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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

hello guys i'm back with my 8th story on ariya :

INTEZAAR a long time wait

i'll start with poetry ek chota sa sher arrz hai ke :

Kash ke woh laut aaye mujh se yeh kehne,

Tum kon hote ho mujh se bicharrne wale...

STORY PROLOGUE

it was afternoon outside the court . everyone was busy in their work

two lawyer's was coming out suddenly a lawyer call miss riya and second lawyer who was standing next to him call mr.arjun . they both Climbing on stairs together but far from eachother . riya was with her son rahul and arjun was with his daughter priya ...

rahul and priya intro :

arjun and riya go married before 12 year's

rahul and priya both are twins

rahul stay with his mother riya

priya stay with her father arjun

but ariya breaked like a mirror break in two pieces

leave your feedback i'll cheak them and will continue it soon

regard's :

SABA-RAMISA and FIZA28

INDEX

CHAPTER 1 PAGE 4

CHAPTER 2 PAGE 7

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Arooj Arain

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Posted: 13 years ago

a differnt concpt.. nd amazing start.. :)continue soon..:) nd da shair was awesome..:)

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

Love d sher😊

Exciting & new concept..

Thy bth wrk for ETF.❓

Thy have twins...

Love to read..

plz asap update...

Thx for PM.😊

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

Kya...kya...kya...

12 saal ho bhi gaye...yaar bahot kuch miss kar diya...

Hmmmab ro ke kya fayada...rona to ab hai...kuch naya case hai ariya ka...

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elle..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice start

Shayari mast thi...
Ye story to flashback mei jayegii
Sounds intrestinng

Continur soon :):):):)

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pravallika

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Posted: 13 years ago

it's a different concept...

looking forward to it..

thanks for pm..

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojarain
a differnt concpt.. nd amazing start.. :)continue soon..:) nd da shair was awesome..:)

thanks ooji😳

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Love d sher😊

Exciting & new concept..

Thy bth wrk for ETF.❓

Thy have twins...

Love to read..

plz asap update...

Thx for PM.😊

me too love the sher that's why i start with sher a new thought😆

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Kya...kya...kya...

12 saal ho bhi gaye...yaar bahot kuch miss kar diya...

Hmmmab ro ke kya fayada...rona to ab hai...kuch naya case hai ariya ka...

no daer dont worry abhi flash back hai na sab cleary bataungi😃