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Posted: 12 years ago
teaser

Maan was hugging geet back..though he was at fault for whole week..todays incidence was not planned..but maan don't want to let this situation of making her think..

Maan:geet..agar mujei patha nehi tho mujei bathao ..why ur heart was pacing fast..why u missed me..kyun tum mujei deknekeliye tadaprahi thi..kyun meri eh shabd keliye tharaz rahi thi..bolo geet..

Geet backed from him..

Yes..this was the questions she was asking to herself..the answers she don't know..

Maan:Bolo geet..jawab do..

Geet:wo..aap..phone..cant reach..jaanvi.. missed u..

She said splitting her words..she did not look into his face..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mansiahmed

i liked ur all stories especially geetanjali,this life is urs n aeverything but in this u have to stop geetfeeding baby noramally people feed there baby at the max 2yrs thts it.its asimple suggestion. n u,me aur mein ff mein u kept maan drinking lot of water ab tho geet respondin make her realise that men n women share physical reln hubby n wife make love plsss chapter is 96 yaar lomg time.kudoos to u nice writing

in u,me ..i think u did not read the note below..heavy meals waiting in 4-5 parts..it means..they r moving their relation ship.as husband wife...
tliy..im making her feed still..
ive seen some ladies feeding till next baby arrives,,
here i used it.bcoz,.there is 1 reason behind it..but only for 2 r 3 parts..then it will also be usual maneet story..or zyadha nehi kheechunga..r it will become awkward..i know it..
MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is all planned to make her realize her feelings
farzu3008 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow am excited to read the update. teaser se lagta hein k maan ne jaan buch ke phone nahi kiya geet ke reaction janne k liye. update soon dear waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di awesum teaser ab jaldi se updt do...
Ye maan toh geet se pyaar ka ezahaar karke rahega
CrazzyBusy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di teaser dedi hai tu aab update bhi de do plzzz
Can't wait to read it
love2_soma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n lovely teaser...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 33
Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃
thanks for ur patience...love u all ..
i want to thank each n every one who commented..
i am sry i couldnt thank each n every one alone..

Maan kissed geet's cheek tightly n said bye mrs.khurana…he sat on car leaving a shocking geet..

maan can still see geet standing rooted at her place with mouth wide opened n a hand on her cheek…

maan:I know u will not regret geet..so only I took this step..i think its long time,I've waited for u...now I will make u feel u love me…

geet still looked at the way maan went..she felt lonely..n expected him to come back..she wished so..

jaanvi was clapping her hands n saying

papa gave mummy kissy..

geet was brought back by jaanvi's words..she felt shy n her cheeks turned red..she touched her cheeks ..she felt like her cheeks are burning..still she can feel his lips on her soft skin..

geet:maan ne yesa kabhi nehi kiya..phir aaj kyun kiya..he always kissed me on my forehead only..today why I feel like I am burning becoz of his kiss..ye kesa ehsaas hai..her heart was doing sommersaults..n her stomach felt butterflies..her whole body was electrified thinking about that..

she turned to see her whole family starring at her with a smirk on their face…

geet:may be maan kissed me,so that the family don't doubt us…

geet felt little hurt thinking like that..it was for others sake..but she cant hide the red hue on her face while crossing her family..

adi came at night..

what he said made geet wild..

adi:maans work will be finished in 3 days..n return ticket also is after 3 days only

geet:then y he packed things for a week..

adi:I don't know….

Geet was puzzled..why maan lied to her…

Maan was in airport..he has landed now..he has not slept in plane…only he was thinking about geet..

He sat in the car,which the client has sent n reached the hotel..he refreshed n called to mansion..

Maan:sry geet..i have to take this step…I want u to realize ur love towards me..

Geet was eagerly waiting for the call,that he has reached the place…

She took the phone in a ring..

Maan:hello

Geet:hello maan,have u reached..

Maan,yes geet,ive reached…jaanvi se phone dona..

Geet gave to jaanvi…maan talked to her..geet expected maan will talk to her again after talking with baby..after jaanu,he talked to dadi pinky priya n adi..geet was fiddling the corner of her sari..she cant ask them that she want to talk to him…maan kept the phone the other side..knowing geet must be restlessly waiting for him to call her again..but he didn't..

