New FF:Adhuri Si AasPart50(pg53)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

shreya

@ShrePreet18

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

very nice update👍🏼, i hv read starting parts but some are stil left, i will complete them soon😊.

Quote

Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi
very nice update👍🏼, i hv read starting parts but some are stil left, i will complete them soon😊.

Ok . . . thanks for liking my story!!😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

i really love it when arjun-arohi have some light moments between them... a smile comes on its own... i don't like their fights...

the song you have put up is my favorite... :)

thanks for listening to me! (even if you haven't put the song up on my saying let me believe that! :D)

Quote

arjuhi_s

@arjuhi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

nice update naina..loving their light moments..donu ko jaldi ehsas ho jaye apni feelings ka..waiting for the next one..and yes mystery bhi jaldi solve karo

Quote

shreya

@ShrePreet18

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Thanks dear... 😃

want next update soon naina, its super😊

Quote

Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Part: 24
In the evening . . . all are busy to decorate the whole place. There is a big table in the middle of the hut , all the surroundings are decorated with balloons & coloring ribbons.

"Chalo ho gaya kaam pura . . . ab sirf flowers lagana baki hei & cake . . ."--- Gouri says shake her hands. Arohi decorating the place till now. her one hand is full of ribbons , she says without turning back---
"Toh tum ghar ja rehi ho ?? wait for me . . . bas ho gaya hei . . . 2 min!!
"ok . . . tum kar lo . . ."---Gouri says while sitting in the bench.

After Arohi completed her job , she & Gouri come to the office to take their bags , "Accha kaal yahaan kuch programme nehi hoga?"---Gouri ask her curiously. Arohi thinks for 2 min . . . then she says --- "programme?"

"Haan . . . matlab song , dance . . .are baccho ke liye party hei agar aise karenge toh maza nehi ayega baccho ke saath toh bachhe ban jana chahiye . . ."---Gouri says.

"Gouri . . . actually yahaan aisa kuch nehi hota hei . . ."---Arohi arranging her table , she says without looking at her.

"Koi kare ya na kare mei toh kaal kuch jarur karunga"--- Arohi & Gouri turn back hearing this. In the door Arjun is standing with a cunning face.

"Tum kya karoge?"---Gouri ask with a doubt.

"Surprise hei . . . kaal dekh lena . . . ab chale . . .??"---he ask raise his eye-Brows.

Arohi & Arjun sitting in the front-seat as usual Gouri sit in the back-seat. It becomes her habit or may be her right to seat beside him , this place is become more dearest to her. Arohi looking at outside , all the memories are gathering in her eyes today . When they were went to the market , his beautiful poems , & her silly behavior with that , they were spend a very good time together. whenever she thinks about Arjun she smiles. She really likes him, in front of Gouri she pretend that they are only partners, but Arjun's company, his attitude , smile , happy nature ---all these things she likes. after many years she feels like someone is come to her life . . . who is very special to her .Today she feels an sweet smell in the breeze , in the sky , she close her eyes . . .she is thinking about Gouri's word . . .

"Arohi tumhara ghar aa gaya . . ."---Arohi opens her eyes hearing Arjun's voice who is touched her shoulder. She come out of the car , Gouri also come out with her , "Arohi mujhe key do ghar ki . . ."---Gouri says , she dont want to disturb them as she knew that they have to spend time together , so she left. With her Arohi also turn back ,

"Arohi ye tumhare liye . . ."----Arjun says from the back , he gives her a gift-pack , " Gift-pack??? isme kya hei??"---she says surprisingly.

Arjun scratch his head & says in a serious tone "jitna mujhe pata hei . . . gift pack mei na gift hota hei . . . bomb nehi . . ."

"Are matlab . . .''---She smiles . . . "Matlab jo bhi ho Arohi mei lekin terrorist nehi hu . . ."---Arjun says. "Ab tum ise khol ke bhi dekhoge?? ya sawal hi puchte rahoge?"---he added.

She opens the packet & can't believe her eye, that was the show-piece which she saw in the shop. "Tumhe . . ."---She wants to tell something to him but she can't find any word to explain her happiness.

"Tumhe ye bahot pasand tha na?"---Arjun enjoying her happy face .

"Haan . . .lekin . . .Arjun . . ."---again she fails to say anything.

"Ab thanks mat kaho . . ."---he says with a cute smile ."Jab tum shop mei ye show-piece dekh ke apni lips baite kar rehi thi na tabhi mujhe pata chal gaya tha tumhe ye bahot pasand hei . . ."---he says without any pause.

"Thanks . . ."---atlast she says something.

"Ab dekho baad mei phone karke mujhe tane maat marna . . ." ----Arohi starts laughing hearing that . . .Arjun also join with her . . ."Meine sorry kaha na us din keliye . . . "---she says embarrassingly.

"Its ok . . . ab andar jao . . . bahar rahogi toh thannd lag jayegi . . .good night"--- Arjun says & starts his car. Arjun left , Arohi still standing with that show-piece in her hand.

Arohi's Haal-e-dil: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GqGkOaZWcgg (Pls play this link as a background & read the following )

She enters her room , sit in the bed & look at the show-piece, she is smiling , she opens her diary & takes that poem which she keep their with care , she touches the page . . . she is very happy today. From the window a mild breeze is coming with moon-rays , she lying in the bed & sees the moon. her face is lightening with moon-light. She don't know what is happening to her heart.

She gets up from the bed hearing Gouri's voice. Arohi opens the door,

"Kya kar rehi thi tum?? akele akele andhere mei?"---Gouri says standing in front of her.

"Kuch nehi Gouri . . . aise hi . . . aaj ki raat bahot khubsurat hei na . . . ye chand . . . hawa ka jhonka . . ."---she says & come inside the room.

Gouri is listening to her "Tum thik ho na?"---Gouri ask worriedly.

"Kyun??"---Arohi says frown to her ,"Nehi tum ye sab keh rehi ho . . . aur ye kya hei?"---Gouri sit in the bed & take the show-piece in her hand.

"Ye . . .---Arjun finding some words to say . . .

"Arjun ne diya?"---Gouri ask suddenly.

"Haan . . . par . . ."---she keep her head down.

"Par . . .?"---Gouri looks at her curiously.

"Par ek doubt hei . . . mei Aakash ko cheat toh nehi kar rehi hu na?mei use bhula ke kisi aur ke saath . . . "---She hold Gouri's hand. Her eyes are also asking the same question. " ye sab kya bol rehi ho? . . . tum dono ke beech Aakash kaha se aa gaya?"---Gouri says impatiently.

"Gouri hum dono ke beech Aakash nehi Aakash aur mere beech Arjun aa gaya . . ."---She says "nehi Gouri . . . mei ye gift kaal use vapis kar dungi . . ."---she says turn back to her , there is a pin drop silence between them.

Here , Arjun is driving his car , he still thinking about her , her smiles , her eyes which sparkling in joy . . . Arjun is also happy to see her happy. Arjun started like her . . .today is seems like a blooming flower , he wants to spend more time with her . . . his heart is beating fast today . . .!!

Background: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HXmSrnlV5Y

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago