Ariya ff:Dil se Dil tak (SHORT STORY PG 21) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Va kya Twist hai...

really nyc
plz update asap
thx 4 PM.


thanks dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
CHAPTER 10

arjun quickly thought in his mind that mr.pankaj is a big

lawyer.arjun immidiatly say actually hamara ek case hai

aur humein mr.pankaj se milna tha aur humein pata nahi tha unka

ghar kahan hai .to humein kisi ne bataya aap un ki beti hain.iss

liye hum aap ke peeche aarahe the.

priya:ohh...i'm sorry mene aap logon ko ghalat samjha aap aaiye

it's ok just sorry.they all sit in their car's and go to the way.

rawte ye ab kon si nayi kahani banayi hai tumne ask rathore

ye koi nayi kahani nahi hai rathore.us ne kaha mera naam priya

pankaj hai.aur mr.pankaj iss city ke (very big)lawyer hain.iss liye

hamare paas unse milne ka isse acha moqa nahi milega.

They arrive to mr.pankaj's house.priya(riya)call mr.pankaj saying

papa.he came out when he saw etf team he was surprised.he

take them to a side and stat talking to them.

mr.pankaj ye priya aap ki beti(daughter)hai ask arjun

g haan she is my daughter say mr.pankaj jhut(lie)

aap jhut bol rahe hain mr.pankaj aap sach bataiye that who

is she.mr.pankaj was shocked and fear he finally tell them the

truth how they get her and change her name.

now etf team was sured that she is not other then riya.

arjun tell them that we have to do everything from start samjhe

ya samjhaun. mr.pankaj aap riya i mean priya ko bulao aur

hamara intro karao taake hum usski memory

waapis laa sakein dost ban ke.

he call priya and introduse her and etf's team.mr.pankaj say riya

that aap ko crime case solve karne ka bohat shoq hai na iss liye

mene ek crime case solve karne waali team ko bulaya hai.

you can join them from today.priya (riya) was happy that

now she will complete her dream.

to be continue...

sorry guys for toOo sHoRt UpDaTe😭

do comment's...

Saba😃
Edited by saba.ali81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
wah saba dear twist pe twist that was amazing tum ne toh sab viewers ka dil khush kar diya❤️
really i became silly for a moment after reading your chapter 10🤪🤣
thanks for such a lovely story concept👏

Edited by aimen.naseer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
wow wow wow
i'm speachless after reading you interesting and lovely story
keep it up dear...it make's me feel fresh
do cont soon 😳
Edited by kajal1258 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awsome update
continue soon
it is short update plz give big update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Wowww I love the update ...
It is amazing ...
Thnx for the pm
N looking forward for the next update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


thankyou so much dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Really Nyc...😊
Finally Riya vapis team aa gyi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
awesome arjun ka dimag mast hai finally etf ko riya mil he gaye
thnks for pm

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