MG(FF):MY SOUL MATE#3 [COMPLETED]

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hiii friends welcome to the 3rd thread of MY SOUL MATE..iam really very happy friends..i never thought that it would reach 3rd thread.. Thank u sooo much for supporting me..without ur support i cant write anything...plz plz keep supporting me in the same way and ha keep pressing like button and comment(long wala)lo here also started
really guys ur every word motivates me to write better..so plz plz support me..
ok k i wont torture u more now...
i welcome u again to the thread of...

MY SOUL MATE #3


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congrats for the new thread
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Congrats for new thread👏
Eagerly waiting for an update😊
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MY SOUL MATE




part-25



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Geet stood up n walked to maan who stood in shock with guilt in his eyes.."hai na maan?"geet asked looking at him with teary eyes..



tears slipped down from maan's eyes n he felt a stab in his heart when geet asked him that question.


"Geet.."maan said but it didn't come out as his voice stuck in his throat..He closed his eyes dipping his head low..Her questioning eyes were just killing her…He was the one who prepared himself to bear her hatred but today he is not able to bare the thought n going away from her impossible to him..He sighed gathering the courage n tried to say something but she passed him a glare n ran away from there to her room..Maan felt a stab in his heart but ran behind her as he couldn't leave her like that n he knew that she needed him.She needs his shoulder to cry.He knows that he is only the one who can console her at the moment n he should answer her so he ran behind her screaming her name in pain n guilt.


Pinky n others didn't dared to talk anything n Samarth was the confused one to all the happening..Dev took him to his room to explain him everything n pinky followed him.


Geet ran to her room n tried to close the door but maan is quick enough to stop her..Geet looked at him in pain n turned her face away..Maan's heart winced in pain to see tears in her eyes.He never wanted to be the reason of her tears but for his dismay he is the reason for her tears n he hated himself for that reason..At the moment consoling her is the important task for him than his guilt.."geet.."he called her whose back was facing him..she didn't budge n kept sobbing silently..



He placed his hand on her shoulder n turned her to face him.."kyun kiya aapne aisa??"she asked with teary eyes..Maan didn't even had courage to answer her but he had to…His throat deceived him n not even letting him to utter a word..He couldn't say anything except looking at her in pain..


"muje laga tha ki mein apne maan ko sabse zyada jaanthi hoon par nai…aapko toh akele sab kuch sehne ka shouk hai..mahaan banne ka shouk hai.."she said tauntingly for which maan closed his eyes in pain..

"Kyun kiya apane aisa??kyun chupaya mujse?? "she shouted holding his collar..




To his utter dismay maan is not able to say a single word..He knew that this day would defo come but he never thought that he would be this helpless not even finding words to answer her..


"kya aapko ek baar bhi nahi laga ki muje sach jaanne ka haq hai??ya aapne muje wo layak nahi samja??kya mein itni parayi hogayi hoon aapke liye??"geet asked with chocked voice…



"nahi geet!!nahi pls don't say that…if anyone have right to love me,punish me or even take my life!!it's only u geet!!u are the most important person in my life infact u are my life"maan said holding her face in between his palms..

Maan:geet mein tumhe batana chahtha tha par muje laga ki..

Geet:aapko laga ki aapke bhare mein sunthe hi mein toot jaaungi hai na???

Maan couldn't say anything but just allow the tears to slip down from his eyes…."nahi maan aapki get itni kamzor bhi nahi hai..I faced many harships in my life,but i never left my courage to fight with my life n i'll fight in future too..ha I cant tolerate if anything happen to u but that doesn't mean that you hide such a big thing from me..when I can share ur happiness why cant ur sorrows n pains??"

"jab man kiya muje chod kar chale gaye aur jab man kiya wapis aagaye..tab bhi mere liye, meri kushi ke liye chale gaye aur ab bhi meri kushi ke liye wapis agaye..but u never asked me what's my happiness??my happiness my everything lies in u maan!!"saying so she started crying bitterly not able to control herself…She became so weak mentally as well as physically with the turn of events..she felt giddy n held her head.Before she could loose her balance maan held her tight…"geet…geet are u ok???"maan asked worriedly caressing her face..she nodded n stood still.."u know maan iam hating myself now..aapne mere liye itna kuch kiya hamesha mere kushiyon ke bhare mein socha par mein aapke saath nahi de paayi..iam hating myself maan..and I hate u for doing this to me..bahut bure ho aap"she pushed him away in anger n her tears were no where to stop..

Maan was shocked with her sudden push..He thought she really started hating him for his foolishness of hiding the truth from her.."geet pls don't say that jaan..i cant take ur hatred..u scold me as much as u want but pls mujse mooh mat modkar mat jao"even his tears were not ready to stop.

Geet turned to him who was looking at her with painful eyes..she hugged maan tight n started crying bitterly..even maan cried with her not able to tolerate her pain…



"geet mein dar gaya tha ye soch kar ki tum kese react karogi..isliye bata nahi paya tumhe…what if something happens to me.."

"mannn"geet roared in anger glared at him.."don't u dare to say that again..kuch nahi hoga aapko samje aap?"

She turned her face away glaring at him..Maan tried to hold her in his embrace again as she was crying badly..but she protested but finally gave up n hugged him…she broke down completely on ground while crying n maan held her tight in his embrace..He sat holding her tight in his embrace caressing her hair..




She started hitting him with her tiny fists saying"I hate u..i hate u..aap bahut bure ho..how dare u say that..kuch nahi hoga aapko..mein kuch nahi hone doongi kuch bhi nahi hone doongi"she said between her sobs….She continued crying till she lost her strength to cry n her pain to decrease..Maan who also was crying held her tight to console her..He knows that all she needed was his embrace..He allowed her to cry as much as she want to..Once she cries her pain would flow away along with her tears n he promised himself to fight with his life..He need to survive not for him but for his geet whose life lies in him.

The evening turned to night but still they are in the same position…When maan found her calming down he kissed her hair caressing them.."iam sorry jaan..aaj ke baad mein tumse kuch nahi chupaunga..i promise that I never ever hide anything from u"


Geet looked at him still in his embrace"I hate u"she said pouting twisting her already red nose.."I love u"maan said kissing on her forehead..They kept looking at each other n geet drifted to sleep in his embrace unknowingly as she was hell tired..Maan didn't feel like leaving her so he held her more tight capturing her sleeping form in his eyes..

precap:

maan held his head not able to bear the pain,he took out the medicine box but it was empty..To his dismay there is no one in the office...he collapsed on ground leaning against the wall holding his head tight😭



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on new thread kiddo
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very painful update kiddo

so sad part

geet and her cute complains

maan and his love and fear

at last they are together

precap:- oh no.. plzz send someone in the cabin to save maan

am glad you aren't gonna kill him 😆

love yaa

there are many updates from you which i still have to read

and you know am 🤢 seeing pms list only so wait and have patience i will read all soon

keep pming me with titles 😉
Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely updt.
Feel pitty for maaneet.
Precap is scary.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz...nothing shoud happen to maan haan...see cancer can b cured na...see yuvraj is fine nw na...den our maan can also b fine...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Awesome update it emotional one precap scary hope maan cured soon

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