Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 - Page 16

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Awesome I just started reading and finished it also please update soon
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OMG... precap is interesting...
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Ch13 part A

It had been week a since the fight arjun and riya were still at each others throats riya refused arjun to come near su  and rathore was always making sure  arjun was away from riya  after afewdays  riya joined the ETF  again

 

Guys we have  new case  a fashion house tycoon 's  has filed a complaint of murder ,kidnapping and  attempt to murder  of his brother in law shyam jha

 He will be coming any minute

A tall well built man in 3 piece clad black  suit  wearing his aviators  step in the room walking his famous  walk that always mad womans head turn

Riya was drinking coffee  when she saw him   and suddenly without any notice she

omg ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA TUM yells Riya   she suddenly jumps up from her chair  rand runs into his arms while he spins her around

arrey yeh kaun hai chotu ? lag tha hai riya ki koi bhai jo mala main khogay the says shree

haan yaar itne excited hai yeh says chotu

larkiyaan always over react in ke khoon main hota hai says  arjun

koi khass lag ra hai says rathore  

Ri tum  says ASR while hugging her very close to himself  he was holding on to her tiny waist and continued spinning her and finally put her down .

Long time kaise ho? Says asr

 Main theek hoon aur tum says riya

Im fine you  haven't changed still hot as fire I must say  and just as bubby like you were says ASR

That's right smiles riya but you(puts her hand on his chest and fixs) his tie  are looking just a s sexier as you were the last time I saw you says riya

Acha yeh sab chor  muhje yaad hai  bhi nahi saysASR

 OMG  (hands on her hips )ASR I might have lost my memory but how can a girl forget the  1st guy she was with you know na phele pyaar  kabhi nahi bhool sak the na  we were together for so long  says riya

The whole team is shocked and arjunis ticked

Yaar yeh tho riya ka phela pyaar  says chotu

Haan aur dehko intne din ki baad dono ki chemistry abhi hai says shree

Hot Jodi hai yaar says chotu arjun gives tehma shut the hell up look

Waise ASR I want you to meet the person I love the most. Says riya

Really ri muhje se ziyaada ?says asr

Haan ASR tum se bhi ziyaada (she pulls his nose )says riya smiling

 

 she goes to arjun passes him get su from shree and introduces her

This  is my daughther sunehra says riya

Ri tum ne shaadi kar liye kya yaar mera dil thor diya she is beautiful just like her mom  wiae says asr

 

Nahi ASR aisa kuch nahi Im single and very much ready to mingal   says riya

 

while smiling  the whole team seems amused while arjun is ready to burst

 

Kya riya tum shaadi nahi kare ?  you always  use to  say ki  iwant huge wedding like yash chopra flims and all and  shaadi ki baad hum yeh karenge  who karenge  and yahaan thak bache ki naam bhi you had picked kya hua riya  ina concerned voice askes ASR

Kuch nahi ASR  says riya

Nahi riya bolo kyunki tum aise larki nahi thi jo shaadi se phele   baat kya hai  says asr

The guys turn to arjun

 Rathore stairs at  him in disgust Arjun just looks guilty

ASR yeh sab choro abhi I will tell you  later paaka  says riya   wiase you're the one who is here to talk about the case na.  but yeh sab se phele I want you to meet my friends

Aao na  says riya

 yeah sure chalo he puts arm aroundher waist and they walk together over to the team

Arjun is pissed to see his hand on her waist and more over riya was ok with it

.guys id like you to meet Arnav Singh Raizada aka ASR MY ASR emphasizing  the word MY

 

 

And  ASR these are my bestifriends more like family to me  this ETF CHIEF  ACP Sameer Rathore  who is just like my elder bhai these two  shree and chotu my best friends  and thens he turns to arjun and this ACP Arjun suriyakant Rawte my boss  

 Pata hai guys we  known each other from high school  we started dating  our last yaer of high school and all of college   then  I decided  to go into the police force and went to Mumbai for training  then we lost touch. Kyun asr?

