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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god,ye kya ho gaya!!!!!! must be smethng wit related to jagat,o god!!!!! uday is soo angryyy,jaldi se sab thk ho jayyee!!!!!!!!! plzz update soon,tension mein bp high ho raha ha!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG u almost gave me a heart attack wid this promo
Y is uday angry at manyata
Probably it's something related to jagat or maybe he doing out about unnati-ritwik(stupid guess)
Plz update soon and don't make manveer fight for long
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice promo. eager to read ur chapter.
update fast.
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Update soon the promo is killing me
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i know i said i will update today but i thought to make the part more longer so will update it 2moz as i have no lectures on tuesday
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WARNING THIS PART IS GOING TO BE BORING

uday: if its nothing then y r u stammering and y r ur eyes closed'

manyata: coz ur having a weird effect on me'. Uday smirked at her answer and manyata shot her eyes open as she realised wt she said

uday: so wt type of effect princess' manyata looked at him embarrassingly

manyata: nothing erm I think someone is calling me' before uday could get her she opened the door and ran out of the room

competition day

jagat entered devgarh mansion and took blessing of all the elders after that he went to all the youngster and hugged them' uday didn't want to create a scene so he hugged jagat but his jaws clentched when he saw jagat hugging manyata and his hands around her waist he turned his face the other way to calm himself down

ds: so r all of u ready

j: yes ds

DS: good shall we all head towards the garden' all agreed and made their way toward the garden the elders sat down on the chair while the youngster were standing in their group' the girls were in red tops and black tracksuits while the boys were wearing yellow tops and black tracksuits.

Ds: the tasks have been written in these chits she said pointing towards the chit that were put in the bowl' there are many types of task but there will be only 5 tasks and the teams that wins most of the task will be the winners'. And as vijay and jay decided the loosing team will have to do wt the winning team tells them so lets start. k now the coin will be tossed and who ever wins the toss gets to start the competiton'girls do u choose heads or tail

j: ds I think u should let the boys teams chose first otherwise if we decide then they will be like they wanted to chose that right vijay bhai.

Vijay: whatever

Ds: so boys team wt do u choose heads or tail.. the boys team were deciding wt to choose

Uday: dadisaab we choose head..

DS: k so boys choose head and the girls will have to go with tail' brij do u want to toss the coin' brij nodded and tossed the coin he looked at the girls team and then the boys team and that continued for few seconds

Biri: k the boys have won the toss' the boys were happy that they won the toss but vijay was acting like he ad won the competition

Vijay: see girls we have won the toss

Manyata: vjay bhai don't get so happy its only a toss the u won and ur acting like u have won the whole competition strange that u boys r always over confident she said indirectly to uday who understood.

Uday: vijay banna u see u should never express ur happiness to the other team as they will always say we r over confident he said with a smirk while manyata rolled her eyes.

DS: k so lets start the competition. Giriraj y don't u take the first chit out giriraj nodded and took the first chit out

Giriraj: k so the task is to cook he said looking at the boys face as usual he was not able to find out his sons expression ..but jagat looked at bit nervous and vijay just looked like he had seen a ghost.

Unnati: wt happened guys got scared.

Manyata: oh come on unnati they r boys obviously they wont be scared after all they r brave and over confident so they will win.

J: what happened vijay bhai it seems like u have seen a ghost. Vijay came out of the shock and then looked at giri

Vijay: giri uncle y did u have to choose that chit.

Giri: sorry beta

Manyata: vijay bhai few days back u were saying that u men can do anything so I guess u can do cooking as well

Uday: of course we can and we will prove it princess

Ds: great so since there is three of u.. each one of u have to cook different thing we will see how long it takes u and wt u r making' and if its good enough to eat.

Komal:so shall we go to the kitchen' the boys nodded and all followed them

vasundra: so have u all decided wt to cook

Jagat: I guess I will cook biryani

Uday: great erm ill cook palak paneer

Vijay: omg u guys have already decided erm wt can I do guys help me.

Jagat: uday since ur making palak paneer and im making briyani vijay bahi could make chapatti

Uday: not a bad idea jagat good one he said smiling at him' and manyata noticed that uday gave a real smile to jagat and not a fake one

Vijay: chapatti guys I don't even know how to make that

Uday: vijay banna I guess all u ave to do is make the dough and just roll it and cook it on a pan that's it.

Vijay: k if u say so.

