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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutikaa

omg i loved it <3
part 12-- my fav update till now 👏




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

awesome update
cont soon
thanks for the pm



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Thank you so much for your love guys...
Here is my next part...
Hope you all will like it...
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Part-12 Page-73


Kuch to Hain Tujhse Raabta

Part-13

"Hello…!!!*

There was silence from the receiver's end…

She again said…"Hello..!!!Who's there…?"

There was complete silence from both the sides as if their breaths were mingling with each other and there is no need of words to say.Sensing the silence a realization struck in Nupur's mind ,was she thinking is true…??

Is her heart giving signals are true…??

Her voice dried in her throat, she wanted a lot to say but, but couldn't figure out from where to start, slowly a whisper came from her mouth,"M-ay-ank..."

Still there was complete dead of silence from the other side, there was not any need of words to talk, and their breaths were doing this task.

As soon as Mayank heard her Voice, his heartbeat stopped beating.

Her voice was so deep, so soft, so fragile, and so innocent; from her voice he could able to figure out how much beautifull she can be, her voice has a kind of stableness, a kind of attraction that may be reserved only for him.

He bring his phone more closer to his ear, as he want to absorb her voice in him,

And he calmly and softly says "Nupur".

Hearing her name from his mouth was like a bless for her.His voice was so deep , calm , hoarse,seductive ,steamy, rough yet gentle may be only for her ……

She was unaware of the fact that her imaginations have taken the wild track and was cogniting the wild thoughts from his sexy voice.

The silence was prevailing between them, but this silence was speeking very loud could be heard only by them.

Gradually they called off in a hope they will again TALK…

Nupur hugged her phone as tightly as she could as his passionate filled voice was still residing in her ears and was still ringing in her heart and mind.This man certainly has a magic which affects her so much.

She logged off her account as she could see he also logged it off and drifted to sleep in order to meet him and have the dreams of him , atleast now she know his voice,a smile played on her lips and she gradually drifted to her dreamland.

Mayank's condition was no different from Nupur, his heart has started craving to meet her, he want to see her, hug her as there is no end, pour all the emotions of his heart in front of her, he want her, he want her comfort, no other girl in his life has effected him this much, than this girl.She has a charm in her which always attaracts him and makes him forget all the boundations, boundries, every possible thing.

What are these feelings , what is happening to him , why is he thinking of her , she is just a mere online friend then why she effects him so much , why is it happening??

All these question were unanserable to him but he know one day surely he'll be able to figure out what are these emotions engulfing in his heart and overpowering his heart , soul , mind everything, even his life.

That night he had one of the most peacefull sleeps in past so many years.May the effect of her or may be some other magic of her on him but whatever it may be he kinda likes it.

*We see a boy was enjoying with a girl, boy's head rest on girls lap and he was continuously staring her and the girl was moving fingers in his hair .The boy slowly lifted his one hand and crooked it behind girl's neck and bring it closer to his face, slowly slowly the scene got fade and could able to see that both their faces were too close. Before he could see furthur …There was an irritating sound coming from background disturbing him see the faces of the boy and the girl…

He lazily opened his eyes in irritation it was quite visible from his face, he shut his alarmed off and sat on his bed.He was just wondering the dream he saw when his mobile beeped making him to come out of his trance as someone as send messaged him, it's very rare because at this hour of time no one dares to call or messege him he grabbed his cell phone and look for the sender, as soon as he saw the name a cute smile played on his lips which gradually broadens.

The messege from Nupur wishing him good morning…

The first sunlight to touch your face is my wishper to GOD to take care pf you.and to make Ur day a PLEASANT.GOOD MORNING…..😊

He was so much please by her this act that instead of replying her messege he called her without thinking if she is busy or it is too early to call or not, he just want to start his day with her mesmerizing voice.

Nupur was busy arranging her belongings and oher things when her cell rang.She picked up the call without seeing who's on the other side.

*Hello…!!!*

There was complete stilness from the other side, Nupur was so enfrossed that she didn't notice who could be there so she again said,"Hello…!!! Who's there...?"

After few seconds a hoarse voice came which took her name,"Nupur…!!!

Nupur stops what she was working, she forgets her work and holds her phone close to her ear as close as possible.She breathed air to gain some courage to say something but the intake of her breath was so aloud that it was quite audible to Mayank or you can say to his heart.His just one word from his mouth specially her name always gives a new kind of freshness as this Name is meant to be only called by him.

He furthur continued their silence talk," Good Morning beautiful…"

It was very hard for Nupur to even reply or to say anything, voice was not coming from her mouth, her throat was dry.There was complete silence prevail for a moment.

Mayank didn't get any reply from the other side, he again called her up to confirm if she is listening to him,"Nupur…Are you there…?"

Nupur heart wants to shout at the fullest and eager to say Mayank I was so waiting for you… Even her mind has already given the instructions to her body to respond.

But she was totally dumb at that moment.The magical voice of Mayank has taken her ability to speak specially in front of him.Gosh…!!!

After a moment Nupur finally gained some strength and courage and said,"Good Morning, Mayank…"

She said in sweetest manner so that could able to hide her anxiety, her curiosity from him, as he could easily judge her through her voice.

She is drooling over his voice what will happen when he will be infront of her…

Stopping her imagination she tried to concentate on talking which she knows is the most dificult task for her.

Mayank somhow had gussed that Nupur is in little bit shock due his sudden call and precisely he just love to give her shocks and suprises like this, hearing her melodious voice, he felt so content as if his day starts from her voice and ends there only.

He wanted to talk more but since she was in complete shocked so now it was him who has to take the conversation forward, he just wanted to share every single feeling with her, every emotion with her, it felt so good after pouring your feelings either good or bad to someone who really understands you and to whom you understands perfectly.

