(Tanha) Swaron Dushman To Dosti To Love FF Finish- Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...this was such a cute update...awww...swaron is damn adorable in ur FF👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update...r
Dat rachna is so irritating...saare romance ki vat laga di... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤗 Simi...Baby ur such sweet hrt!
First of all I'm so so so sorry for being so late dear! :(
I knw meri simi mujhe mafi de degi :D
And the update was fab :*
Luvd the place where Sharon was goin' to call Swayam Baby but then she stopped.:)
@Deepu di-absloutely rite di..simi has made SwaRon vry adorable and cute in this FF.
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The Rachna part..OMG! Evry moment I cud feel Sharon's Jealousy 😆
And the place where Swayam acted as if he didn't knw Sharon🤣🤣🤣
Can't stop laughing 😆
And simi dis was a 5X⭐️ Upd8
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

🤗 Simi...Baby ur such sweet hrt!

First of all I'm so so so sorry for being so late dear! :(
I knw meri simi mujhe mafi de degi :D
And the update was fab :*
Luvd the place where Sharon was goin' to call Swayam Baby but then she stopped.:)
@Deepu di-absloutely rite di..simi has made SwaRon vry adorable and cute in this FF.
&
The Rachna part..OMG! Evry moment I cud feel Sharon's Jealousy 😆
And the place where Swayam acted as if he didn't knw Sharon🤣🤣🤣
Can't stop laughing 😆
And simi dis was a 5X⭐️ Upd8
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Karen(Maria)



Tnkx a lot dear for a lovely long comment so the maffi is all urs...😆
Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Fab update...r
Dat rachna is so irritating...saare romance ki vat laga di... 😛


Thnkx dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

WOW...this was such a cute update...awww...swaron is damn adorable in ur FF👏👏👏


Thnkx dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
luved the rachna part...jealous sharon as always a treat
continue soon
n thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
really cute update😉
😉Jealous sharon lol that rachna part was hilarious.Poor swaron
Finally swayam mom know about swaron's relationship😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

really cute update😉
😉Jealous sharon lol that rachna part was hilarious.Poor swaron
Finally swayam mom know about swaron's relationship😉



Thnkx dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 21

Guys I m sooo sooo sorry for the late update''I was a bit busy this days. This is chapter 21 hope u'll all enjoy it '. And thnkx for your lovely comments and like on all the previous updated''.ENJOY!!!

Chapter 21:

Next day in college:
Swayam was wlaking in the corridor.
Swayam's phone start to ring:

Swayam: haan mom bolo'
Mom: hey Samm meri bahu ko lakhar aana bulna maat.( warning)
Swayam: mommm''.. (irritated) aapne mujhe subha se pachas baar kaha ki Sharon ko lekhar aao'..
Mom: toh??
Swayam: toh mom mein bula nahi hu mein use lekar aaunga.
Mom: (smiles) ok bye
Swayam: bye
Phone convo ends:

Swayam: (to himself ) gosh yeh mom ne mera dimaag kaa liya aaj''.
Sharon comes from the back:
Sharon: hey
Swayam: (not responding)
Sharon: heyyy
Swayam: (Stil not responding)
Sharon: Swayyyaammm
Swayam: (out of his thoughts) Haan'umm'un haan kaho kuch keh rahi thi tum.
Sharon: tume ho kya gaya hai?? kaha ko gaye the.
Swayam: mom ke baton mein (said in low voice)
Sharon: watt??
Swayam: nothing kuch nahi tum kaho tum kyun bula rahi thi mujhe'
Sharon: kuch nahi bas aise hi'.
Swayam: k aur haan aaj tume mere saath chalna hai.
Sharon: kaha??
Swayam: mere ghar'
Sharon: kyun??
Swayam: mom se milne'
Sharon: (scared) really?? Chalo na shopping chalte hai please.
Swayam: Sharonnn
Sharon: ok ok fine tum maat aao mein akheli chali jaogi.
Swayam: arrey shopping ki kuch zarurat nahi hai who bas tumse casually milna chahti hai koi interview pe nahi bulaya hai.
Sharon: jab mere dad tume bulayenge na tab tum samjoge ki in laws ko milna kitna darr lagta hai.
Swayam: whatever'.wait a min kahi tumne'.
Sharon: (smiling) haan meine dad ko humare bare mein bata diya..
Swayam: watt?? (Scared)
Sharon: haan dekha ab tum kaise darr rahe ho.
Swayam: meri case alag hai'
Sharon: aur woh kaise??
Swayam: Tum meri family ko pehle mil chuki thi lekhin mein tumare dad ko kabhi nahi mila hoon aur directly milunga tab uske beti ka BF baan kar'..(Scared face)
Sharon: (Smiles) waise itna bhi maat daro'..woh tumse itni jaldi nahi 1 mahine ke baad milenge kyunki who out of town gaye hue hai.
Swayam: thnkx god (relieved sign)
Sharon: cum lets go to the rehersal hall sab humara wait kar rahe honge.
Swayam: haan chalo
They walk towards the RH (rehersal hall)
They enter the RH.
Vicky: yeh lo aagaye luv birds.
Swayam: Nill yaar'.
Nilesh: Vicky theek keh raha hai'.jabse tum dono ek couple ho tabse tum dono naraz hi nahi aate''(teasing) kahe chupke'..(rubbing hands)
Swayam: shutup yaar.
Rey: chalo guys ab sab hai toh valentine day ki party ki tayari kare.
All: Valentine party.
Neha: valentine party in college??
Rey: haan guys'
Swayam: this is not done yaar sab college mein valentine bhi??
Rey: ab kya kare RDX sir neh kaha hai ki iss baar college mein valentine party.
All: maann this is soo boring.
Sharon: Rey that's boring.
Rey: wohhooo look who's saying kisiko kisi ke saath quality time spend karna hai.
Sharon: (blushing)
Swayam: but seriously yaar kitna boring hai college mein valentine.
Rinni: iss mein kya hai sab apne love ke saath quality time spend kar sakte hai.
All: aur who kaise.
Rinni: dekho mein aur amar canteen mein, Simmi Nilesh RH mein, kriya rey fire exit mein, Sharon Swayam abandoned corrider mein ab Vishaka aur bharat toh couple nahi hai na.
Vicky: arrey yaar aur hum.
Rinni: tum tum
Nilesh: tum toilet mein.
All starts laughing.
Neha: cheee disgusting.
Vicky: kya bola tu (running after nil to chase him.)
Swayam: guys stop it yaa, yeh kya hai valentine day aur woh bhi abondened corrider mein yeh bhi koyi jagah hai valentine celebrate karne ki''
Rinni: toh kaisi place honi chahiye.
Sharon: romatic jagah honi chahiye.
Swayam: (smiles)
All: ohhooo
Sharon: (realized wat she said and embarrassed) fo'Focus guys.
Swayam: yh guys focus please.
Kriya: on?? (teasing)
Swayam: Kriya tum bhi??
Kriya: ok ok guys lets focus and Rey their right college bhi koyi place hai valentine celebrate karne ki.
Rey: ok guys mein aur Swayam, RDX sir se baat karte '..and will work out something.
All: ok
Rey: chalo Swayam lets go'
Swayam: ok
Rey and Swayam walks out of the RH.

In RH:
Simmi: I hope they will work out something.
Sharon: don't worry guys Swayam will do something for sure.
All: (smiles) ohooo
Simmi: itna barosa apne lover boy pe.
Sharon: (blushing) w..w..woh
Simmi: blushing n all haan'.wow
Sharon: shutup Simmi
All of them were waiting for Swayam and Rey.
Rey enters:
Sharon: Swayam kaha hai??
Rey: use kuch zaruri kaam tha isliye who baad mein ayenga.
Simmi: toh kya hua kya kaha RDX sir ne??
All surious to know.
Rey: usne kaha hum college mein valentine day celebrate nahi kar rahe hai hume holiday hai hai.
All: seriously??
Kriya hugs Rey:
Kriya: ur such a sweetheart thnkx Rey.
Rey: baby mujhe thnkx nahi Swayam ko thnkx bolo.
Sharon:Swayam ne kya kiya??
Rey: who actually hua yeh ki

* FLASHBACK*

Swayam and Rey entered RDX sir's office.
Swayam: May we come in sir'
RDX: yeh sure cum in please.
Swayam: sir hume apse kuch baat karni thi'
RDX: haan bolo'.
Swayam: Sir hume pata chala hai ki there is Valentine party in college.
RDX: haan toh??
Swayam: Sir apki koyi GF hai??
RDX: yeh yeh kya keh rahe ho tum??
Swayam: please sir tell us na'.
RDX: (blushing)
Swayam: blush kar rahe ho matlab hai.
RDX: haan
Swayam: konn hai woh??
RDX: Nicole
Swayam: toh agar aapke plans kya hai??
RDX: mein use yaha lekhar aunga'.
Swayam: watt?? Sir woh kitna bura maan jayegi I mean koyi bhi todi na college mein valentine celebrate karna chahiyenga.
RDX: toh mein kya karu.
Swayam: sir une kayi romatic jagah par leh jayiye.
RDX: really??
Swayam: yes sir u should do that.
RDX: ok then tum log yaha enjoy karo mein nahi aa paunga.
Swayam: no no sir yaha sirf hum students ke wajese party rakne ki zarurat nahi hai'.
RDX: toh??
Swayam: hum bhi sab kahin bahar hi chale jayenge'.app apna exclusive time enjoy karo.
RDX: sure naa'
Swayam: absouletely sir.
RDX: thnkx guys toh college mein party cancel.
Swayam: ok sor byee
RDX: thnkx guys
Swayam: no problem sir enjoy valentine party with Nicole.
RDX: (smiles)
Swayam and Rey walk out of the office and did a high5.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Sharon: (smiles)
Vicky: kya baat hai Swayam ne toh kamal kar diya.
All: yuppp
Sharon: thnkx god finally hum college mein celebrate nahi karenge.
All: yaa thnk god and thnkx to Swayam.
They all leave rehersal hall and Sharon tries to find Swayam in the whole college but he was'nt there.

