ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Review for update-31

wow!!!! You left me spell bound with first half and blushing with second half of update.☺️
I used to thought that only my wedding will be most Perfect one but Manu!!! You write a better one. Usually I hate weddings and wedding arrangements and I think that I will be the one who will break the trend..lolz...But you designed a wedding scenario more than perfect.
Wow!! Decorations and everything have a significance with their love. 😃
I am gonna steal the ideas from here for my wedding..already telling you...😆

Second half:
starting from their presence in room and silent thought speakings...I loved the build up.
For a successful written first night, build up is like a foreplay(pardon my language😆)
And the rest of further story...I am not gonna dissect it because I was so lost while reading it that it's impossible to recall it.☺️
On other note, I am too shy to comment...lolz😆
ArSha are finally ARSHA...they are one soul, one body and one in all.
This can't be better..
Just perfect...😎
Stupendous update with a lot of tickles in my stomach..you raised my imagination level...😳
Manu!! You nailed it..


Oh! I think this is something on which we are different..
i love weddings but jab dusre ki ho...
i just love that environment...masti...teasing
everything is beautiful in its on way Hai na?

Ek kaam karte tere ghar ke interior se leke wedding managment ke liye m booked hahahaa
aakhir jeejs ko to lage ki unki saaliya is so talented hahahhaha


if you want you can steel me too... i so wanna be a kabab me hadda for you wedding night
buwahahahahahhaha *evil laugh*

Thank You Aduuu... i seriously look forward to your review n when i get it... its the most amazing thing🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjee_007

first of all
congrats 4 the new thread...
u truely deserve it...
now coming to the update...
woohhh do i really have to tell you...
that it was awsm mindblowing amazing...
i jus luvd it...
it was really gud..
n u described it really beautifuly..
how you portray their's pov jus luvd it...
it was awsm...
n thnx 4 the pm...


Thank You anjee 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

it was awesome
really nice & blissful


Thank You chetna 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: damonelena

Amazingg update :)
Their emotions were beautifully expressed. Update soon. :)


Thank You Sneha 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

😳😳😳 i loved it the way u explained their feelingsss but it was definately SiZZling...


Thank You 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hetalt29

Fabbb update !!!
Loved it ❤️
Congo for the new thread :D


Thanxx Hetal 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thankew 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gunnu1

Ek to m late m sorry but yr I cant read it!

M still 14!!
Poor me!! Nd I really did not read it! M a gud girl! ;) hehehee!!


Awww... good girl 😉
I hope you did that 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Omg.. Tht came lik a surprise to me... I jus hot time to read it n thr I saw my name.. Tnx a tonn Mania fr d dedication 😃

So sorry fr d late comment!
U know..I was waitin fr d update since long.. N it worth waitin.. Sch!
I loved it.. It was exceptionally beautiful..
Ur writing shows ur personna! Thrs such an ease warmth in it.. U write wid ur whole heart n thts d best thing abt ur updates! This is surely d bestest part of dis ff.. Bows to u fr dis 1.. !

Cumin bk to d update..
D arrangements fr d marriage.. D color theme.. Purple.. I was all amazed!!
Yay.. Arsha r married finally 😛


". The sacred fire at the mandap symbolized not only illumination of mind, knowledge and happiness, but also a clean and pure witness to the ceremony that was in progress. The seven vows were not mere some merry-go-round game. It was the symbolization of our faith and love." dis sentence by u made me ur big fan.. Sch! True meanin of gtn married!

U know m nt abl to express wht m feelin aftr readin it.. U lft me speechless.. Nt fair!

I liked many things.. Wud lik to quote some..


"She was so stunningly gorgeous, so innocent, and so pure. She was my Shakti. I found myself being enraptured by her perfection, engulfed in my love for her, and burning with a passion that had been dormant for much too long. Or had it ever truly awakened?" It showed kunwar's immense pure loyal n honest love fr shakti... Hayeee!


"Shakti Mohan Sharma, for the rest of my existence I will try to make you as happy as you have made me today" shaks ua really lucky to av a hubby lik kunwar.. Real mei aise husband exist krte h kya... Haha 😕


""Shakti, beta, tumhe kuch bhi chahiye toh mujhe bhula le lena...I'm your mother only...aur agar Amar pareshan kare toh tell me." dun know y I found it really cute..



Feeling in complete bliss at just hearing Kunwar murmur my name, I sighed as he rubbed my arms, stretching out beside me. I was in the arms of my husband, and I could never love anything more than this. Never. Nothing could ever compare to the elation and joy of being in the arms of the man that I was meant to love. And he loved me in return." I went mad readin it!! It does shows many things!

N d list goes on n on..

U neva cease to amaze me by ur updates..
All was perfect rathr more thn perfect.. Shakti's feelin.. Her nervousness.. Her feelings.. Her thinkin.. Her confusion.. Kunwar's feelin his love.. His confusions!
D best was how easily kunwar understands shakti..

Gosh.. M so in love wid dis part.. U'v written proficiently.. Kudos to u..
Loved it!
Waitin fr d nxt part.. Update soon:)


Awww.. my pleasure darls😊

its okay... but your comment was worth waiting
Ah come on you are embarassing me 😆

Yesh Finally they are an official couple atleast in my FF
Hahhaha i can understand
I dun know will have to survey for that ki aise husbands hote hai ya nahi 😕

M dancing madly after reading it Pihu
You are indeed a special reader
Thanks a bunch for this🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey peeps,

Long time haan?? I know sorry for that. I know my readers are very forgiving.😉
This idea came to me after watching the video posted below. I wanted to do something where Shakti was the one for a change to manaofy thing and teasing parts at her own will. I always feel that it's the other way around in earlier updates.

Now, I was suppose to be working for some urgency, but instead I found myself writing this... What can I say? *Shrugs*. I know my priorities.😃
Anyway, enjoy. It's nice and long.

Anyone who is disinterested can anytime leave this, trust me I won't feel bad. I appreciate honesty.😊

Maturity content- Reader's discretion advised. (hattrick)😆


Luv
Mania❤️




This update is dedicated to
Deetha
&
Born2Dance

(speakers on)
Edited by magical_mania - 12 years ago

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