Maan:sry love…I know I am doing wrong..but u have left no other way..

geet even at her sleep kept her mobile near her expecting him to call her.. The next day also maan called mansion..n he talked with geet less..n chatted with others for a long time..maan was smirking on the other side thinking what will be geet doing now…geet was cribbing to her babaji…

geet:dekha babaji…what maan is doing…he has time to talk to others ..but not for me…she took baby n went to their room..frustrated..

geets st:if he doesn't talk to me..so what..i can call him na..

she took the phone..

but what will I say why I called him..there must be any reason to talk..but I have none..she kept her cell n tried to sleep..sleep was away from her..she missed maans aroma in the room..

she started imagining maan everywhere..

maan sitting in study n asking

geet,pls give me that xyz ka a/cs file..

geet slapped her head..tu bhina jalli..now I will talk to him tomorrow..i got the idea…

the next day night,also maan called to mansion..n did same..all thought maneet will be talking in private also..so they did not know about maan is avoiding her..

geet went to room n called him

geet:maaan

maan:haan geet,kuch kaam tha..

geet cribbed to her babaji…see babaji,he is not even asking how r u..have u eat..what r u doing…but nothing..dusht danav..kuch kaam tha..she mimicked him..

maan could hear her..n he was controlling his laughter…again composing himself making a stern voice he asked

maan:geet,I am not having time to listen ur silence..tell me y u called me..

geet:haan..wo..mm..i..

maan:pls geet jaldi bolo..y r u talking in alphabets..

geet :I want to talk to u about ramnagar project..ive some doubts..

maan st:geet,y don't u say u miss me..im waiting to hear it from u..

geet started asking her doubts..

maan:oh..so mrs khurana,took the help of file to talk with me..hu..ok I'll also be official…

maan cleared her doubts..

maan:anything else..

geet :maan..wo..aap..kal..…

maan:oh geet..ive an important meeting..now I must leave..

maan cut the phone before she asks he will be in home next day…

the next day geet was waiting for him eagerly..her eyes were fixed in phone..

adi came n said,maan was held up there n is staying there itself regarding new project…n it's an island near by..n he will not be able to contact…

the next days were hell to her…jaanvi was asking papa..

when he will come..he did not talk to jaanvi also…maan missed his family so much..he was starring at the wall paper in lappy..his family photo..he touched geet..

maan:its all for u..to make u feel whats in ur heart..to make u happy..u deserve happiness..n ive vowed to give u all happiness..i want my geet ..for me..by all means…as a wife…

it was only two days for jaanvis birthday..geet even doubted will maan reach them on time..she did not arrange a big party..but she invited the close friends n relatives to be there in jaanvi's birthday..

she had an unknown fear..what something happened to maan also..

the next day,geet tried maans number from morning..all were worried seeing geet..she did not come out of her room also..

adi:geet what r u doing

geet:adi bhaiya..its a weekna..he must be here..but he didn't even talk to us..yesa kabi nehi hua ho,that he miss to talk to jaanvi also..

adi has already got the message maan will arrive..maan wants to surprise geet n jaanu..so he told all of them not to break the news to her….

Adi:geet,he will come..dont worry..

Geet thought:once he comes..i will not talk to him..is this the way to behave..if there is no tower so what..he can use netna..atleast an email..what is he upto…did he even realize how worried I will be for him…

At 7 pm..adi came from office..n said maan has arrived..but his voice showed his tension..

Geet:adi bhai..where is maan..n where r u going..

Adi:sry geet..maan told that he want to surprise u n baby..so only I did not inform u at morning..

Geet :its ok..now where is he..why he has not reached home..

Adi:wo..when he landed he got news of our pqr project on the outskirts of delhi met with severe problem..

Geet:that complex..which is constructed till 2nd floor…it's a 25 floor projectna..

Adi:yes geet..the ground floor has gone inside soil

Geet:what?we checked the report..

Adi:the soil report was false..n the people around is creating big fuzz..there is some more problem that maan only can solve..so he has went there straightly.. ..he called me with details of papers..so im leaving..

Geet:ok..take care..n call us..

Adi heared jaanvi crying..mujei papa chahiye..

Adi:jaanu..uncle will go n bring papa ..so don't cry..

Jaanu:sachi uncle..

Adi:muchi..i ll make maan talk to u..ok..

Jaanu:ok..

Adi:now give me ur smile..

She smiled..n adi went..

Nearly at 9pm maan called geet..

Geet:maan,first talk to jaanvi..

Maan:jaanu beta..how r u..

Jaanu was sobbing:papa..jaanu miss u..when will u come..kal jaanu ka birthday bhi hai..u will be there na..

Maan cursed now for his stupid plan..he made his baby crave for him..

Maan:jaanu dear..papa will be there before 12…n I ve brought ur favourite toys also..so wipe ur tears n go to sleep..now give to ur mama..

Geet:maan..what happened..is the problem sorted..

Maan:haan..ive asked to collapse the building..

Geet:it would be a loss maan..

Maan:not than our name…we can make again..its our fault ..we did not know that the soil report is fake…

Ok now bye..make jaanu sleep..

Geet:she will not sleep till she sees u..she cried whole noon n woke up at 6.30 only..so I think she wont sleep soon..try to come fast..

Maan :ok

Geet heared a big sound at back ground n maans phone was disconnected…

Geet was in shock..she tried to call maan n adi..both were not reachable…geets mind thought all negative …dadi who saw geets pale face asked her….geet hugged her n said her fear..

