Maine Dil Tujhko Diya - FINISHED!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yes it's true!! I am now finsihing my Fanfic and starting one in fanfictions....I thank all my repliers!! For reading my story and enjoying it! Thankyou!!

kashish - charu!!! uttoh!!

charu - di!

kashish - tumme college jaana hain chaur...and papa isnt here either so hurry up!!

charu - acha!! main aathi hoon!

kashish - haan.....main naashta laghaati hoon...

mahek - di?

kashish - haan mahek?

mahek - di, you have to get a job now.....

kashish - mahek....maine koshish toh kiya hain, liken job nahi milla...

mahek - haan liken tumne to choti choti jobs ke liye koshish kiya tha, bhot saare business jobs hain di...

kashish - business!!

mauli - mahek ne sahi kahan di...try karlo..

kashish - haan haan....abh tum naashta karro aur main tumme college chor aathi hoon...

kashish drops her sisters off to college and looks for a job....and guess where she ends up.....r and g group of industries....

kashish goes in...

kashish - excuse me? kya main mr. garewal se mil sakti hoon?

receptionist - abh woh meeting mein hain, tumare paas ek appointment hain?

kashish - haan..main ek interview ke liye aiyi hoon..

recep - oh!! mrs kashish sinha!1

kashish - miss kashish sinha...

recep - haaan haan, just have a seat...

five mins later..

recep - you can go in now maam...

kashish knocks....no reply...she goes in..

theres a man twirled round on a chair...

kashish - excuse me..

man twirls round...he's wearing a black suit...chewin on a pen...

man - haan?

kashish - main hoon miss kashish sinha...main ek interview ke iye aiyi hoon...

man - ok...betho betho....main hoon mr. sujal garewal...

after interview..

sujal - ok...you've got the job.

kashish -thankyou soo much sir!!

weeks go by and kashish is gettin along.....

at da college------

in class------

teacher - good morning class..mahek,

mahek - haan..

teacher - rishi

shows rishis face.....

he's wearing black leather jacket and jeans...

rishi - haan

teacher - varun!

varun - haan!

teacher goes on......

teacher - break time!!

evry1 goes out and charu tries to catch up with rishi coz...

rishi stops and luks behind..

rishi - (kya kool hain hum)

charu - erm...hi...

she put her hand out//

charu - charu...

he gets her hand and pulls her towards him..

rishi - amazed....

charu - laughs..

rishi - rishi....tum mere class me ho na??

charu - haan main...tumare class me hi hoon...

rishi - charu...?

charu - charu sinha...

rishi - sinha.....kashish sinha?

charu - haan, woh meri bharri behen hain...

rishi - woh mere bhai ke company mein kaam karti hain. she pretty...

charu - aur main??

rishi - utm bhi liken kashish...

charu - rishi!!

at sinha home.........

papa arrives bck from dubai..

kashish - apap!!1

she runs over to him and hugs him..

papa - kashish bethi...kya ua?

kashish tells him bout evry thin and her gettin a job!

kashish - main bhot khush hoon papa!

papa - yeh toh bhot acha hua kashish! aur mere dhoosre bethiya kya karahi hain?/

kashish - papa woh sohri hian..

papa - all of them!

kashish - erm...haan..

at r and g company......

at a meeting ----

sujal - toh main ek party rakh rah hoon, in the evening...my house in celebration of us winning our new h20 product!! and most of this credit goes to kashish....kashish??

kashish - nahi sir....maine kuch nahi kiya...

sujal - tumne sabh kuch kiya kashish,,,ok meeting finished...liken yaad rakho...party mein aajaho..aur kashish...jaane se phelle, mujhe tumse kuch baath karna hain...

kashish - haan sir..

sujal - kashish, main ek contract ke liye apply karaha hoon...and loads of other good companies are too so.

kashish - toh kya sir??

sujal - kashish, is keliye mujhe ahmedabad jaana hain, aur main chaata hoon ke tum bhi mere saat aho..

