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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates 😊
Thanks for the PM
Read both the chapters in one go

Chapter 4
Thank God, La & her mom helped Khushi
So nice of La's mom to treat Khushi as her own daughter
Liked the fact that they are taking Khushi along with them

Chapter 5
Good that Arnav has started to miss Khushi
Food sucks, can't find things in place... u didn't even know she took care of u so many days... want Arnav to miss Khushi more as days goes by & repent for his mistakes.
Atleast Akash & Dadi had the heart to think of Khushi.
Hate Buaji for her selfishness
What's the point of Shashi & Garima thinking of Khushi after deserting her
La, Khushi & their boutique... hmmm ... sounds interesting.



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Posted: 12 years ago
eagerly waiting fr d nxt updt:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :-) am happy at least khushi now have some help from her friend :-) but I wonder what arnav would do when he finds out that khushi is not her home 😲 ,
Eagerly waiting for the next part :-)
Thx for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART SIX

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Shashi garima buaji along with payal were came to RM,, except arnav the others were present in the hall,, seeing guptas maami became furious and the others also saw them and stood up,,

Maami: Oh shashi ji, garima ji,

Shashi: Namaste maa ji,,

Daadi: Namaste beta,,

Shashi: Maa ji hum,, we are really sorry for what the kids,,

Maami: Not kids madhumati ji, aap ki niece only,,

Daadi: Manorma,,

Maami: Saasu maa please because khushi our arnav bituva also suffered,,

Shashi: Manorma ji we really sorry about what happened but,,

Daadi: Shashi beta the decisions were both of them and now how can we only blame khushi bitiya for what happened??

Shashi: Maa ji,,

Daadi: We knew beta khushi is a nice girl with lots of values and morals and she can't do that,,

Akash: Yes papa,, may be it was just a misunderstanding between them,, bhai will soon realize and will bring Bhabhi here back,,

Shashi: Ji,,

Daadi: Beta khushi bitiya kaise ho??

Garima: Wo maa ji khushi,,

Buaji: Titaliya left our house maaji,,

Daadi: What?? Where???

Shashi: Wo we don't know,,

Maama: But how could she just leave her home,, and where she will go??

Buaji: We don't know anything about her maa ji,, leaving our house was her decision and she left,, she may be with her some friend,,

Akash: But buaji why you didn't stop her,, you could have informed us or bhai,,

Buaji: No bituva,, she choose her fate by herself now,,

Akash: But buaji,,

Maami: Akash bituva madhumati ji is right you should think about your future,, ok,, I will look a good girl for you,,

At that time payal and Akash's eyes were met,, but their eye contact was broken by buaji's words,,

Buaji: Manorma ji what are you saying,, akash bituva and paayaliya's shaadi were fixed by us hai na now??
Maami: Madhumati ji,, if payal is also like khushi then kal she will also ask for divorce hai na tho tab hum log kya karenge?

Buaji: Manorma ji,,

Shashi: Manorma ji jo hamari beti ne kiya uske liye please don't make payal suffer,,

Daadi: Shashi bituva we were decided that akash and payal's marriage will happen and it will happen,,

Maami: Saasu maa,

Daadi: Yes manorma,, for what our chote and khushi bitiya why would payal and akash suffer and about chote's and khushi bitiya's,, the divorce matter was between them and they already divorced and now nothing can happen,, so better everyone think about the future,, and khushi bitiya, you didn't made her stop from leaving hai na shashi bituva how should you call yourself parents of her,,

Shashi: Maa ji,,

Daadi: No bituva we will decide about further rituals of marriage later,, ok,,

Shashi: Ji maa ji,,

Shashi: Maa ji it was form our daughter that your son couldn't get a good so,, we don't have any problem of him marrying anyone else,,

Daadi: Hmm, we will think about that also,, bituva,,

They then bid bye to raizadas,, but payal wanted to tell akash about khushi,, that they should search her and bring back her home,,

But they couldn't speak in alone,,

After they left,,

Akash and daadi really got worried for khushi,,

Akash: Naani I think we should search Bhabhi,,

Daadi: I too think that beta but where will we go and search,,

Akash: I don't know naani,, should I tell bhai about this,,

Daadi: No,,

Akash: But,,

Daadi: He made her from his life now what will he do more than this,, he don't have the right to know about her,, and anyone is not going to tell about khushi bitiya to him,, ok,,

