OS- In His Arms (Part 3 on pg. 5)

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Sabina_Ansari

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww.. Tht was so good, finally arjun confessed...
Please write the new os, wud love to read...

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dear Nisha,

My compliments to you again for a very neatly done ending - it is sweet and heart-warming, and yet not at all mushy. I had earlier remarked on your talent for portraying despair; now I see that you can describe the opposite as well, and script a perfect happy ending!

As for the idea that you are floating for another OS or FF, while you would of course do what you would like, since you have sought our advice, mine would be against it. An expectant mother's first duty is to her unborn child, and Riya could not go on a potentially physically strenuous and/or risky mission and not risk the baby's well being. It is a nice idea, but I feel that it would not be responsible on Riya's part of try any such thing.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

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..Naina..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Aww that was such a well written story! Total pleasure to read.

Cheers!
Naina

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Dear Nisha,

My compliments to you again for a very neatly done ending - it is sweet and heart-warming, and yet not at all mushy. I had earlier remarked on your talent for portraying despair; now I see that you can describe the opposite as well, and script a perfect happy ending!

As for the idea that you are floating for another OS or FF, while you would of course do what you would like, since you have sought our advice, mine would be against it. An expectant mother's first duty is to her unborn child, and Riya could not go on a potentially physically strenuous and/or risky mission and not risk the baby's well being. It is a nice idea, but I feel that it would not be responsible on Riya's part of try any such thing.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Oops I already wrote it and uploaded it as well. If you have time read it and let me know if it was extremely reckless. I tried to make it sound quite reasonable.

Oh and thanks for all the delightful comments. They were a delight to read. 😃 😛 😳

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 12 years ago