MayUr FF: Parichey Thrd#2 last part pg 43 7/11 - Page 22

when will u update fiza?

hopefully 2morow if all went well

lol..

han aj jany do gi not to worry..
just checking the updated...
per sorry hum rply nhi ker pay gay :(

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

lol..

han aj jany do gi not to worry..
just checking the updated...
per sorry hum rply nhi ker pay gay :(

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Kyun!!!!!

main toh likne hi wali thi ke plzz reply bhi kardo aur ap keh rahi ho no reply...

ek t tumharay elwa kis k bhi asa comment nhi jis ko rply ki zaroorat ho...
aur dosra kcuh khass mood nhi ban raha tha...
np... tum ko ker dayti hoon

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update

loved it lodsss

Beuaituflly written

loved it to d coreee

YA ALLAH!!!!

ab aur kitni tareef karein hum iss GA ki...arrhhh 😳

han han uss Ghatiya Aurat ki toh Eid hi ho gayi hogi...chudel kahin ki!!!

dil ke sare armaan purey karliye honge uss kamini ne Mayank ki buraiyon ka dhindora pithh pithh kar...HUH!!!

i just hate her to d coreee of d bottom of my heart!!!!!!! 😳

n hatss off to my Api for creating such a strong character which can make so deep emotions in reader's...MA!👏⭐️👏

lol.. is aurat ny tum sab ki galiton ki vacb bahra di hai ...
koi baat nhi khabi k din baray tu khabi ki raat
mayank nupur k bhi waqt aay ga soon... very soon
thansk alot dear.. glad u connect tht much to it

Bechari meri Shilpa aunty uff!!!

woh kitni acchi hain bass Nupur ke liye unhone sab kuch sehen kiya phir bhi jana nhi chahti thi usse chod kar bt yes! Nupur did a good job ke unko bhej diya

bt then Sigh!!!!!! bechari Nupur pir uski kitniii buri halat ho gayi hogi n m sureee that Adhiraj's mom made it more worst!!! thanks to that GA!!! 😡
hmm she has too... pkus i have to... as next cuming up cant happen in front of shilpa.. she wont had let happen it ...

still loved MN's lil moments they share though being far away from each other still being with each other...

loved it lodsss

in all these mess!! their Present is a Treat to read!!
glad u liked there bond...
in all this messs this wht stood strong there bond..

i sooo Thank u for not giving us pain by making us hanging what is gonna be later if u wouldn't have revealed the present before their past...Sigh!

i love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

np dear... it was kinda in my mind to kep it balanced.. when past is bad present shud be good n when present is past will be balacning... i hate tears nah😆

n Gosh!! yeh Gunjan na puri besharam hain waise mujhe woh asi hi jyada pasand hain..😆🤣

loved d way u described how he was imagining all those past moments standing at d door...Sigh!

even i m dying to read how that Ghatiya Aurat is gonna react n wanna imagine her face...Witch!

now tht is the most dioifcult part i tell u... i just donot know wht i m gona do with ti... though i m on it.. but still i m not feeling its going the way u all are expecting it to be... maybe a little disappointing ...

i sooo loved it!!!!!!

loved Samrat n Mayank hug too...hope they will be like b4 too..😳

waiting eagerly!!!!!!! for the next part

loved it lodsss

loved it to d coreee

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot dear glad u like it

sorry haven't rplyd to any... pardon errors..

this n next will be very quick... most probably chp: 34 on sunday night..i want tu wrap up past ASAP... its feeling dragged... so i will request all to unres quick...

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hAPPY NAVRATRI.. N DURGA PUJA TO ALL THOSE WHO CELEBRATE

Chapter: 33

Present:

Mayank enter the house and gunjan made nupur sat on the sofa.. the servant came to gave them water and asked whereabouts of nupur n mayank… he has seen them grown up here… he know them so well….

Mayank: wshiperesd in gunjan's ear… tmahri saas kaha hai..

