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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo pura update dedo na yaar main kab se apni pehli comment ko edit karne ke liye wait kar rahi hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst read it
its outstaning
plz updat soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
plz update soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
rocking...wow...awesome...aur konse adjectives use karun thanku tina...👍🏼

the wait was worth...

itna tadpane ke baad chalo kuch acha result mila yippieee...

rey and ansh's bond just commendable...like the way every fathers and son relations should be...even though rey doesn't know abt him being his son still fulfills a fathers duty...
OHH NOO kriya's memory lost...why why do dis happens to her only???

and ansh ko bone marrow suppression plzz kriya ke baby ko ko toh pareshaan matt kar tina...plzz plzz...

aur rey itna dur dur kriya se and poor girl doesn't know wats wrong wid him???confused...

ahem intimacy part was written beautifully...
just wish both rey and kriya get to know the truth asap...

so when is the next update...(u know i'm besharam so be fast)😉😈

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update but it was short
pls update soon and pm me
i loved reys and ansh bond
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o meri maa kab pura update dogi tum pleazzz yaar ab pura update kar bhi do na tadpana kyun
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CHAPTER 43 ok ppl!!u asked 4 1 n i am gvng u 1 free wid tat!!😃so enjoy this update.hope u like it n added pallavi's suggestn tat rey z gonna knw abt ansh!!n thr wud b another twist i dunn wanna disclose.so plx read n get 2 knw!!
my dear meow n poppy r u angry wid me?whr hav u been lost 4 so long??
missing u ppl!!!
CH 42
PRECAP:
rey n kriya's intimate moments.rey comes bck 2 reality n moves bck.
flashback ov kriya n rey's plight!!!
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rey ws lying on his bed n constantly turning the side lamp on n off.he ws thnkng ov all the events he n all his frnds went thru.his life,his love evrythng ws in a mess!!he cudnt figure out hw he z gonna solve evrythng n wud evrythng come bck 2 normal ever or nt??he ws blaming himself 4 evrythng.1st he became the rzn 4 kriya's plight wich forced her 2 marry karan n he died cx ov him n nw kriya z in a precarious state tat she doesnt evn remember her son.he got up 4m his bed,went 2 his exercise room n started 2 punch his punching bag.he started hitting it harder n harder till his hands began 2 hurt.then he broke evrythng tat came in front ov him.his hands began 2 bleed nw.
kriya on hearing the noise rushed 2 his rehersal hall.thr she saw the most painful sight in front ov her.rey constantly punching his punching bag n his blood dripping down 4m his hand onto the earth
k:eagle!!stop!!
rey stopped 4 a moment 2 see wot happened??n then continued.
r:go away kriya!!i said go away 4m here..
k:plx eagle listen...
she ws cut in between..
r:just get lost 4m here..
kriya cried n went away 4m thr!!
she ws upset the whole night n cudnt sleep.
KRIYA's POV
why z eagle like tat?did smthng happen 2 us?ok if he doesnt gives me a damn,y do i die 4 him?nw i wont b talkng 2 him.he shud go 2 blazes 4 all i care!!if he doesnt cares 4 karan's son,y do i care?i shud try myself 2 comfort tat kid wid the time i get cx he's my frnd's son.bt i am shocked y karan dint tell me abt his wife n son??i ws his best frnd!!
dnt knw wots happening in my lyf!!!bt i wont let it b as its gng!ll change it ttly!!
wid this pledge she turned the lights off n slowly sleep embrassed her n she ws lost in her rey land again!!(oops eagle land acc 2 kriya)😆
MORNING
ansh ws angry at rey so he dint come 2 the table 2 hav breakfast no matter hw much his nanny asked him 2!he ws waiting 4 his angel(kriya) 2 get up so they cud spend sme gala tym 2gether bt it ws almost mid noon n kriya ws still in bed.so ansh thot ov gng 2 her himself..
he went downstairs n reached kriya's room.she ws sleeping peacefully.he slowly climbed the bed n kissed her on her cheek.this made kriya concious n she opened her eyes.
k:hi my baby!hw r u?
a:em gud angel bt u r nt!u r hot!
k:oh baby!i thnk i ve got a fever
a:oh no!wot ll happen nw?
k:nthng dear!i ll take rest n i ll b ok
a:no u need medicine n some care 2
