Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part... Plz dnt seperate riya nd arjun,,, i dnt want asr- riya...
Go arjun go nd get Su's custody... Riya s doing too much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye ye ye kya hai...😲😲


eyelock ASR aur Riya ke beech mein...aur su enjoy this...this is so unexpected... baap re ASR agar ab tum ye sab kar sakate ho ...to college mein kya kya kiya hoga...jiji jara aham aham ...bata do na...


ASR aur riya ...yaar bed tod diya ...tum dono sach mein pagal ho... chote bache ki tarah...i wish ki ye scen mein dekh pati...koi fayda nahi...usase pehle mein behos ho jati...ye love triangle ke itane sare angle dekh ke...


Asr ab to tum ne had kar di...riya ko direct kiss karne ki koshish aur wo hi pure ETF ke samane...mana padega...aur itane hot hot mein bhi chotu aur shree apni comic timing nahi chhodate...😆


wo lipstic ke marks nahi arjun to lage huve jakhm hai...bechara kya halat huvi hai arjun ki aur saath saath rathore ki bhi


jiji itna hot sa update dene ke baad itna heartouching precap u again kept me on fire...😲

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Sach sach batana jiji ye itane naughty naughty and hot hot and including comedy ideas milate kaise hai tumhe😎


mujhe ETF ko bolake sach mein tumhare store pe raid marani padegi...🤣
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm
Fiza28 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

ye ye ye kya hai...😲😲



eyelock ASR aur Riya ke beech mein...aur su enjoy this...this is so unexpected... baap re ASR agar ab tum ye sab kar sakate ho ...to college mein kya kya kiya hoga...jiji jara aham aham ...bata do na...


ASR aur riya ...yaar bed tod diya ...tum dono sach mein pagal ho... chote bache ki tarah...i wish ki ye scen mein dekh pati...koi fayda nahi...usase pehle mein behos ho jati...ye love triangle ke itane sare angle dekh ke...


Asr ab to tum ne had kar di...riya ko direct kiss karne ki koshish aur wo hi pure ETF ke samane...mana padega...aur itane hot hot mein bhi chotu aur shree apni comic timing nahi chhodate...😆


wo lipstic ke marks nahi arjun to lage huve jakhm hai...bechara kya halat huvi hai arjun ki aur saath saath rathore ki bhi


jiji itna hot sa update dene ke baad itna heartouching precap u again kept me on fire...😲

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Sach sach batana jiji ye itane naughty naughty and hot hot and including comedy ideas milate kaise hai tumhe😎


mujhe ETF ko bolake sach mein tumhare store pe raid marani padegi...🤣

KAVERI I ALWAYS LOVE READING YOUR COMMENTS
OMG I CANT STOP
HAHA U R TOO FUNNY HONESTLY I WAS REALLY
REALLY YOU SAY CHOTU SHREE COMDY UR 1 LINES OMG R JUST AS GOOD
ok so yup asr tho asr hai ladies man 😉
tho main college full on masti 😳
haan arjun and your jiju were tho
as for my ideas haha idk where i get them
sachi n for raiding my store i can say
haha and well asr is basically
falling for his lady love all over again hehe
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and the chem between riya n asr its like
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haye haye haye GULABO😆
Very nice part.. N lovely precap
Jus love the way u write
Plz update soon dear ,
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the late comment dear,
loved everything...
ASR and Riya are so funny and adorable
N i absolutely adore a jealous Arjun
N finally Arjun is so angry that he's asking the custody of Su... but i have a feeling he's doing that cause he's angry and hurt...
Please continue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update fiza...finally asr-riya are making arjun jealous...loved the bedroom scene where asr is hiding n arjun opens the closet...😆
shree-chotu's nasty comments do the "zakham pe namak chirakne ka kaam"🤣
n that bed breaking scene...i can very well imagine arjun's face at that moment...😆
OMG the precap...can't wait...update soon dear...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is fabelous owsom outstanding
just loved it
plz update soon
and plzzzdo pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 15A

Few days had passed since the broken bed incidence, everyone were present at Etf office except Arjun.

Arjun entered the office and walked towards Riya. Dekho Riya 2 weeks hogaye hai I want to see su. At start Riya ignored Arjun, he repeats himself until she firmly asked him to leave.