kashis - main!!

sujal - haan kashish. maine tumara kaam dekha hain.....tum is company ke liye please mere saat aho..

kashish - haan sir.

kashihs bout to walk out da room and sujal gets hold of her hand...she loooks back shocked....sujal lets go

sujal - sir nahin....sujal.

kashish - sir!! main,...

sujal - kashish...koi baat nahiin, in this office, only the people who havent got an cabin says sir to me...

kashish - mere paas cabin nahiin hain sir..

sujal - abh toh hian na...nxt door to me...

sujal gives her da keys to da cabin..

kashish - thnx so mcuh si...sujal!!

sujal smiles...

at da party.....

kashish arrives and sujal goes upto her...

sujal - kashish!!

kashish - sujal...yeh party...sabh tumne arrange kiya hian??

sujal - haan kashish...

kashish - yeh bhot acha hain sujal!!

sujal - smiles*

sujal takes her hand and intoduces her to evry1...

after cg says his speech and sujal receivs his award...sujal and kashish are just talking....

sujal - kashish, after papa is gonna say something about the contract and i left the files upstairs...tum mere liye woh files lahan sakti ho?

kashish - haan sujal...

kashish goes up the stairs but trips and screams and sujal runs upto her..

sujal - kashish!!

evry1 runs upto her....

cg - sujal..tum kashish ko upphar lehjaho....come on evry1! lets continue with the party...evry1 walks away. sujal puts her arm round kashish bout to take her upstairs...

kashish - sujal....main teekh hoon...tum yahan rukho...main files lekhe aathi hoon..

sujal walks away and sees kashishnot walking properly strugglin tog et up the stairs....he goes upto her and carries her in his arms....

thoda sa pyaar hua hain...

thoda hain bhaaki...

he put medicine on her foot.....

sujal - kashish!1 tum bhi na...tum apne khayaal hi nahi raksakti..

kashihs - sujal main...

sujal - tum mere saath ahmedabad nahi jahogi acha?

kashish - liken sujal!! please....humme yeh contract jeethne hi hogi!!

sujal - teekh ahin...

kashish - sujal mujhe neeche jaana hain please..

sujal - nahi kashish...tum yahan raho...

sujal put first aid box bck and gives kashish and glaas of water..

kashish - thnx sujal...

sujal kisses her on the head....

2 b continued........

hope you liked it!!

Edited by flygirls - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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fanx for replying.....

recap....

kashihs joins r and g companies and then she gets closer to sujal.....sujal holds a party to celbrate new h20 product and then kashish trips on da stairs and he take her up in his arms....charu fancies rishi in college....

cont -

sujal put first aid box bck and gives kashish and glaas of water..

kashish - thnx sujal...

sujal kisses her on the head....

kashish - erm..sujal tum neeche jaho..

sujal walks out the room....

at sinha house...

charu goes to meet rishi..

rishi - charu!!

charu runs upto rishi and hugs him...

rishi - erm...chaur...get off me...

charu - shocked* haan...

charu was walkin away upset when he pulled her towards him..

rishi - charu im sorry..

charu - smiles* koi baat nahii..

rishi tries to kiss her on da lips but she moves her face away smilin...


AHMEDABAD------

hotel----

sujal - excuse me? plzz cna i have two rooms..

recep - im sorry. there is only one room left as loads of different companies are coming to acheive this contract..

sujal looks at kashish..

sujal - ill take it...

in da room....

kashish and sujal come bck to the hotel after ameeting with the owner of the contract....

sujal sees kashish shivering...

btw----the sofas are opposite the fire...

sujal - kashish tum wahan bettoh (points to the sofas) i'll just lgiht the fire...

kashish sits on the foor and leans back on the sofa...

sujal lights the fire, put a blanket on kashish and puts his arm round her...

kashish cuddled upto him not realsing wht shes doin lol!

kashish - sujal...thnx...for evrything...

sujal - kashish...

he gets her face and closes his eyes and kisses her on the forehead...

