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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ! Loved it
Maan making Geet weak 😳
Loved Maneet moments 👍🏼
Omg ! where's Geet ?? 😕
oh btw geometry of flower was 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the update...

update please
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks to all😃😃


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Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 12 years ago
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(Credit fr this lovely banner goes to Piya😃)


@billy_rity : Itni jaldi nahiii😳

@divya22 : Whoa! you hav actually done a post-mortem of all the updts till nw!, partly you are correct😉 n don't wry koi prank nahi hai😳

@Remya : Your questions will be answered in future updts😳

@shruthiR : He gave her roses as it matched her cheeks😉



Okay I will clarify that nw there are NO PRANKS frm either sides, so read the updt peacefully😆

Thanks once again fr all of your lovely long comments😳


Part-8

"Geet!!!!!!!" his voice echoed in the Haveli but there was no answer in return. Maan again called her still there was no reply'."Where has she gone???"

He was tensed. There was no one in the Haveli. He began searching for her everywhere. The gardens, rooms, kitchens, balcony & even washrooms but she was nowhere to be found'He again called out her name but to no avail. He even checked under the tables & beds as she had a fantasy to hide under them but still he did not find her. He panicked

"Where are you Geet...?"

He had to find her at any cost...



Just then Maan's phone rang. It was Annie.

"Bhai! Where are you? Geet has still not come, lagta hai mujhe hi hotel ka inauguration karna padhega! Maine toh pehle hi kaha tha Geet can do nothing!"

Maan was pissed off hearing her, "Stop it Anwesha! Geet is reaching there in a while!"

He cut the call. Annie was startled by his behavior.

"Where is Geet gone??Where shall I find her now!!!"

Maan was both worried & angry. He tried many times calling on her phone but she was not picking up. He was about to go & check in the neighborhood but he stopped abruptly.

"One second!" he thought for a moment, "Incase I find Geet there, then God save her from me!!!!!"



He again marched up the staircase of the Haveli. He was heading towards the study room which was situated in a very secluded corner , as though detached from the Haveli. The door of the room was slightly ajar. Maan pushed it open to find Geet sleeping while sitting on the chair with her head tilted backward & there was a magazine on top of her face...!.

"Yahan hai yeh ladki!! And I am finding her since when & she is not even bothered!" Maan was cross.

"Geet, wake up!!" ordered he in a stern voice while swiftly taking the magazine from over her face & placing it on the desk.

She did not respond, very deep in sleep.

That irked him more "Geet!!!!!!!!!!" he raised his voice & pat the next second she sprang from the chair with her eyes wide open, startling Maan with her suddenness

"N-N-Nahii!!!!! I-I will be late for my exams!!! Jaldi kar Geet nahi toh paper complete nahi hoga!"

Maan was baffled hearing that."Exams???! What exams ??What is she talking about??"

"Aree kahan ja rahi ho! Wait!!" Maan called as he saw her nimble out of the room

"Idiot alarm clock!!! Doesn't rings only!!Exams...late..nahi!!!" on went her blabbers

Maan was almost running behind her, "Geet wait!!!! Come in your senses!!!Have you forgotten, we have a party to attend!!!" he tried to reason out while catching pace with her as she strode down the stairs across the hall.

His words fell on deaf ears as she was too petrified to even acknowledge that she was dreaming! "A-Ab mein kya karu...I-I will defo be late..Exams...late...n-no..s-should I eat my breakfast or should I drink milk? Chaddo! L-Let me brush first!"

She headed straight to the washroom. Maan hurriedly followed trying to make sense with her. He saw her applying paste to her toothbrush'

"What!!!Now will she brush her teeth also & that too at 6pm!!!!???"

Geet just about to start brushing her teeth when Maan surged forward & snatched the brush from her hand. Geet snatched it back from him, which shocked him all the more

"When did she grow guts???"

He again snatched it, "Geet!!! Stop dreaming!!! You have no exam !! We are getting late for party!!"