Dadi consoled her n said..think always positive..u must have heared explosion of building..bcoz of that the signal must have disturbed..

Dadi said Vicky to take jaanu with him…she was asking again n again..

Papa kab ayegi..uncle has also not come..he told he will come with papa…

Vicky:bohut jald..papa misses u too..he saidna he will come…now u sleep..

He made her relax on shoulder n patted her back n moved to n fro..

Jaanvi:chachu,mujei nini nehi aarahi hai..

Vicky:tho kya karein..princess..lets play ..

Jaanvi:yeeeh..lets play..

Vicky somehow diverted her mind to play..pinky n priya has already slept….

Dadi was too tired..but she was awake to be with geet..when geet saw dadi yawning..she told her to sleep…

Dadi said:no..let me have a coffee..

Present

Rahul:wo kaam meine kiya…

This shocked jaanvi,piya n abhidya..even arjun…

Vicky:we know..we found it later…but y u did we don't know that time..

Rahul:I came to india for an urgent work..i got msg from my watchman my sister is not no more..how much I may hate her for running away from house..being mother before marriage n cause of moms death..her death shook me.she is my only sibling..i cared for her...i thought she must be betrayed..i don't know the reason behind her death..i started to enquire n I got news of maan n her being close…if maan has married her the news must be in medias..but I saw only maan geet n baby..i thought maan betrayed my baby sister..i thought to take revenge for taking away my happiness of my family..my sister,her child n my mom…

So I made a plan to break him slowly..the first step was to smash his builded empire,which he was proud off…so I changed the soil report n brought loss to him..

I never thought my sister was married to him n jaanvi is her daughter..she was not betrayed,but was loved by him..my revenge closed my eyes…even after that too,I never missed a chance to bring loss to maan…then that day came…jaanvis 3rd birthday….i made a plan to take revenge by another way..taking away his happiness..his jaanvi..!!!!!!!

past

Geet saw the time it was 11.30..

Her heart was restless ..n her eyes was searching maan for a glimpse..

Babaji,unhei raksha karna..

She started to say all mantra's n stothras that she learnt..

Vicky saw jaanvi rubbing her eyes with palms..

Vicky:sleep princeess..

Jaanvi:no..i want papa..he told he will come..

Dadi who came down saw them..

Dadi:Vicky,give jaanvi to geet,she may make her sleep..

Vicky:yes…

Jaanu screamed in joy..

Papa….

She ran to maan..hugging his knees..

Maan took her in his arms n placed numerous kisses on her face..

Maan:papa is sry jaanu…she too kissed him...maan gave her a toy n a chocolate..she took it happily from him..

Jaanu:papa..ur eyes red..r u crying..

Maan was rubbing his eyes n the eyes which are already red looked like blood..

Maan:nothing beta..dust fell into my eyes..

Dadi:u must have went to dr..

Adi:hmm say it dadi..he didn't listen to me..only one thing he said..he missed home n jaanu..

Dadi:ok..maan go n wash ur eyes..let me check if I have any drops..

Maan moved to his room..

N saw the pale geet..

Geet sensed maan..she ran to him n hugged him..

Geet:kahaan thi aap..ek phone nehi karsakthi thi kya..sirf ek shabd sunne keliye mein kithni tharas gayi thi do u know how much worried we are..aap kya jaanthi ..how my heart was pacing..do u know how I missed u..

Maan was hugging geet back..though he was at fault for whole week..todays incidence was not planned..but maan don't want to let this situation of making her think..

Maan:geet..agar mujei patha nehi tho mujei bathao ..why ur heart was pacing fast..why u missed me..kyun tum mujei deknekeliye tadaprahi thi..kyun meri eh shabd keliye tharaz rahi thi..bolo geet..

Geet backed from him..

Yes..this was the questions she was asking to herself..the answers she don't know..

Maan:Bolo geet..jawab do..

Geet:wo..aap..phone..cant reach..jaanvi.. missed u..

She said splitting her words..she did not look into his face..

today power cut was less n no net to time pass..so,i have typed more than 25 pgs..i mean 6500 words nearly..so i ve splitted it into two more parts...the sooner u give me cmnts..i will post the next parts also 2day itself..meet u after 7 pgs...lol😉both cc in next parts...confrontation n consumation..ok..me relaxing now..

25.10.2012..1.35pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
bt short
lved it
jaanu is soo cute papa mommy kissy lolzzz
nd maan avoiding geet to make her realuse her feelings
day by day getting interesting
nd rahul tried to destroy maan
he is totally mad
finally maan us back
will geet confess her feelings
waiting for the next
update jaldi
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing
block buster
perfect.
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yaa THIS IS IT...HAT'S OF TO U


Edited by rubykatariya - 12 years ago

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