Tauba Tera Gussa, Tauba Teri Intensity Ka Vaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my Gawd
Munda to ekdum kukkad oops I mean Sher kamal da
uska anger bhi bemisaal tha
Khamoshi uski itni Dilkash ,Batain sari Fuzool Ho Jaise
Uski ankhon ki gehrai mein zaalim Zoya doobi na kaise 😆
Zoya ka gussa bechara fone had to bear
Ab how is this fair
Munda was totally on a attitude high
And Zoya bhi akhir darr hi gayi sigh
Fone bechara bandaged came back
But Shehzade Sher Khan ka jaari raha Attitude attack
Upar se wahi shq vishq wali talks
Arre kya fayda Zoya ji Munde ke dil pe lage hue hain locks
Zo is desperate ki ishq vishq pyar ho jaye
While Asad is retired hurt from the crease hayee😆
Zoya Ji yeh ishq nahi asaan bas itna samajh lijiye
ki bhai ka dil dash samundar ..dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai 😳


-I was really scared for Asad i thot he will get one tight slap for his bold self😆 but phew his conduct wasnt bad and in char😳 and had the desired effect😆

- Ayaan Ayaan itna feelings ki kadar hai to how come he doesnt realize that Humeira too has feelings and that he tends to hurt them time and again ?

And Rashid Dilshad ki patch up ki naiya hai Razia and Haseena bi ke bharose ...yeh to doob hi jayegi if not for Zoya 😆

So did u guys like the epi ?specially how the prem patra /love letter oops i mean fone came thru the rope system ..I am telling u future mein love letter bhi aise hi exchange honge trust me😆...these two really belong to Saleem Anarkali times😆


I wasnt going to write today but i actually got a PM from a member asking me abt my post for the day and that they love reading my crap work...OMG like i read that PM like a dozen times and then it took me an hr to recover from the post reading shock and then it took me 2 mins to write this bakwaas bhari post🤣So this one is splly dedicated to that PM wala Member ...blame them for todays offering and not me😆


Oh and bfore ppl start thinking this post is by and for paagals ...i have v gud writers giving their views on my post ...to aise hi ainvayi nahi hoon main 😆...adaalat wants proof ye lo



Originally posted by: AreYaar

LOL I looked for your post today too to blab about the epi lekin nahin mila toh I didn't say anything.

I liked the epi too...the cornering was also in character and not overdone thankfully...Zoya tested the very limits of Asad's patience and saw the extent of his temper today...he couldn't do anything to her so smashed the phone in frustration...sobering down a usually flippant Zoya...and I liked how that transition was shown...the bit with her lowering the repaired phone to his window on a ribbon...supercute! LOL

And Asad giving her attitude in the morning...haha yeh toh hona hi tha...he's so not going to accept her peace offering so easily...upar se Zoya bhi busy blabbing about zodiac signs when he's least interested...lol


I liked the bit with Najma sweetly consoling her mom when she started thinking about Rashid again...the family scenes have really grown on me and I'm liking their chemistry a lot now.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆
aapki bakwaas mein hai mithaas😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RD-

Oh my Gawd
Munda to ekdum kukkad oops I mean Sher kamal da
uska anger bhi bemisaal tha
Khamoshi uski itni Dilkash ,Batain sari Fuzool Ho Jaise
Uski ankhon ki gehrai mein zaalim Zoya doobi na kaise 😆
Zoya ka gussa bechara fone had to bear
Ab how is this fair
Munda was totally on a attitude high
And Zoya bhi akhir darr hi gayi sigh
Fone bechara bandaged came back
But Shehzade Sher Khan ka jaari raha Attitude attack
Upar se wahi shq vishq wali talks
Arre kya fayda Zoya ji Munde ke dil pe lage hue hain locks
Zo is desperate ki ishq vishq pyar ho jaye
While Asad is retired hurt from the crease hayee😆
Zoya Ji yeh ishq nahi asaan bas itna samajh lijiye
ki bhai ka dil dash samundar ..dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai 😳


-I was really scared for Asad i thot he will get one tight slap for his bold self😆 but phew his conduct wasnt bad and in char😳 and had the desired effect😆

- Ayaan Ayaan itna feelings ki kadar hai to how come he doesnt realize that Humeira too has feelings and that he tends to hurt them time and again ?

