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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
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Part 3


He pic up phone…hello…

MAAN kya he ye sab?ap ab tk office me he???hmne apse kahathana aj ap jaldi ghar ayiga?then…hm dekh rahe he…aj kal apko hamari bilkul bhi parwah nahi he…ap bs ape kam me khoye rehte he…

Again listening to khoye rehtehe made him thaught of that morning girl…he sigh not again…he cut her dadi…

UMM wo dadi me just nikl rahu …bye...saying so he cut the call…

Maan drive to KM…

When he enter the KM dadi is seating on coach…he sigh….lgtahe aj Dadi nahi manegi…

He goes to there…and seat next to her…resting on coach as he is hell tired…

DADI apne apni dawai li???….he asked..

MAAN JAB TK AAP HAMARI BAT NAHI MANENGE…HM DAWAI NAHI KHANEWALE SMJE AAP…said dadi sturbenly …

DADI not again…but dadi dosent pay any head to maan …then dejectedly he askd…Thik he bataiye kya kam he???

Aj apko xyz disk jana hoga hmne apke liye ek ldki dekhi he…ap unse jakr mil lijiye…

Dadi mene apse kitni bar kaha he muje kisi bhi ldkiko nahi dekhna…to fir ap bar bar wahi bat kyu kehte he???said maan frustedly…

Maan is bar hm apki nahi sune wale…hm kb tak is mansion me akele rahenge??ab hame bhi koi chahiye company denek liye…

To apko company chahiye isliye ap meri shadi krwana chahti he???thik he me apke liye ak caretaker appoint krta bs bat khtam shadi ki kya jarurt he??

Maan?????ap pagl he kya??yaha hm apko shadi keliye ldko dekhne bhej rahe he aur ap caretaker ki bat kar rahe he??

Bs ab bohot hogya…ya to aj ap us ldkise mil lenge wrna me dawai nahi khane wali…saying so dadi left to her room…

Maan stood there glaring ….then helplessly he ge behind dadi…

Dadi ye kya bachpana he???apko pata hena apka BP fir high hojayga…pls dawai khalijiye…

Hmne khana maan hame apse bat nahi krni ap jayiye yahase …waisebhi apko hamari parwah kaha he???wrna ap hamari bat nahi talte…

Thik he dadi me us ldkise milne jaunga…said maan finaly aggreing to dadis demand…

Dadi's happiness has no bound…but it's short live…with maan's next words…

Lekin final decision mera hoga…agr apko manjur he to bolo wrna me nahi jaraha…dadi new maan will definetly reject the girl but she cant do anything now atleast wo mane to sahi ldki dekhne…ye sochkr dadi man jati he…and she eat the tablets…

Me fresh hokr ata hu…saying so maan goes to his room…

After maan come to living room…dadi says that she has book a table on his and girls name in disk and the girl name is pari…maan noded and left to xyz disk…

Here geet and pinky reach disk…

Geet dekh me abhi bhi kehrahi hu chal waps chalet he…pinky said

Meto nahi jane wali aur tu dar mat pinky me huna…said geet confidently…

Usika to dar he…murmur pinky…

Kya kaha???asked geet narrowing her eyebrow…

Ahh kuch bhi ti nahi said pinky laughing nervously….

Dekh dekh wo SAMEERA hena…asked geet tp pinky very extingly…kitni stylish lagrahihena???ek dam model lag rahi he…haye….kitni soni lagrahihe wo…said geet dreamily…

Ha gee two sameera hi he…lekin tu cha lab yahase…

Pagl he kya…muje use njdik se dekhna he…ye ameer log andr kya krte he wo dekhnahe...chal na andr chalet he…

Pagl hogayi he kya???ham ander kaise ja skte he???...hamare pas nato paise he and dekha nahi ke yara seat reserve he….

Tu fikr mat kar bas chal mere sath….and geet goes behind smeera's group…there gurd stop her…and said only mention person r allowed…geet said ha to hamari seat reserved hena…gurd asked her name…geet then look at list and said ye dekho ye….ye mera nam he…showing her some random name…gurd look at her then to register…

Aise kya dekhrahr ho bolana merahi naam he…lets go pinky…saying so she enter the disk attitudely…

In the disk one gurd show her the seat which is reservd…

Geet tune ye kya kiya…agr jiski seat he wo agyi to…

Chill pinky bs is gurd ko yahase janede den dekh hm yaha se uth jayeng and kisiko patabhi nahi chalega…tu waha dekh sab kaise nach rahe he…chal nah m bhi jate he…