DS: k so ur time starts now. All of them left the kitchen and only the boys were there' it had been 1 hour and 30 mins and everyone was waiting in the hall for them. The elders were sitting down on the couch while the girls were standing away from them

Meanwhile this was the kitchen scene

Uday: vijay bhai can u pass me the salt plz

Vijay: uday banna plz can u take it ur self as im still making the dough' uday turned towards vijay and saw him struggling with the dough since he added too much water sometimes and so much flour the other time uday who was so lost laughing at vijay was about to burn his hands by touching the hot pan but luckily jagat stopped him

Jagat: uday be careful he said moving his hands away.

Uday: thanks jagat I would have burnt my hand if it touched this pan thanks man.

Jagat: no worries... by the way uday can I ask u something

Uday: yh sure

Jagat: do u dislike me' uday stopped his task and looked at jagat

Uday: why do u think that

Jagat: don't know but whenever im near manyata I always see this kind of look in ur eyes which slightly does contain jealousy and a dislike for me.

Uday: im sorry jagat but I guess im a bit protective about my close ones maybe that's y

Jagat: uday just know one things manyata is only a friend to me and like a sister nothing more than that'

Uday: jagat im sure u will feel protective over someone when u have a girl in ur life.

Jagat: I already do have a girl in my life he said with a smile while uday was surprised'

Uday: who?

Jagat: u will soon find out. And both smiled' they turned back to vijay and saw him still struggling

J: god how long will they take she said desperately looking at the kitchen direction manyata and unnati smiled to themselves

Manyata: u mean how long he will take.

J: jiji she said irritatingly but her cheeks had gone red

Manyata: j don't blush so much ur cheeks has gone red.

After another hour the boys came out we their food' vijay was covered in all flour, while uday and jagat came out a little messy.

DS: shetal ji please tell the other maid's to clean the kitchen so that the girls can start after. So lets see wt u have cooked' the other maid bought the food and put it on the table where everyone can taste it. So who would want to show us their food.

Vijay bhai opened his bowl to show the chapattis that he made the job to taste the food was for giri and brij but when the elders saw the chapatti they swallowed hard as some chapatti were half cooked and some were burnt they put the chapatti in their plate and moved towards udays dish which looked quite nice and put some palak paneer in their plate and then finally moved to jagat biryani which looked yummy and also added a little bit of that' both sat down brij dipped a piece of chapatti in the palak paneer and his eyes were wide open. Giriraj looked at him and decided to taste the chapatti it self and found so much salt in it' he threw that away and then tasted the palak paneer he nodded but knew tasted the biryani together but then added a little bit of yogurt and tasted it.

Vijay: so did u both like it.

Giriraj: beta vijay there was so much salt in that chapatti and it was not even cooked properly' uday the palak paneer really good and jagat ur biryani was really nice

Vijay: so that means we lost the round or we wonf

Ds: don't forget vijay the girls team still have to cook so u never know.

Vijay: how can I forget that guys u know I have never seen j or manyata cook these type of food not even unnati. Now I cant wait to see what their food turns out to be

Ds: k so the boys team took two hours and 30 mins to cook now girls its ur turn and remember you have to cook good food in less time to win this task.

The girls nodded and headed towards the kitchen they had already decided wt to make when the boys were cooking manyata had decided to make chicken curry with chapatti, j had decided to make Italian pasta and unnati decided to make two sweet dishes which were kheer and gajar ka halwa they had come out in 2 hours'

One by one giri and brij opened the lid of the bowl they first went with js Italian pasta, they then went with manyata chicken curry and chapatti and after they tasted the sweet dishes from unnati.. both the men were silent and everyone was waiting for their reply however the girls team was nervous

vasundra: y r u both quiet how was the food.

Brij: maa saab tbh I have never tasted food like this in my life not even the chief can cook delicious food over here' the girls were happy while the boys face dropped.

Giriraj: haan maa saab the food was really nice and I cant believe that the girls cooked for first time it feels like they know how to cook since ages.

Vijay: j I hope u guys didn't take a recipe book I mean first time cooking and that came out well.

DS. Vijay don't blame anyone like that. So the boys took two hours and 30 min and and the biryani and palak paneer was nice except the chapatti' but the girls took two hours and all of their food was tasting really nice so the winner of this task is girls team. The girs were happy and gave a group hug while the boys looked around the room.