Asr looks into riya's eyes Haan yup your  right 5 years we were together says asr

I know wow 5 years kya din thi who na says asr

Rathore yeh good old days ki baatein agar hogaye haan tho case ka baat Karen says arjun

ASR just stairs at him riya looks at arjun 

Haan ASR aao na come sit near me she pulls his hand to the chair

 They discuss the case

 After about  1 hour ina half

Ok team so hum kal se we will get on this case  soch na hai ki kasie handel Karen yeh shyam ko

Ji sir 

Waise ri since you are single and want mingle tho kyun nahi  you me and dinner tonight   come on it will be special you will love I promise . says ASR

Oh really special  ?  jaise where are you planing to take me pairs to see the effile tower ? jokes riya

Waise woh bhi kar sak the but aaj nahi aaj my farm house you me  our favorite bottle of champaine  ,5 star dinner and  tum aur main can   talk all night while stairing at the starts from my balcony like old times says ASR

The guys our shocked  hearing ASR  arjun is like  hell no

Wow ASR tum sab abhi yaad hai hayeee sach you are such a gentalman  how can I say no to such a lovely invation to a great night ahead but just a minute

Rathore sir kya aaj aap su ko babysit kar sak the  please if you odnt mind says   riya

Of course riya you go ahead and enjoy  and don't worry abt su tumahre yeh bahi hai na says rathore

She smiles  and goes back to ASR and says ok but on one condtion  only says riya

Ok madam whatever you command  says ASR

Tum ko sab yaad hai but ek baat you for got I will come only if with the  champine is my favorite chocolate dipped starwberrys  winks riya

How could I forget of course thats a must says asr

 Ill pick you up  in 4 hours at 8 par kahan?

Here  asr  meet me here 

After a  while riya goes to rathore sir can I leave  early I want spend some time with su before I get ready and go and It will take while to get ready says riya

Sure riya tum jaao

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will b on next pg ch 13 b

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my my what a chapter di... lovely... awesome fantastic... no words only...
Love Asr... and Riya's bond just cant wait for more... 🤗😉
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Ch 13 b

After  2 hours riya walks in wearing this 

and her hair  open  sided to the right side  in the  front  looking beautiful   holding su

Everyone is shocked when she walking in

Arjun is speechless at least she is dressed decent thought arjun

Riya goes to them and hands rathore su and her things 

Kya ri dhasu  lag re ho says chotu

Haan ri super top says shree

Sir please you handel her or shree ya chotu but arjun ko nahin handel kare do please says riya

 Don't worry  riya go and enjoy and please call me bhai after office hours says rathore

 

Riya is waiting for asr when he  walks in   riya turns around  and walks over to ASR and arjun clentches his fist  while shree sips outs his coffee and rathore  eyes pop along with chotu

The back of her dressed looked like this

ASR hands her thes

ASR their beautiful lilles and  roses my favorite thank you she hugs him arjun is about to  break the galss of his cutting chai when ASR  hand touches her bare back .

Wow riya you look beautiful ready  says asr  

  Yeah  im ready let me just put these  pretty flowers in a vase and place them in my office  just a second she walks  over

ASR notices her dress he has a damn    that's hot look arjun hates the way he is looking at Riya

She  gets a  vase  and places the flowers in them  

Arjun goes  near her

 And pulls her in a corner

What the hell are you wearing yells arjun

leave me  arjun  what ever I  wear I  wear mera body hai you have no right to ask me this  samhje  yells riya and  pulls her arm away

 Walks back and kisses  su  meri princess be a good girl  and bhai don't wait up ill be late mera pass key hai .(she looks at arjun )

grabs her clutch shall we  says riya

yes of course  bye guys says

ASR puts his arm around her waist and they walk out of the office.

Arjun throws his chai glass on the floor

How dare her wear such a thing yells arjun

I agree riya ka dress was a little too much says rathore

A little Rathore A little damn yells arjun

Haan yaar chotu dress lag rat ha ri sab ko kathal kar ka irrada tha(wanted kill ever with her dress) says shree arjun stairs and him he leaves   

Riya calls rathore after 2 hours

 He is feeding su  some baby food  he puts it on speaker

Bhai su  kaise hai just wanted to check up on  her  sab theek ahi na

Haan riya im was just feeding her theek hai baat kar lo speaker pe ho tum

Oh meri baby  kasie ho mamu ko thang nahi kare ho na

I love you baby  says riya 

Rathore talks you enjoy riya  don't worry  says rathore

 He put scell down with out ending it  to wipe su's face

 They hear music in back ground

It's the song saibo from shor in the city

May I have this dance with the lovely lady says asr

Why of course you may   

Maan yeh saheb ji
Jan hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane

Naina Nawabi ji
Dekhe hai Sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe Ishare

Maaan yeh saheb ji
Haan Karta Bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
NA samjhe ishare
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Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo

Dheere dheere baiga dheere dhere Apna sa dheere dheere
LAage se Saibo

Arjuns eyes are closed and fuming with thought of  asr touch her bare back

While dancing

Riya yaad hai ki college main we use come here all

the time on our dates says asr

I know asr kitne ache din the who  na

Haan those were the days riya you locked up in my arms and we were laughing  with all are friends here na , I missed that par itne din ki baad we  gotten to relive those moments  aaj im very happy said asr

 

