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Hey my lovelies! 🤗 I have written yet another poem! Hahha 😆 I'm cutting down from today no more for a few weeks now! Need to start studying hard! 🤓 But I promise I will always entertain you guys! 😳 So this poem is dedicated to Aditya's eyes! 😉 ☺️ He has the most mesmerising eyes and this poem is inspired from them! This is from Pankhuri's side so please have a read and I want lots of comments for this one as I wont be doing anymore soon! 😡 😈 😃

As I gaze up into your eyes,
Two stars blue and bold.
I can't help but notice all the warmth you truly hold.
Through your eyes I see your spirit,
Bare untouched and still whole.
You love me, Already I know.

Looking up into your eyes,
All my trouble fades and falls away.
Looking up into your heavenly eyes,
makes me love you more and more every passing day.

It's an invisible force,
connecting my eyes to yours.
Like looking through open doors,
revealing secrets, like opening kitchen drawers.

Looking into your eyes,
I can see your every thought.
Telling me what every pain has brought.
Letting me know you're letting the pain go,
And letting our love grow and grow.

There's no crying beneath the skies,
there's no hiding behind your eyes.
They tell your every emotion,
They scream loud and clear,
they tell me you love me,
and you'll always hold me in your arms
.


Staring into your eyes should be a crime,
'cuz of the feeling it gives me inside.
So now as I say in this rhyme,
I'll love you forever till the end of time.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW Sonia!!! 👏👏

I think this one is my favorite of all of them!! Adi's eyes are my weakness so I think that's why I like this poem the best hahaha. 😉 But no seriously, it was beautiful as always. And now I'm in Adi-land, drowning in the blue of his eyes..

Good luck on your studies! I know what you mean about cutting down! I have said this since class started and semester is almost over and I haven't seen myself cutting down yet.. haha. But I hope you do for your school's sake haha, but we will miss you on here!
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wow...that's such a beautiful poem!!
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Staring into your eyes should be a crime,

No plea bargain...guilty as charged... hhheh

Like looking through open doors,
revealing secrets, like opening kitchen drawers.


I just loved this metaphor... I am not very romantic..I love this odd but wonderful nugget in your poem!

I loved your poem as usual... Sorry to hear your writing will be sparse. I will miss it. good luck with your studies.


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wow awesome!!!!!!!
Beautiful lines!!!!!!!😃
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Awww this is damn Aweosme ... Beautiful lines ... Very well written .. Always loving your Poems .. Mashallah ...
What !?! We gonna miss your poems 😭 ...
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Originally posted by: sharna2k6

WOW Sonia!!! 👏👏

I think this one is my favorite of all of them!! Adi's eyes are my weakness so I think that's why I like this poem the best hahaha. 😉 But no seriously, it was beautiful as always. And now I'm in Adi-land, drowning in the blue of his eyes..

Good luck on your studies! I know what you mean about cutting down! I have said this since class started and semester is almost over and I haven't seen myself cutting down yet.. haha. But I hope you do for your school's sake haha, but we will miss you on here!

Thank youuu so much Sharna! 🤗 Oh Wow! Glad you really liked this one! 😉 I wonder why?! ☺️ 😉 Thanks sooo much for commenting everytime I post something up! You are my consistent reader I must say! 😆 Nobody wants to comment these days, everyone is actually deal souls on this forum! 😆 😡 Yeah ikr! 😆 PaYa fever has hit me hard! 😉 😆 I will be cutting down spending limited amounts of time on IF! 😊 Be a good girl now! 😊 Cut down on IF for a bit maybe try and give yourself limits that's what I am doing! Thank you! You too Good Luck to you too! 😃
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Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

wow...that's such a beautiful poem!!

Thanks a lot! 😃
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Originally posted by: shesherkobita

Staring into your eyes should be a crime,


No plea bargain...guilty as charged... hhheh

Like looking through open doors,
revealing secrets, like opening kitchen drawers.


I just loved this metaphor... I am not very romantic..I love this odd but wonderful nugget in your poem!

I loved your poem as usual... Sorry to hear your writing will be sparse. I will miss it. good luck with your studies.


Thanks soo much! 😳 Glad you loved these particular lines! 😃 Oh whyy may I ask? 😊 I am a total romantic! Obsessed romantic! ☺️ Thanks for reading it, sorry for not being able to update you with other ones! I will try my best but studies come first cant sacrifice them as much as I love IF! ❤️ 😕
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Originally posted by: maneesha28889

wow awesome!!!!!!!

Beautiful lines!!!!!!!😃

Thanks soo much! Happy you liked my poem! 😃

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