Unnati: dekha vijay banna we won the first task.

Uday: chotti we still got 4 more rounds left so don't get happy.

Manyata: exactly unnati remember we r only confident not over confident.

DS: k now the second task since the girls won'( k guys im gone skip the competition a bit and start from the last round' below in the table you can see the teams that won the rounds '/'is if you won the task and 'x' is for if u lost it)

Tasks

Girls team

Boys team

Cooking

/

x

Basket ball

x

/

Staring contest

x

/

Solving puzzle

/

x

DS: k so four task have been done and girls team ave won two rounds and same with the boys team now the last task is left. vasundra do u want to take a chit out.

vasundra: jee maa saab vasundra took the chit out' it's a car race' the boys looked excited while the girls looked nervous'

Ds: since all of u know how to ride a car I don't think it's a problem but there is a change in this task' it is a car race but u have to do something.. the task is that the girls will go in one car and the boys will go in another' however you will have to go to the shiv temple and get the red cloth from there and there will be two red cloth for each team and who ever comes back first will win .

They all headed towards the main entrance uday went near manyata and whispered in her ears

Uday: princess if we win then I want to give u a separate punishiment as well

Manyata: and wt will that be yuvraj sa

Uday: a kiss he said smirking

Manyata: that's all u can think about right she said moving away from him

uday was seated in the drivers seat with jagat sitting on the passenger seat and vijay bhai sat at the back. While in the girls car j sat in the drivers seat manyata next to her and unnati behind.

Giri: r u guys ready. They all nodded the boys gave a thumbs down to the girls

The gates opened and both the car headed in full speed' j car was a little behind however they boys team reached first and they had climbed the stairs of the temple' they finally found the two red cloth and took their one and then three of them ran downstairs but when they were coming down they saw the girls running up' the girls had luckily found the red cloth and took it

Manyata: j let me drive' j nodded and both swapped seats' they were however stuck in traffic and cursing the luck

Unnati: hey guys look even the boys car is over' they turned to look where unnati was pointing and saw udays car just ahead of them.

Manyata: guys wear ur belt on

Unnati/ j: y

Manyata: coz im going to drive in full speed. The girls got ready and soon the traffic lights turned green'uday car was ahead and they thought that the girls will be way behind them but three of them got shocked when they saw that the girls had speeded up with them and waved bye to the boys'uday saw manyata in the drivers seat and was surprised. The girls had speeded up but uday was not less and speeded up his car which slightly over took manyata and they were even close to the mahal uday was about to enter first but manyata speeded up even more that her car reached to the palace first' the elders were sitting outside and got up from their seat when they saw manyata car come in first.

Vijay: ds this is cheating while going j was driving the car but while coming back manyata bhai was

Manyata: sorry vijay bhai but there was no rules made so we were allowed to change drivers

Ds: exactly so the girls team has won the competition,

J: see vijay bhai even girsl are capable of anything'so jiji wt punishment shall we give them.

Manyata: up to u guys I don't mind

J: k I got one someone from the boys team have to dress up as a girl and dance which will be performed tonight so u got enough time to decide on who will perform. The boys were shocked..

j was walking towards her room when someone pulled her into a corner she was about to scream but when she saw who it was she relaxed

j: jagat u scared me.

Jagat: I thought u were not scared of anyone and by the way miss y didn't u call me for two days

J: coz u didn't tell me u were going abroad and told me after u came back .

Jagat: shouldn't I be getting something else

J: and wt is that

Jagat: a kiss he whispered in her ears and saw her blushing

J: behave urself jagat don't forget nobody knows about us over here

Jagat: except manyata and unnati.

J: oh no now somebody else knows about us

Jagat: who he said confusingly' j was looking at that direction nervously and jagat turned around to find uday there. They both broke apart and looked every where except at uday' j ran away from there and even jagat was about to go when uday stopped him

Uday: so she is the one' jagat turned around and was surprised to find a smiling uday.

Jagat: uday plz don't tell anyone about it plz only manyata and unnati know and now u know as well.

