Poem Yaadien...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Honestly I don't know how this has turned out. I was doubting myself whether to post it here or not, But my dearest sister mahi insisted me on doing so. So here I'm with my 1st Ariya poem (apologies) guys its in hindi. Please bare with me and do give me suggestions if you have any...
Wanna thank mahi once again🤗
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Yaadien'

Ye teri yaade sataye mujhe raat din'

Har din

Bass teri yaade'

Rag rag ko jalati hai din pe din'

Mere din bas abh kate na tere bin


Lafz bhi adhoore ho jaye

Ye kashish samjate

Par fir bhi tu na samaj paye Ye baate'


Yaadien.. teri yaadien sataye mujhe raat din'

Har din

Bass teri yaade..

Kabhi dur na ho payege voh pal

Jo humne saath bitaye tere sang

Abh ye toh ek sapna sa lagne lagi hai

Meri zindagi abh tere bin

Par fir bhi tu na samaj paye Ye baate'.

Yaadien.. Teri yaadien sataye mujhe raat din'

Har din
Bass teri yaade.'

Yaadee

Aur yaade..

-Shru
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This is truly written by me, please do not copy it (I know no-1 would cause its bakwas😆)
Do hit like and comment...😊
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SIP1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice poem Shru, it is very good and so apt for us currently.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow dear

so deep yaar...dil ki baat juban par aagayi


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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is awesome.. Emotional kar diya...
N one more time if u call it a bakwaas... Mujhse bura koi nai hoga...
This goes so well with ArOshni track... Saying this bcoz I dont want it to go with any ArHea track...
Its nice...
Next time plzz... Write a damn romantic one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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N yeah.. Thanks Mahi... For insisting Shru to write it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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msst hai shru...boht dard hai.. 😊
bakwas toh hai hi ni!!!
mahi thanks shru se post karwane k lie 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sbp1971

Very nice poem Shru, it is very good and so apt for us currently.

thank you shilpa😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow dear


so deep yaar...dil ki baat juban par aagayi


awww thanks kavz😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

This is awesome.. Emotional kar diya...
N one more time if u call it a bakwaas... Mujhse bura koi nai hoga...
This goes so well with ArOshni track... Saying this bcoz I dont want it to go with any ArHea track...
Its nice...
Next time plzz... Write a damn romantic one...

aww...thank you sanchu😳
pakka I wont call it bakwaas..
I'll try to write something romantic, if it turns out good I'll definitely share😉

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