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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i am new to this forum and i have been reading your os and i really liked it. but i have decided to write one.
Hope you all like it!

In the hall of modi family
Kokila: Ahem aaj office se jaldi aana.
Ahem: kyun mom
Kokila: Ahem aaj tej hain aur Gopi vahu ne tumhare liye vrat rakha hai. pichle vaar bhi gopi vahu ne vrat rakha tha lekin tumne usse phone karke mana kiya tha na issliye gopi vahu ne tumhare tasveer dekhkar aapna vrat todha tha lekin ahem aaj office se jaldi aana
Ahem is shocked
Ahem: mom gopi ne vrat rakha tha
Kokila: haan ahem
Ahem: aacha mom mein chaltra hoon. Jaishree krishna
Kokila: Jaishree krishna

In office
Ahem is thinking that gopi had fast for him last year and i thought that she broke the fast

It's nighttime ( 8:30 pm)
In gohem's room

Gopi is thinking that like last time ahem will get disturbed from his work and will get angry so she decide to break her fast by looking at the pic
She is about to drink water and then Ahem holds her hand. ( Background music starts)
Ahem: gopi iss baar tumhe tasveer dekne ki koi jarurat nahi hain. Main hoon na.
Gopi has tears in her eyes and is smiling.
Ahem feeds her the water and gopi drinks it.
Ahem: Goopi chalo niche khana khane keliye. aur muje bhi bhuk lage hain.
gopi: ahemji aapne aab tak khana nahi khaya.
Ahem(holding her hand)- Gopi jab mere patni ne khana nahi khaya to main kaise kha sakta hoon
Gopi: matlap aap ne pure din me khana nahi khaya.
Ahem nods and they are having eyelock moment.
Ahem: gopi maine bhi tumhare liye vrat rakha hain. Aagar tum aaise halat mein mere liye vrat rakh sakti ho toh main kyun nahi.
Gopi is almost crying and she is also happy
Gopi hugs Ahem and he also hugs her back.
Both have a cute moment with background music
Then, they both go downstairs
Gopi feeds Ahem and Ahem feeds Gopi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab Os hope to see more from you and Welcome to the Forum
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Welcome to the forum😛
NIce OS.. Keep posting and writing.. You have done great!! It was so good to see Ahem keep vrat for Gopi and also remember his past actions.

Lovely scenes👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum😊 Have fun asnd keep posting...
Lovely OS... well written👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum.

That was a lovely little scene that many are wishing comes true.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wel come to the froum 😃

lovely OS 😳 n well written 👏

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