Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#4,Thrd 5 link added - Page 63

Originally posted by: paponecon

wow u potraid th ad of the lotion where our old dev acted as a model...isnt it...i lov th ad vry mch n lovd it in this update also...bt whats nw twist...

thanks dear for loving that ad here...

Originally posted by: ManeetGurtiMG

Awesome update..
thank god geet is fine now..
This vendeta is a cutie pie..
Aww loved their Hide and Sick game..
Hey, I've also imagined maaneet in that advertise..(that khotta dev/abhinav is also a reason for that)
so maan didn't let her fast for him..very good...
Waiting for da twist... Hope it'll be a happy twist...

thanks a lot dear...
hehehe, , maine bhi imagine kiya tha maaeet ko and that too because of that khota dev/abhinav shukla...

Originally posted by: deepthich

hmmm... nice dear...

MAANEET ka romance to toda toda aage badraha hai... 😉

no karwachauth for GEET!!!! that is bad... 😒

anyways waititng for the next...kya hai phir se twist??? hope acha ho...

thanks dear...
not bad dear, it's good for her health...

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

awww so beautiful update
loveed it very much

loved maans monologue...
their moment with ved s so adoreble

waiting for twist...continue soonp
thankx for pm

thanks a lot dear...
thanks for loving maan's monologue...

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Cool update yaar.

Great Geet is fit and back to home and happy...

Loved to see the bond of Maneet to have become a bit more stronger, closer...me toh completely enjoying it.

And of course loved the sweet cute lovely Family time...so happy to see them very happy...

Great to see Maan not falling into Geet's innocence this time and taking care of her so very much.

Wowww...twist...well what could it be...hope its a sweet one...hope Maneet's union😳...so waiting..bring it soon

thanks a lot dear, ,
you always left me speechless with ur comment...
glad that you loved the update...
yup the twist will be nice in the end...

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

That was Lovely update...
Ad is perfect for maaneet...
aww..geet missed KC.. but the way maan made her understand was so touching...
waiting eagerly for the twist..

thanks a lot dear...
no prob dear, , she will enjoy KC next time...

Originally posted by: ylaraib

awesome update

happy , naughty , cute

a mixture update

love it so much

for you, mera ego toh kya, whole maan singh khurana package haarne ko ready hai"

uff kya dialogue he yar so sweet na

just love the whole update

next bhi jaldi dena and ye kya

ek or twist

ab kya bura hone wala he it's better be a good twist or else

uff me kya karon gi agar bad twist bhi hova tu bhi meread karon gi what's a big deal yar

anyways itni bakwas ki he yar

awesome update love it so much

LARAIB

thanks a lot dear...
hehehe, , msk ka whole package is fida over her...
ha ha, read to karna hi padega na...

updating, , kise chahiye??
now ve going..
dopahar me wapas aakar update karungi...ok...
till then wait karo...

Woww...cool dear...will b waiting...by the way its just 15 more mins for noon (12 o'clock)😆😆😆😆

@ManeetGurtiMG- hehehe dear, , maine bhi maaneet ko imagine kiya tha uss ad mein because of dev / abhinav shukla' I really love that advertisement'.

I have extended the twist little bit'.. gals, don't be upset, geet will come to know about the baby and about the twist, , after completing the twist, maaneet will come close and no separation.. so don't worry'. Enjoy the updates'.

Part-50(B)

Next day, today is karwa chauth and geet didn't fast for me, , I told to dadi that make sure that she eats properly'. At breakfast, , I made sure that geet have breakfast in front of me and she did' I sighed and went to office'. I knew that she will be angry from me but I know that how to pacify her'.

It was lunch time when geet send my lunch but I didn't have because I was busy in meetings'. Too much work load and over that, that fashion week is coming close, so we have to work hard'.

It was night, , I came back, , though geet didn't fasted for me , I was so relief with it, , her health was most important for me, , now a days I couldn't tolerate any kind of carelessness, , daily I made sure she had healthy food that too n front of my presence and in lunch time, sometimes I come at home for lunch then she had with me otherwise she had her food in dadi's presence, , and my jasoos that is Vedanta told me everything , ,

As soon as, I entered in mansion, I saw that it was decorated like a bride though none fasted, neither geet nor dadi but it was for others, , geet was waiting for me desperately, , I looked her and passed my smile to her, , she passed me shy smile , ,

Geet-maan, , I understand that why you didn't let me fasting for you but now can you please have dinner with me after seeing the moon? She asked hoping so much, ,

"of course geet, , let me freshen up first then we both will have dinner together" I told her, , she smiled back'.