Sharon called Swayam.
Swayam: hey
Sharon: Baby kaha ho tum??
Swayam: arrey mein kuch zaroori kaam se bahar aya hua hoon.
Sharon: kaisa zaroori kaam.
Swayam: mein tume kyu batayu.
Sharon: kyun matlab bolo na kya kaam se gaye ho.
Swayam: mein pehle college wapas toh aau phir batata hu.
Sharon: ok bye come soon missing you.
Swayam: arrey mujhe gaye hue 1 ganta bhi nahi hua aur already missing me.
Sharon: haan mein kya karu agar mein tume miss kar rahi hoon toh'.tum jaldi aao.
Swayam: (Smiles) ok
Sharon: byee
Phone convo ends:

Sharon was waiting for Swayam in Fire exit.
Swayam came in the fire exit.
Swayam: heyy
Sharon: heyy kaha the tum aur kya kaam se gaye the??
Swayam: arrey Sharon who'(Sharon notices that Swayam had something in his hand that he was hiding at his back)
Sharon: yeh tumare haat mein kya hai aur tum kyu chupa rahe ho??
Swayam: nahi kuch nahi'.
Sharon: please please (trying to chase it)
Swayam: ok ok calm down dikata hoon.
Swayam hands the bag over to her.
Swayam: tumare liye.
Sharon: really kya hai isme??
Swayam: khud kolke dekhlo'
Sharon: ok
Sharon unwrappes the gift and sees a beautiful red dress

Sharon: wow it's beautiful, mere liye??
Swayam: offocurse babe.
Sharon hugs Swayam tightly. Swayam hugs her back.
Sharon: (breaking the hug) Thnk u sooo much baby u r the seetest person on earth.
Swayam: liked it??
Sharon: loved it'.. (Hugs again) I LOVE YOU BABY
Swayam: I lOVE YOU TOO, go now get ready I'm waiting for you in parking lot.
Sharon: ok mein abhi ati hoon.
Sharon comes wearing the dress.
Swayam was awestruck looking at her.
Swayam: you look Amazing sweety.
Sharon: thnkx you.
They both sit in the car and head to Shekawat mansion.
Swayam and Sharon enter the house.
Mom: hey Sharon you look awesome dear. (hugs her)
Sharon: thnkx aunty.
Mom: come in beta.
Sharon Swayam and Swayam's mom were sitting in the sitting room just then Sandy enters.
Sandy: hii bhai hi bha'.Sharon.
Sharon: (smiles) Tum...tum mujhe bhabi bula sakti ho.
Swayam: (Shocked) ( in mind: Sharon the diva apne aap ko babhi kehne ki permission de rahi ho'..impressing)
Sandy: ok but sirf shaadi ke baad.
Sharon: kyun??
Sandy: kyunki shaadi se pehle hi apna naam enjoy kijiye.
Sharon: Shaadi ke baad kyun nahi.
Sandy: shaadi ke baad koyi AG kahenga koyi bhabhi koyi Mrs shekawat kpyi bahu appka naam ''sharon'' toh sunayi nahi denga .
All laugh.
Swayam: ohh please mein koyi AG nahi bulane wala hoon ok' yeh sab old fashioned hai.
Mom: haan aur yeh babu bolna zaruri toh nahi hai na'Sharon toh humari beti jaisi hai.
Sandy: ok ok par ek insaan se toh tumara naam nahi sunaye dega'..
Sharon: konn
Sandy: who insaan jo tume mommy bulayega.
Swayam: (smiles) bilkul Sandy
Sharon: (blushing)
Mom: chal chal use tang maat karo cum Sharon lets have dinner.
Sandy: mom dad aane wale the na'
Mom: haan who athe hi honge.
Sharon: *eye talk to Swayam* ab mein kya karoon tumare dad ko mein pasand toh aungi na??
Swayam: *eye response* offcourse sweety.


Guys i know this update was really really short but kya karu mujhe time hi nahi mila yaar...😊
Please do comment and hit like.
Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago

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