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Agrhhh after giving such a darawani teaser you are asking us to enjoy.. update dedo na jaldi plshhh yeh past hain na.. tell me its past please... is this the reason she lost her mental ability. so many questions and your update will answer all.. continue soon.
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LOVELY TEASER😊
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PART 22

(PAST IN RED)


Maan screamed her name but he could not step forward. His legs left him and he was numb not letting him move towards her. she lay there lifeless and he could not go and pick her up. He cried calling out for his Mishti but she was lifeless. His cries reached into the ears of his family members who rushed to their room only to witness a crying Maan standing at the door and a lifeless Geet lay on the floor. Vicky pushed Maan making an entry into the room and the moment he touched Geet, she was all cold, all dead. He panicked and his eyes cursed his own brother.

Shikha: Kya hua ushe.. Geet.. geet open your eyes beta..

Shikha patted her cheeks but there was no response from her side. She looked at Maan and the moment she saw him she lost all her control slapping him for the very first time in her life. she held his collar and kept slapping him.

Shikha: Maar diya na ushe.. maar diya na Maan… you killed my daughter Maan.. you killer your Mishti.. I swear Maan.. agar ushe kuch ho gaya than I will kill you with my own hands. I will kill you..

Dadima too accused Maan but in this entire Raj was all quite just seeing his Doll. Vicky carried Geet in his arms rushing out for the car while Annie held her Dad pulling him to follow Vicky. Maan stood there all numb with no movements from him. His whole world crashed seeing his Mishti suffering for the very first time in these 7 years. the screeching sound of cars brought him back but he did not see anyone. He for a second felt tat he was dreaming but the reality struck to him making him run behind the cars to see his Mishti.

Each passing second was making everyone present there lifeless. It was passed two hours and they were waiting for a single word from the Doctor. A word tat would calm their panicked heart. A word tat would say tat their daughter was all fine. A word tat would make the lifeless Maan smile. A word tat would make everyone believe tat everything was fine…. Nevertheless, there was none. While Maan was stood away from everyone knowing tat he did not have anyone here to soothe him. His eyes cried seeing tat having two big families he had none to be with him. He looked at his mother to soothe him but his own mother shielded her heart from him. Vicky and Annie accused him for getting Geet here while Dadima stayed away from him to punish him. Raj, his Dad was not in a position to say or look at his son as his Doll was struggling for her life inside. Handa's did not have the courage to blame anyone when they themselves put their own princess here. It was another 3 hours and they heard the door open with a slight sound as if the person did not want to disturb their Geet. Dr. Viren, who was just not a doctor but a family friend of the Khuranna's and Handa's could not meet their eyes. how could he meet their eyes and tell them wat he came to know. Though he was a professional but the truth was tat he himself could not believe tat their Geet who was strong enough had taken this step. How could he tell Mohinder and Raj tat he was sorry for it. He slowly walked to Raj who stood next to Mohinder while his eyes down.

Doctor: Raj… She has poisoned herself.. Geet has poisoned herself Raj.

Maan was numb the moment these words reached his ears..

Raj: How can it be Viren.. how can she..

Dr. Viren: She did Raj…. To say she has emptied the whole bottle of sleeping pills into her body.

Maan broke down completely hearing the words.. a bottle of sleeping pills in her soft weak fragile body. His eyes did not need his permission but now they shed the tears that only his Mishti could do and here he cried. Raj collapsed on Viren while Mohinder was numb to his surroundings. Rano and Shikha could not blink their eyes hearing the painful truth about their daughter while Dadima wat could she say. Annie broke into tears and hugged Vicky tight fearing the truth. Viren knew tat this would be harsh for them but he had to tell them.

Dr. Viren: You have to be strong Raj.. She is struggling Raj..the worst thing she did was she had the pills in one go when her body was weak to such an extent tat the pills showed their effect within minutes. Maine kaha tha Raj.. I had told you Mohinder tat Geet is getting weaker day by day aur ab..

Mohinder: How is she Viren.

Viren: should I say she is fine or not Mohinder. Wat should I say Mohinder. Kya kahu main ki tat I did remove the poison but I myself don't know whether she will make through or not. Wat should I say tat her BP is dropping every hour. Wat should I say tat being a doctor m scared to go near her fearing tat I may fail to save her.

Everyone looked at Viren when he suddenly heard a nurse calling him informing tat Geet was sinking and her breadths were uneven. Viren rushed inside leaving all broken while there stood a man who was all responsible for this. It was passed another six hours and than Viren came out giving them a faint smile assuring them tat she was out of danger. He asked Raj and Mohinder to follow him to his cabin.