Arjun heard su crying, he picks su and hugs her tightly, he says "I missed you baby,

Papa ki golden girl kaise hai"

And then Riya stormed towards Arjun halted at a distance from him and said. "Mujhe laga galtiyon se sabak seekha jaata hai, unhe gale nahi lagaya jaata hai SIR"

She roughly snatches su from Arjun's arms and walked off.
The whole scene was carefully observed by the team, but before Arjun could reply to Riya Rathore introduced them to a new case.

The day was a mess, yet a good one for Riya; Rathore, su and Riya reached home. But Riya was preoccupied with house work preparing food for Rathore and su. Suddenly they heard the call bell, Rathore opened the door to watch ASR in front of him.

Rathore in his mind thought, Tum darwaze se bhi aa sakte ho? ASR was accompanied into the house. ASR politely asked Rathore if he could take Riya on a date tonight. That's when Riya called out for her brother, "Bhai, koi aaya hai kya? Kahi ASR toh nahi she said out loud."

She didn't think twice, turned the gas off and ran to the lounge room, ASR saw her and went to her and they embraced each other like never before.

ASR tum she said as they parted, he just smiled at her sheepishly, so Rathore can I? Arnav asked once again, while Rathore just nodded at him. How can I snatch Riya's smile away thought Rathore to himself.

ASR: Babes, get ready we should be get going for the date.

Riya was confused as she wasn't aware of it until now. ASR said haan just get ready, Riya nodded and glanced at Rathore he reassured her that he would take care of su while nodding his head positively.

30mintues later:

Riya walked down the stairs looking absolutely stunning in a beautiful sari

'it's pattern was so unique that she looked just like a princess thought ASR'. By that time su had fallen asleep, and Riya left instructions for Rathore not to stay up late waiting for her and his food was ready on the dining table. Rathore smiled at her and the duo left for the date.

Rathore's routine alarm rang at 4:30 am, he snoozed it for half an hour. It was 5 am and his alarm went off once again Rathore slightly opened his eyelids and saw the clock he jumped up sitting straight on his bed. Shit I'm late for my jogging he cursed himself. Rathore checks on su who's sleeping in her crib placed next to Rathore, hmmm Riya didn't take su with her to sleep he wondered. Rathore checked the whole house but there was no sign of Riya, he tried her cell which was turned off as well.

Rathore got worried, she's not home what should I do he thought to himself, he tried ASR's cell but that was of no use either. Rathore's curiousity was killing him he had to team up with Arjun and hurriely reache ASR's house.

Rawte suno riya abhi thak nahi aaye hai ready ho ill pick up you says rathore

What do you mean ab thak nahi aaye huh ? how could you allow this rathore

Dehko rawte jo bol na hai baad main bol jaldi hum riya ka pata karna says rathore

Arjun and Rathore busted in quitely into ASR's house they searched every corner of his house but didn't find either of them.

I swear Rathore agar ASR kuch aisa kya riya ke saath I wont leave him says arjun

Then Rathore noticed a sliding door by the pool side which wasn't checked and slow romantic song played in the background (Jaadu hai nasha hai), Rathore was sure they were in there.

Rawte, called out Rathore softly. They walked into the door to find ASR and Riya sleeping on the recliner peacefully.

Riya's hands were crisscrossed wraped into ASR's arms their bodies were so close to each other ; her lips were statue into a smile and a photoalbum upside down on her chest. Her head resting on ASR's shoulder ASR head also rested on riyas head .

The duo were left stunned by the scene, Arjun was fuming in anger( his eyes poped and he griped his fist ), How can she do this Rathore? How dare she … He questioned. Rathore was no less(he had his hand on his hips and evry annoyed " nahi Rawte I sure yeh sab ASR ka kara hai" .he stared down at the unfinished food on the table which was decorated with red rose petals it was evident that the Candles in the room had melted out all its wax.

They noticed some movement

ASR slightly moves, but he couldn't as his hands crossed by Riya's he slowly opened his eye lids and just stared at Riya. He removed few strands of hair that were on her eyes, hey beautiful he said pecking her on her forehead. Riya moaned and placed her head on his chest and cuddled closer to him hugging him unknowingly.


Arjun and Rathore were still staring at ASR with their hands folded; something inside arjun snaped " Wah Kya pyaar hai" blurted an angry Arjun as he clapped his hands . ASR jumped up waking Riya(she got up but his chain was caught in her hair he tried get it out and the closeness was getting arjun more upset ), Bhai aap asked Riya. Riya guiltily stared at him as he walked off from there without uttering a word to her. But then walked in again as he heard Arjun "Tumhe sharam nahi aati Riya, aise koi ger mard ke saath Chii… disgusting itne cheap harkat hai yeh "

Dehko mind your toung hum galti se yeh hua we dozed off that's it says ASR

Arjun who is ingoring ASR contues tp speak

"You are a mother god-damn it, you didn't think of you daughther " he said making a face and left from there.

