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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all, , hows you???? Well first of all thank you so much for the likes and comments you gave,,,, muah….. love ya…. Pls keep commenting….




@ritzy09- di i love to use kiss at that moment but what to do, , maaneet are not so close now so i thought to give it in a different way, , till yet they didn't kiss, , so it will be in a different way na...that's why...


@all, , i am not taking any particular's name bcoz i knew it's all of you we reach here , , love you all, , muah, , big huggiiieee... thank you so much...

Part-43

"did you also found me attractive, handsome, sexy and , , and yes, Greek God too?" asked maan… maan was laughing inwardly, ,

"of course yes, , why can't i? I too found you attractive, handsome, sexy, and yes, Greek God too" replying while counting everything on her finger…..

He smirked at his victory but keep his lips sealed as he didn't want to ruin the moment…. He saw the deserted place and thought for something, , he didn't know that why he wants to know her more about her inner feelings, , as if his life depends on her feelings, , every moment wants her, , something is awakening inside him but he doesn't what is that?

He felt like drowning himself in her dark almond brown eyes like he knew these eyes before, , he wants the answers of his questions, , like she has some secrets in her deep almonds which she is hiding from him but what? Whenever he saw in her eyes , , he felt like he has some connection with those hazels, , he wants to know why he felt like that? but he feared if he hurt her again asking some questions to her, , if she takes him wrong then what will he do?

This is not insecurity but something else…. He shrugged off his thoughts and stopped the car aside , , he turned his face towards geet, , he saw her pouting face , still she is feeling jealous , , ohh how much he loved this scene but he has to take a move forward towards her, , , a cute frown on her face making her more cute, she is still thinking that why he is so handsome that every girl dying to have his one look and feel like they got some kind of treasure, , ohh god she will go insane if she is thinking like this….

Maan knew that what she is thinking like he is any mind reader, , he chuckled at her thought and leaned over her a little where she doesn't know whether is car moving or not, , she lost in her thoughts, , just now she confessed her feelings to him but she doesn't know….. it is true that she loves him but she didn't confessed it openly to him, , he knew that she loves him but he wants to know where she saw him? exactly when she started love him? what made her think that she has feelings for him? why he doesn't know about her? Only remember a girl's brown eyes, , the same colour geet has, , the same big eyes , ,

He leaned over her and whispered huskily making her shiver suddenly with the sudden whispers of his, ,

"geet"

she stiffened a little hearing her name but then relaxed found him, , her breath relaxed a bit seeing him but the close proximity they are sharing, , ohh how much she love it but fearing that he love it or not?

"what are you thinking geet?" he asked, , his voice is merely audible but she can hear it, , his hot breath was fanning on her side nape , she closed her eyes feeling his hot breath on her skin , , she felt like any ball is going upside down inside her tummy , , she blushed with the thought only feeling his closeness with her where maan was observing her very closely, , he can sense that what she is thinking? He can see the redness on her cheeks, , she is blushing but nothing is happened between them right now, , the closeness between them made her blush,, , she never blush like that in these two days and right now, , why?

He got the answer by himself, , right now they are alone and the topic is also like that…..

"geet, , why are you blushing?" he asked leaning over her more barely touching her nape with his lips , ohh she felt current in her body, , his name slipped from her mouth with the feel of his lips..

"maan" geet whispered back…

"hmm geet, , tell me one thing" said maan to her….

"hmm maan, , kya?" she asked lost in him….

"tumne jo abhi kaha, is that true?" asked maan feeling her skin under his lips, ,

"haan maan" replied geet in a trance, , she doesn't know nothing right now, , the feel of his M shaped luscious lips, , her heart is pumping fast against her chest so fast, , her chest is going up & down with the rapid breath, , they were so close, , ,

"hmm, geet…. Are you still feeling jealous ?" he asked lost in her still , , lost in her almonds…

"hmm, " she nodded in acceptance….

"why geet? " he asked to her, , wants to hear from her, her inner feelings….what she thinks about him, , why she feel jealous?

"because" geet said…. Still closing her eyes where his barely touching lips on her nape creating havoc inside her, , she felt like pours on her arms shivering, ,

"because" he asked rubbing his nose on her skin, ,

"because maan" she opened her mouth again but nothing is coming out….

