Okay so actually i found this story about 2 weeks back and have been obsessed with it ever since.
WHY did it take me SO long to find this amazing piece of fiction i'll never know.
What do i love about it? Well pretty much everything.
To star off your narrative style is absolutely addictive. I absolutely loved all the internal monologues that A & K have with themselves.
Arnav and his devil+angel,Khuhsi's conscience - , i could totally picture that. And it is the fun element to this story. As an author you definitely made a distinct impression on me and as writer it's always important to have your own 'voice' and you nailed it!
It kept me coming back for more!
Plot development - Honestly it's been perfectly paced.
You began with A and K who were at odds with each other and developed it into a beautiful love story. The development of trust and honesty, two very important things, was very well showcased while you developed your plot.
Another thing that sets apart this story, is how you describe A & K's relationship as being a mutual learning process. You had this concrete idea and have stuck with it from it beginning, never losing sight that this is 'Master Class'. (Fab title by the way)
Your characterization of A and K is very...how do i put it... real. That is to say it's very easy to relate to your characters. Their emotions, their insecurities, their love - is all very relatable and entirely swoon worthy.
Speaking of swoon worthy - OMG I AM SO IN LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE ROMANCE IT MAKES ME BLUSH AND SIGH AND AZCXBVSDHKLdsjjdbfd
*ahem*
I mean you write romance really well.
And i'm more or less in love with this story.
Thank you for sharing this with me!
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