Jeena Sirf Mere Liye ff sk/ka prt 2 pg 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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"I Changed the Name of My FF"

( Hum Tumhare Hai Sanam *old Name*)

Starring :

Sujal , shezz , Noori , Kripa, Angad....

Special Apperance...Shabbir Alluwalia - Rishi...

Character Descriptions...

Noori - A fun girl loves to party!!! parties more than shez hardly comes to college always partyin has feelins for someone..........wil be found out later... sister of shez

Shez - A fun loving Girl loves to PARTY!!!! also has secret feelings for someone.........Loves all her friends...sister of noori

Kripa - A lovly girl has all the guys behind her not a flirt !! hates having guys after her....

Kashish - A intelligent girl looking for a job very good friends with shez...lives with shez and kripa and noori ..holds dancin lessons in college...Garewal paarivar

Sujal - A Sensible guy always working... hardly parties but wen he does its usually with his best friends...

Mama - Caring mother and wants her sion sujal to get married....

Papa - Caring father to his son rishi but not very fond of his son sujal.....Live together in flat..

Rishi Garewal - well we all know his character lol hes a flirt..... but a very good friend of shez

Angad - A flirt hates rishi and always challengin him usually to do with girls......

should i cont?

please tell me!!!?

thanks luv ya xxx

Edited by Shezzy12 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant wait till part one!!!!!

gr8 job on the intro.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful intro plz start soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Prt One.....

Girl in bedroom....

looking at clothes

Clothes all over the bed....

Girl - uff hooo wht shud i wear......

Girl - this....hmmm.....nahiin.....hm......this.......nooooo.......

Shows Eyes

Shows Smile

Girl - THIS!!!!! YEAAAA

girl comes out wearin a lovely pink skirt with lovely top....

Does her make up

Girl - *singin* Boleh churiyan,,,,,

Girl gets phone call

Guy - hey Shez

Girl is Shez

Shez - RISHI!!!!

Guy - yessss its meeee

Shez - so whts up

Guy - open ur bedroom door

Shez - uff hoo kyun........

Shez opened door

Shez screamed!!!!!

Shez - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Shows Eyes

Shows smile

Wearing brown leather jacket

black trousers

Sunglasses

Guy - hey darling

Shez - RISHI!!!!!!!!!

Shez hugged Rishi......

Rishi - surprised to see me

Shez - off course so how was america

Rishi - the best!!! next tym u better cme along

Shez - will doo.. anyways im gnna hold a party tonight for u for ur return....

Rishi - Thanks huni

Shez * smiled * - its my pleasure

Rishi - umm do me a favour

Shez - noo not this time

RIshi - mere baath tho sunoo

Shez - Rishi i cnt

Rishi - uff hoo please

Shez - i cant invite kripa!!! okay

Rishi - shezzzz

Shez - uff hoo i will seee..

Outside.....

Man goes into his mercerdes convertible

*song on cd player....Dil ka rishta....*

Man - dil ka rishta baarahi pyaara hain......

man smiles....

SHows eyes........

mobile rings

Man - haan ji mama kya hua

mama - sujal tumne breakfast nahiin kahya

Man is Sujal

Sujal - uff hoo mama fikhaar maat karo..

mama - sujal

sujal - mama

mama * laffed * - acha aab main jahti hoon

sujal - bye mama

mama - bye

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In college

Girl dancin

Shows Eyes

Shows Smile

Wearing * shalwar kameez *

Shows dance

Girl - great going guys!!!! nice dancin!!! okay guys remember to come to tomorrows dance lesson

Everyone - yes

Everyone leaves

Shez - hmmmmm...........

girl - kya hua

shez - kuch nahiin..kashish u cnt keep doing dancin lessons u need a job yaar

Girl is Kashish

Kashish - nahiin shez i cnt find a job...

shez - sis i will look so dont worry

Girl - shez chalo na we need to go to the library remember im helpin u study

shez - uff hoo

Shows Eyes

Shows smile

Girl wearing Really nice lilac shalwar kameez

Girl is Kripa

Shez and kripa walkin down

kripa - u need to pass this physics test otherwise....

shez - haan kripa.......

all of a sudden guy comes runnin up to kripa

Guy - AAAAAAAAAAAA KRIPA mere kripa tum yahaan hoooo

kripa - oh GOD bichaou

Guy runing after girl with roses

Kripa - uff hooo mera peecha chordoh!!!!