Gunjan: pata ni jasay hi suna k tum log yaha aray ho.. woh ksi kam se 2 din k liyan chalo gai…

Mayank chukled and gunjan fronwed…

Mayank: kab tak bhagy gi….

Gunjan: tum mjhy bata rahy ho ya mein nupur ko akhwa(kindnao) kerwao taky tum moo se kuch photo…

Mayank: he laughed at her irritation…. Batao ga.. abhi nhi.. sab k samny nupur batay gi… abhi ek baat mjhy pata kerni zaroori hai….

Nupur: bus na aplog mein ab thik hoon…please…

Samrat: koi thik whik nhi ho… uper ja ker aram kero….. bulkily tum dono hi rest kero… yeah tu ek bar bhi pechaly 25 din se ghar nhi aya hai…. Jao..

Shilpa: han samrat thik kah raha hai… jao uper rest kero…

Nupur pouted and mayank glared….

Nupur: fine jarahi hoon…

Shilpa: mayank beta tum bhi jao…

He took hold of nupur's hand and made her slowly walk up… she was much much better now and can do things on her own ..still she has slight shivers in her legs due to lack of walking… but she was doing pretty well….

Past:

CEO: MR Sharma we are ready to take ur material…. U can send in the shipment …. Yet we cant promise u of all the profit… if the material got sold out withing 2 months… ur getting it.. else we will not keep it with us

Mayank: its oky Sir.. thanku thanku so much….

Mayank was now on cloud nine.. it was the biggest achievement he can ask for… his material getting sold, hopefully with profit means they got everything in there cart… and that is exactly for what they did this all…

He cant wait to share this news with nupur… he knew how much relived she will be with tht… he left a text msg on her cell.. so tht whenever there is no one she can talk to him..

But little he knew that nupur's is in a mess..a huge mess.. it was the day MRs waris has cum to meet nupur.. with all there extravaganza…

Mrs: Waris: kasi ho beta… OMG .. tumahin asay dekh ker tumhain pata bhi nhi hai mjhy kitni takkleef horahi hai.. mein ny tu pehly hi kaha tha… woh larak mjhy ek ankehin nhi bahta…

Nupur was in urge to hit the lady's head… what the hell she is doing here…

MRs Waris: koi baat nhi..its a close chapter now… bahr niklo.. party kero.. friends k sath jao.. have ur life.. tum apni ziandgi kyun rukh rahi ho us k liyan haan…

Adhiraj: hi nupur… salam anty…

Nupur was shocked to see adhiraj here at home, Oh god why the hell he is here..when mayank was here he never show up ever knowing he will get killed … but whatever she isn't bother…

Nupur: anty mein aram kerlo sorry

Mrs: waris: han han beta.. tum jao aram kero..its oky…

Nupur left to her room unknown to the fact that what is cooking behind her back…

MR.Waris: dekho mjhy tum se aj ek baat kerni hai

Tai jaan: han bolo

Adhiraj: mom mjhy kerny day

Tai jaan: kya baat hia beta…

Adhiraj: anty yeah tu buhat pehly se mein nupur ko bhi hamesha samjhny ki khosih kerta raha hoon k mayank us k liyan nhi hai… university mein bhi woh ksis se baat hi nhi kernay dayta nupur ko islayn k kahin nupur us k hath se na nikla jay.. magar samrat aur nupur dono hi nhi dekh parahy thy..

Tai jaan: bus kya keray beta.. bachapan se sath raha hai….kasay na aetibar kerty

Adhiraj: ap thik kah rahi hain…. Magar Allah ny mjhy dosra moqa diya hai jo mein nhi gawana chahta… mjhy nupur hamesha se hi pasand hai.. agar ap ki ijazat ho aur nupur ko koi ateraz na ho tu… I think us ki iddat kahtam hony mein ek month reh gaya hai… mein foran us k bad us se shadi kerna chahta hoon ….

Tai jaan: KYa..