Geet-achha maan, , aapne lunch kiya, , I cooked it that too your favorite dishes, , kaisa tha? She asked to me so desperately but how could I tell her that I didn't had it'.. oh god,, kaha fass gaya' I was cursing to myself'.. then I thought that I should lie to her for her happiness only'..

"aah, geet, that was so yummy, , I never eat so yummy food before'" I told her'..

Geet-really maan'. You liked it'.. I nodded'.. achha palak paneer kaisa tha? She asked to me'.

"palak paneer, dam good geet, , still I have it's taste in my mouth'" she was so happy'..

Geet-really, , and that custard, , you know first time I have tried custard, hows that?

"custard was so yummy geet, , so sweet also'" but in next moment I saw tears in her eyes, , I was shocked and worried at once'.

"geet, what happened? Kya hua? Why are you crying? " ohh god, I thought this time also I made some mistake, now what?

Geet-you lier, , I knew that you didn't had anything from morning, not even a drop of water, , aapne mujhe vrat nahi rakhne diya aur apne aap vrat rakha? Why? Yesterday you was telling me that what will you do without me and now what will I do without you if I got long age?

I at once covered her mouth with my hand, , I was hurt with her talks, , how it can be happen? We'll live together always'.. "geet, , how can you think like that? Nothing will happen, , you get that, , hum hamesha sath-2 rahenge" she nodded slowly, ,

"achha leave it, , see what I brought for you, come I'll show you, , " she got excited and forgot about that vrat and all, , waise I was hungry like anything but I didn't tell anything to her otherwise she will crib again'. We reached to our room, , all the members on terrace and waiting for moon, , I made her sit on the bed and I was kneel down in front of her, ,

"first of all, , this rose for a beautiful lady, , " I kissed the rose slightly and present to her, , she blushed and accepted the rose'.and then for my utter surprise, , she kissed at the same place on the rose where I have touched my lips'. Me too blushed and then I slide gift wrapped box to her, , her eyes twinkled with happiness, , it was first time ever I have gifted something to her, ,

She was continuously gazing at the gift but didn't try to open it'.. "arey geet, open to karo" I told her, , she nodded like a child, , it was like she is seeing gift first time in her life'.. she placed her fingers on the ribbon and loosened the knot'. As soon as , she opened the box, , I saw the happiness in her eyes, , she jumped suddenly and hugged me tight'. First I was stunned with her sudden act but then I too reciprocate and hugged her back'..

I heard her blabbering which she was blabber in hr excitement'.. "omg! Omg! Omg! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it so much, , this is so stunning, , and so pretty, , " she broke the hug and kissed me tight on my cheek'. Omg, , it was dreamy, , I never expected like this from her'. She is crazy really, , "do you like it?" I asked to her as everyone asked after giving the gift, , she blinked her lashes couple of times , , her lips were wide in a form of smile, , I can count her teeth also, , I laugh at my imagination'. I pulled her cheeks and a cute frown on her face when I pulled her cheeks'.

"maan, , like it, I loved it, thank you so much, though you kept fast for me and here you are gifting to me, , according to the ritual, I should give you something na??" I nodded like a obedient husband'. She made me sit on the bed and she sat beside me, , I was thinking that what is going in her mind, , she move close to me, , her lips were so close to my ears, , and then she whispered in my ear with her sexy yet sweet voice'..

"maan, , close your eyes' " her breath was fanning on my cheek, , I was shivering with the close proximity of ours, , it was so unusual between us, , "please maan!" she whispered again and I did as she instructed me to do'. I closed my eyes but my heart beats were raising with the each passing second, , it was like volcano inside my stomach, first I am hungry and second she is close to me, , my tummy was growling but I ignored it'..

"think it as your karvachauth gift maan from your wife" and then after some seconds I felt weight on my legs, , ok, she is sitting on my lap, , she held my hands and placed them around her waist, , I tighten my hold around her waist, , I didn't know that what will happen after next moment, , ? next second I felt her hand around my neck, , she whispered again, ,

"maan, don't open your eyes, , open it when I call you, ok" she told to me'. "ok geet, " I replied back'.

