SwaRon SS-A New Lease Of Life -Discontinued-Pg 77 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Its Hillarious yaar:-D:-D wow:-) :-):-) Great:-):-) plz PM me when u update dear:-) and cont soon :-):-):-) jus loved it:-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Awesome concept neeti... 👏
Different from regular ones.. 😊
update soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
The concept was simply amazing..
Update part 01 ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Before I start with the update, I wanna let ull know ki even though Sharon is a working woman , she lives with her parents. This is because before the divorce, she and Rey owned a house which Rey got in the agreement. So, Sharon is living with her parents.

And this update has quite a lot to do with the mother-daugther relationship. I hope it isn't too boring 🤢



"Have some curd dear"

" No mom, I'm done . I'm having a massive headache, I guess I'll just go to bed " Sharon got up from the chair .

Her parents exchanged worried looks.

"Ok dear, aap so jao. Goodnight."


Later that night…

"Can I come in dear? I noticed the light on so I decided to drop in" Her mother had half-opened the door and was standing with a warm smile on her face.

"Ya come in mom. Actually my headache was better after taking some medicine so I decided to do a little bit of designing before going to bed"

Sharon's mom was very close to her. She had been through everything with her daughter. She had always supported her, whether it was her decision to steer away from the family business or it was to marry Rey, whom she had personally never liked.

Though Sharon's mom always felt guilty about not putting her foot down when it came to their marriage. If she would have prevented the marriage, her daughter would have been happier today.
Looking down, she noticed a tiny empty bottle of vodka lying next to her daughter's bed.

"Sharon, again? I told you not to drink that. You're getting headaches because of this! And your constant coughing is thanks to those numerous cigarettes u blow" She said angrily

"Stop it ok mom! I am not a baby anymore! So stop telling me what I have to do and what I don't" Sharon was furious now. Suddenly, all the rage went away and she hugged her mother and began sobbing loudly.

Sharon's mother didn't say anything. She just hugged her daughter tight , close to her chest, just as she used to when she was a small baby, unaware of the big,bad,world.

"Mom, u and dad still love me right?" Sharon asked with her face buried into her mother's blouse.

"Sweetheart , you mean the world to us. You're more important than anyone else in this world, don't forget that."

"Why do I have to suffer so much? "

"Everybody suffers,dear. That's how you grow. If you are going through a bad patch now it is only because God wants to teach you something."
Sharon hugged her mother tight. She placed her head on her mother's lap and closed her eyes. Her mother patted her gently. Within minutes, Sharon was asleep.

Mrs. Rai Prakash smiled at her beautiful daughter sleeping innocently on her lap. She kissed her forehead.

"My princess, I know you will find your prince charming soon." She said to her sleeping daughter.




"Art of living huh? Interesting…" Swayam sipped his hot coffee. "Ahh!" It almost burnt his tongue. He looked down at his coat which was now stained with a little bit of coffee.
"Shit shit shit!!" He quickly kept the coffee and newspaper on the table and rushed to find another suit.

Cursing himself for his stupidity, he ran his hand through his collection of coats angrily. Gosh, what's wrong with me, he thought to himself.
After wearing another coat, he sat down to drink his "cold" coffee and read the newspaper.

: The Art of Living, Stamford Chapter, announces its Basic Course—18 hours over 15 weekends—beginning on August 21. The course objective is to help participants enhance creativity, reduce stress and increase focus and concentration with the use of breathing techniques, gentle yoga and group processes in a supportive class moderated by volunteer teachers. The basic course is a long-term commitment, offering participants access to weekly follow up meetings for breathing practices and planning service projects :

Swayam read this article out loud.

"Reduce stress..ha..I so need that right now. And I definitely need to increase concentration. It's a weekend class, seems interesting." He checked for the organisation's contact number.

He saved the number in his cell phone .

"Definitely worth a try" He said out loud as he wore his shoe ,getting ready to leave.



WILL UPDATE ON PAGE 16! DO LEAVE UR LIKES N COMMENTS! 😃
Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Amazing 1st part swthrt...just loved it ...Loved the way u r building the base for the main plot ...the mother -daughter duo...Sharon's mom and concern ...it was a very well written part ...i just loved their convo about love and life...so touching...simple yet deep facts of human life...loved these lines...

Sharon's mother didn't say anything. She just hugged her daughter tight , close to her chest, just as she used to when she was a small baby, unaware of the big,bad,world.

"My princess, I know you will find your prince charming soon." She said to her sleeping daughter.

I loved her hope for her princess ...hope for love...a new love in her life...

Coming to the 2nd part...I loved the business tycoon Swayam who is having everything but peace...u handles the part so maturely and justified their need for Art of living classes...hot coffee turning cold ...the art of loving class...


"Definitely worth a try" for him as he is going to meet sharon there...

AWESOME start dear ...lovely ...plz update soon ...



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Amazing Update Neeti
And sharon's convo with her mother was very heart-touching and beautifully written👏👏👏
Great Job!
Do update soon ^^
Edited by Mahirah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Ok so finally you updated the first part :) I was looking forward to how this story would turn out but I must tell you, you have penned the update really well. Traumatized Sharon is obvious and I want to know what would happen when she meets Swayam..And what Swayam does to her..His charm is surely gonna do wonders here :) The mother-daughter relationship was beautifully conveyed and it was good to see the affection between them even though Sharon was emotionally hurt..
P.S Swayam's hot coffee turned into a cold one?Lol.
Eagerly waiting to read about what will happen in the Art of Living classes. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Loved the update...
Sharon and her mother's talk were beautifull... 😊 waiting for swaron to meet
Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Amazing Neeti...loved it...thnx for d PM dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud start...
thanks for the pm and do continue to do so!!

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