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Part 28:


Everyone gathered around her as soon as she came out from the ICU asking her numerous questions about Maan's condition nd all but she replied to none nd just looked at the direction of the exit. It was then Madhu nd Dadimaa saw some strange emotion in her eyes making them halt in her questions. There was a strange determination in them, a kind of madness that they knew could only be there when a married woman decide on something on the cost of her lyf. Madhu knew the extent of Geet's love for Maan but right now even she had shivered seeing the intensity of her eyes. But before she or other could say or ask something from her she made her way across the corridor towards the exit leaving everyone behind baffled nd confused. Vidyut too noticed same what Madhu had noticed nd he was sure that she's upto something which can be dreadful for her nd therefore he turns to run behind her to stop her when he was halted by Vicky.

"Vicky Why had you stopped me? Can't you see Geet is going somewhere" Vidyut chided him as he tries to free his hand.

"Vidyut Bhai, Geet Bhabhi won't listen to anyone right now. Nd don't worry I am going behind her. You stay at the hospital only as Dev Bhai won't be able to handle everything alone nd he must be needing you. Please you had to be here to support Dadimaa nd others. Don't worry I'll be with her all the tym nd I promise that I'll come back after taking Bhabhi along with me only." Vicky tries to make him understand the situation nd Vidyut just looked other side in frustration feeling helpless. Vicky looked at him for a while nd then left to the direction where Geet has left not knowing what exactly was running in her mind.

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"Bhabhi, Bhabhi please listen to me once." Vicky pleaded as he tries to match his pace with Geet who was walking ahead immune to her surroundings. Since the tym they came out from hospital Vicky is continuously pleading Geet to stop who was walking to an unknown direction forgetting the world around her.

"Bhabhi Please, you'll get hurt by walking bare foot like this. Atleast sit in the car nd I promise we'll go wherever you say. But please don't do this to yourself." Vicky pleaded yet again as he saw Geet walking bare foot on the dusty road hurting her foot in the process from the rocks nd pebbles but no pain seems to stop her.

"Bhabhi for god sake listen to me once. If not for me then for Maan Bhai Please." Vicky rather shouted in helplessness seeing no effect on Geet. Geet stopped for a while hearing Maan's name nd looked at Vicky nd just when Vicky thought that she'll agree to what he's saying she again resumed walking leaving Vicky behind baffled.


P.S. Pls Play this Song


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rERNHyU62k8

Preet ki lat mohe aaisi laagi
Ho gayi main matwaali
Bal bal jaaun apane piya ko
He main jaaun vaari vaari

For Geet nothing else matters than Maan, not even her own self. The pebbles nd small rocks were pricking the soft skin of her feet bust she didn't felt that pain as the pain she's feeling right now in her heart after seeing Maan in that condition was far more than the pain she was feeling in her wounded legs. With the determination in her eyes nd every move she just keeps on moving towards her destination ignoring to what Vicky is saying, ignoring the fact that her feet is wounded badly due to walking bare foot on the dusty road, ignoring the fact that she didn't even had a single drop of water since morning. It seems that today she had decided to break all the boundaries which differentiate sane person from being insane, yes she has gone insane in the love of her Maan, she has became his Deewani with each nd every fiber of her body. it seems like today she can go to any extent to show that God the extent of her love so that he couldn't even dare to think of harming a single fiber her Maan's body. It's just not only madness of a lover but also of a wife who can go to any extent to get back her husband's lyf.

Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki
Yeh toh jaane duniya saari
Bebas aur laachar phiru main
Haari main dil haari

Haari main dil haari

Today she has decided either to bring back Maan's lyf from the god or to give away her lyf along with his but in no way she's going to let him leave her to live without him over here. Her sole existence is due to him nd if he won't be with her then there's no reason for her to live. She would happily accept death than to live without him as she then knew that If not in this world then in some other world they will be together. And today if it costs her lyf also then also she won't hesitate in draining the single drop of her blood if it costs his well-being, she thought as she walked towards the home of God to seek the lyf of her husband with Vicky following behind her helplessly.