Geet tu yahi ruk…dekh wo gurd abhi bhi yahi dekh raha he…pehle me jati hut u badme dhire se ana thik he…saying so pinky left to dancfloor…and geet wait for gurd to go from there so she can also will enjoy…she is feeling greet …theis is first time she is coming here…the atmosphere here is extremely different compare to the environment in which she bourn and brout up…everything is looking alien to her still she is liking everything about it…

Here SAM is seating with Rahul one of very big business man…she is as usual doing her showoff…SAMEERA is handeling missindia consert….the model which she choose get crown automatikaly…and it's a known thing to everyone that the person choose by sam will become next Ms.India…so every model is die to plese sameera….here she is praising that how she is queen of fashion worid…how she make anyone means anyone ms.india…and all…

Rahul just with her because he want to flirt with her…

Maan reach xyz disk as said by dadima…gurd show him his seat table…there he look and see that someone is already waiting for him…he aprroch the lady with determination that he will outright rject her and will said u go ur way I will go my way …he will not at any cost gona marry anyone like that…

As he reach table …he said hii….

The girl get scared by sudden voide and she in jerk stand making the water jug to fall…waiter look at her…she look fearingly at him and started her blabbering…I'm sorry…wo mene janbujke nahinkiya…meto busy thi apni friend ko dekhnem aur achank inohe muje awaj lagayi and me drke khadi hogayi to mera hat galtise jug ko lag gaya…and wo hir gaya isme meri koi glti nahi…sachii???she said pinching her throught…like baby…

Waiter look wierdky at her…while maan just get shock looking at her he thought he is again haluctingher…when waiter said something he come out of shock and look at girl …and he is conferm that she is indeed here infront of him….he said waiter to cleen it…and keep on looking at girl intensely…girl look nervously at him…and then she start to go from there…

That's when maan get that she is going ..he called her…RUKO…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KasiKasi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4
so here is next part..sorry for late update ...i'm hell busy right now

The girl get scared by sudden voide and she in jerk stand making the water jug to fall'waiter look at her'she look fearingly at him and started her blabbering'I'm sorry'wo mene janbujke nahinkiya'meto busy thi apni friend ko dekhnem aur achank inohe muje awaj lagayi and me drke khadi hogayi to mera hat galtise jug ko lag gaya'and wo hir gaya isme meri koi glti nahi'sachii???she said pinching her throught'like baby'

Waiter look wierdky at her'while maan just get shock looking at her he thought he is again haluctingher'when waiter said something he come out of shock and look at girl 'and he is conferm that she is indeed here infront of him'.he said waiter to cleen it'and keep on looking at girl intensely'girl look nervously at him'and then she start to go from there'

That's when maan get that she is going ..he called her'RUKO'

He is unable to keep her out of her thought throught day'just one meeting and he is on verg of becoming mad'he hallicnt her almost all place'he try to touch her everytime and she will then become vanish in thin air'now when he finaly forund her he thought like man in desert got water'his soule is thrust for her 'for her just one look'

And now when he found her she is again going away from him'no that cant be possible'so he asked her imiditealy'RUKO'

Geet become nervous'.yense ..why this man stops her'may be he regognise her 'and she turn fearing she what coming next'

He again look at her and got lost in her'but then quickly come out of his dreanand'and asked her'tum???maan thought what is she doing here?and on this table??it meabs the girl which dadi is talking about is HER'he started dancing in joy mentally'but he want to comferm first'

Geet got scared she thought what to say and then said ..ji ha me to???...

Oh god her voice its like song yo his ear'he want to listen it again and again.. But he compose himself and asked..Tum yaha ..i mean is table pe???ye tumhara reservation he???asked maan to her..

Geet thought may be he dosent know it'and he is by mistake come to this table'again she come to herself and confidently said'Yes this table is reserved for me'

Maan is top of the moon'maan control yourself he scolded mentally to himself'then said'

Hi'Maan and u must be Pari'right???dadima set our meeting here'

Geet loked shoked'she never thoght he is also hav same table book and forget this she don't know any pari'now she started cursing herself for her stupidity for not seeing the register properly'now what shouid she do???comon geet think think'ab kya karu??she look at pinky who was enjoying herself at danceflore..and here she struck with don't know with whome??now what will she do??

Please sit said maan looking at her face'

Now there is complete sceilence'waiseto geet is complete chatterbox but now she don't know what to say?

And maan he never in talk so much 'but now he first he don't like this much scilence'

So to tum kya karti ho??asked maan'trying to start conversation he'so much wanted to here her sweet voice again'its so melodious he thought..she is just angel'and as he thought look like mermaid..