Viren: Nahi Raj.. don't be so happy.. its just tat she is fine but not perfect.

Raj: Wat do you mean.

Viren: I mean tat she is losing herself in her pain Raj. Aise mat dekho.. wat you feel tat I cant understand wat she had been going. I had warned you Raj.. had warned you and Mohinder ki aisa kuch mat karo tat she will be going in depression again. It was not easy for me to get her out from the same depression earlier. You remember na.. just a 15 year old Geet, how she was. I had warned you to keep her away from him… par phir bhi.. tum dono ne wahi kiya.. ki na unki shadi. La khada kiya na geet ko apne maut ke darwaze pe..

Mohinder: Tho kya karte hum Viren. Was it easy for us to do it. Jaanthe hain hum ki Maan hates her, we know tat he will only give her pain and she will take it like all the years but do we know the reason for it. Nahi.. we don't know and for this I won't let my daughter die.. do you get.

Viren: Phir ab kya tum ushe bacha rahe ho. Do you even know wats eating her. Do you even know tat she will kill herself the way she behaves.

Raj: Virennn..

Virev: Chilla mat Raj… she also belongs to me.. don't forget tat she may be your doll but for me she is one who has given my life back. Given my Armaan back when I had lost everything.

Raj and Mohinder kept quite knowing tat Viren was true.

Viren: She is an angel Raj.. aur main apni angel ko aisa nahi dekh saktha. Why don't you tell the truth about their marriage Raj.. keh do unhe.. let them think Raj.. let them think about this relation.. nahi tho.. sab barbaad hoga…

Raj: Kya hoga.. will they stop hating each other. Will Maan trust me.. Maan who hates me thinking tat I only love her and never bothered for him. will he accept geet in his life.. Nahi na. Viren.. its only them who can solve it.. only them.

Viren: I don't know anything.. but before their destiny and fate kills her, she will die with this pain which she is not sharing with anyone.. she needs to share it Raj…

Mohinder; She will not Viren.. 7 years she did not and she will never.

Viren: force her Mohinder.. force Maan to talk to her.. force him telling tat for once talk to her.. just as her Maan.. sirf Maan.. beg to him Mohinder.. beg Raj.. agar geet ko bachana chahte ho than you have to do it… you have to…raj… only he can save her now.


It was 15 days since than everything had changed in KM. However, Geet was all fine but she was all dead by now. Her liking towards life was just tat she was a dead body who had to live for the people who loved her. She had withdrawn herself though she sat with everyone. There was a pain in her which was slowly eating her and the moment she used to witness the pain in KM it would kill her more. Everyone tried their best to get her back but she refused to be normal. Her guilt and the truth which she had witnessed after coming to KM had changed her to the same Mishti who used to love her life but when the reality hit her, she was dead. It was a similar day when everyone was sitting along with Geet. All had their eyes on her but her eyes were staring at the person who was sitting at a lone corner of the room far away from everyone. Her eyes were in pain but tat pain refused to come out in the form of tears. Her heart blamed her for it, accused her tat she was the sole reason for this, she was the sole reason for taking him away from everyone who did not even give a look at him. The truth tat he was thrown out from their life, the truth tat she had learnt from day 1 of her marriage ate her slowly, killing her inside. She wanted to say, say tat he was not wrong but she could not, she could not as her guilt and pain was taking her away.

Maan who was sitting at the lone corner, he wanted to go and soothe her, tell her tat though he hated her but his heart always loved her. Tell her tat though he says tat he loved Sameera but he never did love her. Tell her tat he was wrong, tell her tat he always searched his Mishi in Geet Handa but he failed to see her in her. He had heard the last part of the conversation between Viren , Raj and Mohinder and was shocked to hear tat he was only the one who could save her. He cursed himself for being the one but he could not get the courage to face her and these 15 days though they were under one roof he avoided talking and sitting with everyone. He wanted to pour out his pain and cry in her lap but he could not. He knew tat the moment he says a word she would die, he knew tat the moment he would say tat he still loved her she would die. He knew tat she was dying and he could not do anything to save her. Though they were sitting away from each other but their eyes knew wat they felt. Geet whose heart accused her for his miseries wanted to end her life and Maan who wanted to stop her from dying. Maan feared seeing the pain in her eyes, his heart died seeing the same pain, which he had seen 15 days earlier, he feared tat he may loose her again and this fear, gave him the strength that he was searching for last 15 days.

Everyone was shocked to see Maan on his knees in front of Geet but Geet was still. She was still though she knew he was close to her, though her heartbeats fasten but she knew its one of her dreams like always. Maan who had strengthened his heart for once to face his Mishti, to save her from her misery. He eyes filled with tears and his head bowed down before his Mishti for the first time in his life.

