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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG ...It was a perfect update ...awesome track.
loving the phase of the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
u must be bored palin to hear that update was awesome...but kya karein...it was just that...awesome
loads of things in the update...from reason for Maan's reaction or lack of it to Geet's love transitioning it into worship...but what caught my eye was the transition in between...
Long time ago I wrote an update. It was nothing remotely philosphical as your's but as many will say hot an passionate update describing a day of honeymoon😆. But what was common was the idea of what a man feels and the trust which gets forged between a man and his wife after accepting each other naked...not only of clothes but actually in one's most vulnerable, raw and natural state...you just reminded me of that today. Well needless to say I totally agree. I will go a step ahead and say doesn't a woman feel worshiped when a man returns to his wife's arms night after night...after having scars of bearing kids...after having wrinkes from age. Ask a woman who doesn't have this luxury, and one will cherish the unsaid beauty of a relationship between man and his wife.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am completely left speechless with maan's interpretation of love and lust...words cant do justice to what i felt while reading this update...simply flawless👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this chapter!
So profound and deep!
Geet's reason of ridin bikes...i never knew that fact!
Maan, Geet's only friend.
Maan using hawan kund to teach about love&lust.👏
Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent update. Loved the convo between maaneet 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply love this story yaar..as the title the updates are really beautiful...u can drug ppl with your
writing..😆😆pls cont soon..looking forward for your update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ gudmeet
no dear,i am not at all mad at you..
This is a short story and i can't stretch it...
Besides this,maaneet had just talked as "intellectuals"{pretty bold intelluctuals you can say} here,they have not shared something personal yet...That would happen as their friendship progresses..
hope you are understanding my point..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

Bold n B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.😛

"Geet stop thinking about that.."...he knows her so well dat he dnt need words frm her to know wats goin on in her heart n mind...lykd d reason behind his calm n compose attitude, he showed dat day... otherwise it wud be more embarrassing fr her, all he thought was abt her

"asterisk" luvd his sense of humor😆

"You are my only friend sir.."tan ta da...mission friendship successful maan sir😉 ...ab apni gadi thoda aage badhaiye...or again u'll go to vicky fr an advise😆

highlight of d chapter was how comfortable they both r wid each other n yes how cud i forget geet's bike ride ...it was a pleasant surprise

Love n Lust ...four letter word start wid L...holds different meaning fr everyone ...i can undrstnd d pov of both maan n geet... bt i wud appreciate maan's meaning "Lust" is a part of "Love"..It can surely be despicable without love but with love,it is as sacred as love.."...true....

"I think there is no difference in making love and having s** when basic phenomena is same.."i dnt y bt somewhere i felt dat its not our geet who is talking bt someone else to whom i dnt know ...coz jaha tak i know her she is d kind of a gal who wont relate her husband's luv wid pure sex n nothing else...is it her insecurities which r making her to say these kind of things...{Exactly diva..these are the thoughts of a girl who think not any man would be ever able to accept her as wife or lover because of her scarred face..Somewhere It is true for the society we live in..not every male think like maan here..}may be wrong n its jst her opinion abt dis emotion called lust

"Well..Bike riding is generally considered as a "boy thing"as bike's engine make them feel the strength of "horse power" between their legs.." 🤣...my gosh dat was so unexpected frm geet...n nvr thought dat she wud evr make him blush 🤣 m imagining maanu d blushing queen's beet root red face n geet's mischievousness muffling laughter😆

"Love is the "Hawan kund" for "Lust" geet.."...fantastic line ...when there is love then lust is jst one of d ways of expressing ur love

"Not every "male" thinks like you.."... Line said it all... her faith, love towards dis man

"Accelerator in bike could use to both speed up and slow down it"....dats d biggest problem...i still remember dat fateful day when i was learning it...

ps bindas 😉 chapter, throws more light on d characters n their insight... luvd it👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Temporary99

fantastic update...!

Do u study in literature???{not at all,otherwise my english wouldn't have been this much "raw" and "simple"..I would have written some sophisticated dialogues between maaneet...I wish i could..}

Cause no ordinary person can write this way girl...!{Thanks but i am an ordinary person who has a degree in science..😊}

Love,

Zahran.

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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