Arjuhi SS:~:Back To My BABY:~Pt4/Pg13 Got HER BACK

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Superb ending Ana!You put all the right emotions down for us to be able to feel the pain,anguish and yearning both Arjun and Arohi had under gone in their separation.I also really liked the serenity with which Arjun and Piya connected just like a normal father/daughter would even though they both had had no time to bond over the years there was still that connection.The intimate scene betwene Arjun and Arohi was penned down in a very beautiful way that it feeled me with so much emotion in the way they longed for each other but Arohi still trying to hold back with Arjuns tue love for her compelling her to give in to unite and become one body,one soul just the way it's meant to be.Very well done Ana for giving us this beautiful story on Arjuhi that I will always remember!🤗

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

ana... i've no words!

first of all my heart went out to arohi... being a single mother is really tough! and arjun didnt die or divorce her, he just left her... the worst thing of all!!! 😭 despite of that she taught her children to kiss their father goodnight and love and respect him... what a strength of character 👏

second of all i want to slap this arjun 😡 arohi was so right! he was not some CID or detective to go about solving a mystery... all this without even telling his wife, forget consulting!!! he is a fool and he made the biggest mistake of his life... he was lucky to get a second chance at it and im glad that he didnt waste it 😊 it takes guts to own up to your mistakes and then put everything you have to correct them... rejection was waiting at every corner for him but he relentlessly pursued his children and his arohi with all the love he had 😳

shefu and romit are adorable ❤️ esp shefali... acting like a pillar of support to arohi during her dark times... what a friendship 🤗

i know i said ive no words and wrote so much 😆 but then my first reaction was that i was speechless! it was a fabulous story and written very well... true human emotions potrayed in a superb manner... im really happy for this arohi that her belief won that arjun will come back

and your message at the end too... although i doubt many guys are around in IF to read this as they need this advice the most arjun proving that he was dumb and representing the male fraternity at large 🤣