Next moment, I felt her one finger tracing my face, forehead to my jaw line, , gosh what she is doing with me? I asked to myself, , she is testing my patience, , I won't leave her, I decided in my mind but then I felt her thumb tracing the outline of my lips, , I dam wanted to open my eyes but just then she again whispered'. "please maan, , aankhein mat kholna' please" she pleaded again and I nodded,,,,,

She shifted herself more into me, , I gasped a little with the feeling, , and at the next moment, I felt something wet on my lips, , what was that? I don't know but then I got it what it was? It was her tongue tracing my lips, ,

she was licking my lips with the tip of her tongue' and then I felt my lower lips between her lips, , she was nibbling my lower lip, , I tighten my hold around her waist, my fingers were digging in her waist skin, , but she was no where stopping, , I dam wanted to open my eyes but can't break my promise'.

I was feeling dam good, , it was new sensation in my body, , it soothed my heart, mind, every part in my body, , soon I respond her back and start nibbling her upper lip, , her one hand reached in my hairs and she start massaging my hairs'.

It was like hungry lion inside waken up and attacked on it's prey, , still my eyes were so closed, , our lips were messed up with our saliva but it was dam good feeling, , I was feeling like tasting honey, , soon I heard my name from her mouth, ,

"maan" ohhh'. Hearing my name from her mouth was like being In heaven'.. she told me that when she will me then I can open my eyes, I followed her instructions and opened my eyes, , and then what I saw, her angelic face that is red with shyness , her closed eyes, , her petal like lips in my rough lips, , she was nibbling my lips and me too was so lost in nibbling her petals, ,

I couldn't control on my over flowing hormones and emotions and I bit her lips, , she gasped at once and my tongue got an entry inside her mouth'. Our breath mingled, , My tongue slid down inside her mouth and tasted her sweet nectar, , her tongue entangled with mine and our tongue danced with each other, ,

we were so lost in each other that I forgot I was hungry, , after a long kiss, , we both were short of breath and finally we broken out kiss, , she was flushed completely so was i'. our forehead touched with each other and we were panting'.. "thank you geet for this sweet gift, , I'll never forget", , I thanked her'.. she was shy, not bale to meet her eyes with mine'.

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"ohh, , toh she is Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana, , interesting", ,

"you know her"

"of course and you too know her but seems you forgot but how can i?"

"then what are you going to do? "

"just wait and watch"

"ohkay, , then it'll be fun"

"of course, , it'll be fun, will see on whom he'll trust?"

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After karvachauth, , again a festival came, , we all were having dinner and chatting , just then geet spoke'

Geet-dadi, tomorrow is Hoyi na, , ? she asked to dadi'. Dadi smiled'

Dadi-ji bete, , kal hoyi hai and you know hum bhi maan ke liye vrat rakhte hai'. Geet excited'

Geet-really dadi maa'. She was about to say something but I stopped her'.

Maan-dadi, this time you are not going to fast for me, , eveytime I denied you, , but this time you'll listen to me'..

Dadi-maan, kyo aap zabardasti kar rahe hai, , hum theek hai'.

Maan-no dadi, you are not well, , aapka Blood Pressure kitna low tha kuch din pehle, , geet tum hi samjhao' she nodded and looked at dadi'

Dadi-geet, don't look at me like this, at least you understand me na'

Geet-please dadi, , you are not fine' mere paas solution hai'

Dadi-aur woh kya? Asked dadi to geet, , I was also so eager to know what is that solution?

Geet-dadi, , every year , you used to fast for maan but this maan will fast for you, , this is not necessary that mother should fast, , bete ka bhi koi farz hota hai'. Aapko pata hai, tej bhaiya used to fast for mom, ,

Annie-how sweet'. Bro learn something'.

Dadi-but bete, , this is not right'.

Geet-dadi, , aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai, , achha, you want to keep fast for maan na, , then you can fast only till noon, , but maan will keep fast for you & Vedanta also' hai na'.? she asked to me'.. I smiled and nodded' how sweet she is! I really liked her sweet gesture'. Though Vedanta is not her own child but she wants keep fast for him'.

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Now geet's injuries healed properly and she is fine now, , it was a week after that Diwali is on it's way, , we all were sitting in hall and discussing about the diwali party , , about the guests and meals, ,

It was night, , we all were sleeping but me and geet are awake, , but Vedanta is again sleeping with us on our bed, , actually tomorrow is Diwali and Vedanta's birthday too, , so me and geet were planning to throw a party along with Diwali party'.

Precap

Aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahaar banke'

I extended the twist little bit though the twist has been entered here..'. So be ready for next part'. In next part, , there will be dhamaka'.