Adhiraj: please anty mein apko shikayat k koi moqa nhi doon ga…

Tai jaan: aray beta mjhy kya ateraz hosakta hai.. mjhy tu tum hamesha se hi pasand ho.. bus nupur ko mana

Adhiraj: anty ap us se baat kerlay.. aur mein bhi us se baat kerna chaho ga… us ko zaroor yaqeen ajay ga…

Tai jaan: thik hai beta mein us k father se aur us se baat kerlo.. is se zayda khushi ki tu baat hi nhi hoskti

Adhiraj: he smirk.. meray liyan bhi…

Does anything can be better than this..adhiraj saying this all by himself ..this was exactly she want.. adhiraj was always favt of her.. he has the class, looks, money and he was a nice person too… marrying to him, nupur will get out of mayank ASAP.. and finally she will have her dream life with all the luxuries and status…

For adhiraj it was a double dip… nupur was a complete wife material… cant get into his ways of fun… and they way mayank n nupur has treated him always… this was the biggest failure for them… how can he wait to see mayanks face when nupur will be in his arms as his wife…gosh actually he cant wait to have her like tht… she has sumthing in her… the girls hard to get .. are the most fun to have with…

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Tai jaan: nupur mjhy tum se kuch baat kerni hai

Nupur: ji bolain..

Tai jaan: tumahra rishta aya hai…

Nupur: ami ap k deemgh karab hoagay hai kya….

Tai jaan: nupur.. apni zindagi ki fiakr kero… samjhi tum… itna acha rishta hai.. zindagi bhar asay hi reho gi kya,…. Ktini larkiyon k taalaq k baaad asay rishty itni jaldi atay hain

Nupur: ab ap meir bhi baat kaan khol ker sun lya… mein shadi nhi kero gi bus… baat kahtam… ap yaha se jasakti hain… abhi k abhi…

Tai jaan: shadi tu mein tumahri kero gi hi… adhiraj se acha rishta tu hon nhi sakta..jitni jaldi maan jao ..behtar hai

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Taya jaan: ap kyun zabaradsti ker rahi hia us k sath

Tai jaan: tu aur kya kero… mein janti hoon woh asay hi ziandgi bhar bhaiti rahy gi us mayank k ghum mein… dekhin.. humain is baar zabardsti kerni hogi us k sath… adhiraj k sath jab khush rahy gi tu khud hi bhool jay gi sab… nupur ko apni zindagi mein agay bharna hoga.. itna assan nhi hai… magar jitna waqt hum us ko day gay woh aur muskil mein ati jay gi…

Taya jaan: shayd tum thik kah rahi hoo..

Tai jaan: ap us se baat keray mjhy tu woh apna duhsman samhjti hai.. itni nafrat bhar di hai mayank ny k bus..

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Nupur felt her self dizzy..adhiraj.. no noway.. she can still see the same lust in his eyes, that was those days… she cant even get near him…. Pretending to say yes to him is not even in the list… she will never say yes to him no way…. Just than her eyes went on her cell n she saw the text..

" call me ASAP..i have a great news"

She smiled .. mayabe things are getting settle…or maybe he is cuming back

Mayank: hello wifey kasi hoo

The question Nupur donot know who to answer… she is scared of adhiraj he can go low… way low.. mayank has always hated him so much because of tht… and she was always scared of him as he always tried to get physical with her… if only she would have told mayak about it..he would have killed him… yet she cant tell him now… he seems to be happy.. and plus still nobody can force her to marry.. she will handle things her by herself like a strong girl… she will… the moments she took for the thought process made his heart cum to mouth

Mayank: kya hua hai nupur tum thik ho nah.. nupur kuch tu bolo..

She came back to earth and covered her voce..

Nupur: han woh mjhy lag koi arha ahai tu islyn chup hogi thi…

Mayank: oh.. mjhy laga koi baat hai… sab thik hai nah nupur… pata nhi mjhy asa lagta hai har baar k tum mjhy se kcuh chupa rahi hoo.. kuch hai jo tum ko pershan ker raha hai.. is phone ki wajaha se mein dekh nhi pata tum ko

She smiled despite of being in her own misery..