Uday: but u should tell I don't think anyone will mind about urs and js relationship since everyone likes u

Jagat: but uday'

Uday: if u don't tell everyone soon then I am going to tell them think about it

Jagat: no no plz don't do that k I will but I need to convince j first and also need some time

Uday: k but do it soon otherwise I will do it and im sure nobody will be happy that u and j hid ur relationship. The both headed in their own direction

Uday entered manyata room and saw her laying on her bed reading a novel' manyata who was so lost reading the novel felt someone starting at her she moved the novel aside only to find uday laying next to her

Manyata uday wt r u doing here at this time

Uday: relax princess I felt like staying over tonight y got a problem

Manyata: y would I have a problem

Uday- anyway forget that manyata u shouldn't hide j and jagats relationship manyata was shocked and got up from the bed

Manyata: how do u know about them

Uday: I saw them both together when jagat was close to j but I told jagat to tell everyone soon otherwise I will tell them

Manyata: but uday if they r not ready then they should have some time

Uday: I know that but its better if the family knows about their relation and jagat said he will tell everyone soon plus its better if they tell the family sooner coz hiding stuff like this from family is not right'manyata turned around and was thinking about something but her thoughts disappeared when she felt uday lips on her neck' her heart beat started to run fast' he came in front of her and bent down to kiss her neck manyata moved away as she was getting goose bumps but uday was not ready to let her go' he got hold of her dupata and pulled her towards him her back was glued against his chest uday held her waist with one hand while with the other he went on with opening manyata dori and gave wet kisses on her back' he then slowly turned her around and sw her eyes was closed' he cupped her face and caressed her lips before sealing it with his while manyata hands were around his neck uday hands roamed around her back and kept pulling her closer as the kiss depend

Precap: uday was angry and holding manyata tightly by her arms while manyata was shocked to see this side of uday.

uday: manyata how can u do this type of thing

manyata: but uday listen to me she said in a shaking way.

uday:ENOUGH... i didnt expect this from you at all u actually disappointed me manyata he said pushing her back a little bit... leaving the room and a teary manyata behind him

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komal: manyata beta how did u get this bruise on ur arm... manyata who was lost in her thoughts looked towards komal and realised that she got the burise when uday was holding her arms so tightly digging his nails in her arm.

manyata: wo maa actually i hurt myself and completely forgot about the bruise... but in her mind she was saying wt a stupid lie im sure nobody will believe that

komal: beta go to ur room i am coming with the first aid kit... manyata nodded and she turned around to go to her room when she saw uday standing there looking at her sternly

k guys im really sorry for giving a late update so I posted this part for u I don't know but this part felt a little boring so I written it on the top that's it's a warning so take the risk if you want to read it I have written the next part already and will post it later on. dont forget to press the like button and do leave ur comments and sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

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Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
i loved it
it was not at all boring
super intersting it was
precap was scary
manveer on bed 😳😳
please update soon
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manyata turned around and was thinking about something but her thoughts disappeared when she felt uday lips on her neck' her heart beat started to run fast' he came in front of her and bent down to kiss her neck manyata moved away as she was getting goose bumps but uday was not ready to let her go' he got hold of her dupata and pulled her towards him her back was glued against his chest uday held her waist with one hand while with the other he went on with opening manyata dori and gave wet kisses on her back' he then slowly turned her around and sw her eyes was clothes' he cupped her face and caressed her lips before sealing it with his while manyata hands were around his neck uday hands roamed around her back and kept pulling her closer as the kiss depend

manyata eyes shot opened when she felt uday slightly taking of her ankarli from her shoulders

manyata: uday plz. She said hiding her face in his chest uday smiled and hugged her back while his chin rested on her head.

It was morning and manyata woke up when her phone was ringing

Unnati: manyata I need to meet u right now plz

Manyata: unni wt happened y do u sound so worried.

Unnati: manyata plz can u come and meet me plz

Manyata: k wil be there soon manyata got ready quickly and headed towards the jaighar mansion she saw vasundra, uday and giriraj sitting there. They saw her walk in and was surprised to see her so early she took giriraj and vasundra blessing

Manyata: erm maa where is unnati

vasundra: beta she is in her room and she doesn't want to meet anyone right now.

Manyata: she just called me 1 hour ago telling me to meet her'

Giriraj: theek hain beta if she has called u then you can go.

Manyata: giri uncle wt actually happened unnati sounded so worried

Giri: beta last night we told unnati that a proposal has come for her and we would like her to meet the guy ' but she denied and said she doesn't want to see anyone' we told her that they guy like her and it's a nice family but she was not ready to listen she even didn't let uday talk to her

Manyata: k uncle I will go and talk to her but I wont force her. Giri and vasundra nodded. And manyata headed towards unnati room' she knocked on the door but unnati didn't answer.

