New ff ANGEL'S DEVIL COMPLETE - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
great part dear
waiting for their first meeting flashback
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
glad maan is fine...
loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love this devil when r u going to update next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME FF...LOVE THE STORY LINE
PLEASE UPDATE SOON...WAITING
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely great update cant wait for more!!!! :)
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nice one
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Posted: 12 years ago
SO MAAN IS THE UNDERWORLD DEVIL WHOM EVERYBODY IS SCARED OF
BUT HE IS WILLING TO LISTEN TO ORDERS FROM HIS GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ANGEL'S DEVIL

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part 6 :-
That reminds me..i also have spent million dollars on you, u have to pay me also..
Bt how??
Nothing hard'..u just have to remember where have we met'I am giving u two days of time..or else be ready to pay me in other way
in the other way?? how?
should i get you a demonstration?
she nodded .
maan didn't think more & landed his lips to hers..melting her as well as himself plunging deep inside her mouth evoking every buds of their tongues, in a breathless, hot, destructive passion
WOW! WHAT A SCENE TO CAPTURE IN MY CAMERA!!!!!! Someone exclaimed excitedly.

Maan's brain, which had been stopped due to the kiss started working & he lifted his mouth from geet with a groan to look at the person, OOPSSS!! ..to glare at the person who ruined their perfect moment with stupid entry, though he knew who it was..

YASH! U moron!! What are u doing here? He barked.
Chill bro, did u forget that I have a spare key of this apartment? Waise u can talk with me more lovingly if u want to..afterall, we are meeting after AGES!!!!he said dramatically
THANKS FOR REMINDING ME!! Then let me greet u properly..

with it maan punched his stomach well it looked like it's hard! Geet's eyes popped out, then our baccha started to contemplate if they were really brothers or enemies..

OUCHHH! He held his stomach..& looked towards maan, now that's like my bhai.i should also greet u na, he went to punch him, bt maan being maan dodged it & held his hands behind him locking his moves altogether.
U are too slow..
Not fair bro..atleast let me punch u once!! He wined.
He lets him go & both look at geet who was still busy in squeezing her little brain..

Who is this cutie? Yash asked.
Maan glared at him & gritted his teeth, HER NAME IS GEET! NOT CUTIE!
Oh! Nice to meet u, & that reminds me..ur earlier pose was AWESOME!
Earlier pose?
Wahi..u kissing bhai..
I was not kissing him, she went beetroot red.

Ok, bro kissing u, whatever, can u do that again?
WHAT!
Yes..pls pls pls pls plsss pretty plsss
NO
Are pls na, their was so much passion..oh, burning my camera lenses!! OH! Plsss I want to burn my camera lenses again with ur passion, pls u two kiss again.
HELL NO!
Though maan was more than eager to kiss her, he was definitely not doing that in front of his headless brother!
Oh pls!!! pls pls pls!! pretty pls..
Nnno! Now geet wanted to hide somewhere, she will never understand these two WEIRD men in front of her ,she concluded.

Oh! U are feeling shy..ok , I understand. Then ok, I will think of a easier more comfortable pose for u.
Oh, maybe it will be standing side by side..she thought.
Why don't u to DO IT, I will not disturb u, promise,..bt after then I want to take a pic of u two in each others arms under the spread, bare shoulder of yours showing. Hmm, that would be more DECENT I think, & u will be comfortable too, & more passionate!! Like adam & eve!!he said dreamily.
Now geet was in verge of fainting!! What this stupid man was talking about!

Yash! Keep ur advices to urself,yet he got another punch!.
Poof!! Ok ok..do't punch me, then lets have a proper introduction with geet.

Now geet was terrified will he ask me to !BABAJI! BACHA LENA!!
Geet let's go for a day out. U know..me u & bro,hanging out together,movie,shopping,masti..
PHEW!! Geet left the breath which she was holding.
Ha,.it will be great fun,

U two go ahead,bt I am not going
I have some work..besides ... he leant on geet ,very dangerously close,geet has to remember something..this outing may help her little brain to freshen up & remind...

Before they could be lost in each others' orbs the sound of the camera distracted them.
PERFeCT!

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Nothing seemed to work in his favour!,he thought frustrated with the turn of events..he had sold her to enjoy rest of his life in luxury..not to wipe someone else's dirt! Dev thought..
I will take revenge somehow or other..bt how,??? He is so strong!..just then something flashed in his mind & he smiled evilly.
GEET!
******
Here our bechari geet, dard ki mari, behal..don't over think guys..our cutie baccha is busy squeezing her little head trying to remember when she had met maan before, she didn't even wanted to think what will happen after two days if she didn't get it right!

Bt no matter how hard she was trying to remember,she just couldn't do it, mainly because 99% of her mind was preoccupied with the thought of that soul searing kiss, she kept thinking about the kiss keeping her cheeks on her hands,sitting on the bed cross legged ,lost in the memory of the kiss..& kept forgetting what she was actually thinking.

There was no one in the house as yash went to his shooting & maan to office, her outing with yash was planned on next day.
Suddenly she heard a knock on the door.
Though maan had strictly restricted her to not open the door to anyone, she was so lost I her thoughts that she opened the door.
Though it was impossible for someone unknown to enter the apartment building , bt sometime the major damages are done by our known only.
DEV TUM!!!
Geet I am now the house cleaner of this apartment building & khurana constraction, that's how I am paying my debts..all because of that maan!
Room cleaner..u can clean the room & go.

GEET! Look at how u are talking to me! I am ur brother, don't u feel bad seeing my condition? He tried to gain sympathy with fake tears crowding his eyes.. What that disgusting maan has done to u..

KHABARDAR!! Dare u say something about him,whatever he does, he atleast not as low as uu to sell his own sister ! & my dignity refuses me to have any sympathy towards u.

Seeing no hope to get help, he injected,as venom as he could in geet's mind in one shot.
Oh!..so ur maan is so MAHAN!! Do u know who he is? Do u know that because of him u r a orphan!.
That can't be..she whispered,tears unknowingly crowding her hazels..

YES, when u don't remember anything..bt when u were small he tried to steal u & sell u off to bad peoples so that he could enjoy with that money..ur parents tried to save u, & they did, bt in that bargain, they lost their life geet.
Aisa nahi ho sakta..aisa..it can't be..she mumbled..then screamed crying..AISA NAHI HO SAKTA!! IT CAN"T BE!!!!

Dev on the other hand flew out of the apartment building without being suspicious..his work was done, if not money from geet..atleast i have taken my revenge from maan, he thought happily

No precap- going to finish this ss in 3-4 parts.

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago

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