Nupur: asa kuch nhi hai…. Tum baatao good news kya hai

Mayank: guess…

Nupur: woh maan gay

Mayank: yes woh mangay… mein ny farhan se kah diya hai us ny shipment load keradi hai… 5 din mein woh yaha ajay gi… and than inshaAllah time tu humain 2 months k diya hai… per yeah ek month mein hi clear hojay gi… nupur mein aj sach mein itna khush hon… agar asa hogaya nah tu mein jald hi tumahry pass ajao ga….i just cant wait to be with u

Nupur: she closed her eyes leaning her head to head rest….mein bhi.. sab hojay ga thik haina …

Mayank: han.. Allah sath day raha hai sab thik hojay ga dekhna… par tum thik hona…

He wasn't satisfied with her answers…. He wasn't feeling at peace.. there was strange restlesnnes as if sumthing is ther with her

Nupur: han babamein thik hoon… bus shayd thora thak gai hoon….

Mayank: kyun kahin bahar gi thi

Nupur: nhi … mayank hum yaha nhi rahy gay

Mayank: hay kya hua .. sab thik hai k nhi sach bolo nupur please..

Nupur: sab thik hai.. per mein ab khabi ami k sath nhi raho gi…. Mjhy un ki shakal dekh dkeh ker nafrat ati hai… mjhy nhi rehna ..

Mayank: fikar kyun kerti hon… hum wasy bhi state hi shift hony waly thy… tu ab bhi yeah keray ga… apni nai life shoro keray ga.. jaha sab perfect hoga…

Nupur: mayank koi araha hai…

Mayank: thik mein rekhta hoon… nupur mjhy se kuch chopana maat please ..donot make this distance cum between us..

She close her eyes and droped sum tear… he still can read her so well

Nupur: hmm.. apna kayal rekho… AH

Mayank: AH..

Knock..

Nupur: ajo…. Baba ap…ap yaha kasy..

Taya jaan: dekho beta mjhy pata hai itni jaldi yeah fasala itna asan nhi hai tumahry liyan… per is baray mein ek bar socho… kal adhiraj tum se milny araha hai..ek bar us se baat kerlo

The earth beneath her slipped….she will not meet him not at all….he isn't a person she can meet alone

Nupur: baba mjhy nhi kerni shadi please…

Taya jaan: beta meray liyan mil lo….

Nupur: per mein tu iddat mein hoon asay kasay

Taya jaan: bahr nhi jana hai kal woh ghar aay ga tu tum yahin us se mil layna… beta acha hi hai k tum apny ghar ki hojao gi… hum kab tak hai kya pata… humary baad kaun sochy ga tumahra… mjhy tu har lihaz se best lag hai yeah rishta.. tum bhi haan kahdo tu acha hi hai

Saying so he left her in hell of situation… she was no frighten .. she hugged herself tightly and was slightly shivering…. She cant met him noway… he isn't safe… how cum her father even though tht he is perfect… but than he doesn't knew all that is behind… no please no.. hugging herself she slip down on bed… she can't sleep whole night the night mares were back, she was feeling alone… she was scared.. dam scared…. She was feeling the walls of the room cuming near to smash her… she was feelling safocated and the headache was high… she will not do this noway she will not….

She cant tell mayank even .. he will leave all n cum back… n this will increase the hell for them

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It was afternoon and she was having her lunch with family… gunjan was trying to make her smile.. and at times she was successful to… her father n brother was happy seeing her improved slowly she is cuming out of it all… they didn't knew she is pretending more to be strong…. She isn't in good shape specially after listening to adhriaj's arrival..

Gunjan: nupur hum baba ki taraf jarahy hain… un ki tabiyat thik ni hi.. tum kayal rekhna

Nupur: hmm thik hai..

As soon as they left her eyes droped on the door and the figure appearing from ther was horrifying… it was him adhiraj with the same smirk n lustful eyes as if he was challenging her tht now whos gonna protect her..

