SwaRon OS:Meet The Fockers :)

_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Hey Friends...Here is a new OS ...This OS is special for me as I wrote it with my favorite writer on IF ...Nehal ...I really can't match up to her standard of writing...but really enjoyed writing this one with her...Hope u all will enjoy reading this one...😊

Hey Nehal...thanx dear ...for being patient with me and sharing the idea of this amazing concept with me....I had a great time ..while writing this with u ...luv u swthrt...😊





Meet the Fockers

Sharon...sharon...jaldi karo...wo log aate hi honge...she heard an angelic voice filled with excitement ...

Tum mujhe disturb mat karo...me Tanya ko taiyar karke lati hu...agar wo log aa jaye ...unka welcome karo...i will come downstairs once our princess is ready ...


Ohk...thik he...waise bhi tum meri kahan sunogi...meri siren Sharon...

Humari beti badi ho gayi he...have some shame ...Mr Swayam Shekhawat...she said with fake anger ...

Kya kare ...aap ko dekh ke apna age bhul jata hu...u still make me lose control...Mrs Sharon Swayam Shekhawat...he chuckled...

U r impossible Mr Shekhawat...she said coming out of the kitchen...

Correction sweet heart...I am possible...he said...

They were having this convo on the top of their voice..so that they can hear each other ...swayam was sitting in the hall...sharon was in kitchen...it was an important day of their lives...

So everything done? He asked...

DONE...she said...with a smile on her face...

That's why I love u so much...u r just perfect...have I told u lately...that...he took a pause..

That?? She inquired...

That ...I love you...he said...hugging her from back...

She blushed to a deep shade of red...he is still the same...even after so many years...she thought...

R u blushing Mrs Sharon Shekhawat...he asked...with a smile on his face...

Correction...Mrs Sharon Swayam Shekhawat...she replied...with a naughty smile on her angelic face...

He smiled at her answer...she is the same Sharon..the diva...though she has changed a lot...in all these years...but her attitude is the same...attitude of Sharon the Diva...

He planted a kiss on her neck...

She felt a shiver running through her body...

Swayammm...she moaned...

He was getting lost in her addictive scent...

Suddenly reality dawned on her...

Swayammm...ye kya kar rahe ho...bahut kaam he...it's the most important day of our lives...

He came out of his dreamland...

Oh! haan ..haan...sorryyy...u know u have this effect on me...time aur place ka sense hi nehi rehta...he scratched his head...like an 18 year old guy...


They heard the car sound...


I guess they are here...u plz go and check if Tanya is ready...swayam said..

Haan...m going...kitna time lagati he ye ladki...

Tumhari beti jo he...he teased her...

Not funny...she showed her tongue and ran towards upstairs...

He smiled at her cuteness and went towards the main gate...to greet the much awaited guests...

Hello Mr Shekhawat...

Hello Mr Singhania...Mrs Singhania...

Ghar dhundne me koi dikkat toh nehi huyi...

Are you kidding me Mr Shekhawat...Yahan bachcha bachcha SWARON Mansion ko janta he...

And swayam and Rey busted out laughing! Kria face palmed and then said...

Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhroge... aur Rey aap bhi na...yehah bhi shuru ho gaye... hum yahaan apni would be daughter in law se milne aaye hain...

Nahii...main toh yahaan apni princess se milne aaya hoon :D

Turning towards swayam... Kahaan hain meri princess...

Teri princess bilkul apni mom pe gayi hain... tayaar hone main kitna waqt lagati hain.

Waise humara lover boy kahaan hain...

Yahiin toh khada hain...pointing towards his back...

Aur Rishi ...how are you young man...swayam asked...turning towards a handsome Young man standing Behind him.

I am fine uncle...how are you? And aunty kaisi he? he asked in one breath...

His eyes were searching for something...he was getting restless to see her...it was evident from his eyes...his face...

Ahem...ahem...Wo aati hi hogi...don't worry..she is getting ready in her room...swayam whispered in his ears...

Kya uncle ...aap bhi na ..me toh bas...he blushed...

Arre kya me bhi na?? swayam teased him...

Tum log dheere dheere kya baate kar rahe ho...mujhe bhi batao..i will also join in... Rey said

Wo me kuch jaruri baate puch raha tha Rishi se...swayam said...in an extremely serious tone...

It's a secret between me and my would be son-in law...

Ohh...carry on ..carry on...he is you would be SON-IN-LAW...u have full right to interview him...

He pulled Rishi to a side and whispered in his ears...

Sun beta! Ladki ko patane ho...to uske baap to patana hoga...chal shuru hoja...waise bhi tere sasur ko bahut experience hain... tips bhi le lena...samjha...

Haan dad!! Rishi said in a confused tone..

He hit hard on his head...kya samjha ... dumb kahin ka...

Just then kria entered... Rey aap mere bte ko kuch mat bolo...

Par kriya...

Kya par rey aap chalo andar...hamhe Sharon se bhi milna hain.

