Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
i want thank all of you for your lovely comments means alot enoy ch 14 and dont forget leave your priceless comments and feedback 😃

ch 14

oh my earring thanks pata hai these are my favorite says riya

yaar uski earring kaise giri ? says shree

yaar pata nahi maybe jab he went to kiss her tab says chotu

arjun glares at them to shut up.

So any progress about the case ri ?asks asr

Haan asr don't worry we wont spare that dog says riya

Yaar ri itna gussa ho re ho tum says chotu

Yes chotu I know anjali di she loved that scum ball jab koi

larki ek larke ko pyar kar the hai and he just hurts her keeps

her in the dark breaks her trust it just horrible( she looks at arjun)

iknow men are heart breakers but this is just too much

but this guy he crossed all the limits tried kill her and killed her baby and

then all he did to asr I wont spare him says riya

oh meri gulabo chill itna gussa im fine ab di bhi theek hai par tum

gulabo? Says chotu

haan yaar asr ki habit hai muhje gulabo bol ne jab bhi im get mad or

when I blush says riya

shree just laughs

a few hours later they get shyam and arrest him

riya thank you so much says asr

asr its not me its my team you should thank says riya

thanks every one im very greatful to you all says asr

your welcome mr .raizada this are duty says rathore

waise ri aaj what plans you have ? asks asr

kuch nahi just want spend time a home and relax that's all says riya

acha koi baat nahi we can go out another time bye says asr( he hugs her and leaves )

later that night Shree, chotu Arjun were over for their weekly guys night at Rathores watching the cricket match and playing poker .

Riya had made afew snacks foor the guys like pakora's samosa's and mixture

Along with some coffee here you guys are enjoy ill be in my room says riya

Wow yaar kitna yummy hai yeh what atreat says chotu

Haan yaar shree is a good cook says shree

riya was in her room bariding her hair in front of the mirror when she saw a shadow at her window and then some one jumped in

she screamed

aaahhh

suprizingly su was laughing at her mommy

ASR ran over to her covered her mouth and winked at he removed his hand

Shhh ri main hoon he said there is a eye lock between them

Tum yahaan kyun aaye and that too chor ki jaisa huh? Says riya

Tum surprise kar na tha just like old days kyun waise I missed you says smiles asr

You haven't changed at all says riya

Riya? Says rathore

Why did she yell said shree

Chalo dehk the hai says chotu

Riya' su 'jalid says arjun and runs up

suddenly the guys run up the stairs

omg the guys shit asr hide jaldi

riya can hear the she opens her closet and asr hides there

the team knock

Riya kya hua says rathore

Ri says shree

She opens the door

Kya hua ri asks chotu

Kuch nahi woh spider I got scared says riya im fine really you guys

go back and enjoy your match im sorry says riya

Suddenly cell phone begans to ring riyas is shocked

Yeh kis ka phone hai says arjun

Mera phone aur kis ka yeh kaise question hai ill pick up later says riya

Arjun notices her windows open and then suddenly realizes her closet door is alil ajar

Really tumahre he goes to her cell that's on the bed yeh tho dead hai.

I have 2 cells what is it to you huh says riya ab jao

Why the hurry riya huh says arjun

Cause of your match not for me uff says riya

Rathore yeh jhoot bol re hai other then us koi aur bhi hai yahan says arjun

What rubbish says riya

he then goes to the closet and opens it

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and finds asrstairing at him

the guys are amused

tho yeh hai who spider and your other cell phone huh says arjun

ASR jumps down

Actually I just came to meet riya like old times says asr

yaar yeh tho ek dum dabaang hai riya ki room main aye who bhi ek etf

officer ke ghar main window se throw says shree

haan yaar style tho hai iss liye riya flat ho gaye uski liye says chotu

rathore looks at them

yeh koi tareekha hai yahaan aane chrono ki thara at 10 pm

tell your boyfriend to go says arjun

dehko job hi bol na hai kis ko bhi tell me like I just said

main riya se mil ne aaya just like I use to college main says asr

pyaar kya tho dar na kya kyun? Tho jo bhi baat hai muhje se kaho says asr

haan exactly and just a minute waise he didn't come

like a chor its called romeo style says riya

like in romeo juilet kitna romantic hai yeh haye every girl loves this. Says riya

yaar yeh tho bilkul srk ki jaise kara in kuch kuch hota hai says shree

flimy style always works yaar says chotu

and no he wont go he came to meet me and its just 10 it's not that late

aur waise bhi yeh asr ki aadat hai college main he always would do this says riya

and bhai can he staya while please asks riya

rawte jaane do its ok haan ri he can says rathore

dehko riya just because rathore but he can finish

just then su tries to get his attention making noises arjun goes and holds her n asr notices it..

