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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...👏...i realy like ur concept...continue...update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next part
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THANK GOD GEET KNOWS THE TRUTH ABOUT DEV
NOW SHE WILL NOT THINK ABOUT HIM
BUT LUCIFER IS CUNNING
HE WILL NOT LET MAAN GO OUT ALIVE
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... cont soonnn...

waiting waiting...
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PART 5

Geet was horrified & wanted to stop maan from pressing the last trigger..bt it was late''
MAAANNN!!!

As soon as she saw red gushing ffrom his frohead she fainted
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On the other hand..lucifer, who was smirking,his smile died seeing maan'as he was drenched in the colour of the bullet.

WHAT!!! HOW CAN THAT BE!! HOW CAN U SURVIVE!! I MADE SURE TO CHANGE UR FAKE BULLET WITH THE REAL ONE!! THEN HOW THE HELL CAN U HAVE THE FAKE RED COLOUR FILLED BULLET!!!

Maybe he was a little too late to show reactions'as maan swiftly like a cheetah came by his side & held lucifer's hand which had the gun in his & directed the gun towards him ..

He whispered in his ear menacingly ..u can be the king of Las Vegas..bt do u know who I am??

Lucifer was a little bit terrified, as he saw no sign of help'all of his men were in the same position as he was'

Wh..who are u??
Have u ever heard the name of MAAN SING KHURANA??

As soon as he said that the hall had a pin drop silence..
U R WHOM THE UNDERWORLD CALLS THE DEVIL!!!
Yes..u can say that..he nonchalantly jerked his shoulders as if it means nothing to him'

Bt..bt..how..can u be here..& why for the'mere girl'i ...mean
..bt..
lucifer..the king of Las Vegas started stammering as he saw THE DEATH in front of him..

Tch tch tch..u know.there is no place for cowards in underworld..his face first showed sympathy..then in seconds his expression turned into something so frightening that could chill blood..

So' goodbye..he shot Lucifer & his men the rest o his band'bt he was not satisfied with ne gun shot'he was remembering the pain he inflicted upon geet & the disrespect he dared to show towards her, not once..bt twice'in HIS court of judgment..it was the biggest sin..so he threw the empty gun & picked a machinegun &continued to shoot Lucifer,until his body could no longer be identified as a human body'it looked like a mush '

Dev was horrified...as maan threw the machine gun & glanced at him'
p'p..p..please..forgive me'I will do anything u want'pls..
maan smirked & picked geet in his arms without paying attention to him'at the entrance,he titled his head to sideways & said'
ur fate will be decided by MY geet..he left as his men dragged dev..
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Why is it so black..mt head feels so heavy..where is maan?? Flashes of red fluid gushing from his forehead came to her & She sat up screaming his name..
MAAAN!!!
What geet?? Do u intend to make me deaf?? He said with amusment .

Geet saw him & hugged him with all her might crying'.
He reciprocated her hug,if tenderly..whispering ..i am ok geet,,I am ok.
She hit his heart tenderly with her delicate small fist, u r bad..she snorted her nose..

Accha??he said amused
Ha. & don't ever dare to do that.
Now will u get up & change? & ALSO let me change..
Why??? She asked innocently..

Because u were sleeping from yesterday night & its noon now..& I was sitting here since then.
O BABAJI!! Why didn't u woke me up?? It's all ur fault. Do u know'u should have woke me up she pouted cutely..continuing with her mindless nonstop blabber

He rolled his eyes' who can believe without seeing that ,the man whom the UNDERWORLD fears..was now listening lecture from a girl for NOT WAKING HeR UP!!!!
Maan smirked as an idea popped up in his naughty mind to stop this radio without plug..

He kissed her lip deep & long leaving her breathless getting the expected result..
Her blabber stooped as she looked at him with shocked expression..
Then turned in an inhumanly deep shade of red.

T
hough maan would have loved to continue the assault he stopped thinking about her health.
He cleared his throat wo..u get ready..I will get the food ready
Wo..wo..
What is it geet?? U want to ask something??
Yes..how did u escape from that man?? He seemed very strong & cunning.

He was drinking water & chocked at geet's question.
Wo..wo..wo..we settled in an agreement, now he won't bother u.
REALLY !! then dev was exaggerating !! at the mention of dev her face became dull

Uh..where is he??
Who ,dev??
Yes.
He is with my men.
Wo..wo..wo..
Maan sighed ..he knew his geet a little too much,knew her kind heart..
I know, I won't give him any severe punishment,bt he has to pay the amount which he had from me with the interest.
Ok.then give him a work under u
ok
What kind of work will u give him??
A very luxurious & respectable work for him'he smirked as he thought about the work he would give him..

He now had to clean the entrance of the khurana empire with every person's entrance & exit..& it was a never ending work since he was appointed in a section where work goes 24*7 with men coming & going in every 5 minutes..

That reminds me..i also have spent million dollars on you, u have to pay me also..
Bt how??
Nothing hard'..u just have to remember where have we met'I am giving u two days of time..or else be ready to pay me in other way

Precap- past & what will be the other way??


Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Awsome i must say u r a awsome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... Wow maan is so smart... Loved it...
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aww loved it dear how maan had replaced lucifer's bullet and how he tackled...aww loved geet's concern to maan...so maan is in love with geet from the geet's past...aww now geet have to remember her past...or else maan is gonna take that payment from geet in another way...aww lovely update dear don cont soon...😃
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Fabulous the don feared the DEVIL and dev deserves more than it waiting for nxt part

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