One hour passed by nd she was still walking endlessly without paying any heed to Vicky's pleadings, without caring about her bleeding feet. Her face is becoming pale by every passing nd she could see the darkness in front of her eyes also by every now nd then but nothing seems to be stop her at this moment. Vicky had finally given up in front of her determination as he realized that she won't listen to anyone when it comes to Maan. He don't know whether he should be happy at this moment seeing that his brother had got such a selfless nd unconditional lover or he should be sad that the same love is making her immune to everything even her own self. Sighing he just follows her where she is going because he had to make sure that she should reach safely to his brother for whom she's going to now fight with God.

Tere naam se jee loon
Tere naam se marr jaaun

Tere naam se jee loon
Tere naam se marr jaaun

Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Geet saw a Dargah on her way nd on her own accord her feet carried her towards that direction knowing very well that she won't return empty hand from the door of God. Vicky just quietly followed her as now he was also sure that only his Bhabhi can bring back the life of his brother. Geet could hear the voices of singers as she walk past then as they sung that phrase depicting the condition of her heart making her heart do summersault. With thudding heart nd shaking legs she went inside where everyone was worshipping after covering her head with her duppatta nd send in front of almighty for praying. Vicky too sat beside her quietly to pray for his brother's safety.

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani deewani

"I know my belief in you is not wrong. I know that you are really present on this earth. I know that you are just not a mere image. But today you had to prove me your existence, today you had to prove that my belief on you is right, today you had to prove your power to me. I know I was wrong in distancing myself from Maan without even listening to what he was trying to say. Though unknowingly, I had committed a mistake by punishing him like this when he himself was burning in his miseries. So it should be me only Na who had to be punished by you, then why are you punishing my Maan like this. It was you only who had brought Maan in my lyf nd now you only want to take him away from me. No, I won't let you do that. You can't take him away from me. People says that no one returns empty hand from your door nd today you had to prove that what all they were saying is right. Yes I am challenging you today. I challenge you to prove yourself in front of me. If you really possess powers then save my husband or else I'll believe that whatever everyone say about your existence is all wrong. Today, it's not only the test of my love for Maan but it's also the test of your existence nd power on this earth. Today either you have to grant me my husband's lyf or else I'll also give away my lyf in your door step nd I mean it. Now its upto you what you want; you want to grant my wish nd prove your existence on this earth or you want to see the ending of two lives at the same tym in front of your own eyes." Geet said as she started at the almighty in front of her but there was not a single drop of tear in her eyes but a strange determination nd intimidating look which could scare even God then forget about human being. Vicky looked at the woman beside him nd then back at the almighty as if pleading him to grant her wish because he won't be able to see his two favourite persons in this condition.

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Geet sat in front of almighty for a while praying to him or to be better say threatening him to grant her, her Maan's lyf nd then stood up nd walks upto the corner after taking round around the Dargah where people were tying threads in order to ask a wish from God. Geet too tied a thread nd asked only to grant her Maan's lyf nd take her lyf instead as she had no regret in giving away her lyf if it costs to save Maan's life nd promised that she won't ask anything else apart from this not even the place that she want in Maan's heart. She has just turned to leave after tying the thread when her gaze falls at the place which was a bit crowded nd as she craned her head to look closely she found people walking to nd fro on the path of burning coal. Out of curiosity she moved near them limping only to be collided with a Fakeer Baba in her way.

Music...

"Maaf kijiyega Baba. Maine Aapko Dekha nahi. She apologized politely as she looked at the old man in front of her who was looking at her strangely.

[I am sorry Baba. I haven't noticed you]

"Tu hi hai woh. Tujhse hi hoga ye." Baba's words made her confused as she looked at him confusingly

[you are the one. You are the only one who can do this]

"Bahut pyar karti hai na tu usse. Khuda tak se ladne aa gayi uske liye" he spoke further nd Geet's eyes widens in shock as she looked at him in surprise.

[You really love him a lot, isn't it? so much that you had come here to fight with God for him.]

"Kya Soch rahi hai Beti ki mujhe kaise pata hai. These eyes can never be wrong in recognizing true Love nd you Love is oozing from each nd every cell of your body. Tu hi hai woh, tu hi hai jo use bacha sakti hai. Tera Pyaar hi ab bachayega use. Ab ye tujh pe hai ki tu kis had tak ja sakti hai uske liye." Baba said giving new zeal to Geet's hope.