Manyata: unnati its me manyata' hearing manyata voice unnati opened the door and manyata came while unnati locked the door.

Unnati: manyata she said hugging her and started to cry. Telling her the same thing giri told her

Manyata: unnati plz calm down' unnati I know y u said no to meet the boy but nobody else knows that so don't u think u should tell rithvic about it.

Unnati: manyata I tried to call rithvic but I remembered he said he is going abroad for his business meeting and will back later on he must be at the airport and I also know he didn't take his phone with him' manyata plz do me a favour plz go and inform rithvic about this plz... I know if I leave the house then everyone might think I left in anger and hence will follow me' manyata hesitated for a moment

Manyata: k I will let him know' but plz look after ur self don't stress ur self out of this unnati plz

Unnati: manyata I have a feeling nobody will accept this relation

Manyata: shhh relax k ill go and tell rithvic about all this but plz relax and once I tell him ill inform u k give me rithivs address plz.. unnati nodded and manyata left her room she walked down the stairs

vasundra: manyata did unnati say anything to u

manyata: wo maa erm unnati said err she doesn't want to meet anyone for now and is not ready for marriage

vasundra: but if not marriage then at least she could get engaged they r really nice people. Manyata was looking nervously' everyone believed manyatas word except one' uday knew manyata was hiding something as she was not looking into anyone's eyes

manyata: erm maa I got to go now ill see u guys later

vasundra: k beta' before leaving manyata looked at uday while he was looking at her curiously she couldn't take that look of his and left ASAP

in the car manyata was thinking wt is going to happen to unnati now she was really worried for her friend' soon enough she reached to rithvic mansion and knocked on the door and one of the servants opened the door

servant: yes madam

manyata: is rithvic back from abroad

servant: yes madam he just came few minutes back plz come and sit in ill let him know u r here' sorry madam wts ur name

manyata: manyata' servant nodded and went to tell rithvic' after few minutes rithvic came down

rithvic: hey manyata wt a pleasant surprise he went to her and hugged her and both sat down

manyata: hey rithivc' erm the thing is I came here to tell u about unnati

rithvic: unnati? Wt happened to her is she alright he asked worriedly

manyata: rithvic I just met unnati now.. last night her family told her that a proposal came for her' but unnati denied but her family told her to meet the boy once,,, unnati is not even ready to talk to uday rithvic before matter gets worse u need to go and ask for unnati hand and also tell about how u and unnati love each other

rithvic: omg all this happened but manyata like I said I don't want to lose my love unnati or my friend uday

manyata: rithivc right now u need to think about urs and unnati relationship if u don't tell anyone then u may lose her forever tell everyone before its too late' remember rithvic I told u at the party that don't delay ' u already delayed but don't delay anymore now I had to even lie to uday that night when he nearly caught us speaking about this but today he was trying to read wts going in my mind'

rithvic: dw manyata 2dai ill call my parents from raighar and we will go 2moz and ask for unnati hand thanks for helping us manyata

manyata: anytime k I will leave now and make sure u get this done by 2moz take care

rithvic: thanks once again bye' manyata soon left the mansion and headed towards the car before sitting inside she decided to call unnati

manyata: hey unnati I just met rithvic now and he said he will call his parents from raighar and come and ask for ur hand 2moz and listen maa and giri uncle asked me wt u said so I told them how ur not ready for marriage and stuff but dw hopefully everything will be fine soon

unnati: thanks for being there for me manyata I love u so much

manyata: anytime unnati ur my friend and I love u to k talk to u later now relax a bit k see u later bye

unnati: bye' both cut the call

manyata sat in her car and drove away but she missed those angry pair of eyes that heard her conversation with rithivc and just heard her speaking to unnati on the phone' and it was none other than uday' uday was suspicious about manyata behaviour and felt she was hiding something so after she left he had decided to follow her' he was surprised to see her at rithvic house and he went near the window and heard their conversation and hid himself when manyata left' manyata had reached the mahal and headed straight to her room she went and opened the window to let some cool breeze come in she was thinking about unnati and rithvic when she felt someone turn her so harshly' she was surprised to see uday

manyata: uday wt happened y r u so angry and ur hurting me

uday: really manyata my hold on ur arms is hurting u he said holding her arms tighter digging his nail'

manyata: uday wts wrong with u

uday: nothing is wrong with me manyata I am perfectly fine after knowing that my best friend and my sister r in a relationship and on top of that my fianc knew about this but hid it from us' wow manyata u do such a great acting when u came to mahal u acted like u didn't know anything when dad told u the reason really nice and great u fooled me at the party when u and rithiv were talking about his and unnati relationship

manyata: uday I wanted to tell u but

uday: but u hid it from me I wonder wt else u r hiding from me '.manyata how can u do this type of thing

manyata: but uday listen to me she said in a shaking way.