k:aww!!my dear u ll care 4 me?
a:ya!eagle z v bad.he doesnt care 4 any ov us.wen i ws sick u made me soup.nw i ll make it 4 u
k:no plx dear!u cant make it.u r a kid n u cn hurt urself.
a:bt i want 2
k:plx no
a:ok i ll ask nanny 4 help
k:tats my boy!
a:coming
n then he went off the bed 2 the kitchen.he went running 2 the kitchen.rey saw this n went aftr him
r:baby y r u gng 2 the kitchen n whr z ur angel??
ansh went on widout payinga heed 2 rey's wrds.rey ran aftr him n caught him in his arms..
r:baby!tell me wot happened??
a:leave me eagle!i dnt wanna talk 2 u
r:bt y?wot happened?
a:yday u dint play wid me n scolded me.nw em angry
r:sorry baby!em really sorry
a:no
r:ok ok i hold my ears please
a:ok bt promise u wont do it again
r:prms..nw tell me whr z angel?
a:she is in her bed.has a fever.
r:oh!n y u gng 2 kitchen?
a:to make her soup like she made 4 me wen i ws ill
r:ok lets go.i ll help u out
a:ok
n both father-son went 2 kitchen 2 make soup 4 his mum(just tryng 2 make it feel bit interestng)😳
rey made soup while ansh ws sitting in front ov him.wen it got ready,they both went 2wards kriya's room.thr they saw her lying.
r:hi angel!hw r u feeling nw?
n he tried 2 put his hand on her forehead 2 feel her temperature bt she shoved it off
k:em ok.y did u come here?
r:i made soup 4 u.ansh told me u r sick.someon sit n hav it
k:no thnks!i dnt need anythng.y did u bother?take it away
r:cmon kriya!dnt b stubborn
n he tried 2 make her sit wich she refused 2.she ws reluctant at him touching her even
r:cmon kriya dnt act like a child
k:i said u go away!i dnt need anythng 4m u
a:plx angel!plx..
k:ansh ok i ll bt plx ask him 2 go away
rey ws leaving the room n kriya tried 2 get up bt due 2 the weakness she cudnt n fell bck on the bed.this ws enuff 4 rey n he rushed 2wards her bed,supported her on his arms n made her sit n started 2 feed her soup despite her so much resistance.finally kriya had 2 giv up!aftr feeding her soup n medicines,rey made her lie bck on the bed n took her hands in his n put her bck 2 sleep.ansh ws sitting on the bed besides kriya.he ws mystified on the purity ov their love.thou he dint understand tat as he ws a kid bt he cud guess his actions.
a:wen u care so much,y do u hurt her?
r:baby!its life.u r a kid nw.u cant understand it yet.
then he went 2 clean kriya's room as she cudnt herself.wen he ws putting her clothes in her cupboard an old diary fell down on the floor.he picked it up n ws abt 2 put it bck wen he caught sight of his picture lying on the floor.he picked it up n put it bck in the diary n took it wid him 2 read.it ws the diary ov the time kriya has 4gotten so he thout he might get some hint hw 2 bring bck her memory!!
he went 2 his room wid the diary n started reading it wrd by wrd.he ws startled n more n more guilty aftr reading it.it showed kriya's feelings 4 him n hw he broke her trust,her confidence n brought bck all her old fears she developed aftr she lost him in chldhood.then he read their confrontation wen kriya came 2 knw tat her eagle z her teddy(rey),the one she loved 4m childhood n then his cheating upon her n abandonment.then kriran's marriage.nw it ws his turn 2 get surprized wen he read aftrwards.
kriya wrote
2day i felt a lil dizzy in the morning n fell unconcious on the floor.it wsnt normal bt i acted 2 hav taken it lightly sayng i dint hav breakfast so i got it.then aftr a few hrs wen i ws in class,i felt the urge 2 puke.i knw wot all this is leading 2wards n em afraid wot impact it ll hav on my lyf had my doubts come true??
i went 4 a checkup in the gynae deptt n all my nightmares became reality.the doctor said"mrs grover!congragulations u r 2 months pregnant"
these wrds ov the doctor fell like lightening on me.i just cudnt believe my ears.i had 2 go n say thnks 2 her.
i came bck home bt my mind wsnt still registering wot i heard.my last year ov medical studies,my marriage n this pregnncy!
generally it is the happiest moment ov any girl's life,2 become a mother 4 the 1st tym bt nt 4 me cx smbody spoilt it.hw em i gonna tell my husband abt tat i am pregnant wid SM1 ELSE's child??
OMG!!y am i alive till now??the person who gav me the wrld ov hapiness,accepted me even aftr knwng em nt pure,hw cn i giv him the shock ov his life??
i cant keep rey's child in me.i cant keep his anythng.i cant let anythng come between me n karan nw,let it b a baby!my baby!!my n rey's baby!!no!!i ll hav 2 abort this child even before karan gets 2 knw abt it!!
