FF story after viraman wedding updated p4 on pg5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys..my story starts wid virat bringing back jeevika to d wedding..bt der z lot of differences from original story..so enjoy reading..:)

Part 1..

Virat entered d wedding venue wid jeevika..all r relieved seeing her..they all go to jeevika wid smile on der face except 2 people..viren n manvi..viren n manvi are standing still..they r nt moving..actually they r shocked bcoz of jeevika's reason behind leaving house..

Viren POV:

Q jeevika!?? Q?? Q kia aise tumne?? Hum dono ne mil ke decide kia tha na ki hum manvi k lie, virat k lie aur iss ghar ke khushi ke lie hammare bacche ko abort karwayenge..aur aaj sab kush b the..spcly manvi n virat..tho aaj tumne aise q kia?? Sabko aise saja q dia tumne?? Spcly ,manvi ko?? Uspe ab kya beetegi pata b hai tume?? Kabhi wo kush nai reh payegi ye soch ke ki uske waje se tum apne bacche ko abort karke guilty feel kar rahi ho aaj..khud ko saja dene chali thi ye jaan ke kya wo khush rehpayegi ab..aur jeevika maine kya bigada tha?? Tum 1 msg chod ke chali gayi muje chod ke?? Maine toh tumhare har dhuk dard me sath dia tha na?? Kis baat ki saja dene chali thi tum muje??


Manvi POV:

Di aaj aap mere waja se khud ko jeeju se, apne parivar se dur karne chali thi?? Di aapko guilty feel horaha hai apne abortion pe?? Maine kaha tha na di ke aap apna baccha abort nai karenge..fir q kia di?? Ab bura lag raha hai na aapko?? Ye sab meri wajah se hua na di?? Marne deti na di muje ..q bachaya aapne..??ye din dekhne ke lie?? Ye dekne ke lie ki di ne mere waje se apne baccha hi nahi, apne ghar parvivar ko hi chod ne chali thi..apne married life secrifice karne chali thi?? Q di?? Aapko kya lagta hai aapke ye quilt feeling mujpe koi affect nai karega?? Meri waje se aap aaj itna guilty feel kar rahe ho..meri waje se aap kud ko saja dene chale the..kya ye mujpe asar nai karega di??q di?? Q bachaya aap ne?? Muje marne dete na di.. Atlst ye din tho nai dekna padta muje..

Dats it for now..hope u guys like it..i know it z totaly sad part bt nxt part vl b d balanced 1..promise.. n dnt wrry viraman wedding vl defntly takes place..no more rona dona in virman life..bt wid sm twists in sisters relationshp..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome concept
Continue soon and do pm me!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept, plz pm me wn u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...cont soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alicemath

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thanx for d comment..vl update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting. .cont soon n pm me. .hav sent u buddy req
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u guys for d lovely comments..thot of thanking u guys personaly bt itz taking lot of time since i am updating thru my cell..so thanking u all here commonly..thank u :)..

Part 2

Jeevika after asking sry to evry1, comes to viren..

J: viren ji plz muje maaf kardijie..muje laga tha me jo kar rahi hu wahi mere lie sahi punishment hai bt virat ne muje realize karwaya ki me kitni badi galti karne ja rahi thi..viren ji(b4 jeevika cud continue, viren inturrepted her)

Viren: dats ok jeevika i can understand..he says to himself 'jeevika maine tume itni asaani se islie maaf kia q ki me nai chahta ki manvi aur b hurt ho..agar me tume maaf nai karta toh wo iski jimmedar b kud hi hai samjagi..already tumne usse bht bada shock dia hai'

J: thank u viren ji..den she goes to manvi..who z standing wid a blank face bt wid teary eyes..n hugs her..says' mannu muje maaf karde..tumari itni kushi k din pe maine ruladia tume'

M: slowly free herself n says its ok..den goes near to virat n wispers 'partner i cant handle it anymore plz can v carry on wid our wedding..so dat i can spend sm time wid u to clear my confusion'

Virat understud her state of mind n wispers back : dnt wry everythng vl b fine..u r nt d reason for anythng happened today..

Manvi holds his hand n give him fake smile..

Virat POV:

Partner i knw tum yahi soch rahi hogi ki tumhare di tume bachane ke lie apna baccha abort karke aaj guilty feel kar rahi hai..bt aisi bat nai hai manvi.. Socho unhone sabke reaction kya hoga ye jante hue b apna bacha abort kia tha n ye koi asaan kaam nahi hai kisi b ladki ke lie..unhe bas tum chahie manvi n aaj ghar chod k gaye the to b tumhari kushi k lie..kud ko punish karne chale the taki sab tume kuch na kahe..wo tume bachane k lie guilty nai hai partner..unhe bas lagta hai ki sab unpe gussa hai islie aise kadam uthaye the,,dnt wry partner sb teek hoga..

Dadaji tells every1 to contiue wid d marriage rituals..

Manvi thinks 'aaj nai tutungi me..mere lie na sahi virat k lie tho muje baki ke sare rituals kushi kushi karni hogi..he deserves it'

Jeevika POV:

I know virenji n mannu..aap dono ne abhi tak muje maaf nai kia hai..aap dono bahot hurt hue ho mere iss harqat ke waje se..bt me sab teek kardungi bahot jald hi..aap dono ko manalungi kisi b halat me..chache muje kuch b karna pade uske lie..

Den further rituals starts 1ce again wid full on masti..manvi acts as if nothing has happened bt avoids talking to jeevika as much as possible..n wenevr jeevika says smthng, manvi gave her to d point ans without any eye contact..only virat n viren observing this..every1 else r busy in der masti mood..

It was bidai tym, manvi cries hugging each of d chaudary family member except jeevika..after dat dey reaches vadera mension..n ther also all other rituals goes very smoothly wid lot of leg pulling sessions of manvi n virat..

Now it is a time for virman suhagraat..kadambari chachi n jeevika took manvi to virats room which is decorated wid white roses except bed, which is decorated wid more of red rose petals dan white rose petals...bt d combination nf red n white rose petals was looking unique..they makes manvi to sit at center of the bed wid d dupatta covering her face..n leaves frm der..so dat virat can enter his room..

to b continued..actually i want to write virman 1st nyt story in 1 seperate part..vl continue soon..my b widin few mins..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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So Manvi is still angry at Jeevika but she is acting happy for Virat's sake???!!
Thats so sweet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im sorry but i canr understand hindi ...it would be nice from you if you write it in english pleaseee :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana123

So Manvi is still angry at Jeevika but she is acting happy for Virat's sake???!!

Thats so sweet...




she is not angry but she has some other tensed feelings..i vl reveal in next part..n thanx for d comment :)

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