uday:ENOUGH... i didnt expect this from you at all u actually disappointed me manyata he said pushing her back a little bit... leaving the room and a teary manyata behind him

manyata: uday I really wanted to tell u but was not able to coz I promised unnati plz forgive me

after uday had left manyata tried to call him but he kept rejecting her calls she tried many times but he kept on ignoring it. She then called the jaighar mansion and vasundra answered the phone

vasundra: hello

manyata: hello maa its me manyata

vasundra: wt happened beta r u alright

manyata: maa is uday there

vasundra: beta he said he had a urgent meeting so will be late y wt happened

manyata: maa can u call unnati I need to speak to her..

vasundra: k beta hold on hope she comes out of her room' unnati came rushing down when her mum said manyata sounded worried on the phone

unnati: hello manyata

manyata: unnati.. ud'uday' found out the truth he followed me when I went to meet rithivc after that he came here and she told him about the convo that occurred between her and uday' unnati he is not answering my call

unnati: this is all my fault if I didn't promise u then dada would have never said all that..manyata I coming there k' she cut the call and turned around to vasundra still there

vasundra: wt r u and manyata hiding

unnati: ma woh

vasundra: unnati I want to hear the truth

unnati: maa promise u wont tell anyone plz

vasundra: ur making me worried but fine I promise now tell me plz unnati told her everything and vasundra was shocked' omg unnati u and rithvic hid this from us and u also made manyata promise that' beta u know how possessive uday is about u he wont bare anyone hiding a single detail about u no matter who that person was

unnati: I know maa but for now I want to be with manyata coz of me dada misunderstood her.. that day unnati had spent whole day with manyata but not sign of uday even vasundra was worried about them'

Next day

Manyata was walking in the hall when

komal: manyata beta how did u get this bruise on ur arm... manyata who was lost in her thoughts looked towards komal and realised that she got the burise when uday was holding her arms so tightly digging his nails in her arm.

manyata: wo maa actually i hurt myself and completely forgot about the bruise... but in her mind she was saying wt a stupid lie im sure nobody will believe that

komal: beta go to ur room i am coming with the first aid kit... manyata nodded and she turned around to go to her room when she saw uday standing there looking at her sternly' komal had seen uday but along with uday vasundra and unnati had had also came

komal: uday beta,,, vasu plz come and sit...both of them sat down ]

unnati: aunty im just going to see manyata.

Komal: k beta but just wait a minute' after few minutes komal came back and gave unnati a cream

Unnati : wt is this cream for aunty

Komal: beta manyata has got some bruises in her hand plz can u apply it unnati nodded but she didn't miss the cold look from uday before leaving

Unnati entered manyata room and saw manyata in her own world unnati without saying anything went and sat next to manyata and started to apply the cream on the wound manyata moved a bit when she felt finger on her wound

Manyata: unnati

Unnati: hmm

Manyata: did he say something

Unnati: no he is ignoring me and giving me cold looks but I told maa about this manyata looked shocked

Manyata: wt did she say

Unnati: she was not happy with me hiding all this but she said she always liked rithvic but I made her promise not tell anyone until rithvic come with his parents.

Precap: ritvic proposal

K guys here is art 35 hope u like it will be waiting for ur comment which is compulsory lol and don't forget to press the like button sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

ps: if anyone needs pm the plz do mention it in ur comment or send me a pm and ill add u

those who r really not interesting in reading this ff plz can u let me know so that I can stop sending pm to u as it is wasting both of our times I don't want to mention anyone names

Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
i loved the combo
uday and manyata
j and jagat
ritwik and unnati
thanks for double update
i did not like this part
uday is pisssed off for no reason
he is over reacting
please solve the misunderstanding soon
thanks so much for pm
and update soon
with manveer
i love manyata and unnati bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
i toh loved it ... continue soon thnxx fr the pm .. :):

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