RaHi OS: The Butterfly - Page 2

Originally posted by: keshiya

it was amazing. for the first time i read such a long os. the way the characters were put forth was totally different from show yet wonderfully portrayed. u have an eye for detailing things which is what i loved about this os. there are such people who abondon their loved ones for their betterment. i could relate Ranveer's character with what shown on the show. 

above all i loved ur os and whenever you write something do pm me. 

Amazing story 👏👏

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

 

Thanks so much for commenting and reading! Lol, I was so worried I was going to get completely trashed for this😆

Oh dear God, that was heart-wrenching. But beautiful at the same time. You know, I was actually wondering whether something like this could happen in TBP, but then I was all, of course not. But the way you've written the end,  I couldn't help but think that despite the fact that the show RV-Panchi wouldn't go down this road, many other true-stories might, because once some sort of toxicity enters a relationship, it isn't the same anymore. 

Deep though out of character!
The RV in here deserves to have his neck wrangled.
Panchi here is so naive or was I guess.
The language was excellent!