[What are you thinking that how I came to know about this? These eyes can never be wrong in recognizing true Love nd you Love is oozing from each nd every cell of your body. You are the one, you are the only one who can save him. Now only your Love can save him. Now its upto you that you can go to which extent to save him.]

Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye

Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye

Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

"Kisi bhi had tak Baba. I can give away even my life for him. Nothing in this world could stop my love for him."

[Till any extent Baba. I can give away even my life for him. Nothing in this world could stop my love for him.]

"To jaa Paar kar dein Aaj saari hadein. Deewani hai na tu uski to saabit kar de Aaj apni Deewangi. Chal jaa in Angaro par aur dikha de ki tere Pyar ke Aage ye Jalte Angare kuch bhi nahi hai. Dikha de us Khuda ko apne Pyaar ki taakat. Jhuka de use aaj apne Pyaar ke aage. Bata de use ki usme to kya Duniya ki koi bhi taakat tere pyar ko Tujhse juda nahi kar sakti. Aaj ye tere Pyaa ki Agni Pariksha hai aur tujhe isme khara utarna hoga. Yaad rakh Beti ki Sona Aag me tap kar hi khalis hota hai, Aaj tere Pyaar ko bhi is Aag me tap kar khud ko khara saabit karna hoga. Baana hoga tujhe missal un sab pyar karne walon ke liye jo ek doosre ke liye hazaar kasmein khaate hai aur unhe nibhane ke liye kisi bhi had tak ja sakte hai. Bol De sakti hai tu uske liye ye Pariksha, kar sakti hai tu uske liye khud ko Fanna? Hain tere pyar me itni himmat, itna junoon ki uske liye kuch bhi kar guzregi." Baba interrogated her intimidately when he could himself see her Deewangi for her love in her eyes yet he wanted her to be an example for all those lovers who can go to any extent for their loved ones.

[Then go nd cross all the extents today. You are crazy for him right, then go nd prove your Deewangi for him today. Walk over on these burning coals nd show the world that these burning coals are nothing in front of your Love. Show that God the power of your Love. Make him bent down in front of your Love. Show him that nothing in this world could separate you from your Love then forget about he himself. Today it's an Agnipariksha for your Love nd you have to succeed in it. Remember Beti that Gold gets pure after getting burnt into the fire nd today your Love has also burn in this fire to prove himself stronger than any other power. You had to become a living example for all those lovers who use to take so many oaths for each other nd can go to nay extent for it. So tell me, are you ready to give this exam for your Lover, can you destroy yourself in his Love? Did your Love had this much courage, this much obsession then you can do anything or everything for him?]

Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole

Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole

Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole

"Main karoongi Baba. Unki Zindagi ke liye main Kuch bhi kar sakti hoon. Fir chahe mujhe uske liye apni Zindagi hi kyun Na deni pade par unke liye main Aakhri Saans tak ladoongi. Par main mere pyar ko haarne nahi doongi. Main saabit kar doongi ke unke liye mera Pyaar mera junnon hai, meri sabse badi Taakat. Main karungi yeh aur tab tak karti rahoongi jab tak ki main unki Zindagi na bacha lu." Geet said with a new determination in her eyes nd Baba just smiled seeing her true Love before blessing her to be successful in her task nd Geet just moved towards the path of burning coal.

[I'll do it Baba. I can do anything for his lyf. No matter if I had to give away my lyf also for it. But I'll fight till my last breath for him but I won't let my Love to get defeated. I'll Prove it that my Love for him is my obsession nd my biggest strength. I'll do this nd keeps on doing this until I'll save his lyf.]

"Bhabhi, Bhabhi Wait!!! Where are you going?" Vicky who just came to the spot after a tying the thread for his brother's safety tries to stop Geet when he found her going towards the path of Burning coal.

"Mat rok Aaj use Beta. Koi nahi rok payega Aaj is Deewani ko. You don't worry about her; her Love is her biggest strength aur uske sir par upar wale ka haath hai. Woh apne bande ko niraash nahi karega. Tu dekhna woh apni is pariksha me zaroor safal hogi. Duniya dekhegi aaj uski Deewangi" Baba said as he walked away chanting Allah's name leaving Vicky behind to witness the scene in front of him.