Adhiraj: addab uncle …addab anty…

Tai jaan: aray jeetay raho beta… such pleasant feeling to see ya here

Adhiraj: thanks anty…

Taya jaan: beta aao tum drawing room mein bhaito… mein nupur ko behjta hoon

Adhiraj: sure uncle..

He appeared to be as a the most nicest person in front of her parents yet he cant hide himself from her eyes.. she don't want to go yet she was forced to go insde… the door got close and tht was the moment she felt she will die any moment… she was so so so scared… but she needs to be strong.. she kept repeating it to herself…

Adhiraj: is ko kahty hain kismet.. ghoom phir ker tum meray pass hi aai… ab waha kyun ghari ho.. aoo meray pass bahito

Nupur: asa tu tum sochna bhi maat k mein tumahry pass ajao gi…. Mein tumahry pass kahbi nhi ao gi

Adhiraj: oh really aur kaun bajy ga tum ko… mayank… wasy ajeeb se baat hai us ny tum ko chor kasay diya…. Mjhy tu yaqeen nhi ata… I mean mayank ny tum ko chor diya…waoo… he laughed n stood up from there

She glup down a lump as she saw him nearing her but she didn't move ,… she didn't want him to belive she is scared of him yet from inside she was shivering… she knew today she even cant shout mayank and he wil be there.. she is on her own…

Adhiraj: he placed his hand on either side of the wall blocking her way… she moved her face away…. Seedha tarah maan jao gi tu acha hai tumahry liyan… warna tumahin apna tum aur bhi tareqo se bana ker raho ga…

Se pushed him back and was about to move away when he grip her hand and twirled her around to bang with his chest..

Adhiraj: donot test my patience nupur.. I want u .. n I will get u… get ready for our wedding night.. he said touching his finger on her cheek.. and she hited him in stomach…

And rushed out to get in side her room.. she climb up the stairs as fast as she can.. and locked the door she was panting and was in all sweat… she rushed to the shower and open the water…. Trying to remove his just a single touch.. she was rubbing her hand on her cheek and on her hand and than droped her self on the floor and weep…

Tai jaan: kya hua yeah asy kasay chali gai

Adhiraj: he smile ..i think woh ap logo k face nhi ker parahi thi… us ki haan hain.. per woh kah nhi pay rahi hai

Tai jaan: yeah tu baht hi achi kahbar sunai hai tum ny… tu humari taraf se rishta paka hua… welcum to our family beta…

Adhirj: thanku so much anty …AH..

He was laughing out at his luck.. Nupur adhiraj.. tht so within 35 days… aha what I day it will be…

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Mayank on the other hand was completely unknown to the fact adhiraj has entered, he was hell worried for the fact that there was sumthing in nupur's voice… to his luck taya jaan n tai jaan on adhiraj's mother request kept it secret from ervyone until nupur's iddat is over…. Adhiraj knew Samrat is not less than mayank…. So let it be on different level, he has other plans for this …

Mayank was busy, so much that he was hardly getting time for food, or talking to nupur, yet he was managing it… he has to sold out the whole material.. they way it is going this will be done in more month.. so he has to extend his trip here, he donot know how he is gonna tell that to nuput.. but than he was trying it to do more rapidly…

Yet his heart was restless very much… he donot know yet he was fearing something, so thought of calling sumoe most reliable…

Gunjan: hello..??

Mayank: gunjan mein mayank….

Gunjan: kasay ho tum.. kitni dino baad phone kiya… abhi bhi US mein ho…

Mayank: han abhi wahin hoon.. mein thik hoon… gunjan nupur kasi hai…

Gunjan: thik hai.. ab tu kafi better hai…

Mayank: tum sure ho is baray mein … I mean mjhy pata nhi kyun kcuh sahi nhi lag raha hai.. tum mera ek kam kero… asay hi random chk up k liyan is ko Dr.Nadir k pass lay jao

Gunjan: mayankk … kya hogaya hai… woh thik hai.. asa kcuh nhi hai ..ab tu woh kamray se bhi bahr niklati hai… sab k sath bhi hoti hai… aur tum asa kyun kha rahy ho