Rathore didn't interrupt a hurt Arjun, he instead clenched his teeth taking a deep breath said, "Abh chale Riya" firmly.

Riya nodded as a silent tear rolled down the corner of her eyes, ASR assured her that everything would be alright and he also apologized to her hugging her tightly and whiping her tears

This was all being watched by arjun and rathore from outside the door .

There was an awkward silence in the SUV, Riya didn't dare to utter a word, Arjun was still fuming he asked Rathore to drop him in the middle of the road. Rathore didn't argue and left him alone to compose himself.

Riya was deeply hurt, she quickly composed herself and apologized to Rathore for her behaviour.

Bhai im really sorry sach I don't when we dozed off sach main galti hoge says riya

Rathore said, "Riya dekho mai tumhe apni behan dil se manta hu isliye ye keh raha hu, please dear tum Arjun ko jealous karne ke liye ASR se itna intimate ho rahi ho na?" he questioned her curiously.
Riya was left stunned, she nodded negatively, "Bhai I'm just trying to move on" she said with streams of tears running down her eyes.
Rathore: But after all Arjun is su's father, I know he's at fault but you could forgive him right?

" I don't think so bhai, firstly he lied then he called su a galti?" Riya said as she sobbed hard. Rathore caressed her head assuring he won't say another word about this incidence. He confusedly smiled at the rear view mirror as he saw Arjun walking slowly on the lonely road.

Arjun was thinking why is this bothering me , kyun , why is Riya's closeness to ASR affecting me ? Su is my daughter, but that doesn't mean I should be responsible for Riya's antics. Why did I blast at Rathore when he called me up at 5? Arjun was just confused; he kept on kicking alternative stone throughout his journey.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ch 15 B

ETF office that morning

Chotu and Shree thinking of the possibilites of what could have happened at ASR's house.

Chotu: Pata nahi yaar I can't guess kahi koi oh la la oh la la nahi hua kal ?

Shree: nahi chotu ri aise nahi hai uff Chotu mujhe toh lagta hai hot-cop aur sexy business man ke beech koi na koi ladai definitely hue hogi..

Chotu: Sach?


Shree: haan yaar lekin humne toh miss kardiya na(shree said as he made a sad face)

Rathore walked in saying Itna shauk hai sexy business man ke saath rehne ka toh baat chalau uske office mai?

Shree lowered his eyes, but a smile still crept on his lips, while Chotu tried hard to hold his laugh.

Riya walked in tired, Shree handed su to her. Riya had no words on how careless she had been lately towards su. "Thanks Shree" was all she uttered in guilt and walked with su in her arm caressing her head.

Arjun walked and sat down on the table drinking his cutting chai not saying a word

Or even looking at Riya

Then a corrior boy walks in the office

The boy: Ms.Riya Mukerjee please sign

Yes its me thank you said riya

She placed su down and read it, she shockingly it was as if the floor underneath her had been pulled away …

What the she yelled

, hearing that Rathore walked out of his cabin to witness the drama.

She throw the papers on arjun's Face Legal Custody papers? she blurted out loud

By then ASR had walked into the office to apologize everyone, but the scene he saw left him dumbstruck for a minute after what he heard .

Arjun: Yes Riya, I want su to myself, look you were into coma and still you aren't fit. So I thought of taking su with me but legally.

Riya: What do you mean I'm not fit? If I can get back to work I can take care of my baby samjha and How dare you tum aisa kasie kar sak the ho ?


Arjun: tumhare dates ke samay su ki yaad nahi aati na tumhe or waise bhi I do dare agar you dare to spend the eniter night till 5am locked up in a paarai mard ki arms then I do dare

Yells arjun

Riya looked away

Yaar ri asr ki bahoon main I knew it said chotu

Yaar who sab chor arjun sir ka gussa dehk says shree

ASR snapped out, he stormed over to Arjun and stood in front of Riya. Tumhe jo bhi bolna hai mujhse bol, tum su ke baap ho ?

Haan hoon yeh meri beti hai tum se kya said arjun

ASR angrily pulling Arjun's collar how dare you. tum ho who kamina jo mere Riya ko hurt kare, I bet you took advantage of her I wont spare you Damn it says ASR.

