jaara hatke please sab bachke#2 pt18/pg3 nov17

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i knew its like shock to all who know me😉

i m best in doing comment
pulling leg
and some time back
even i try to find bf for my friend
so even i try my hand in matchmaking also


so now i think let try to make a story about our best couple
its going tobe 😲
as i m going to try this first time

if anyone ready to get shock of life
and want his mind and heart to pass out🤢
please try this
guys give two page comment and get update

DO IT ALLL
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
index

part 18 Page 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

guys give two page comment and get update

ok😊😊but COMMENT zaroori hai kya?PICS se kaam chalay ga😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

ok😊😊but COMMENT zaroori hai kya?PICS se kaam chalay ga😆

okkk
let me think
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Posted: 12 years ago
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only m here to kill the pages 😆
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fwww 2 pages r complete now update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANXXX ALOT DONA86

SO YOU DID
AS I SAY

ME HERE TO FULL FIL YOUR WISH
BUT ITS LIVE UPDATE
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HERE GOES







part 18

AS maan is ready to settle himself in his room without knowing the pleasent change in his surrounding ,just than his aunt arrived in room and asked the reason behind his wet form as she loves him like a mother so she is very much concern about getting him ill due to all this.
aunt : son,what happened with you
you are never careless about your health than how the hell are you all wet today.
maan : kuch nahi aunty . its just that , i met one girl today and with out using her brain she push me into water. seems like she is mad.
aunt : son, you please stay away from that kind of girl
son you are to simple for this world,and don't know how sharp and cunnning are girls of today.
maan : ok, aunty
aunty : pata nahi kou chipkali thi
with that aunty move out the room of maan and maan start to have his tea obvious to the presence of third person who heard all their talk and now fuming in anger and ready to brust

geet : arre oye langure
(geet : okkk, so you reached here also
sharam nahi aati tumhe mera piccha karte hue.
maan : piccha to tum mera kar rahi ho
kya jarurat thi meri aunty ke ghar ke saamne ghar lene ki(its notme but you who are behind me, what the need to buy a house in front of my aunty house).
geet : chup ho kar ,pahle mujhe yeh batao ki woh budiya muje kose kyu rahi thi
(shut up and fisrt tell me why that crazy old lady is cursinng me with out any reason)
maan : uss becharri ko kya pata ke woh taa ta thaiya tum ho jisne mujhe gilla kiya tha(my dear aunty don't know that mad girl was you who pushed me in water)
geet : what did you say
taa ta thaiya.

maan : yes dear, its taa ta thaiya
as nakul told me you dance really well
please show me some move as drink only tea is just too boring and feel like your dance will be a gud company to time pass.
geet ;ayyye
listen it carefully, agar tumhe is gali mai rahna hai toh sharifo ki tarah rahna,aur mere kamaare ki tarf dekh bhi to tumhaari aankhe nikal lugi aur chil kauo ko khila dugi .(if you want to live here, be like gentle manand never try to see myroom becose if you even try to do that, than i pull your eyes from eyes socket and make them lunch and dinner for crow and eagle)
maan : thik hai devi ji
jaisa aap kahe,mai bilkul bhi apke kamare ki taraf nahi dekhu ga,bas jab khidki par aapki yeh komal kaaya nazar aaygi yo kabhi kabhi apni aankho ko thandak deduga aapko nihaar kar.
geet ; accha ji
to aap bas dekhe ge
to phir yeh dekhiye
with that she pick broom in one hand and her sandle in other
maan : arre yeh to broom and aapki sandle hai
kya aap daily aise bathing karke and yeh high heel pahne kar apne room ki dusting karti hai
geet ; ji nahi
inka use mai dusting ke liye nahi par kisi dusre kaam ke liye karne wali hu, aapkopata hai
woh kaam kya hai

maan(with sweet innocent face ) nahi pata ji

geet : nahi pata to sun lo
agar aaj ke baad tumne , mujhe taa ta tahiya kaha,ya phir meri aur deka to main is chappal aur broom ke saath tumhaare ghar par hamala kar dugi.

maan : bhagwaan kare woh din jaldi hi aaye.

geet : aayega aayega ,agar tumhaare yahi lakshan rahe to woh din jaldi hi aayega
with that she moved from their in anger and maan left standing alone in his window with a smirk on his face which show their is more to come
maan : badi sar firi ladki hai
par hai aapnne type ki
ab maaja aayega
heyyy saraaa
oopsss
i can't tell them ,i knew their true identity sooo
guruuu

location change
back to acting as all the four are on stage where sara is playing saadu (prist)
talli is playing abla narri(poor lady)
anu is playing kanjoos thakur pati
and our dear ruchs is daaku

so lets start the play
talli : babaaa
babaaa
mujhe mera haq chahiye
as chahiye hi chahiye

precap : ok guys
who want to see play please comment and like

do it five page this time with few tens comment😉



Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear u can call me dona with out 86 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dona86

thank u dear u can call me dona with out 86 😆


ok dona

did you like my other two ff

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