"Give the brush to me!!!! Aapko sharam nahi aati exam ke time par party ki baat karte hue??" she tried to snatch it again from him.

Now Maan was clearly fed up with this nautanki. After a mini tussle, he easily overpowered her & pinned her tightly to the wall.

"Enough!!!Come out of your exam land, else I have various ways to deal with you!!!!"

His rugged breath & stolid voice were finally successful in making her senses return. She was startled to discover herself almost crashed between him & the wall. She was on the edge of getting lost in his eyes when she started laughing out loud. That shocked Maan to the roots. He released her a little.

"Why are laughing????!!!"

Geet tried her best to control her laugh but she failed. Maan's eyes fell on the mirror behind her & he was aghast to see his nose & cheeks stained with red paste...!!!.

"What the hell is all this!!!!"

He again bent closer to her. That stopped Geet's laugh as she was now completely drowned in his glaring & intoxicating eyes'.

"T-T-T-This r-red toothpaste is Close up...paas jitna, behetar utna..." her dazed voice sounded like a moan towards the end'& she gazed at him while he was still baffled at her reply..!

"Geet!! You have ruined my good-looking face!!!" he accused her.

"Hwww!!! I told you to play WWE with me for the toothbrush???Aur waise bhi,what crime would have happened if I had brushed my teeth??? Aaapko nahi pata dentist teeth ko two times brush karne ki advice dete hain????"

"Geet!!! Don't you think tum kuch jyada hi bol rahi ho mere samne??"

He was angry, Right! But Geet could still feel the huskiness lingering in his voice. Also his utter proximity was already driving her crazy' She resolved to escape from his hold'

"Maan!! Now your entire face is slowly turning red!" she lied. Shocked, he again looked at the mirror & she took this opportunity to run away' .

"I am not going to leave you for this!!!"

He ran behind her.

"Maan!! Shall I give you Clean & Clear face wash???" Geet giggled still running, making sure Maan is at a safe distance!

"Stop!"

As there was no one in the Haveli, they ran around everywhere with him trying to catch her. Maan was really getting irritated with this cat & mouse game but he wouldn't leave her for sure!!. When Geet sensed that Maan would soon over-power her, she swiftly entered her room & quickly locked the door behind her. Maan had to stop when he saw the door close right when he was about to enter! Both could hear each other breathing heavily from either side of the door...


"Maan!!...there is H2O (water) available freely in all taps of this Haveli, you can wash your face with that! Till then I get ready for the party!"

He heard her giggle, "Dekho tum--"

There was no use of arguing. He went to the washroom & cleared the paste. Water was trickling down his face & also some the hair which was coming on his forehead also became wet'Thank God! Geet wasn't there to witness this, else she would have fainted seeing his irresistible looks!


Maan felt cool & refreshed. He then found the entire incident very funny.

"I didn't even dream I would one day behave so idiotic! Dad ko pata chal gaya toh what would he say!!" he smiled to himself, "Pata nahi Geet ke chakkar mein, what else will happen with me!"

"Are you ready?"

Maan knocked on Geet's door

"Eeeksss" she shrieked.

Maan found the door unlocked. No sooner did he enter the room'

"Kya hua Ge---"

His vocals halted & his jaw almost dropped as he saw Geet dressed in a very beautiful pink sari looking ravishing'Her usually braided hair was left open mesmerizing him'Maan stood there awestruck not giving any ear to her cribbing..

"Pimpleee!!!! Where the heck did it come frommm!!! Maan, I know you must have noticed it, after all you had caged me in the washroom!! Why didn't you tell me?????"

There was a pause. Geet realized what she had just said. She quickly covered the pimple with her hand, she didn't want Maan to see it'

"Huh...! You..a...said something?"

Coming back in his senses, he saw her hand partly on her left cheek & partly below her chin. He walked towards her, smirking.

"Hmm...serves you right!!! Toothache , hai na?? You should really brush twice!!"

Geet was shocked hearing that, "Nahi!! Yeh toh--"

"Kya kar rahi hai Geet!! Maan shouldn't see this damn pimple!!! No No Never!!!!"