Kriya dragged Rey inside...

Seeing his mother pulling his father... Rishi chuckled

Rishi beta...kuch dinon main tera bhi yahi haal hoga...Swayam teased him...

Nahi uncle main Tanya ki baat nahi maanunga...

Oye! Meri princess ko tang kiya toh teri khair nahi...

Apki princess mera khud hi bura haal kar degi... jab dekho siren ki tarah bajti rehti hain.

On hearing siren from Rishi's mouth Swayam busted out laughing...

Rishi gave a confused look to him...

Perfect Rishi! ...chal aaj main tujhe siren ka silencer bane ke tips deta hoon...

Tips..asked a confused Rishi

Haan! Teri siren bilkul meri siren ki tarah hain...

Aapki siren! Aap bhi Sharon aunty ko siren kehte the...

Haan! Mera wala siren bahut zaur zaur se awaaj karta hain...

Mera wala kaunsa kam hain uncle...

Par woh...

Bahut sensitive haina ... Rishi completed.

Haan! Tu meri princess ke liye perfect hain...he then whispered in his ears...about how to control tanya's anger...after all Sharon ko handle karneka experience tha.

After that swayam took Rishi and went inside or else both senior and junior siren would have killed them respectively for getting late.

Sharon goes to Tanya's room to check if she is ready...

Tanya is sitting in front of mirror...giving touch ups'

Princess'u r still now ready..Rishi's family is already here...Sharon said...

Oh Mom!...tell him to wait...Tanya Shekhawat aaj uske hosh udane wali he...

Wow...u r looking soo pretty swthrt...i hope wo tumhe dekh ke faint na ho jaye...sharon said...

Both started laughing together...Sharon realized the time..

Princess...we should go down now...

Oh yeah Mom..lets go...


*********************************************************************

Hey here is my Princess...swayam stood up from his place...when he saw his beautiful daughter...

Oye! She is my princess now..Rey chirped in..

She is looking just like HER...she has become a replica of her Mom...he told to himself...

Abey ab toh Sharon main lost hona band kar...teri beti ki shaadi ho rahi hai... Rey said

Hey here is my beautiful doll...Rey went forward and greeted Tanya with a hug...

Kria smiled at his gesture and muttered a "he is so sweet" under her breath...

Swayam was lost in the eyes of Sharon..who was standing next to Tanya...

Swayam :she looks just like u...my princess...

Sharon:Our princess..

Swayam: you were also looking so pretty the day I came to meet ur parents...

Sharon : u mean to say..me ab pretty nehi lagti..

Swayam: Meri Sharon aur pretty na lage ...aisa kaise ho sakta he..

Sharon: awww...u r so sweeet...

They were talking through eyes...

Ahem ahem Rey interrupted...

Rey said..bachco ki jagah tum dono ek dusre ke aakhon me lost ho gaye...he said in to swayam slowly.. so that others can't listen to him..

Swayam blushed and said...Rey ab toh sudhar ja...

Just then rey noticed something and face palmed... Yeh dekh mujhe lagta tha ki tuhse bada majnu koi nahi hain ...par mera beta tough competition de raha hain tujhe...

They both looked at Rishi who was lost in Tanya and was smiling like a idiot...

Rey again hit rishi... close you mouth...makki ghus jayegi ...

An Embarrassed Rishi sat down...sharon made Tanya sit next to him.

Kria hugged Sharon...

How are you Sharon?? I must say Tanya is ditto you...

Thank you kria!

All four parents were lost in their discussion about their college days,their love stories, friend groups...

Tanya was sitting next to Rishi'she was getting bored in between the oldies...

She looked at Rishi...he was yawning...

We need to get out of here..m getting bored...she said to rishi..

But How'? he asked...

Ummm...wait...she took her tea cup..and poured it on his trouser...

OMG...m so sorry Rishi...ye ..ye galti se gir gaya...m sooo sorryyy...she was looking so tensed...

Swayam, Sharon,Rey & Kria...stopped talking and looked at them...

Rishi...looked at his tea stained trouser and looked up...she winked at him...

u r impossible...he whispered to her ...

Correction..I am possible...she replied and held his hand...

Lets go and clean it ...or else daag reh jaega...she completed her sentence and literally dragged him out of the hall ...

Rey smirked...

Yeh dekh! Teri beti bhi teri hi tarah ideas dhoondh leti hain...

Swayam to Rey...in bachcho ko lagta he hume kuch samajh nehi aata...humne bhi bade papad bele he...apne time pe...thoda sa time akele bitane ke liye...

Haan...sahi kaha...wo bhi kya time tha na...

Sharon & kria blushed at their conversation...

Ye log kabhi nehi sudhrenge...they said to each other ...


********************************************************

You are such a drama queen...he said...pata nehi shaadi ke baad mera kya haal karogi...

How dare you ...you..you called me Drama queen ...Tanya replied ..in angry mode...

Heyyy...kitna chillati ho...dheere bolo...Siren ki tarah bajti rehti ho ...