Mayank: bus asay hi…

Gunjan: ajeeb se baat hai mayank… tum us ko zindagi se nikla ker bhi itna joray hoay ho.. asa kyun kiya phir tum ny… pata nhi tum kis haal mein hoon

Mayank: mein thik ho.. bus tum nupur

Gunjan: uski fikar maat kero mein hoon….. per apna bhi kyal rekho

Mayank: AH

He sigh maybe he hasn't saw her from so long, have never had been so away thts why he is feeling so… hope so…he smiled more when he saw nupur' s no flash on his cell

Mayank: itni shidaat se yaad kiya tha kya mein ny

Nupur: jab hi pani pee k thak gai mein… kuch na hua..

Mayank: uff… tum mera naam lay layti …

The both giggled at the way both of them were behaving as filmy hero…and than there is silence..

Mayank: kya hua nupur aj kal itni khanmsoh kyun hogi ho…

Nupur: pata nhi mayank.. dil nhi ker raha ha… acha lagta hai jab tumhara phone ata hai… us waqt tumahin suna

Mayank: acha tu mein FM hoon han…

Nupur: kasa chal raha hai wah..

Mayank: buhat acha.. people are liking the designs… place humari ksiamt k abhi festive season hai… tu sab interest lay rahy hain.. they way its going I hoping the stock won't last for a month more..

Nupur: a month… matlab tu bulkily akhir mein aao gay

Mayank: nhi nupur… khosih ker rah hoon us se pehly hi ajao.. kuch baat hai tu batao mein abhi ajo… itni pershan kyun..

Nupur: pershan nhi hoon.. bus akela lag raha hai

Mayank: hey kya hua meri jaan ko… mein hoon na tumhary pass.. mein ajata hoon waha.. ek do din k liyan hi sahi… mein kal hi dekhta hoo

Nupur: NHI… koi zaroorat nhi hai bilawajah mein pasy karach kerny ki… ek mahiny ki tu baat hai…

Mayank: meri biwi pershan hai janab…

Nupur: mein thik hon baba… bus tumhari awaz sunti hoon tu dil kerta tum samny ho… tu itna bhi nhi bata sakti… tum se chopao

Mayank: oye… marr kaho gi agar kuch chupaya…. Ajeeb tu mjhy bhi lagta hai… aj tak khabi tumhary bighar asay nhi raha ….

Nupur: waha tum apana kyaal bhi nhi rekh rahy ho ga… kam bhi tu itna hoga…

Mayank: aray baba asa ni hai… kam hai tu bhook bhi tu zayda lagti hai janab…

Nupur: mayank kya humain abhi shares nhi chaiy hongy…

Mayank: sigh… aagr hotay tu aagy hum life aur achay se set kersakty thy… maagr nhi tu nah sahi…. Yaha se jo earn keray ga.. us se hi hum apni life yaha shoro kerlay gay… nai sriay se… mana utni lawaish nhi hogi jitney waha thi but..

Nupur: yahin humain hi baad mein aur struggle kerna paray ga

Mayank: tu kya hua..

Nupur: hmm.. acha aur baato kitna rah gay ahai

The talked with each other for sumtime and than he hanged up..the moment he said he will cum back she was feeling so good but than next moment she remember adhiraj.. if mayank came here and he got to know tht , he wont take a second and tell every one the plan and this will ruined there so much hard ships n work.. when he is with so much in pain, alone, hell of situation can still do anything for her… why not she can tolerate Adhiraj for mere few days.. it isn't tht difficult.. the only thing she has to do is to convince her parents tht she donot want to meet him, before her iddat is over…

The other thing that keep ringing in her head was the fact, without the shares they will have to strt from zero.. why they have to pay for all this… this all is there.. not her mother.. why mayank's ownership has to suffer… and moreover why the hell choti ami n papa has to face all… why they have to start all from zero…and that so at this stage of life.. noway.. can she figure out sutmhing ..think nupur think… u can make mayank a bit relief… cant u..

But for now, she has to ask her father about not allowing adhiraj to meet her…

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