Akelapan – A Prem Mukti fan-fic

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Akalapan…dard ka dustra shabd.

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Mukti Deshmuk:

A girl who was born in the wrong side of life…for no crime of hers. A cirme of her parents that she had to pay for…the brand of 'najais' culng to her every breath. Something she hated them for though she had never seen her mother in her entire life. She adored and addressed Prerna as chotima only for one reason. She did not want her mother's disgust go on this wonderfull lady – that much she hated her mother. Her father, well he was a man who she hated the most, Pravine Sasodiya. A politician who made her mother have her, he loved and wanted her but she refused him. She wen't with her mother name only for one reason. Her Nana, her nana who loved her, it was his name so it was her name.

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Prerna Bajaj:

The only woman any one could say who knew Mukti well. Enough to see though her act that is…she was the one who loved and cared for her like her own children. Born in a middle class married into high society (twice) and a wonderful mother to her children.

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Rishab Bajaj

Prerna's husband and a father figure to Mukti. He was the only man who could see though Mukti's masks. He was a great business man and lived a happy life. Wife, kids and great friends…

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Anurag Basu

Similar to Bajaj and a great friend. Both shared a great relationship, especially anything that concerned their children Prem and Snaha. They shared a close relationship with business and outside as well.

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Sampatha Basu

Sam, Anurag's wife and shared a close relationship with everyone. There is nothing much to say about her.

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Sharath Guptha

A great friend of Mukti, and also a great pest. He loved to take care of her but she never let him. He was married to Snaha and loved her a lot but this did not stop him from flirting with Mukti when she was not around. He was orphaned right after his collage days and began his business, with Snaha and latter married her.

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Snaha Guptha

A great friend of Mukti. More like a sister, they had a pleasant relationship and Snaha was a pillar of strength for everyone. A very affectionate girl and always thought fate never existed. She went out and got things done, and a go getter in everything.

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Prem Sharma

He is the cool dude type but he has never really been serious in his life. He too like his sister is a go getter and works hard on what ever he does. He parties harder. Though he too is illegitimate it never affected his life, mainly because he had been rescued from Apo*na recently and tried to change himself the way his mother wanted. The effort was still on, to an extent…he was hooked on to two things. Bear and him mom's cooking, he loved them and hogged them. Kind of a joker but never harsh.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds cool...continue soon.. 😉
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wow sounds great!cant wait for the first part!
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sounds wikid!! continue soon 😉
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wow lay-out done very well! sounds really good!! continue dear......
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very good intro...do carry on soon 👏 👏
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A clear sky showed a cool office with modern furniture and bright colours in a well lit office room. In the seat we can see Snaha Guptha running her head though her hair reading a file. She was admirable, and attractive something few women had together. A simple black jacket and trousers with a white shirt, formal and neat. The way she enjoyed work was something everyone were awed by, she was an passionate and hard working. Her husband walked in, he was a man who turned many a women's head. Good looks and the attitude to go with it, he was a great dresser. That was for sure, any one could say looking at his dress, a brown trousers and jacket with a light brown shirt. Only one word could describe him, stunning. A moment lingered as he looked at his wife. Finally he asked, "Ready or would you take some more time?"

"No I am starving." She closes the file, "Let's go…" their hands link lovingly as they step out of the office to catch a bite of food. They walked down the street, the sun was not blazing but it was pleasant all the way to the car, were they took his. They drive down to their favourite restaurant was a pleasant one, they sat out like usual it was nice to see people run around. The waiter stood in front of them, "Cheese pasta with an Irish coffee for my wife."

"French coffee with spaghetti for my husband." Snaha ordered. The waiter smiled at their love, and walked away. "Sharath you remember mama wanted us home today for dinner?"

"Yes…I miss her cooking, besides I hope Prem is good, I am looking forward to meet him." He said as they got their lunch. Both of them dug into it hungrily…a hard days work was over and more was due. They ate chatting away about office, life in general and the possible couples around the place. Finally they were about to leave when suddenly some one called them out, "Snaha, Sharath." They turned around to find Anurag standing in front of them, "Papa aap yaha?"

"Vo Snaha mai bas ek client meeting par gaya tha." He answered. "So…lunch ka lia aya the?"

"Just done uncle." Sharath replied with a warm smile. "Though I really don't feel like going to office now."

"Sharath we have to, there is no not going there." Snaha scolded him and he quietly accepted it.

"Don't let me hold you up, go to you're office." Anurag and the 'kids' parted ways. Anurag goes and has his luch in a different restaurent alone, "A salad would do thanks. Also throw in a coke please." Anurag looked at the flower lady and smiled to himself, Sam would love those white flowers. The lucnch was quiet and he missed her contius chatering and non-stop bossing over of Sam. Finally he walked up and got the flowers and left to meet his wife, happy today's work was over. Slowly he crept up to her and hugged her from the back, "A.B…they are beautyfull." She turned around and hugged him happily. Though she was quiet old her body presented a liveliness and natural beauty, something that came out of her husbands love.

"I knew you would love them." He hugged her back. Just then some one coffed at the door, "Do the two of you mind comeing down there is a puja." It was Mohini…she did make mistakes in the past but she was happy for her son now. He was having a wonderfull life…Sam was a wonderfull bahu more like a beti. Sam and Anurag agreed and came dow, the large idol of ganpathi baba stood and everyone prayed happily, slowly Snaha and Sharath did the puja. They were appropriately dressed and looked cute as a couple. Shravan and Tanisha and then Bajaj and Prerna after that Anurag and Sam. Suddenly Kaki asks, "Ara Prem kaha hai?"

"Prem…maina usa kaha tha ki vo ajaya…lakin." Prerna began but got inturupted by a…

"Lakin kya Mother India." it was Prem. Looking hot in a simple gray kurtha he smiled at everyone. A man with an attitue, despite the fact that he never really meant it. He too participated half hartedly in the puja. Afraid of the danda clearly. Then he went to Snaha and complimented her on the sari and spoke on, "Janha ho sister maina aaj tumhara lia pray kiy."

Snaha rolled her eyes… "I know I know…now tell me something."

"What is it?" he asked.

"There is a fashion shoot this week from our fashion house. We are launching a new set of saris and Indian weare…I would be very bussy with it and so would Sharath. Can you just check on the ashram once in a while?"

"Sure…done Snaha." Prem agreed quickly.

"Thanks and hay do you want to come and see the faction shoot?" Snarath asked.

"I will…" Prem assured him. Prem ashram the one place Prem loved to go, play with children and be amongs them. Especially the orpan ones there was a love in their Prem baiya he felt.

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its great plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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soundzz lyke an IDEAL familyy...continuee 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its great!!
plz cont soon!
i loved it...prem seems so nice in this fanfic!

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