Guy - nahiin jaanemaan i love you

Kripa - oh GOD please chordoh mujhe

Shows Eyes

Shws Face

Its Angad

Kripa - angad..please......

angad - i love u ............jaanu...........please....

Kripa - angad!!!!!!

Kripa runs

Angad chases her and puls her hand forward

Angad - ooooohhhh janu.......tum...aaab....mujh...sai...baach..nahiin...sakti. ....

Kripa smiled at angad

Kripa hugged angad.....

angad surprised

kripa - ii llooooove u .....

angad *confused * ( isseh kya hogaya... )

Kripa pushed angad and ran

Kripa bumped into Rishi *books fell* and kripa and fell into his arms

Rishi n kripa looked into each others eyes

Angry angad comes running

Angad - *whispered* - rishi ur dead

Rishi - ooohh realli * winked at angad*

Rishi - kripa tum teek ho na.....

kripa - haan rishi

Rishi helped kripa pick her books up

Rishi got kripa up

Kripa - thanks rishi ur so sweet

Kripa gave a dirty look to angad...

Rishi - my pleasure woh um...ajj ek party hain kya tum aah sakti hoo

Kripa looked at angads shocked face

Kripa - ye sure

Rishi - great come to Blue ice Club

Kripa - nahiin u pick me up

Rishi - ooo okay sure

Kripa *smiled* at rishi

Kripa walked off

Rishi - tut tut tut bichara angad......

shez - *laughed*

rishi - chalo shez lets go

shez - srry angad *lafin* yh rishi bhi na.....*hit rishi*

Rishi - oww

Shez - bye

rishi - byeeeee angad ji...

Shez *alfin* - hahaha uss bichari kripa ko maat tang kiya karo

rishi - uff hoo shez its just a bit of fun

shez - haan liken phir bhi rishi its not fair

rishi - teek hain i iwill cut down on it okay ahppy

shez - haan

In class

Shez n rishi sittin next to each other

Teacher - today we will be doin physics

Rishi - oh GOD ... yeh budha bhi na booltha hi retha hai..

shez - shhh

Teacher callin out the names

teacher - shez

shez - yes sir

teacher - rishi

rishi - yes sir

teacher - noooori.....

no reply

Girl sat on the next table

wearing - Party clothes

Girl sleepin

Shez - oh GOD rishi dekh noori koh

Rishi - oh GOD yeh noori bhi na

Shez - noori uotoh jaaldi

noori -*moanin* oooo shez let me sleep yaar

shez - jaaldi ... sir is comin

noori * sleepin *

Teacher comes to noori

teacher - noori bheta uthouh ...

Some people started to mutter...

noori - nahiin mama sohnai doh na

Everyone started to laugh

Shez - OH GOD

Teacher - mama ki bachi *pulled her ear*

Noori - owww * she woke up*

Teacher - get out the class now

Noori * looked at rishi n shez *

Shez - sorry * whispered*

Rishi * lafin *

Shez - haaso....aur haaso....

Rishi - oh GOD shez come on its her fault we cant keep on coverin up for her

Shez - rishi

Rishi - Shez

Shez *started to laugh *

Should i cont.....?

please tell me if its good or not!!

thanks xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgggggggggggggggggg dats sooo funyyyy i cnt stop laffin 😆 omg u killed it shez!!!!! continue sooon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i totally agree wid rach di continue jaan

luvz ya

Luv Noori 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 4 da replies guys
will cont soon!
😃
Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i chcnged da name coz i found out dat sumone else had da sme name as me!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shezzz hurry up n continueeeee
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Part Two....

At home..

Shez called sujal up..

Shez - hey sujal.

Sujal - Arrey ,,shez tum..kaise hoo..?

Shez - I'm fine thanks.. you...

sujal - yeh usual..

Shez - Sujalllll

sujal - haan kya hua..?

Shez - Please can you come to a party tonight,,?

Sujal - Nahiin, shez u know how i am about parties..

Shez - uff hoo dont be soo boring

Sujal - Uff i will seee..

Shez - I'll be waiting..

Sujal - hmm..I will try..

Shez - Teek hain acha im goin now c ya tonite mwah

sujal laughed..

Shez - Uff main kya pehno...kripa wht u think...?this......*Shows a Red mini skirt and black top*

Kripa - OMG sharaam karo.!!!! Nahiin ur not wearing that..!!

Kashish laughed.