in order 2 give me happiness n space he never touched me n gav me time n i cant do this 2 him..rey i ll never ever 4give u 4 this.u dint even let me relish my 1st baby n u r responsible 4 his death cx u r the rzn ov its existance n my plight!!i am so silly i cant even wish smthng bad 4 u,tat much i love u!!!
nw rey ws litearally crying.he stooped so low.he ruined her life n then he read next
karan dint let me abort tat child.he accepted rey's child.he said she ll giv it his own name.he owned my child.bt i am feeling guilty.i cat even giv him his child!!hw em i gonna live wid it all my life knowing its rey's child?he ll b thr always in front ov me 2 haunt me!he ll carry all his father's traits.he can deceive any1.he ll break my trust n other's trust!!!OMG!!wot em i gonna do??
thou karan has ensured me he ll giv him a v gud training n he ll nt grow up 2 b like his father bt still i knw tat he ll b his blood aftrall..wot ll my life turn outta b wen rey ll come 2 knw ov his child??wot if he tries 2 get it bck??
em afraid my lyf's calling 4 another trouble bt i cant help it.i wish i were dead so i dint hav 2 face this all
y universe jee y hav u been so unkind 2 me?u were my best frnd since childhood.then y u let me suffer so bad?y u tested me so much??wot has rey's MU gotta do wid me?i dint push pinky.i never wanted his family or him 2 suffer.his mother hated me 4m the beginning cx i resembled in appearnce 2 my father whom she always hated!bt wots my fault in it?
she never wnted me 2 b her daughter-in-law cx ov her differences wid my father.she cudnt ever let rey stop loving me so she created hatred in their hearts against me!she wnted 2 c me dead bt 2 her or rather my bad luck,i survived cx u wnted me 2!bt she has made my life miserable as hell.his son ruined me ttly!!it ws better 2 b dead than alive like tat!!
rey started crying so bad!!vick came home 4m his duty n ws passing by rey's room wen he saw him crying.he came in.
v:bro!wots wrong?y u crying?
r:vick!u knw wot??ansh z my child!!he z ansh reyansh singhaniya..
n he hugged vicky..my son!i always thot him 2 b karan's son bt kriya ws never his.she ws always mine n her son z also my son,our son!!vicky i am responsible 4 the plight ov many ppl.i ruined kriya n ansh's life.cx ov me u lost neha n kriya lost karan n ansh cudnt ever knw his real father n lived like an orphan till nw.i am a jerk.i shud b executed.i hate myself
v:relax bro!wotever happened has happened n u cant change it.u cn only make ur future gud.give ansh all the love he deserves n dnt let kriya suffer.cx ov u she remains upset n abt me n neha,4get it bro!she ws never mine!!mayb thr z smthng god knws wot is gud 4 all ov us!!
r:vick!em really sorry brother!cx ov me u lost ur love.
v:no bro!she never loved me or she shudnt hav married a rich,old widower
r:cmon vick!both ov us knw tat she did it outta revenge 4m u n she ruined her life n repents it even nw
v:bt wots the use ov repenting??4get it bro!!move on!!
r:ya em tryng 2.i ll hav 2 mend my past.
he then went 2 the market n brought lots ov toys n chocolates 4 ansh.rey came bck home n called ansh
r:come downstairs baby.c wot i got 4 u
a:wow!!eagle!!i love u
r:ya me 2 bt i ll giv u all this only on 1 condition
a:wot?
r:call me dad
a:bt u r nt my dad eagle.he has gone 2 universejee
r:no son!he isnt ur dad.ur dad z alive n em ur dad
a:wot??really??
r:yes
a:r u lying?
r:no
a:then promise
r:promise
a:dad!!i love u.em v happy my dad z wid me bt y dint u tell me before??
r:cx i myself came 2 knw ov it nw!!bt prms me 1 thng
a:wot?
r:u wont tell anythng 2 ur angel
a:bt y?
r:she z sick na n she cant take it.she z a grl n grls r nt courageous enuff.we ll tell her at some gud tym.till then its our secret.ok??
a:ok dad n he pecked his cheek.
PRECAP:
ansh and rey taking care ov kriya.kriyaansh intimate again!!


CHAPTER 44
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Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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ha res will unres after update
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dear... plz... jaldi update kr do...
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awsome update...

Finally rey got to know everthing...

Dat's gud...
Edited by kitttu1309. - 12 years ago

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