[Don't stop him today Beta. no one will be able to stop this Deewani today. You don't worry about her; her Love is her biggest strength nd she had the hand of God on her head nd he'll not disappoint his beloved ones. You see she'll definitely gets succeeded in her test. Whole world will see her Deewangi today.]

"Tu hi hai woh. Tujhse hi hoga ye. Tera Pyar hi ab bachayega use."

"Hain tere pyar me itni himmat, itna junoon ki uske liye Kuch bhi kar guzregi."

Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain


Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain


Tere bin jeena kaisa
Haan Khudgarzi hai
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani Deewani

Geet looked at the long burning path in front of her as the Baba's words rang in her ears making her determination even stronger nd next moment she kept her injured foot on the Burning coal chanting "Om tryambakam yajamahe sugandhim pushti-vardhanam urva rukamiva bandhanan Mrityormukshiya mamritat"; the Maha Mrityunjaya Mantra while keeping the another foot also on the burning coal nd started walking on it. The heat emitting from the coal started burning the soft skin of her feet nd Vicky just closed his eyes as he witnessed the scene in front of him but what amazed him more was that there was not a single flinch from Geet as if she was walking on the bed of roses nd not on burning coal. He just keeps on looking at her in horror as she walked on the path of burning coal casually as if it was a cake walk for her.

[For those who don't know About Maha Mrityunjaya Mantra.. The Maha Mrityunjaya Mantra means "great death-conquering mantra".

This great mantra dedicated to Rudra or lord Shiva as Mrityunjaya is found in the Rig Veda. It is called the Maha Mrityunjaya mantra, the Great Death-Conquering mantra. It is a mantra that has many names and forms. It is called the Rudra mantra, referring to the furious aspect of Shiva; the Tryambakam mantra, alluding to Shiva's three eyes; and it is sometimes known as the Mrita-Sanjivini mantra because it is a component of the "life-restoring" practice given to the primordial sage Shukra after he had completed an exhausting period of austerity. The Maha Mrityunjaya mantra is hailed by the sages as the heart of the Veda.

Mrityunjaya Mantra is recited as a remedy to forgo untimely death. The English Translation of this Mantra is:

"Three-eyed one, I meditate on you, who increase fragrance and nourishment. From powerful disease, bondage and death free us into immortality."

For more details about its significance nd power kindly go to the following link

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mahamrityunjaya_Mantra]

For Geet, her own life is nothing in front of Maan. She could feel the skin of her already injured feet getting peeled off due to excessive burn but it didn't budge her from doing what she's doing right now. If anyone else would be at her place then he or she may have been fainted by now out of fatigue due to the excessive torture on his or her body but Geet felt nothing. The only thing that was running in her mind was that she has to save Maan at any cost. She had to prove her Love for him nd make it win nd for that she won't even hesitate in giving up her own lyf if it costs in saving his lyf because there's basically no lyf without him nd it will be nothing but a punishment, a curse to live without him which she won't let happen in this birth atleast

Here in Hospital, there's sudden rise nd fall in Maan's body as he took a deep breath all of a sudden nd all the doctors nd attendants rushed to check him. They were shocked to see the instant rise in his heartbeat as if it could sense the craziness of the person who loves him beyond the limit of sanity making his body nd will power to fight with his fate for that one person for whom he's her whole world. Doctors started rushing in nd out of ICU instructing the ward boys nd nurses for this nd that instrument as they saw the fluctuating condition of Maan giving them a tiny miny hope of his survival.

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The whole place was bright nd white as he walked through the dense fog to an unknown path when he saw a blurred image of a lady in white Saree walking ahead at a distance. His pace gets quickened on his own accord as found that image familiar nd started following her when that lady stops sensing someone behind her nd turned to look back, Maan was shock beyond his wits when he saw the face of the lady making his eyes widens in shock nd surprise.

"Sameera" he muttered in shock as he started to move towards her while smiling amidst his tears who was standing at the edge of a cliff.

"Stop Maan. Don't come here. It's not your Destiny Maan; it's not your destination, this is not your world. Your destiny, destination nd your world is someone else." Sameera said as she pointed behind him nd Maan furrowed his brows in confusion as he looked back at the direction she was pointing.