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Edited by sanam1234u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update

Lovely👏

Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyes sorry for late...but kya karru...i have to complete project then exams ,assignments,presentations...so heel busy in it...though i wisit here but not get to much time to update...here is next part...enjoy it...

Part 5


Please sit said maan looking at her face'

Now there is complete sceilence'waiseto geet is complete chatterbox but now she don't know what to say?

And maan he never in talk so much 'but now he first he don't like this much scilence'

So to tum kya karti ho??asked maan'trying to start conversation he'so much wanted to here her sweet voice again'its so melodious he thought..she is just angel'and as he thought look like mermaid..

Geet is now cursing pinky …me yaha fas gayi hu aur waha madam maje loot rahi he…thought geet…ab kya karu…soch geet…kuch to soch…maan saw her scilence and lost in her thought…and cough to gain her attention…with sound geet come back to reality…and gave him a nervous smile…

So to tum kya krti ho??again maan asked her…

Timepass…geet blurted out…b ut then imidiately held her mouth with her palm…nodding her head vigorously…chiding herself mentally for such big mouth…Jalli…thodi der chup nahi reh skti kya jarurt the muh kholneki…dekhana sab bigad diya …ab kya karu babaji??said looking upword…pouting her lips…

What????me smja nahi???asked maan confusingly…

Ji w..wo mera matlb he…wow o…chodiyena in bato ko…dekho wahap sab kitna enjoy kar rahe he …chaliye na hmbhi chalet he…dancfloor pe…said geet diverting topic and waisebhi she desperitly want to go danc floor…

kya fark padtahe??waisebhi me to usko ajbad mile wali nahi …to kaheka dar...thinking geet grine to herself..wah geet tu to badi smart nikli…tera to jawab nahi…kitni as anise tune rasta nikal liya…jiti re puttar…

wo me dance nahi krta…said maan…

Kya???ap dance nahi krte???per kyu???then she thought bechare ko nachna nahi ata hoga to shrma raha he…and said…isme kya he ab sbko thoduna danc krna ata he..chalona chlte he please please…making cute faces..

But maan denied …geet twisting her lips said chadoo.fir me ja rahi hu…muje to dance krna he…and goes to dance floor..

She was enjoying and laughing…suddenly all light wents of…there is man in center surrounded by girl and light feel on him…

Geet is looking curiosly there ke waha kon he…when her eyes fell on maan she blink several times he is lookinh so hot….and is dancing like anything…

Song is its time to disko…

Whle dancing maan come to geet …and forword his hand…geet also started with him... maan is dancing like professional where as sadi geet who initially dancing like in Barat…but when she come in maans arm she look into his eyes and just lost in him…her legs automatically followed him..and both lost in oneanother…burning the dance floor…

Loude hand of applause bring them back to reality…and geet got embrass to lost like that…where as maan is on cloude nine having his mishti so close to him…when geet is leaving dancfloor she in hurry dash with waiter causing to break the glases which waiter carrying with him…to serv the other…she got scare with this blunder…and started her blabbering…dekhiye mije maf krdijiye …wow o gltise me apse takrageyi…I m sorry…but waiter start yelling at her…just then maan come there…

Its ok hojata he…give a look to waiter and waiter rum from there ..ofcourse who will not known to MSK and his anger he run from there and take geet with him to table…geet just keep looking at him…lost…

Here when geet was dancing like creasy at starting…sam iswith rahul…praising herself…that's when rahul saw geet…and he gave an wikid smile…and turn to sam…to sam tum jise chaho use ms.India bana skti ho right???asked rahul…smirking …Ofcourse…Sameera jise chahe use banasakti he…sameera agr dhul ko bhi chule to wo gold banjata he smje tum …afterall its sameera …

Thik he me ye tabhi manuga jab tum mere chise kiye huye ldkiko bdlkar dikhao…BET????

Sam saw him and said smirkingly….manjor he….

Then rahul show her a girl…see her…in center on dansefloor…who is dancing like mad…dekha use…that girl dosent have F of fashion in her…she is complete looking out of place…no one could imagin in there wildest drrem of her being a model …

Sam thought for a while…

Kyu kya hua dar gayi???asked rahul smirking to sameera…

BET…said sameera confidently…u will watch this year that girl will be ms.india…and ye mera wada raha…saying so she left…

Precap:Guess who is girl?????


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Posted: 12 years ago
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update sameera rahul bet i think girl is geet



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