U..u Mr attitude...u called me Siren...how dare you...she could n't complete her sentence...he kept his finger on her rosy lips...

Rishi( in mind) arey ! swayam uncle ka idea kaam aya...bas finger rakha aur chup ho gayi...

Bakhi bhi tips try kar leta hoon..

Shhh...i forgot to tell u something...he said in a husky voice ...

Ummm...kya...she asked...( blushing)

Rishi( in mind) blush bhi kar rahi hain... swayam uncle ko yoh bahut experience hain ...wah kya father in law hain mera!!

You are looking breathtaking today...totally out of this world...he whispered near her ears...she could feel his warm breath on her cheek...

She blushed to a deep shade of red...

You look like an angel...when u blush ..that too because of me ..

Next moment...he felt her soft lips on his... she started kissing him with all her love and affection ...he responded in no time'the kiss went on to be passionate ... his touch was making her dizzy...she was playing with his hair ...he bite her lower lip...she tugged his hair... out of excitement...he was holding her tiny waist ..protectively...as if he was declaring to the world..she is mine... they were lost in their dream land...where nobody existed except only two of them ... they almost forgot that their parents are sitting downstairs... waiting for them...

Well only there mom were there down stairs...their fathers were spying on them.

Swayam was laughing silently looking at them...whereas rey was getting furious.

Swayam woh teri beti ko kiss kar raha hain aur tu yahaan has raha hain..

Theek se dekhna nahi tune...meri beti ne kiss kiya usse...

Dumb boy abhi dekhata hoon isse...rey moved forward towards rishi...

Swayam caught hold of him and pulled him back... arey maine hi use tips diye the...

KYA??? Tune...swayam..tu... ek min...matlab tu bhi...

Haan main bhi... yeh idea hamesha Sharon par chalta hain... toh maine rishi ko bhi de diya...

Tera beta toh super fast nikla yaar..aaj hi try karliya...

Mujhe laghta tha ki...sirf tu hi hain jo kisi say itna pyar kar sakta hain...par inhe dekh ke I know iwas wrong...

Love doesn't change rey..generations change hote hain...par love nahi...ways bhi different honge love ko feel karne ke par...


GENERATIONS CHANGE...FEELING OF LOVE...ALWAYS REMAINS THE SAME!





Hope you all will like this OS ... a small effort from Nehal and me...please let us know your feedback...will wait for your comments and feedback...




Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

58

Views

8.2k

Users

55

Likes

192

Frequent Posters

Nehal92 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#2

res

unres!

DEEPs

This Os is special for me too :))) patient with you..dear you are efficient one and i am the lazy bum

had a great time writing it with you!! hopefully we will write more together!

Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago
OceanicRockStar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res!!! wow...awesome...wat a plot...swaron's daughter getting merried to kriyansh's son...great!!! luv the prt whr swaron had lil romantic moment...after so many yrs they still get lost in each other...now thats wat we call love is..!!! swayum giving tips to his son in law...hehehe must say rishi is way to lucky having such an exp father in law in subject of love...hehehe...and lastly...the way rey reacted wen tanya and rishi kissed...hehe and swayum answer tere bete ne nai meri beti ne kiss kiya...wow!!! swaron ki daughter hai to romantic to hogi hi...!!! amazing os do write more you two..love you both :)))
Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago
nj_SRKholic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
res
unresd..


oye hoy..!!
d two amazing swaron writers hav come together to ofcourse it had to b a blast.. a huge one..!!

d concept is amazing man must say gr8 work..!!

evrythng was written so smoothly in a complete flow... juzz loved it to d core..!!

i literally coul dimagine evrythng readin git yaar..!!

v love to c swaron in dis way too...!!

gr8 work dear's ..!!
Edited by namratajadhav - 12 years ago
sweetcherry95 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
a very beautiful and lovelt os by you and nehal
both of you keep writing more
Dreamer3003 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Res
Unres
Woww awesome os 👏
Jus loved it 😃
Beautifully written 😊
Fabulous work 👏
Thanx for d pm 😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
Mahirah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
super super super super super adorable and surely the cutest OS ever !!😳

Nehal + Deep= Fantastic combo👏👏
we would love to read more from u !
-.Nisha.- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
res
unres
awesome os dipu di and nehal👏
loved it
swayam still the same majnu boy😳
tanya n rishi's marriage proposal❤️
love u both

Thanks for the pm
GoldenLuna thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome os...
loved it...
especially last lines hayee...
they were beautiful...
thnx for pm...
HPHolic-3 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
It was soo cute n adorable os
Swaron as parents.Their daughter marry to kriyansh's son
Rishi can beat swayam too in majnugiri
He is really lucky to have such an experience father in law...:p
Lil bit swaron romance they r still same thats called true love
Last part reyam reaction when rishi i mean tanya kiss rishi was hilarious
Loved it
ps.Would love to read more os/ss/ff from both of u together...:D

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".