Asya : Night of stars ...(CH5b PG 18)(/23/2/13)

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Lovely updated
Can't wait for the next part
Continue soon <3

thanks dear 😃

Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sweet1210
Just read the both parts
awesome...loved it
pls continue soon and pm me

thanks dear 😳

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naina2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

lovely one. yaar Asad and Zoya ke conversation namkeen hai. Plz do write up some more like these.

The combination of Fire and ice is superb. Well done. Eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: naina2010
lovely one. yaar Asad and Zoya ke conversation namkeen hai. Plz do write up some more like these.

The combination of Fire and ice is superb. Well done. Eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

thanks dear your are right it's fire and water combination 😆

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sana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

ahh...wow just imagining zoya in asad's arms and asad hand on her lips wow

kya baat hai rami superb !

me happy u done on asya too

loved it cont soon

both parts was awsum but scnd was fab !

Edited by aimennaseer - 12 years ago

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: aimennaseer
ahh...wow just imagining zoya in asad's arms and asad hand on her lips wow
kya baat hai rami superb !
me happy u done on asya too
loved it cont soon
both parts was awsum but scnd was fab !

thanks aimen dear

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naina2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Its very hilarious. Lovely write up Remisa. 👏

God what a shayri . Zoya ke shaayri ka exact nakal utaar rahi ho aap. 🤣

Asad ke well mannarisms ko Zoya ke ill mannarisms wah bahi wah..Kya contrast matching

Asad ko phone ki yaad kyo aya wo bhi utni raat ko. iska matlab wo Zoya ko miss kar raha hai. He is slowly falling in love with Zoya.

Very nice scene at the end, Zoya fall into Asad arms, how romantic.

Plz update soon with another chapter yaar. Looking forward for more zoya shayri and Asad Zoya cute cat fights.

Edited by naina2010 - 12 years ago

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: naina2010
Its very hilarious. Lovely write up Remisa. 👏
God what a shayri . Zoya ke shaayri ka exact nakal utaar rahi ho app. 🤣
Asad ke well mannarisms ko Zoya ke ill mannarisms wah bahi wah..Kya contrast matching

Asad ko phone ki yaad kyo aya wo bhi utni raat ko. iska matlab wo Zoya ko miss kar raha hai. He is slowly falling in love with Zoya.

Very nice scene at the end, Zoya fall into Asad arms, how romantic.
Plz update soon with another chapter yaar. Looking forward for more zoya shayri and Asad Zoya cute cat fights.

hehe 😆 thanks dear

actually i love shaayri and when i got any scene i got shaayri words too in my mind so bcoz zoya pe written hai to nakal bhi zoya ki utarni hai na 😆...

actually i have ear pain i go to doctor and i'm better then before my all ff's are stopped just bcoz of this pain 😡...

but i will try to update ch 3 as soon as i can 😃

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naina2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

hehe 😆 thanks dear

actually i love shaayri and when i got any scene i got shaayri words too in my mind so bcoz zoya pe written hai to nakal bhi zoya ki utarni hai na 😆...

actually i have ear pain i go to doctor and i'm better then before my all ff's are stopped just bcoz of this pain 😡...

but i will try to update ch 3 as soon as i can 😃

Oh. I hope you are feeling better now. We will very soon get to read your FF in QH. Take your time and plz update. They are absolutely awesome to read. 😊