Daya's Birthday Contest Poem-Results page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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To the Poem Contest Of Daya Sir's Birthday celebration ..!!!

Firstly a Very Happy Birthday Sir ..!!!








We've had 2 themes for the contest but since there's just 1 entry in one of the themesthe voting format will be slightly different.
Please do read the next post for the details regarding the voting


Theme 1 : Daya The Supercop

Entry 1

When you hear the word 'Daya',
Instantly a figure appears in front of you...
A CID officer with gun in his hands,
Strong, smart, handsome, height six-feet-two!!
Daya - the tough Cop...
With a gentle heart and a precious lovely smile,
That rules millions of hearts
And mesmerizes everyone across many a mile!!
Daya - the strong guy...
Who breaks open any door within no time,
Whose driving and fighting skills are unmatched,
One tight slap and the culprit admits his crime!!
Daya - the true friend...
Who looks upto Abhi as his elder brother;
With utmost respect, love and care for him,
Even dying for Abhi, he wont bother!!
Daya - the emotional fool...
Whose eyes sarch for Abhi in all odds, to succeed;
They both understand each other unbelievably well,
Their bonding with each other is immesurable indeed!!
Daya - the joyful fellow...
Who thoroughly enjoys teasing his best buddy;
With his good sense of humour,
He never misses a chance to pinch Fredy!!
Daya - the fierce Cop...
Who has earned faith and trust throughout;
A word against ACP or Abhi,
And he will strangle the person, no doubt!!
Daya - the lovable officer...
Whose words, actions, are clean and tidy;
His juniors look upto him
As one of the best officers of CID!!
Daya - the Supercop...
Who makes us believe everything he did;
He makes us laugh, he makes us cry,
Loved by everyone, be it an old guy or a small kid!!
When we think of Daya, a smile comes across our lips,
Innumerable memories, good and bad, flood into our mind;
He is one of the major pillars of CID,
Such a Supercop where else can we find??

Entry No. 2
A supercop for whom all are full of pride.
Always does he stand by his friend's side.
Neither the walls, nor the fetters
Neither the doors,nor the dungeons
Can hold him back.
He's strong, he's intelligent.
The toughest codes he can crack.
He catches the culprit & uncovers the truth.
He indeed is super sleuth.
He strikes fear in the hearts of criminals.
In solving a case he never fizzles.
The toughest times, he has withstood.
He has defied all odds when no one else could.
He holds the leader,ACP Pradyuman,in great esteem.
He understands his friend,he understands the team.
With him by their side,easy is what,the hardest times seem.
He has a heart of gold and is suave.
He's an epitome of honor,brilliance & courage.
The mission however tough-he won't stop.
He is Daya-the supercop.



Entry No. 3


Daya ka hain yeh ada
jo karey jurm ko vida
unka ek lafa kare
kisiko bhi toteh ki tara bulwa
Yeh hain unki ada
jo karein sabhi ko unpey fida
Bachein karey unko pyaar
mujrim hojayeh unsey aar ya paar
inko sab maanthey hain shaktishaali
jo unsey hain har darwaaze ko tudvatey
Inka deemag hain tez
jissey woh nikalthey hain
har mujrimom ka bhes
vesh praschan mein yeh hain maahir
pakad keh mujiromom ka
banayengey unkeh hadi ko choor
Kyuni Yeh hain sabsey alag
sabsey juda
Daya hain naam inka
par dikhaathey nahi
mujrimom par thodi
si bhi Daya
Kyunki sirf
naam hain
inka Daya
aur kaam hain
dharti peh jurm ki mitai
dekeh unko apni
haath ki mithayee


Theme 2 : Daya The Greek God

Entry 1

his eyes like a wings of an angel
his smile like a baby in cradle

his voice like chirping of Nightangle
his gestures like pieces of a riddle

his aura makes a soothing shelter
his purity turns a healing factor

his presence like a gift of Lord
we all termed him Daya the Greekgod


Do read all of them, the writers would love your valuable comments.
Voting details in the next post read CAREFULLY

Results :
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3333841&PID=71406836&#71406836



Edited by Bhavanab - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Voting Details

Since the no. of entries is less and we have jus one entry in one of the categories we will have Marking System instead of voting.People are requested to mark each poem on a scale of 10deeding bu he justificaion to the theme,style of writing, essence of Daya'ness' and how much it attracted you.An average of the total marks recieved will be taken to select the winners.Voters are requested to give reviews of each poem and mention where the marks have been given or cut so that it encourages the writers to do better.Marks can be posted here or PMed to ME as per your convinience but preferably please post them here along with the review.
Participants are also requested to mark each poem, don't worry the marks for your own poem won't be counted.
Marking is open till 10th Dec. 7 PM after which results will be announced on 11th.Any queries can be asked and participants please check if all your entries have been posted, if anyone's is missing pm me asap.Thank You and all the best 😃
Edited by Bhavanab - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All 4 poems are very good...I cant write poem & not an expert so cant give such comments on it...
Just i love the second entry...first entry is good but u describe Daya as a whole..i think the theme is Supercop Daya...maybe i am wrong but just felt it...otherwise everyone is good...
All the best participants 👍🏼

Marks :

Entry 1 - 7
Entry 2 - 8
Entry 3 - 7
Entry 4 - 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm directly giving the marks ..
1- 8marks
2. 9marks
3. 7marks
4. 8marks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poems aur mera chatis ka ankda hai so if I review these I'll be really killing the feel of it. 😆

Straight marks from my side

Entry 1 - 8 marks
Entry 2 - 8 marks
Entry 3 - 7 marks
Entry 4 - 9 marks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All poems are very good...👏
Entry :1 - 7 marks
Entry :2 - 8 marks
Entry :3 - 7 marks
Entry :4 - 9 marks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All the poems are fantastic. Love them all

Entry 1 - 9
Entry 2 - 7
Entry 3 - 7
Entry 4 - 8
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Basically there are 2 themes in Poem contest and the total Entries are 4 in number in which 3 are from First theme as DAYA- The Supercop and only One from the second theme as DAYA- The Greekgod.. 😊
its really Difficult as all Four poems are so Beautifully written and Lovely but as per all Qualities according to Theme, Style, essence of DAYA-ness and attraction...😊

Poem 1

a very very Classy effort👏 but first missed the theme😔, 2nd little lengthy although DAYA-ness and Innovation n attraction was absolute there in that👏, I really enjoyed it alot...👏

8/10👍🏼


Poem 2

a really very very nice attempt👏, enjoy to read it as all it much more under the theme👏, the attraction is also there with DAYA-ness and style👏, I really loved it alot...👏

9/10👍🏼

Poem 3

its a only Hindi Poem a different peace of Nice work is also there👏, it has theme, but missed Style and attraction😔 either DAYA-ness is present there, a good piece of work...👏

6/10👍🏼


Poem 4

this is the first poem on second theme😊, simple and short without any Style and attraction or innovation😔, the theme and DAYA-ness is already there...👏

5/10 👍🏼

@BHAVNA DII... Nice Decoration of thread😳
Great Job...👏👏


all the Best to all but if anyone feel Hurt, I really appologize, the Comments are just of My Own thoughts...😊
Edited by gadhadada - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Entry 1; 8/10.
Entry 2: 9/10.
Entry 3: 7/10
Entry 4: 7/10
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Posted: 13 years ago
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all enteirs r mind blowing👏
gud luck to all participants👍🏼

my votes r

poem1:---- 9
poem 2---- 8
poem 3---- 8
poem4----- 8

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