"Geet" he muttered in astonishment as he found her standing in a red Saree in a worn out state on the other edge of the cliff looking at him with her teary eyes.

"Maan, Don't go away from me please. I won't be able to live without you." She whimpered as she looked at Maan going far away from her

"Geet, I am not going anywhere Geet. I am not going to leave you alone ever. Trust me I'll never leave you alone. Sameera I need to go, I need to go to Geet. She needs me nd more than her, I need her." Maan said as he instantly moved towards her to embrace her in his arms letting her know that he's not going anywhere leaving her alone when he stopped in mid nd looked back at Sameera who was standing over there smiling.

"Go Maan, Go Back. Don't hold yourself back. I set you free from every bonds, from every thread today. All the Best nd always be happy with Geet." Sameera said with a smile as she moved back nd Maan keeps on looking at her retreating figure until it disappears in the fog. He turned back smiling towards Geet nd horror washed over his face when he found her fainting nd was ready to fall off the cliff.

"GEET!!!!!!!" He yelled as he tries to run towards her to save her from falling off the cliff while struggling to make his way through the dense fog to reach to her before he could lose her too for forever.

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Oh ho oh hoohhh.....

"Doctor his heartbeats are getting hyper. His breathings are not normal." One of the nurse panicked as she monitor his heart rate nd found him breathing heavily.

"Nurse, Get the electric shocker quick nd ya keep xyz injection also ready. I think he's trying to make through it." Doctor instructed as he immediately started treating Maan who was still struggling to breathe.

"Here's it Doctor." Nurse said as she gave the equipment to the doctor.

"Ok. 1, 2, 3... Start" Doctor instructed nd one of his attendants gave the shocker near his heart making his body rise up nd fall on the bed nd Doctor looked at the monitor for some improvement nd once again continued the same procedure hoping for a miracle to be happen soon.

"Om tryambakam yajamahe sugandhim pushti-vardhanam urva rukamiva bandhanan Mrityormukshiya mamritat" Geet keeps on chanting the Maha Mrityunjaya Mantra as she continued to walk on the path of burning coal without a tinge of pain on her face.

He main rang rangeeli Deewani

He main rang rangeeli Deewani

Ke main albeli main mastani

Everyone present over there was looking at her as if she's an alien. The most shocked one was Vicky who was now having tears in his eyes seeing the heights of her craziness for his brother. His brother was indeed a lucky one to get such a love nd wife in his life who can go to any extent for him without caring about of her own lyf nd he was sure that if comes a tym then even Maan won't hesitate to do something for her like this. Vicky feels like to bow down in front of this Love which is so pure nd unconditional. No doubt he nd Savera loves each other but for one thing he was sure that even they can't do something of this sort for each other. This is something which could only be witnessed in Maan nd Geet's relationship only nd he was indeed a lucky one who was witnessing this pure form of selfless Love, Vicky thought as he looked at Geet with his teary eyes.

Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun
He main dila zaram se begaani
Ke main deewani main deewani

Unknown to the thoughts storming in Vicky's mind nd heart Geet continued to walk on the burning coal while continuously chanting Mantra. It was Do or die situation for her now nd she was sure that today God has to bend down in front of her love. Strangely, she was feeling an unknown calmness in her heart as if it was telling her that everything is going to be fine yet she keeps on walking until she'll make sure of his safety. Her feet were badly burnt, her body has become limp nd tired due to exhaustion for giving it enormous torture, she could see darkness in front of her by every now nd then, her condition was worsening due to walking continuously on the burning coal from more than 30 mins now, yet she keeps on walking as if she had determined to stop only after taking her last breath. At this moment her Love for Maan is her biggest strength nd in no case she's going to be weak until she gets successful in her task. And then the moment came when finally her craziness, her love had shown its results nd God had to bow down in front of her pure nd selfless love.

After what seems like an eternity Doctor came out of ICU nd whole Khurana clan including Badi Maa nd Vidyut gathered around him to enquire about Maan's health.

"Doctor how is Bro? He's fine Na. What's his current status?" Dev asked as soon as Doctor came out from the ICU to which Doctor just out a hand on his shoulder while smiling.

"Congratulation Mr. Khurana! You brother is out of Danger now." Everyone sighed in relief as soon as Doctor's words reached their ear drums.

