WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 13

Originally posted by: pia.raha

lovely update!!!!!! uday and m ka flashback,their playing togethr,then duay apologsing wa soo sweeet!!!!!!!! will be waitng for the nxt part!!!!!!!!!!😊

AWWW THNKS SO MUCH...😃

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AWWW THNKS SO MUCH...😃

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome

lovely

beautifully written

loved the dialogues were fab👏

the guitar scene was super duper awesome

please update soon

thanks so much for pm

lovely part

AWWW THNKS SO MUCH...😃

Originally posted by: zinayrules

awesome update mahi!! full time romance between anaya and uday... the sand scene was so cute! 😛

aww the song part was so sweet,

loved the whole part, 😳

but mahi it was so short..

plz make it long next time 😃

all over it was great! 👏

AWWW THNKS SO MUCH...😃

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 9: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Anya sees the place'.

Anya: wow'.

She turns to face Uday'.

He was staring at the moon'.

Moon light shining on his face making him look a little paler'

That was the first time she realized how angelic his face looked'.

Then she saw his eyes'

There was some strange kind of pain in his eyes'

She was able to see it clearly'

She didn't knew what that pain was for but she felt that pain too'.

It was the first day of their friendship and he had such an effect on her, she thought'

Same was with Uday '

His eyes turned to see hers'

She smiles and they share a beautiful eye lock'

Anya looks in his deep brown chocolate eyes and saw various emotions running in his eyes and heart''"heart" she thought, he had heart'while all these days she thought he was a heartless jerk'.

Before realizing what she was doing she keeps her right palm on his left cheek'caresses it with her thumb'.

Her touch burnt his skin'.he felt the love in that'.

He closed his eyes composed himself and then opened his eyes'

She smiles and whispers: tum thik ho??

He nodded'

They remained silent for a moment'

He looked at the palm with which she was still caressing his cheek'.

He places a kiss on back side of the palm'.

Anya's POV(point of view)

What the hell is happening anya?? Why is your heart pounding so wildly'.even a day hasn't passed with yours and Uday's friendship and U already have fell for him' stop having that urge to be in his arms'stop it'ye kya ho raha hai'

End of POV

Uday: jagah pasand ayi??

Anya takes her eyes of him finally and looks at the place'.

It was a beach'

The place was a heaven'.

It was behing a small hill..

Covered with mountain on all sides'

And the moon light shining on the beach water'link to the beach---

http://www.layoutsparks.com/1/182279/dark-night-moon-nature-31000.html

it seemed no one knew about it..only Uday did'.

Anya looks back at him: bahot pasand ayi'.

He smiles and takes her near water'.

They were almost about to enter but anya stops'

Uday: kya hua??

Anya: mujhe pani se dar lagta hai'

Uday smiles and takes her left hand as he was already holding her right'.

Uday: dont worry hum hai na'

She smiles and they go in water stand there holding each other's hand'.

15 to 20 mins passed they stood there silently holding hands'

It seemed as if they were standing there for years'

after a wonderful silence they both go and sit on the sand'.

They make the castle silently as Uday had promised her'

Uday laid on his back while she was sitting there holding her knees'

Then she sees at the uday lieing next to her and see his closed eyes'

As if he knew if she would see his eyes she will know all the emotions running through him'

She finally decides to break the silence'

Anya: Uday tumhe is jagah ke bare mein kese pata chala??

Uday doesn't answer for a moment'she thought he would not'

Uday: maa.. ne laya tha'bachpan mein'

Anya: tum yaha aksar ate ho??

Uday opened his eyes a strange pain in them'

Uday: han jab bhi apne ap ko akela pata hu'

Anya confused: tum akele ?? par tumhare paas sabkuch toh hai'sab tumse kitna pyaar karte hai'

Uday gives a sarcastic laugh:pyaar'nafrat hai hume is shabd se'.

Anya: kyun Uday???

Uday turns his face other side closing his eyes'

This time anya could really see the pain on his face'

Then slowly the meaning sank in her brain'

He thought so because all loved his title his looks his face'

But not true him'

She doesn't ask anything further there is silence for a moment'

She stares at moon'

Uday gets up and sits besides her'

She smiles at him but he doesn't smile back'

She wanted to soothe him and finaly decides to do so'

She takes his hand in hers'

Anya: share karna chahoge??

He again turns his face other side surprised

he decided to stay quite...'.

She knew why he wasn't telling rajwada attitude you know'

Anya turns his face to face her and takes his face in both hand'

Anya: you wont be weak by telling ur feelings Uday '.it would only make U a human'tumhe jab bhi apni feelings share karni ho remember ur friend is always there for you ok'

He looks at her surprised that how did she know'

She caresses his cheeks'

Anya: pata hai Uday mujhe to laga tha ki ur a heartless person'but you do have a golden heart which knows to love as well as it pains'

Now Uday was seriously very shocked though he had his mask on how did she came to know???

Uday: tumhe kese pata chala I was in pain??

Anya: tumhari akhein tumne bina kuch kahe bahot kuch bolti hai'.

Uday smiles a bit at it'

Anya decides to change the topic'

Anya: so is jagah ke bare mein kitne logon ko pata hai??

Uday smiles looking at her attempt'

Uday: sirf tumhe aur humhe'

Anya: aur esa kyun??

Uday: of ho tum kya apne sath question bank lekar gumti ho?? Kya kyun kese kaha'

Anya laughs a bit at this and then her eyes go on watch and literally screams'

Anya: Uday time dekha hai??its 9 p.m'.

Uday looks surprised'

Anya: halkat vede dekhna band kar ghar nahi jana kya??

Uday laughs saying her continuous blabber ing'.

Without saying anything he gets up and give his a hand to her to get up'

She gets up'.

He calls jagat'

Jagat said they all were already home'.so it was just two of them'

Uday: princess sab chale gaye hai'lets go'

Before leaving he just sees the castle'and thinks'

" I JUST REALLY HOPE KI JAB TUMHE SACH PATA CHALE TO YE HUMARA CASTLE HO'JISME HUM DONO HUMESHA KHUSH RAHE'."

Anya looks at him and sees him staring at the castle they made'

Anya: ab plz humare castle ko najar lagana band karo aur chalo yaha se'

Uday laughs very hard at it and they leave'.finding their way back to car wasn't a task for Uday as he had been coming to that place since he was a kid'.

~mahi~

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

plzzz update next part quickly and plzzz pm me😊😊😊

UPDATED BUDDY!!

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

Mahii update na pliz.

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