Ariya : INTEZAAR a long time wait(ch2 pg7)(24 nov)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys i'm back with my 8th story on ariya :

INTEZAAR a long time wait

i'll start with poetry ek chota sa sher arrz hai ke :

Kash ke woh laut aaye mujh se yeh kehne,
Tum kon hote ho mujh se bicharrne wale...

STORY PROLOGUE

it was afternoon outside the court . everyone was busy in their work
two lawyer's was coming out suddenly a lawyer call miss riya and second lawyer who was standing next to him call mr.arjun . they both Climbing on stairs together but far from eachother . riya was with her son rahul and arjun was with his daughter priya ...

rahul and priya intro :

arjun and riya go married before 12 year's
rahul and priya both are twins
rahul stay with his mother riya
priya stay with her father arjun
but ariya breaked like a mirror break in two pieces

leave your feedback i'll cheak them and will continue it soon
regard's :
SABA-RAMISA and FIZA28


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Posted: 13 years ago
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a differnt concpt.. nd amazing start.. :)continue soon..:) nd da shair was awesome..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love d sher😊
Exciting & new concept..
Thy bth wrk for ETF.❓
Thy have twins...
Love to read..
plz asap update...
Thx for PM.😊
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya...kya...kya...

12 saal ho bhi gaye...yaar bahot kuch miss kar diya...


Hmmmab ro ke kya fayada...rona to ab hai...kuch naya case hai ariya ka...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start

Shayari mast thi...
Ye story to flashback mei jayegii
Sounds intrestinng

Continur soon :):):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's a different concept...
looking forward to it..
thanks for pm..


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Originally posted by: aroojarain

a differnt concpt.. nd amazing start.. :)continue soon..:) nd da shair was awesome..:)

thanks ooji😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Love d sher😊

Exciting & new concept..
Thy bth wrk for ETF.❓
Thy have twins...
Love to read..
plz asap update...
Thx for PM.😊

me too love the sher that's why i start with sher a new thought😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Kya...kya...kya...

12 saal ho bhi gaye...yaar bahot kuch miss kar diya...


Hmmmab ro ke kya fayada...rona to ab hai...kuch naya case hai ariya ka...

no daer dont worry abhi flash back hai na sab cleary bataungi😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Nice start

Shayari mast thi...
Ye story to flashback mei jayegii
Sounds intrestinng

Continur soon :):):):)

right btw thanks dear😉

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