And Rashid Dilshad ki patch up ki naiya hai Razia and Haseena bi ke bharose ...yeh to doob hi jayegi if not for Zoya 😆

So did u guys like the epi ?specially how the prem patra /love letter oops i mean fone came thru the rope system ..I am telling u future mein love letter bhi aise hi exchange honge trust me😆...these two really belong to Saleem Anarkali times😆


I wasnt going to write today but i actually got a PM from a member asking me abt my post for the day and that they love reading my crap work...OMG like i read that PM like a dozen times and then it took me an hr to recover from the post reading shock and then it took me 2 mins to write this bakwaas bhari post🤣So this one is splly dedicated to that PM wala Member ...blame them for todays offering and not me😆




Finally...
No episode is complete without your shayari...
Loved Asad's self control
Loved Zoya's repaired phone on a pink thread
Loved Imran being heckled by the cousins
Poor Humeira...
Insensitive Ayaan
Cannot wait to see what tomorrow brings...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love your bakwaas posts 😉 In all seriousness, though, you really do have a gift with writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved ur shaayari, Pooja ! ❤️
n Title of ur post is apt.. n kya mast rhyming kiya hai..[😎.. aapne with song emotional atyachar...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I so love your posts..I actually wait for your posts after everyday's epi 😳😆
I loved the epi...specially prem patra(Phone) and Asad's gussa..how i wish he corber her most often 😆
your shayri is too good..loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If this is what u call a bakwaas..
Toh what u will say about something khash.
Love ur this post ...
I m becoming ur fan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL I looked for your post today too to blab about the epi lekin nahin mila toh I didn't say anything.

I liked the epi too...the cornering was also in character and not overdone thankfully...Zoya tested the very limits of Asad's patience and saw the extent of his temper today...he couldn't do anything to her so smashed the phone in frustration...sobering down a usually flippant Zoya...and I liked how that transition was shown...the bit with her lowering the repaired phone to his window on a ribbon...supercute! LOL

And Asad giving her attitude in the morning...haha yeh toh hona hi tha...he's so not going to accept her peace offering so easily...upar se Zoya bhi busy blabbing about zodiac signs when he's least interested...lol


I liked the bit with Najma sweetly consoling her mom when she started thinking about Rashid again...the family scenes have really grown on me and I'm liking their chemistry a lot now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur bakwaas posts are superb lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RD-

Fone bechara bandaged came back

While Asad is retired hurt from the crease hayee😆

Zoya Ji yeh ishq nahi asaan bas itna samajh lijiye
ki bhai ka dil dash samundar ..dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai
🤣


Awesome!!! 👏👏 You're doing a great job there.. Take a bow.. 👍🏼

Allah Miya.. Thanks a ton to the member who PM'ed you.. 😉😛

Oh btw, I have a request, Can we please have daily updates from you, shayari isshtyle?? Maybe you can be our Saleem-Anarkali's spokesperson.. 😉

Not kidding, do give it a thought, pleaseee..

And coming to the epi, it definitely rocked! 🥳

Asad Miya ka gussa, kya kahoon? Dil garden garden ho gaya..

And Zoya jaani, aakhir the name is Asad,

Dil cheez kya hai, aap meri jaan lijiye..
Sher ki daadhi mein aur khujli na kiya kijiye.. 😉😆

P.S. : I know that was pretty lame.. Ayaan ka asar, u see.. 😉😛

Thanks once more..

Love,
Avantika..
Edited by mohabbatgirl - 13 years ago

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