Shez - Uff hoo kripa..!!! Come on have some fun yaar..

Noori - Im going to sleep..!

Shez - KYA!! uff hoo didi aap tou sohti hi rehti hoo.

Noori - Shezz I was out partying all night...

Shez - Acha jou..but im waking you up in 2 hours we need to get ready for the party acha

Noori - yaa sure jaan

Shez - Good night,,.

Kashish - Good night noori...

Noori Went to sleep..

Shez - Kashish di

Kashish - ye

Shez - what are you wearing..?

Kashish - Uff i dont think im gonna go..!

Shez- Uff hoo di dont be boring nah!!

Kashish - Nahiin i cant come i got loads of work

Shez - Di please mere liyeh please please please please

Kashish - Uff hoo... teek hain..

Shez - Thank you.. acha now tell me what you going to wear..?

Kashish - Umm...

Kashish and shez walked over to their rooms to discuss clothes..

Rishi came over...

Rishi - Hey girls

Shez - Hi

Kashish - Hi..

Rishi - Woh noori kahaan hai..

Shez - Guess....

Rishi - SLEEPING

Shez laughed.

Kashish - Ahaan..

Rishi walked over to kripa..

Rishi - Omg kripa tum..aur yahaan...kaise..?

Kripa - Umm i live here...

Rishi - Oh ye ye stupid me..

Kripa smiled.

Kripa reading books...

Rishi jumped on the sofa and sat next to her..

Rishi - So what you reading...?

Kripa - Electricty and thermal physics..

Rishi - Ohh yes yes i also read those..

Kripa - hmm yes...You into physics..

rishi - Of course what ever you say jaan..

Kripa smiled.

Rishi - So arent you gonna get ready..?

Kripa - *Nervous Laugh* I am ready..

Kripa wearing :

Rishi - Ye ye sorry..main bhi na..

Rishi ran over to shez..

Shez and Kashish discussing clothes..

Shez - Yeh The latest fashion is to wear the dupatta this way..

Kashish - yeh..Oh you seen the new handbags..

Rishi - Yeh i love pink bags..!!*in a girly voice*

Shez hit rishi..

Rishi - I need your help guys.!!

Kashish - Uff hoo kya hua..!!

Rishi - IS THAT WHT KRIPA IS GOING TO WEAR AT THE PARTY!!

Kashish looked at kripa..

Shez looked at kripa..!!

Shez and Kashish - Tauba Tauba..!! Yeh she needs help we understand you rishi fiqhaar maat karo we will make her look like sexy soon Happy now..

Rishi - Oh i love yoo....you lot really understand me

Shez and Kashish laughed..

Rishi - Okay girls im off ill come to pick my jaanu up in few hours..

Shez - See ya..

Kashish - bye..

Rishi left..

Shez - Kripa ji...

Kripa - haan..

Shez - aap kya paari hoo..?

Kripa.. - Electricty and thermal physics..

Shez - Ahh right..

Kashish - Kripa yaahan aou..

Kripa walked over to kashish..

Kripa - Yes di,,

Kashish - Me and shez are going to give you a makeover..

Kripa - 'makeover' woh kya hota hai..

Shez - Uff hoo..

Kripa - *confused face*

Kashish - oh come on...

Kashish and Shez give kripa a makeover...

kripa wearing...:

Shez - OMG!!!! Yoo look fabulous..!!

Kripa ran to the mirror!!

Kripa screamed.!!

Kripa - WHT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!!!! AAAAAA

kashish - Uff..

Kashsih about to run after kripa

Shez - Di, Koi faraaq nahiin paartha she will be fine give her time to adjust..

Kashish laughed..

Shez woke noori up..

Shez - di come on get ready...

Noori and Shez got ready...

Kashish got ready..

Doorbell..

Shez opened the door..

Rishi - Hey kripa kahaan hai..

Shez - haha woh umm yahaan

Kripa walked over...

Rishi *gobsmacked* - OMG!!!! shez yeh tumne kya kardiya..

Rishi fell..

Shez - oi oi...calm down..

Shez got him up..

Rishi - she looks stunning yaar..

Shez - Well..go on..

Rishi - Kya..

Shez - hmm so dont i deserve a thanks

Rishi - yes of course thanks shez!!

Shez- My pleasure..

Rishi - Chalai..

Rishi and Kripa went to teh club..

Kashish - Have they gone..

Shez - haan..