"haan geet, , bolo because" he encourage her a little…

"because mai wo" she opened her eyes at once hearing the horn sound which is coming from the passing vehicle, , maan too come back in his sense , , a sudden silence prevailed between them at once, , just before they were so close and now they are embarrassed, , she hid her blush looking outside the window where maan straighten himself, , he looked in her direction, , he knew that she is still blushing , , he cleared his throat for gaining her attention, , she looked at him back…

"geet wo, , mai wo, , abhi jo hua…. I mean so" he was about to say sorry to her but he was silenced by her hand, , she knew that he will say sorry to her and she doesn't want that, , she put her hand on his lips for silencing him, ,

"please maan, , never think like this… and don't you dare to say sorry again to me, , got it" she threatened him , , she was hurt that everytime something happened between them and he said sorry to her…. She wants to move ahead with this relationship, , not to regret…. She smiled…. And then emphasize the word "please" like a pleading child…

He remove her hand from his mouth and held between his, , he looked down at her hand and rubbed it slightly with his thumb like soothing the pain she is feeling now with his unfinished sorry….

"as you wish geet, , last time forgive me, , I won't say sorry again to you.. promise" said to her looking in her eyes again where he is still caressing her hand with his thumb…. She felt his soft thumb over her skin, , his slight touch on her skin gave goose bumps in her, , she nodded accepting his promise….. he brought her hand near his lips and placed a pecked over her hand, ,she looked down and blushed again….

Ohh , he can see the redness again on her cheeks snatching his breath away from him, , his heart is thudding against his chest like blood circulation of his heart became fast, , heart beats going fast seeing her only blush….

She tried to take her hand away but he tighten his hold on her hand while she blushed more, , she opened her eyes hearing some sound , she looked at his direction, , the sound is coming from his stomach, , his stomach is growling, , he is hungry, ,

"maan, you are hungry?" she asked to him, , he nodded making puppy face…. He thought for a while then looked back at her face…..

"geet, will join me in lunch, , we can go in some hotel if you want or we can go home also, , " asked maan…

"of course, yeh bhi koi puchhne wali baat hai…. " she replied back….

"where do you want to go?" asked maan putting the car in gear, ,

"as your wish maan, ,I am happy with both" she replied back….

"okay, , " he said only this and drive the car…. She was stealing glances of his and the same was happening with maan… he was also stealing glances of her face but fearing like he is doing any sin like she is not his and stealing glances of her face is like doing any crime , , she felt his nervousness , she knew that he is looking at her time to time but said nothing… actually she loved it….

She held his hand which was over the gear, , and squeezed a little assuring him that she is fine with this…. He felt relief with her sweet gesture , and smiled at her back assuring her back that he is fine now…. Ohh how much she loved this smile of his..! this smile makes her crazy, , she took her cell and on the camera, ,

"maan" she called him softly, , he turned towards her still having a sweet smile on his face, , she clicked and he heard that click sound suddenly the smile washed away from his face, , geet chuckled, , ,

"Kodak moment" she smiled back….

Precap

Umm, , don't know, , may be shock for you all or may be not, , will think….




I know you all were waiting for the moment that how will geet react when she'll come in her sense back, , but that moment will come, , don't feel bad okay… she will talk to him surely…..

Guys, tell me one thing , , did you feel that the story is going bit slow?? And the dialogues are less and explanation about the things are more??? Pls reply me…ok…

Now tell me hows it?

Press the like button and do comment, , pls..

Waiting for your response

Love ya

neha


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --aarthi--

grrr im going to kill you for leaving it like this and teasing poor us



no baby don't kill me, , i didnt meet my love till yet...hehehe😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ylaraib

1st congrats 4 new thread
Now the teaser
Lots of hugs and kisses to u 4 the thora sa hot teases
And

Lots of kicks and jutaz and chappalz to u 4 not giving update today and teasing us with the teaser
Hot update chahiye now

LARAIB



thanks a lot dear... hugs and kisses u too, , muah...

hehehe now jutta and chappal tujhe bhi, , hehehe...
chal abhi tomato use karna, , jutta chappal maine pehen liya hai... thanks for giving to me... i had a shortage of jutta and chappals... now have shortage of tomatos...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
so maan wants to knw abt her more and more
neha5058 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

ur really a tease

congrats for new thread



thanks a lot dear for the wish and the compliment..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

awesome update

so maan wants to knw abt her more and more



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
i dont know it is slow or not but 43 updates

they r not even in their friendly terms properly
formalities r still there
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68

awesome

i dont know it is slow or not but 43 updates

they r not even in their friendly terms properly
formalities r still there



thanks a lot dear, , 'formalities will be gone in next 2-3 updates, , then there will be only love n love n love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved da way u r unfolding maaneets feelings u r not slow dey r matured & hv faced a lot of turmoil so dey need time BTW why da prt is too short?

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