Maan had already come close. He held her hand & slowly slid it down. He stared at her. She was indeed very beautiful. Geet felt really shy. She glanced sideways.

"Should I take dentist ka appointment?" he whispered.

"Yeh aap kya keh rahe ho? I have no tooth prob..!! Woh toh pimple--" she pursed her lips.

"Where?" asked Maan surprised.

She sheepishly pointed to her jaw. After straining his eyes for half a second, he saw her minute pimple..

"Oh God Geet!! Yeh toh dikh bhi nahi raha hai unless you use a magnifying glass!!!!"

"Chaddo!!! You won't understand!!!"

"But Geet--"

"Shssshhh! Sit quietly before I fix it!!!"

She shoved him away & went in front of the mirror. Maan raised his brows, extremely irritated as she fidgeted with her cosmetics. After a while, he heard her satisfied exclamation.

"Finally done!!!!"

"What nonsense!! Jaise pehle tha, abhi bhi waisa hi hai!" he mumbled under his breath. He then saw her sitting calmly.

"You are done right? We will leave then!" he got up & was ready to depart when he heard her voice.

"No!!!! A lot is remaining still!!! Eye-liner, lipstick & accessories!!"

He looked at her in disbelief.

"Bilkul Nahi!!!! Chalo abhi!!"

"Maan pleaseee!!! I can't go aavayi!! After all I am doing the inauguration, you only said to Papa, remember??"

How Maan wished he had not uttered a word in front of Mohinder that night!

"Then why are you sitting idle?? Jaldi karo!!"

Geet looked away from him, "W-Woh...my hands are paining after dealing with that pimple, so...my hands would shake if I put eyeliner now...so I am resting.."

No one had dared to test his patience to such an extent before.

"Fine!!! Then I will put kaajal to your eyes!"

Geet got up with a start looking wide eyed at him while he grabbed the eyeliner & advanced towards her, smirking. Her heart beats rose, she was scared...




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Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting
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yippie! Me first!!!!!
wow amazing update... Geet is a crazy girl.. Poor maan... Maaneet's close up add🤣... Aww poor geet ki face pe pimple aagayi 🤣... Waiting to see how will maan apply eyeliner in geet's eyes... Loved every bit of it...
Edited by ManeetGurtiMG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg loved it a lot yar😆😆😆MAAN and chasing GEET 😲😆😆kya bana diya hai geet ne maan ko😆,toothbrush fight wowww loved it😳😳.MAAN knows how 2 apply eyeliner😲REALLY😲😆😆
awesome update yar,eagerly waiting for next update😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6,7 are awesome.
so maan was talking about inaguration of hotel😆
geet checking maan's phone😉
part 8
omg its so funny.🤣
geet dreaming about her exams😆
telling the close up ad to maan,asking him to clean it with H2O😆
waiting to know will maan apply eyeliner 😉 or will be lost in geet's eyes.😳
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan was so tensed and here geet was sleeping peacefully..
Wat an exam fear she has..blabbering abt it even after being awake...
Poor maan got into a mess..close up..paas jitna behtar utna..but geet didn't gave him enough tym to enact her words..
Geet in saree and maan drooling..
Hayee..maan going to apply eyeliner on her beautiful eyes..
Cnt wait for the nxt..
Edited by Khusluvsmaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahaha...Maan was searching her maniacally in the whole house and there she was sleeping with a magazine on her face😃
how come nobody thought about her while leaving the house???
And the exams part was hilarious...usne uthkar brush karna chaha aur soch rahi thi ki late hojayega😆???...kabhi na kabhi yeh sab ke saath hua hoga atleast ek baar...
And that tooth paste struggle and the pimple part also left me laughing loud🤣...
Ab kya hoga??? maan eyeliner lagaane nikla patah chala eye ki jagah poora muh pe lagaya hain eyeliner...🤣...
Update soon...Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very cute maaneet moments..pls cont soon..

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