MG OS: TRUST ME ONCE updated last part pg 8 dec 31

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hiii all its me again

MG OS: TRUST ME ONCE

Hearts are only made to be broken'.. a lifeless scared thing that couldn't even mourn over its death no matter how ruthlessly and brutally its owner had killed it'. No matter how it had pained to it seeing the one who ones cared for it shattering it into the pieces which cannot be mend''


This is the one lesson that he had learnt in his life ''.

His heart that once he considered to be with her was viciously butchered by her'..she played with his feelings '. Mocked him saying all the unnecessary things '' she said she loved him'.. she loved him with all her heart and soul'and he what a fool he was that he easily came under her honey sweet talkings'..


Closing his eyes maan closed the profile that was placed in front of him'..


Geet Handa'' that's what written on the profile'' her name'still it has the charm to get himself lost in those days 'those blissful encounters'those meetings where they used to spend hours and hours speaking about them'precisely she used to talk about her'.


Her dreams' her ambition..her life 'her career'.. her..her and her'. But where was he'.. he was never given any place in her life'.she was just lost in herself'..


Still the same'. But he failed to notice a vast change that now accompany her'..


He has decided to appoint her as designer'.. she is skilled ..experienced'. that too from his rivals'.. and moreover willing to join here'' join KHURANA"s''


Did she ever knew that the place belong to me'..


MAAN was having his own set of doubts'his mind was having conflicting emotions'. She was there his one and only love'. Though she had given him the worst pain'. The pain of loosing trust ..the pain of betrayal'.but still he loves her with all his heart and soul'. And may be still having some sort of hidden feelings for her''.


With so much confusion and anxiety'MAAN signed the appointment letter'. And called his secretary to give GEET the same'..


maan: ( to his secretary) give this file to the candidate and tell her to join the office tomorrow nine am sharp''


maan'MAAN SiNGH KHURANA'. He is the only and sole owner of his own built CONSTRUCTION FIRM'.. now holding more than ten branches all over india'.well his hard work did payed off'.. not that he was not from a rich or influencial family but MAAN always believed in proving himself'. It did took him years'yes five years to come here to this position'.. to hold a life which all will admire'' but when you are behind something and wants that at any cost then you tends to loose yourself''


MAAN closed his eyes and leaned on the chair'' when he went into the memory lane which made him lost in the business empire that he is holding today in his hands''


Everyone says 'its your hardwork'' some says its your dedication'.. other says its your luck'' but I know who is behind my success''


MAAN opened his eyes and opened his eyes'still he doesn't need anything to remember her a small smile played on his lips'. Like always she is the only one who could make him lost himself in her''


MAAN: its you geet'. Its you'' I won't say I didn't hate you'. I hated you'I hated you with my life ' you left me just saying its all over'.. it was difficult the worst phase of my life but still I had faced it so much courage and hatred'. But that was not the hatred GEET'.


That was also my love'..


And still you are my love'''..


I will love you til I will know the meaning of love '.

And won't even ask you the reason why you left''..


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SO HOW Is iT???


WAITING FR UR REVIEWS




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os please continue dear
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nice
geet left maan 😭
but why
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lovely start yaar
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fabulous start dear waiting for next
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very nice os yaar...geet must hv a reason for leaving maan..pls cont soon...

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lovely os yaar😳
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Lovely Start

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congrats
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wow great os plz update soon
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