"It was really a miracle. I mean we had lost all our hopes that he'll be able to make through it seeing his condition but it seems that someone's prayers have really shown its effects sue to which Mr. Khurana had really tried very hard to make through it." Doctor said nd everyone smiled faintly knowing about whom is he talking.

"Can we meet him Doctor?" Annie asked in desperation to see his brother

"Abhi we need to keep him under observation for a hour nd then we'll shift him to the ward nd then you all can meet him. Now excuse me, I need to go." Doctor said as he smiled nd once again left for ICU.

"I'll go nd inform Vicky." Savera said as she moved towards a corner to make a call to Vicky.

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Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun
Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani Deewani



Vicky was over the moon when he received the call from Savera informing him about Maan's health nd he instantly looked at Geet who was still walking on the burning coal. He immediately cuts the call after asking her to take care of everyone while he'll be back soon nd rushed towards Geet nd before she could once again puts her foot on the coal Vicky stops her by holding her wrist making Geet to look at him confusingly.

"Bhabhi, you won Bhabhi. You Love won. Maan Bhai is out of danger now. He'll not leave us. He'll not go anywhere far from us. Aap Jeet gayi Bhabhi. Hara diya Aapke Pyar ne us upar wale ke faisle ko. Your Love has defeated Bhai's death." Vicky squealed in happiness while holding her shoulders while Geet just looks at him blankly trying to fathom that whether it's a reality or is she dreaming. Did whatever Vicky has said just now was happened in real, she thought as she tries to register his words.

[Bhabhi, you won Bhabhi. You Love won. Maan Bhai is out of danger now. He'll not leave us. He'll not go anywhere far from us. You won Bhabhi. Your Love had defeated the judgment of that God. Your Love has defeated Bhai's death.]

"Maine kaha tha Na Beti. Tujhse hi hoga Ye. Tera Pyar hi bachaega use. Ye tere Pyar ki jeet hai beta. Allah tum dono ki Jodi aur Pyar salamat rakhe. Yahi is Fakeer ki Dil se dua hai. Take this Taveez, ye hamesha uski har buri nazar se Rakhsha karega." Baba said as he came to them nd went away chanting Allah's name after giving her Taweez nd blessing her for her lovely future.

[I had told you Na Beti that you are the only one. Only your Love can save him. This is the victory of your Love. May Allah keeps both of your Love nd match safe. This is the only blessing of this Fakeer from all his heart. Take this Taveez; this will always safeguard him from all the evil eyes]

(Music)

Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani Deewani

(Music)

Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani Deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Geet registered Vicky's nd Baba's words nd then looked at the Taveez in her hands making her realize that it was all real nd not her dream. Her Maan is safe from all dangers now. He'll not go anywhere leaving her alone now. She looked upwards thanking God umpteenth tym for saving the lyf of her Maan. Tears which she had sealed till now had finally made their way out due to the happiness while her lips curved into a smile of satisfaction holding the Taveez tight in her hands. She had no words now to express what she's feeling right now. The feeling of satisfaction nd contentment she's feeling was a feeling beyond words for her. She puts her shivering hand on her heart which was now beating calmly nd took a deep breath in order to make herself believe that everything has become fine now, her Maan is fine now. she cried nd smiled all at the same tym not able to express what she's feeling right now while holding Vicky's hands tight with her other hand nd next moment she saw Darkness in front of her eyes feeling dizzy nd before anyone could understand anything she fainted due to excessive exhaustion.

"Bhabhi! Bhabhi! Open your eyes" Vicky patted her cheeks as he holds Geet before she could touch the ground nd then scooped her limp nd lifeless Body in his arms making his way towards the hospital when he didn't found her responding for long.


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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 12 years ago
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wow me 1st will edit later
Edited by lovebirdsmaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update...

n song was so lovely

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Posted: 12 years ago
so emotinal dear
love dit a lot
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wow dear its too good
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oh this was quite an intense update and u beautifully potrayed ,how belief wins against.all odds . I loved d part where maan see both geet and sameera and decides "she is for him " loved it .
all d best for ur exams and continue soon .
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Luvd the update,its wonderful,cont soon.
Waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
finally maan will b able to move on with geet

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