Akash: Hmm,,

Daadi: But you can search her in your way akash bituva,,

Akash: But naani he will find out I am sure,,

Daadi: But,,

Akash: Yes naani I can try at least,,

Daadi: Yes beta we should do at least that for her,,

Akash: Yes naani,,

Mumbai,,,,,,,


After resting sometime khushi came to kitchen to help mamma,,

Khushi: Mamma,,

Vasu: Are beta aap,, I said na you should take rest,, then,,

Khushi: Mamma I was feeling not good by being alone,, so,,

Vasu: Ok beta,,

Khushi: Mamma should I help you with cooking,,

Vasu: No beta almost everything done,, see I cooked rice, daal and salad also,,

Khushi: Salad la's favorite,,

Vasu: You knew it,,

Khushi: How could I forget that mamma,, ok mamma you dint made any sweets,,

Vasu: Sweets,,

Khushi: Ok I will make jalebi or kheer,,

Vasu: Kheer my favorite,,

Khushi: Kheer,, he also like very much,,

Vasu: Beta,,

Khushi: I,, I am sorry mamma,, I will make it in few minutes, you just call la for lunch,,

Vasu: Ok beta,, beta are you sure you are fine,,

Khushi: Yes mamma,, just like you said I am moving on in my life and it's my step,,

Vasu: I am proud of you my bachi,,

Saying this she kissed khushi's forehead,,

Vasu called la for lunch and they three sat together for lunch,,

After seeing kheer,,

La: Mamma you made kheer,,

Vasu: Yes taste it,,

After tasting it,,

La: Mamma kheer is so good but I don't think it's made by you,,

Vasu: Why,,

La: It's really nice,,

Vasu: Haan iska kya matlab hei choti mamma acha khana nahi banatha

La: mamma i was just kidding

vasu: but today this kheer is not made by me,, because it's made by my khushi beta,,

La: Really its so good Khush,, you cook really nice,, you know if you want then you can make your own restaurant khushi,, what say???
Khushi: Thanks la,, but I want to study further and make my own identity that I wished from beginning,,

La: That's good Khush,, and I will do something for that,, ok khushi I am going my boutique if you want you can also come,,

Khushi: But la what will I do there,,

La: Khush you have good taste in design and everything so you can give me some modifications and that will help me and you also wont get bored here,,

Vasu: Yes beta you go with choti,,

Khushi: Mamma but you here alone,,

Vasu: I am fine beta and you two will come early also,, you go with her ok,,

Khushi: Ji mamma,,

Vasu: Khushi beta ek minute,,

Vasu went to her room and then came a small box,,

La: Mamma what is this,,

Vasu: It's for my khushi beta,,

Khushi: Mamma lekin,,

Vasu: Beta it's for you wear this,,

Khushi opened the box and saw a chain in which K written on it,,


Khushi became dumbstruck,,

Khushi: Mamma yeh,,

Vasu: Now you don't need this managlsuthra as you husband also doesn't gave any importance to this,, so wear this,, it will give you a pehchan,, ok,,

Khushi removed her managlsuthra and wore the chain,, she felt really light and became teary,,

Vasu: Beta don't cry,, this managlsuthra wasn't fro you if then it will surely come back to you,,

And then vasu wiped khushi's tears and khushi put the managlsuthra in her bag and left with la,,

Vasu also became happy for khushi,,

In lavanya's office,,

Khushi helped la with her office really,, she arranged the files there and attended the calls and also made some suggestions for designs and fashions,, and it really helped la a lot,,

They returned home in the evening,,

Seeing them vasu walked to them,,

Vasu: Choti,, khushi beta,, how was your day,,

La: Very nice mamma,,

Khushi: It was good mamma,,

La: Mamma Khush really helped me a lot,, and I thinking giving a job her there,,

Vasu: Wow that's good,,

La: So I am appointing you as my manger ok,, you can whatever you want in that office ok,,

Khushi: Thanks la,,

AR,,,

Arnav was in his cabin he couldn't concentrate on anything,, every time he di anything khushi's face came in front of him,, as she is saying that he haddone a great mistake,,

Arnav [st]: should I call her and ask about her whereabouts, shit ASR,, she is in peace and now you are making her trouble,

Just then shital, his PA came to in his cabin,,

Shital: Sir the new clients have came to meeting,,

Arnav: Ok shital just made them sit in the conference room, I am coming in few minutes,,

Shital: Ok sir,,

Edited by Maithly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
arnav missing her
lovely
thanks for pm
Edited by abika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...So khushi is trying to move on and Arnav is stuck...he deserves it...Thx for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry was not able to comment. Just read three parts now cuz I was sick. I must say great story
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!
good to see at least ASR missing khushi...but he should repent for his deeds
conitnue soon

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