Mishti….he said softly with pain in his voice but the word had a different effect on Geet. Her heart once again accused her for giving him pain, no she was not Mishti.. she was Geet Handa.. the girl who took everything away from her.

Mishti…

No Mishti.. Mishti.. is dead… Mishti… is dead… Geet Handa killed her ..

Maan looked at her eyes and the moment he saw them his whole world crashed seeing her accusing herself. Accusing for something tat she never did. He slowly held her hand but the moment she felt his touch she jerked making everyone shock. Vicky wanted to stop Maan but Raj gave him a stern look asking him to stop.

M sorry… m sorry.. Mishti….

No don't say.. don't come near me.. I will give you pain.. don't come near me.. you don't know m a leach.. a leach who will suck your blood.. m evil.. don't come near me.. I will take everything away from you.. She pushed his hands again in order to save him from herself. Maan cried seeing it while others stood rooted hearing the painful harsh words.

Mishti….

No not Mishti… No…

Maan held her face making her look at him with his head down. He gulped hard to say wat he wanted.

Can you forgive your Maan…. Mishti..can you forgive your sinner.. Can you Mishti..

Maan looked at the sleeping form of Geet while his tears made him to realize the day when he had to know the extent to which he had hurt her tat he could never heal her. The pain, which she had poured out tat day, made his eyes moisten when he felt slow movement in her. He tried to hear wat she was saying and bend down to hear when his world once again crashed hearing the words..

Nahi Maan.. aisa mat kahiye.. it was not a mistake Maan.. huamra pyar galti nahi tha.. nahi tha… Maan.. listen to me Maan.. listen.. I did not know.. Maan.. I did not know anything.. listen Maan.. listen.. wat will I tell her maan.. she needs you Maan.. Maan… Maannn..

His tears fell on her cheeks wetting her and bringing her out of her nightmare and the moment she opened her eyes she turned wild hitting him. she hit him so hard with her hand tat her nails pierced his skin oozing some blood out but before she could turn wilder Maan held her hands tight forbidding her from hitting and hurting herself. He held her until and unless she was calm and the moment he felt her bit calmer he rested his face in her neck while his tears continued burning his eyes. He held her close to his heart while she once again drifted to sleep.

Mehar entered the room and frowned seeing her Mumma-Dadda sleeping hugging each other. She was so angry tat they forgot her and slept keeping her with Pari. She marched towards the bed and jumped over Maan sitting on him making him flinch in pain a bit but there was no movement from Geet. Maan smiled seeing Mehar but Mehar had tears in her eyes seeing her Dadda's face covered with bruises and blood smeared on it. Maan who did not know why she cried hugged her tight soothing her.

Maan: Ssshhh.. Mehar.. m here.. sssh..

Mehar sobbed while she tried to speak.

Mehar: dadda.. pain… blood.. na…. Dadda… hurt.. Mumma.. na..

Maan still did not get her words and felt tat she was talking about geet.

Maan:sshhh.. see Mumma.. ok.. na.. she is sleeping… mumma.. ok Mehar..

Mehar: Mummma… hurt.. Dadda na.. Mumma.. blood.. Dadda..

Mehar slowly touched his face making him flinch with the burning sensation. He than realized wat she meant and hugged her hard.

Maan: Na.. Mehar.. Mumma did not hurt Dadda.. but Dadda hurt Mumma na..dadda bad na..

Mehar: Naa.. Dadda- Mumma not bad.. good.. veryl.. good.. Mehar.. knwb..Dadda hurt Mumma.. not..

Maan's heart ached with her words but how could he tell her tat he was the reason for everything, reason for her Mumma to die each and very second. Mehar slowly moved out of his grip running to the table getting the first aid box. Maan smiled admiring her Mehar seeing her so concerned for him. Mehar sat back on his stomach and slowly cleaned his wound blowing air on his face.

Maan: Mehar… who said all this..

Mehar: chactli.. says .. blood na.. clean.. this medicine.. clean..

Maan: So Mehar wants to clean Dadda..

Mehar: hmmm.. Mumma.. sleep na.. so Mehar.. clean..

She saw Maan closing his eyes and soon she blew air for soothing him. Maan instantly opened his eyes feeling the warm breadth on his face recognizing it was the mixture of his two angels. The moment he opened his eyes, the caught the serene sight of his Mishti and Mehar soothing his pain. He smiled while Geet followed wat Mehar was doing.

Geet: Baby.. Mehar.. Angel.. Angel.. wat happen..