Kashish - Stupid idiot

Shez- Kyun kya hua

Kashish - abh hum kaise jayengeh..? We need a lift yaar..

Shez laughed.

Noori - Taxi..?

Shez - Yeh come on..

Kashish - Uff... Chalo...

At the Party,,

Rishi and Shez dancing..

Rishi - Uff..how should i ask kripa to dance with me..

Shez- Just ask her for goodness sake its not rocket science!!

Rishi - Uff teek hai

Shez - jou..

Rishi walked over to kripa..

Rishi - Would you like to dance..

Kripa - Sorry,

Rishi - Kyun kya hua..

Kripa - I cant dance..

Rishi - Oh um .... excuse me

Rishi ran over to kashish.

Rishi - SHE CANT DANCE!!

Kashish - Uff hoo she can shes lying to you

Rishi walked over to kripa..

Rishi - you want a drink..?

Kripa - Orange juice please..

Shez - I'll get them

Shez *spiked*put something in kripas drink..

Kripa drank the drink.....

Kripa - That was nice..GOSH..i feel dizy now...

Rishi - Dont you like dancing..

Kripa - Umm..woh...

Angad entered....

Kripa saw..

Angad walked over..

angad - omg kripa tum

Kripa got up..

Kripa - Chalo rishi lets dance..

Rishi and kripa went over to the dance floor..

rishi winked at angad..

Rishi walked over to the DJ..

DJ - this song specially dedicated to his jaaneman...Kripa from rishi....*Mohabat hai mirchi*

Kripa laughed nerveusly..

Kripa and Rishi perfomed a amazing dance...

Rishi - Wow i never knew you could dance soo well..

Kripa - Oh thanks...

Angad felt jelous...

Angad pulled noori forwards..

angad - come on darling lets dance..

Noori - excuse me..!! get off me!!

Angad - Uff hoo.. i need revenge because of that rishi..!!

noori - No...

Angad walked off....

Angad went over to a girl and asked her to dance..

Angad - Hey babes your looking nice...

Girl - Ooh Thanks.

Angad - whats your name...?

Girl - Rach..

Shows eyes..

Shows smile..

Angad - Wanna dance..?

Rach - yeh sure why not....

Angad and Rach dancing..

Rishi and Kripa dancing..

ANgad walked over to DJ

Angad on microphone..!

Angad - So rishi you want a dancing compeptition may the best man win..

Rishi - Yeh sure why not..

Song : Ishq kabhi kario nah..

Rishi and Kripa danced...

Angad and Rach danced.....

Angad keeps on looking at rishi and kripa while dancing...

Rach - Why you looking over there..?

Angad - Woh kuch nahiin..

Shez - OH GOD ... Kashi di.. dekho...rishi ko..

Kashish looked..

Half way through the dance..

Waiter walked over to angad*dancing*

He pushed him by mistake..

Angad fell..

DJ - Looks like we have a winner...RISHI AND KRIPA..!!

Rach - Omg you okay..

Angad - yeh im fine..

Rach helped angad up..

Noori - Kya hua..Shez..?

Shez - Kuch nahiin..

Noori - sujal ka intizaar kari hoo..?

Shez - hmm...

Noori - Doont worry yaar he will come...

Shez faintly smiled..

Kripa - Rishi i dont feel well can we go out of here please..

Rishi - yeh sure..

Rishi and kriap walked out of the club...

Rishi - Where do you want to go..?

Kripa - any where..

Rishi - Caf..?

Kripa - Ye sure why not..

Rishi and kripa went to the caf..

Angad came out and saw them walk into the car..

Rach - Kya hua..

Angad - jaanu lets go out...

Rach - kyun..

angad -umm woh.. i need some precious time with you nah..

Rach - Woh ..liken..

angad - please..

Rach - Sure...come on..

Angad followed rishis car..

Noori - shez get me a drink please

Shez - yeh sure..

Shez walked over to the bar..

She got the dirnks and wlaked over to noori..

She turned around....

The glass fell..

Noori - Kya hua...

Shez - Oh...My....GOD....

Noori - huh..

Shez - Dekho..

Noori looked around..

Sujal - Kaisa lagra hoon mein..?

Noori and shez Shocked.....

Shez and Noori - Hai hai......

Sujal laughed....

What will angad do...?

Is rishi gonna fall for kripa...

Is rishi using kripa...?

Find out on part Three...

Sorry for late reply .. please reply...

xxx

Edited by Shezzy12 - 18 years ago

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