They guys look up  at each other

Haan asr pata nahi aaj it feels like a fairytail  says riya

It must be my this (he kisses her but on the check )  winks asr

Asr tum bhi na says  riya

Arrey ek kiss tho hai  itna blushe kyun kare ho says asr  

 Asr  lets go look at the stars  says  riya

That I can already see in your eyes says asr

 Arjun gets up and  end the call

 Case pe  kaam kar the hai says arjun

After a while shree is on the laptop on facebook

Yaar  chotu lag tha hai ri is having fun says shree

Haan who tho call se laga says chotu

 Anhi yaar who tho hai par Her status on facebook yaar

Can you feel the magic in the air it must been the way you kissed me

Updated 10 mins ago  

ARJUN IS  FUMMING

She comes back home and  notices rathore a sleep on the sofa with book in his lap  

She puts the book on table  and goes up checks on su and gets ready for bed

Ri you seem tired neend nahi mila kya asks shree

Haan ri this your 3rd cup of coffee already and its just 10 am says chotu

Haan thoda tired hoon but im fine says riya

Riya kal what time  did you  come home I waited till 2am but I gusse I dozed off on the sofa says rathore

3:30 am  actually itne din ki baad we met na baaton baaton main where the time went  I didn't realize says riya

Arjun is hearing this

Kaam sa kaam su ke bare soch na tha itne  late  ghar koi aata hai kya says arjun

I think of su  im her mother iss liye I made sure I feed her when she  woke at 4 am and  I sang to her till she slept which was  5 am 

so I know what my duties are  don't interfere with a mother again samhje ya samjao  suddenly asr comes

in

asr tum yahaan?  Says riya

haan actually you droped your earring  yesterday  I gusse so wanted

 give it back to you says asr .  

Precap :

Shree, chotu Arjun   were over for their weekly guys night at Rathores watching the cricket match and playing poker . riya was  in her room  bariding her hair in front of the mirror when she saw a shadow  at her window and then some one jumped in   Riya screamed   ahhh ASR ran over to her covered her mouth and winked at  he removed his hand

Tum yahaan kyun aaye and that too chor ki jaisa huh? Says riya

Tum surprise kar na tha  just like old  days  kyun waise I missed you says  smiles asr

You haven't changed at all

suddenly  the guys run up the stairs 

riya can hear the she opens her closet and  asr hides there

the team  knock

Riya kya hua  says rathore

Ri says shree

She opens the door

Kya hua ri asks chotu

 Kuch nahi woh spider says riya   im fine really  you guys go back and enjoy your match says riya

Suddenly cell phone begans to ring riyas is shocked

Yeh kis ka phone hai says arjun

Mera phone aur kis ka  yeh kaise question hai  ill pick up later says riya

Really tumahre  he goes to her cell yeh tho dead hai.

Rathore other tehn us koi aur bhi hai yahan says arjun

I have 2 cells what is it to you huh says riya ab jao

 he then goes to the closet and opens it and finds

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asr satiring at him
 
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whoa my sweetheart.. two chapters in a row
nice treat to your readers huh 😉
omg.. the way ASR greeted Riya made me feel bad for Arjun.. 😒
couldn't stand Riya being so intimate with ASR and poor arjun left alone..
Riya bass bhi karo yaar😛.. boht torture kar liya bichaare ko 😔

n that dress.. uff😉... that was too muchh😆... i can see arjun getting red and yellow with anger..😃
i can understand his place too but it was his mistake to call su - a galti🤢
so i must say that he should go through all this pain and torture..😊

and hahah the last part was so funny.🤣 that picture made me laugh so bad 🤣
dont know what will be arjun's reaction to see a paraya mard in his riya's closet
and on top of it , what will ASR do to Arjun when he will get to know about the truth

great updates👍🏼.. mindblowing updates HJ 🤗
they were perfect..⭐️
i just want ASR to know the truth asap so that he will punish arjun for hurting riya 😉
maybe? 😆
update soon my jaan 🤗

p.s. I love you more than Shru loves you 😉❤️
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omg the next chap was blasting... rocking totally awesome di.. no words... love love loved it.. please please update right now...if u can I cant wait for more...!!!
 
Like seriously bahot hi chote chap's the dono bhi... I don't have words to express how awesome I'm feeling reading both the chap's!!!😃
 
I love youuu 🤗
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superb...arjun jealous...luv it...but just hope a new love story doesnt begin😛...hope arjun jaldi se confesses his feelings!
update soon😃
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Lovely i loved the way Arjun was jealous, and haye ASR will always remain ASR.😳
N the dress was awesome, and love the ASR in closet..
Poor Arjun, when will he realise that he loves Riya and try to win her back...
Please continue😊