Arjun shoved his hand off, Riya tumhare majnu ko kaho humare conversation ke beech na aye samhje ya samjao. Says arjun

Agar himat hai tho Abe man to man baat karna ladki se kyu baat kar raha ho? Asked ASR.

Man tho main hoon proof Su hai tuhj se baat kar ki koi zarat nahi says arjun

I wont leave you ..you Dog says ASR

Yaar yeh dhamidar ka scenne ke jaisa kuta kamina khhon pee jaoga says shree

While chotu laughed

Dog main nahi tum ho a love sick puppy jo har waqt Riya ki peech peech

ghoom the ho and Riya tho jaane do uska kya

boloon kal ki baad tho really kaafi close ho tum

says arjun

They continued arguing, but ASR couldn't take any more insults

What the Riya ki naam nahi lo yells ASR

he punched Arjun in his face not a word about Riya got that not one word says ASR .

" Riya mai ye karna nahi chahta tha lekin mere pe koi haat uthae aur mai chup rahu ye ho nahi sakta." He completed his sentence and punched ASR back.

Riya gasped and had a hand on her mouth

The fight got violent Rathore, Shree and Chotu held both of them respectively

RAWTE bas bhi kar yells rathore while holding him

Aur ASR tum kay kare ho says rathore

Arjun kicked ASR in the stomach

While ASR hit arjuns nose and kicked his leg

Arjun went for asr's jaw

but finallythe fight was still going on with words this time.

Tum acp you trapped and used riya I will ruin you like you ruined her life yells ASR

Don't you dare ineterfer in this it doesn't concern a pathic @$$ like you

Riya couldn't hear it anymore she screamed her lungs out STOP IT,

BAS KARO BOTH OF YOU

falling down on her knees with streams of tears running down her eyes and her body language drawn in guilt.

Rathore let go of rawte and was going to go to riya when

ASR RAN to her and held her

RI tum he wiped her tears and huged her this made arjun even more mad

Riya moved away from him and went and grabed su from chotu

HELL OR HIGH WATER ARJUN SURYKANT RAWTE YOU WONT

GET MY DAUGHTER TERE LIYE THO YEH EK GALATI HAI NA

Riya calm down don't worry main hoon na sab theek hoga hum india ki best lawyer se milge he wont get su I wont let him promise

Oh Riya tere yeh romeo kuch nahi kar payga su tho meri pass hi hoge samhje ya samjaao says arjun

PRECAP: a tall fair handsome man walks in the ETF office with hiaviators along with RIYA and ASR

He walks over to arjun

Hello im VIREN VADHERA(ehmmbh) Riya's lawyer

Hello main hoon kunal Chopra(parichey ) arjun ka lawyer

Yeh hai mere client aur aap li court hearing papers 5 days ke baad 1st hearing hai says viren

Duringthe haring your honor my client has every right to keep the

baby jo baap apni beti ko ek galati soch tha hai aur dehke se meri client ke saath ristha jora aur saath he is the one not stable to take care of her he has a anger problem

yeh jhooy bol ra hai your honor for past 10 months he was the one who cared for her not like riya jo sirf aur sirf apni boyfriend ko time dethi hai

and Rathore arjun face off how dare you RAWTE WHO USKI MAA HAI

main bhi baap hoon aur tum muhje nahi rako sak the koi bhi nahi

.

Your honor yeh larki theek nahi her influence can be bad for su

SHE WAS WITH ASR FO 5 YEARS , THEN MY CLIENT ARJUN WHERE SHE CONCIVCED SU AND THEN RANA'S who she claimed raped her AND NOW AGAIN ASR and fewd day back she was caught sleeping with him SAID ARJUN'S LAWYER KUNAL CHOPRA

Yeh jhoot hai yells ASR

Order in the court

RIYA WAS SHELLED SHOCKED HEARING THOSES WORD EVERYONE WAS IN THE ROOM

RIYA RAN OUT OF THERE

OUTSIDE COURT

RIYA SLAPED ARJUN HOW DARE YOU RANA KA IS MAIN KYUN WHY DID YOU BRING THIS IN THE MIDDLE chi how could you you ruined by reputation my respect I HATE YOU yells riya

Riya maine nahi

Rathore slaps arjun and hugs riya

ASR slaps him you will regret this or my name isn't

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA

Arjun grabs kunals collar who told you to say this huh who damn it

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