sujal - kashish, i love you....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hope kashish and Sujal will get together for ever,Ekta understand the human feelings,she knows about Indian thinking,so she will definitely take care of the story,and will give a beautiful turn in the story to respect the feelings of audiance-will give turn that Kashih & Sujalwill unite for ever.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey this is sounding good. .im liking it but i think u shud have given a bit more time for him to declare his love. .! its still great though :) keep it up 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy flying girlss yaar post this story in FF forum.. 😛 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx for replying giys...plzz let me keep my stori here!! no one replies in FF forum!! 😭 😭 😭


recap ---

kashish and sujal go to ahmedabad as they need to get r and g company to win a contract.....rishi and charu are secretly going out too!

kashish sits on the foor and leans back on the sofa...

sujal lights the fire, put a blanket on kashish and puts his arm round her...

kashish cuddled upto him not realsing wht shes doin lol!

kashish - sujal...thnx...for evrything...

sujal - kashish...

he gets her face and closes his eyes and kisses her on the forehead...

sujal - kashish, i love you...

continued ----

sujal - kashish, i love you....

they both stare....

thoda sa pyaar hua hain music

kashish - suj..sujal...

sujal closes his eyes...

kashish hugs sujal.....

sujal opens his eyes...

kashish - sujal....i...main....

sujal gets hold of her by the shoulders....

sujal - tum kya kashish?

kashish - closes her eyes* main bhi tumse pyaar karti hoon sujal....

sujal kisses her on the huead again....

they cuddle up and soon fall asleep...

nxt morning kashish wakes up first...

she gets up and looks at sujal smilin....

she was about to get up when sujal gets hold of her hand...

kashish - sujal....we have to go to a meeting...

sujal - toh?

kashish - sujal meeting mrs. basu ke saath hain...

sujal - toh..

kashish - sujal..

sujal pulls her towards him...

(so sujal is leaning against the sofa and kashish is leaning on top of him(kinda))

sujal pulls her towards him..

kashish - sujal! koi dekhle gha!!

sujal - toh?

thoda sa pyaar hua hain music

kashish - sujal...

sujal tries to kiss her on the lips but she moves her face away smilin....

kashish quickly gets up before sujal can get hold of her again... sujal does the same...

at da meeting.....

mrs basu - good morning evryone....aaj main apne company ka bhot bhara product sell karahi hoon, aur maine tum sabh ke company ke ratings dekhi hain....aur main yeh contract r and g companies ko deh rahi hoon!!

sujal gets the award...

bck at the hotel...

sujal and kashish come in holdin hands and sujals whole family is in the hotel room...

kashish quickly lets go...

sujal - mama!! yeh sabh!!

mama - haan betha, humme patta challa ke tumne humare liye award jeethliya hain betha, aur yeh baath tumare papa ko celebrate karan chata hain...

sujal - liken...*looks at kashish*

mama realises evrything......

mama - sujal, we are going now, we just wanted to congratulate you, you stay here for a few days to see wht the contract is about..

cg - jahare hain hum??? itne jaldi!!

mama - gives him a look* haan!!

cg - oh!! ok!

they all leave....

sujal - phew!

kashish - laffin*

sujal - haan mujhe patta hain ke mama ko sabh kuch maaloom hain acha!! kya karoon, mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi ahara!

kashish - kuch nahi sujal....abh main sohne jahari hoon, mujhe bhot neend ahari hain...

kashish was bout to walk away when he gets hold of her hand and pushes her aginst the wall...

kashish - sujal...

sujal - kashish

they stare...

thoda sa pyaar hua hain,
thoda hain bhaaki,

sujal tries to kiss her on the lips but she moves her face agin smilin

sujal - kashish....

kashish walks away lol...[
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Posted: 19 years ago
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why the tears yaar??

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ITS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey flygirl tooooooooooooo goooooooooodddddddddddd.. i love it totallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.............. 👏
please next part jaldi se post karna... me will be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 going seems happy things are back 😊

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