and he asked riya in front of all kya su ko acp arjun pasand hai? Haan Asr clowns tho har bache ko pasand hote hai na ' everybody was chuckling .. arjun just left in a huff

while holding su

every goes down stairs riya goes in kitchen to make him his coffee and feeds

him a pakora she made in front of the guys ( they can see the kitchen where they are sitting)

they go up stairs riya is showing old poem that he wrote of there

math teacher she tease him by reading out loud

riya do muhje says asr

nahi says riya and runs out of the room with it asr is chasing her around she runs down stairs laughing

riya do says asr riya runs behide chotu then shree around the entire table yelling and laughing

su is getting scared seeing all the running

arjun is getting even more annoyed

riya asr run up stairs again

what hell rathore su was so scared riya itne immature kaise

ho ska the hai says arjun

rawte she was just enjoying her self calm down says rathore

riya is running all around the room screaming whenshe gets on bed and asr jumps to get the paper and falls on the bed and on top of riya making the bed break

they all hear a crashing noise and tump

riya and asr just are laughing

yeh kya tha says rathore

they all rush upstairs

and are shocked to see ASR on top of riya and the bed is broken

Rathore is even fuming this time arjun is holding su and his face is red

He looks like he is about kill asr

Arjun moves to pull asr off her when rathore stops him with by holding his arm

Asr and riya are just smiling and stairing at each other

They notice asr is leaning in to kiss her when

What hell is going on here yells Rathore

Suddenly asr jumps off her and the bed and riya to gets down but when she does she slips in asr's arms

Yeh kya drama hai itne raat ko huh? Says arjun

Yaar AC on hai phir kyun itna hot kyun hai yahaan says chotu

yaar kyunki dehko in dono ko itna sizzling chemistery hai yeh says shree

aur yeh aag is effecting arjun sir he must along with bahiya acp says chotu

Riya Rawte theek bol ra hai asr ko abhi jaana chaiye and haan door se says rathore

Ji bhai says riya

Yeah see you later riyu and sorry about the bed says asr

Koi baat nahi asr masti main hota hai says riya

Before asr leaves

Yaar riya tum asia bhi kya masti kare thi ki bed hi break hua teases shree

Arjun glares at shree

And ASR tere shirt pe and chin pe kya hai says chotu

Huh he looks at his shirt

They notice asr ki shirt pe and near his chin are riya ka lipstick marks (when he fell on her it got marked there by mistake)

Rathore, Arjun,ASR, Riya stair at him

Arjun and rathore , look at asr with looks that would kill

Arjun balls his fist while rathore folds his arms in anger

They look at riya

Riya eye's pop just and blushes and looks aways

He hugs her and says Bye gulabo

And goes down satirs and leaves riya goes near her window and see's him and waves

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Precap: riya hasn't come home from her date its 4am

Team goes to asr house n finds them like this

with a album on riyas lap n music on

She has her hand on his chest

And the next day

What the hell how dare you ARJUN SuryakantRAwte she throws the papers at him and slaps him hard and is crying

They all are shocked

Kya hua riya RAWte kya kara asks rathore

everyone the whole team and asr are worried

Hell or high water you will not get Su's custody samhje crys riya

RAWTE tu says rathore

Kya arjun is su's father he grabs arjuns collar

I wont spare youyellsASR

Do what ever you want riya yeh tera boyefriend kuch nahi kar sak tha hai

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg kya timing hai mera *runs away to read it😉
*Edited
Mashallah kya bolu mai yaar...
di this chap was totally fabulous awesome awesome awesome muaahhh aand a big hug...
if that could describe my feelings🤗😳
I'm loving each and every bit of this and that creepwa arrested yayyy😃 party time😉
Next part kab post kar rahi ho??? I'm glad you took up to do this part I'm sure I wouldn't have kept up to this level at all for sure...

Jealous Arjun, and uff ye shree and chotu ki comedy...
Rathore furious 😔 not fair par koi nahi...

OMG PRECAP nooo I can't see my favourite boys fighting against each other...
How could Arjun do that to her.. Custody papers😡
Asr gooo asr get Arjun's dimaag to thikane!!!😃 but please don't touch him I mean hit him... if you do I expect my Arjun to hit u back ASR😆 (tough competition for me to choose)hehe
Overall Loved it...👏👏👏
and love u...Embarrassedupdateee sooon pleaseee
Edited by funkylicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear

😭 will she leave arjun for asr 😭 😭 awww

y is she dng this 😭

i hate asr 😭

Edited by rockz.diva1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update continue soon
dont seperate su from riya ,
Edited by shrutisweety - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good job di!
Precap se tho lag tha hain ki ASR Arjun and Riya are going to be on warpath
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear! 👍🏼👏 plz update next part soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice! loved the update a lot! please update soon! the precap is also very interesting! can't wait to read it! excited!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Fiza! Great update as always..

Arjun;s jealous, Awwiee.. and my ASR hottie.. ☺️

Riya and Arnav's scenes were awesome!! (Okay, Ariya pankhas, don't pick up those jootis, yet; hear me out!)

Arjun and Rathore both got riled up, naaicee..

Well, for the precap, I know that would be a natural reaction from him, realising that Riya was going out with someone.. (Maybe he really cares for Su and is upset about Riya as well..)

But, bass yaar.. ab aur mat tadpaao.. Mila do dono ko.. 😉

Thanks for the PM!

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