no but her phone was not reachable…..

Maan: Yeh ladki kaha chali gayi…… She never does this way….. Where do I find her now…… I will go and check in office……..

He reaches office but on way he calls Adi and tells him to come to office…… So by the time he reaches Adi and Anvesha both were in office…….

Adi: Kya baat hai Maan…… When did you come?? And what was so urgent that you called in office at this hour…….

Maan: Adi, Anvesha is Geet in office????

Adi: at his hour??? What will she do alone…….. She must be at home……

Anvesha: Kya sir ate hi Geet ki khabar……

Adi: Kya Anvesha……

Maan was getting frustrated: Adi, Anvesha Geet is not at home…… let us see if she is in office……

Adi and Anvesha: What???

They all search for Geet in office but she was not there……. In the mean time Maan receives the call from Palak…..

Maan: Ha Palak………

Palak: Bhai…… Geet mili na….. she is with you na…….

Maan does not know what to answer her as he himself does not know where she is???

Maan: I will find her Palak…… don't worry………

Maan tells Anvesha to go to his home to be with Palak as she is blaming herself……..

Maan and Adi search Geet at all possible place but she was not found anywhere…….

Maan: where are you Geet??? Where???

They reach home and is shocked to see the condition of home…… Anvesha was lying unconscious and Palak was not too be seen anywhere……..

They ran towards the Anvesha and Adi called the doctor immediately….. Now they were more worried about Geet and now even Palak was not there.. After a while Anvesha gain her conscious……

Adi: How this all happen??? And Where is Palak……..

Anvesha: She took away Palak……..

Adi: Who???

Anvesha was struggling as she was having pain and there was medicine effect……..

Maan: Who took away???

Anvesha: Geet………

Maan and Adi: Geet????

Precap: ????











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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first yiiipppeee
Cumg to the update.
Loved it its awsome.
Geet is hurted nd went sway.
But where.
No one is able to find
Kahi pari toh wapis ni aa gyi.
Dey took even palak away
Update jaldi next part.
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh kya chakkar hain

geet t00k paIak but where
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...
awesome ...
shocking to know geet took palak somewhere?
wait ing for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
why geet will tk palak away...something is fishy...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!ye kya hogaya? who kidnapped palak??
and y anvesha was saying geet's name?
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg what is happening yaar..everything is going upside down..😭😭😭😭 very worried😭pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifully written
waiting fr nxt part
Edited by ramyayuppy - 12 years ago

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