Mehar: Dadda na Pain.. Mumma.. hurlt dadda..

Geet: Mumma hurt Angel.. hmm.. Mumma na bad.. but who Mumma..

Mehar: Mumma.. Mehar Mumma..

Geet looked at her not understanding tat she was talking about her and she was cursing herself.

Geet: me .. na Mishti.. will.. beat Mumma.. me na.. will.. put her.. in dark.. rloom.. me na.. will bite her.. will ne.. put water on her.. she hurt angel na.. me na.. me na.. will.. pull. Her hair.. hain na baby Mehar..

Maan smiled while Mehar said.

Mehar: Naa… Mumma hurt.. Mumma pain na.. so.. no.. hurt Mumma.. Mehar.. angry.. No hurt Mumma..

Geet: Naa.. Mumma.. hurt Angel na.. so me hurt Mumma..hain na Angel..

Maan: Na.. Mishti… good girl na.. so not hurt.. Hain na Mehar..

Mehar: yesh Dadda.. Mumma good girl..

Geet pouted hearing them and kept her head on his chest that gave Maan some peace while Mehar kept her head on Geet's hugging them.

Maan had been out from KM for some urgent issues in KC asking Dadima to keep an eye on Geet and Mehar. Though he did not wanted to go but he could not avoid this as there was constant question from the investors about him leaving the projects in between and Vicky handling them. Dadima left seeing Geet and Mehar playing leaving the door open when the two naughty angels did see her leaving. Geet smiled looking at Mehar and they quietly sneaked from the room without making any noise roaming from here and there. They walked holding each others hand while eating the chocolates and holding the doll in their hands. They did not even realize tat they were near Raj's room and the moment Geet felt tat unknown pull she started to pull Mehar inside. She slowly opened the door and saw Raj while her heartbeat once again started to beat faster. She slowly left Mehar's hand and went near Raj sitting next to him and keeping her ear on his heart to hear him. Raj had sensed Geet the moment she stepped inside and felt good seeing her near him. Geet looked up to see his eyes while Mehar now sat next to her on the bed. She kissed her dadu and smiled.

Mehar: aayle.. Mumma.. see Dadu smiling.. smiling na..

Geet: Dadu.. ewww.. not Dadu.. he na.. he na.. see… dead.. see.

Mehar: de.. dead..

Geet; Haan.. me see.. doctor.. na.. like this.. dead.. there in hospital…na.. tat girl… na.. dead.. I see..

Mehar shook her head though she did not understand wat Geet said. She wiped the tears raj had and started to speak with him telling him about them..

Mehar: Dadu.. Mumma.. na. Mumma.. hurt Dadda.. Dadda says.. mumma sick..but Mumma.. arre she not singing.. for Mehar..

Geet: Mumma sing.. wat sing.. Baby Mehar..

Mehar: see Nani.. says… Mehar baby na.. so Mumma.. sing for Mehar.. hain na Dadu..

Geet: but where Mumma .. me to sing..

Mehar: Mumma you na.. so Mehar Mumma sing..

Geet: Naa.. Angel Big na.. me and baby Mehar small. So Angel sing.. hain na Dadu..

Raj heard everything while his hands tried to hold her but he could not move them. However, his fingers were moving he could not move his hand. He smiled hearing Geet and Mehar and enjoyed the talks. Mehar was so engrossed he her talks telling each and everything to Raj tat she failed to see tat something had caught Geet's attention but Raj who had his eyes all the while on Geet panicked seeing her. His heart stopped like the way his body stopped moving. He tried to move, pull, talk and shout but he could not. He tried to tell Mehar by his eyes but she was all lost in her world of telling and sharing with dadu for the very first time. Raj's eyes widen seeing Geet and next second the whole room echoed with his voice.. DOLLL…

Precap: I don't feel like giving one…

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Posted: 12 years ago
so emotinal update dear
waiitng fr the next
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful update.. im having tears in my eyes... te way u showed past was so painful, even my maan hurt his geet , but geet accusing herself to give pain to my maan.. wat will be geet answer , u have stop in right place in te past.. in present, te way geet hurting and my maan and my maan soothing her and his angel soothing his pain was so lovely emotional.. te way geet and they angel walking with doll in thyeey hands, two kids searching they happiness..destinty play how much ever u can but atlast my maaneet win u, u will face ur defeat soon, tis is my promise destinty... geet in raj room, wat happen to geet she is hurting herself..i love te update with heavy heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional part
feel sad for geet
how much she suffered in past
but now what she has seen in raj's room
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ll der be ny end to this pain???

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so painful
heartwrenching
u make heart squeeze reading ur updates

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