Forwading their conversation he spoke,"You know I had to confess something to you…."

Stopping her heartbeat for a second she continued."Tell…I am there to listen…"

"Nupur….You had a melodious voice…"with that a sweet smile played on his lips.

Nupur was completely dumbstruck after hearing her confession, blood raised on her cheeks and unknown to her she statred blushing, but the upcoming converstation made her in deep shock when Mayank ,"Nupur , You look more beautifull , when you blush…"

How on earth he get to know that she was blushing, but what's the matter may be she likes his comlipents or rather say she loved when he compliments her.

She could utter only a single word from her mouth that to in stammering,"T—Thank---Thank you...M—A—Mayank..."

Where in other side Mayank was so loving this and in order to make her cheeks for red in color he replied," You are always welcome sweetheart…"With that he cut the call, unknown to the fact that the other side Nupur's heart was jumping and beating so fast as if it will soon come out of her body.

"Sweetheart..."

He called me sweetheart…..There was no boundations of happiness, she was so happy and was blushing badly when he said her sweetheart…

Her mind internally said to her that she has gone crazy, but ignoring her mind she just litened to her heart.

She wanted this morning to be quickly converted into night so that again she could talk to him, listen to his breathtaking voice.

You see...this time ;even time is not supporting her, it's moving really very very slowly,she wonders either the clock hanging on her room has the low battery due to which it is moving very slowly or it's just that she is very curious.

[Well it's known to everyone that, what the correct option out of two is.]

Nupur tried to complete her work as quickly as she can do and hurridly greeting Gunjan she rushed to her house, she was very very eager to talk to him.

She threw herself on the bed and logged her account anixiously waiting for him, because he has not yet logged on his account…!!!

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Here Mayank tries his level best to complete his all the work before evening and drove towards hm as fast so that he could give ample of time to her.He was also equal egaer to talk to her.

After reaching home he orderd his food on his room itself …opening his laptop and logged in , a cute smile played on his lips when he saw Nupur was already online and before he could send her messege he received a messege from her

*Where are you….??Why are you late…!!!

Does...meeting was long…can' you tell them, you have an urgent work….

Come on Mayank... how could you be so indiscipline…

Very bad…..*

This was a really shock for Mayank, no one in his life has regarded him as indisciple and here she is bluntly saying him that he is…Damm…!!!This girl…

But he likes that and was actually want her to scold him more , it gives him a sense of feeling that she is somewhere belongs to him though as friend but to HIM…

That's more than enough for him…

*I am Sorry…Mam….Next time I will put a reminder so that I won't be late from next time…you see I have so much of work…So sometimes I forget about times…*

This was limit for Nupur…He can't even remember that he has to talk to her, for that also he needs to put a reminder...

Idiot, stupid…she muttered under her breath…

*How... could you say that…!!!

Can't you remember it…And here you say I am special for you…and here again you say you forgot….

I am sorry to say Mr.Mayank you are not alowed to be late and this type of behaviour won't be tolerated from the next time got…*

Mayank….she is getting tough day by day…

Mayank immediately called up Nupur...

And before she could say hello... he blurted out,"Hy!! Nupur what is this... yaar…I was only 4 min late and here you even ready to give me punishment…you are so sadu…"

Nupur's heart was silently beating when he called her but soon anger flushed on her face, how could he say her sadu… how... on earth….argh..!!!!

"Mayank…Firstly you are late 4 mins and 6 sec and secondly... IA m not behaving sadu…It's just you should be punctual…"

"Nupur it was first time…"

"Everything happens for the first time Mayank…"

"Nupur……."Mayank made a baby face…

Nupur could easily imagine how much cute he must be looking in those pouted facial expression; gosh...She couldn't control her smile and laughed loudly.

Her laughing sound was echoing eveywhere in her room and was also transmitting to Mayank's Phone…which had made Mayank dumbstruck, and motionless.

He was lost in her laughing voice...

Gosh…!!! Her voice is so melodious and became more angelic when she laughs…!!!

I just wonder her cheeks would have been turned pink or not would have turned Scarlett in colour….

"Nupur…"

Controlling her laugh he saya,"Hmmm…"

Still giggling…

"You really look good gorgeous when you laugh…"

She suddenly stopped laughing and a shy smile played on her lips.

"How do you know that…?"

A small smile appeared on his lips when he replied,"I told you I know you more than yourself…"

But still the same question was ringing on her mind,"but Mayank you are not here then…?"

Still smile didn't leave his face and he replied to her,"Still I could feel it Nupur…!"

A shy smile emerge on her lips and her heart was dancing listening those words from his mouth though she was not able to convey them in words but still she know somewhere he knew that what she is feelings .

After a brief pause of silence Mayank broke the ice,"Nupur…"



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Posted: 12 years ago
phew...
That was huge one...
Hope you will like it...


Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
shaffyyy jani
u r awesome yaar
u beautifully written Mayurs condition when they talked for the first time
it seems as if they got the most precious thing in their life.
the way they were craving to hear the voice of each other was totally fantastic...
i loved Nupr's authoritative attitude for mayank
loved each n every bit of this update

u r becoming wonderful writer day by day
May ALLAH bless u
keep updating



Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

nice update ,,,,,,,,,,,,,



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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh loved it Shafyyy!👏Mayank and Nupur's emotions are so beautifully described!😳update sooon!😃
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Originally posted by: Faria.

shaffyyy jani
u r awesome yaar
u beautifully written Mayurs condition when they talked for the first time
it seems as if they got the most precious thing in their life.
the way they were craving to hear the voice of each other was totally fantastic...
i loved Nupr's authoritative attitude for mayank
loved each n every bit of this update

u r becoming wonderful writer day by day
May ALLAH bless u
keep updating






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