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PART 32
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Months passed this way'maneets bond was going thicker n their love to family also was growing..noone suspected maneets relation..all were happy thinking they have moved on with their partners n have accepted each other'but,who knows it was their understanding about each other ..both never argued for anything..both were supportive with each other..cared for each other..when maan was clear about his feelings, only geet was confused..she thought love can never come again in life'n her first love was guru n she cant shower the same to maan' n the relation she share with maan was only friendship..n she cares for him as friend n father of jaanvi'never she knew,that she has fallen

jaanu is 2 n half yrs..n was fluent to talk n understand things'she loved to be pampered by others..n she was the apple of all family members..also in kc..she was too cute chubby n gudlooking with naughty twinkles in her eyes..who ever the person see her will fall in love with the cutie'she loves to make all run around her..never sits in one place..if its mansion or office..she runs from one room to other'cabin to cabin..n no one stopped her..she was bossy like maan but sweet n friendly like geeet'sometimes maan will think,if jaanu had any qualities of dd than her look'she is totally gone with geets personality..geet now teaches her rhymes n alphabets..n she was quick learner'

It was a Sunday evening...

Maneet Vicky with dadi n jaanu were relaxing in garden n chatting'geet was preparing coffee for all..

Adi,pinky with priya came there'

Seeing priya jaanu went with her.to play...

Maan looked pinky who was blushing..n adi was stammering more..

Maan:if u both have finished ur blushing..can u say the reason of it..

Pinky:wo..wo..dadi..

Adi:wo k..k..k..kya..h..ha..ina'

Vicky:jij..stop stammering n say..

Dadi:y u both are searching for words.common say..

Pinky sat next to dadi..n hold her hands..

Pinky:da..di..us din..aapne..kahana

Dadi:kab..hum tho roz kuch bathein karthei hein..what u r saying..

Pinky:wo jaanvi ki birthday par..

She blushed again..

Geet saw pinky s hands holding her stomach care fully..when she sat also she was holding it..

Geet took a spoon full of sugar..

Dadi,open ur mouth..

Dadi opened n she fed the sugar

Dadi:geet beta..y?

Geet:pinky maa banne wali hain..aap phirse dadi banne wali hain..

Maan ,Vicky n dadi was so happy..

Dadi:is it so pinky..

Pinky shied..nodding yes'

Dadi kissed her forehead..

God bless u both beta..

Maan:did u go for checkup..what dr.said..

They started to talk about pinky'n her baby'

Then geet ordered pinky n adi to stay with them as pinky alone cant take care of priya n herself..she needs care'n they moved to mansion after much pressure'priya started to go for school ..so it was easy for pinky to have rest..

Geet was over protective to pinky..she took care of her like her own sister..pinky was overwhelmed with the love n care she got from geet'geet made sure pinky has healthy food in time..n her medicines..

Geet was having fear inside her..her past came infront..she remembered the accident n how she lost her baby n guru..she so much want to think positive..to assure herself that it doesn't happens to all'but she feared..n she prayed to god for pinky n baby's safety..she never said her fear to anyone'

..

Maan was looking at some file as he was not sleepy..geet was making jaanvi sleep by feeding her..

Maan has seen her scared face n expected her to open up to him'geet slowly drifted to sleep.. maan finished his work n kissed them both n slept..it was early morning,she had a bad dream..like a baby doll broke down..her scream made maan ... jaanu 2 woke up bcoz her feed was suddenly stopped'geet was sweating in that a/c too...maan came to geets side..

Maan:geet did u have bad dream..

geet leaned on him for support n took his hands in hers..she consoled jaanvi n made her sleep again keeping her buds in her mouth..jaanvi again slept as she got what she want.

Maan again asked her geet

maan:y u screamed..im seeing u from last few days..u look normal outside..but something is disturbing u..she kept her head on maans chest..it was something new to him..tears ran down her cheeks...

Geet:yes maan..im scared..

Maan placed his hand on her back..cocooning her n jaanvi in his embrace..

Maan:scared..for what?

Geet:wo..erm..idk how to say..im scared for pinky n her baby..weird things coming to my mind..something inside me is saying something bad is going to happen to her or baby..my past comes to infront of me..

Maan now understood her position..

He slowly patted her back..

Maan:geet..its ur fear..what u went thru is making u think negatively..see she is with u only 24x7..u take care of her..till now pinky n baby or fine..now she is 5 months..after a month I will strictly say her not to come to office also..n u also stay home..nothing will happen to her..think positively geet..everything will be fine..he kissed her hair..n she settled comfortably over him..

Geet:maan,its only my imaginations na..nothing will happen to pinky n child na..

Maan:nothing will happen..u sleep'

he placed a kiss on her forehead..both were unknown what they were doing with each other..she is finding solace in his arms n he is comforting her by small pecks...

It was a week end..morning..

Maan came from his gym sweaty..to his room'

Geet was correcting the spread..she was fresh like a flower after bath..her freed hair flowed in air..making maan lost in geets beauty..here geet was drooling maan'his six packs visible thru his vest..n his wet form of sweat..she felt butterflies in stomach'there was silence in the room..both their eyes were locked with each other..it broke by the call of jaanu..

Jaanu:mama,papa'dadi calling u both.

She spoke in her babyish language..

Geet looked away from maan..maan smirked seeing his effect on him..

Maan:jaanu baby,papa will take a shower n come..mama will come with u..

He moved to washroom..

Geet:jaanu,5 minutes baby..mama will finish this work n come..u go n say to dadi..n play with ur priya di

Jaanu:ok mama..

She ran taking her Barbie doll with her'

Geet was taking maans clothes to change'she saw him moving without taking his changing clothes..

Maan freshed up n came out thinking geet must have gone'he was wrapped only in his towel around his waist..his upper was bare..

Geet was tying up her hair..her hands stopped in mid way seeing his image their..maan was unaware of her presence..he roamed freely inside the room..he saw the clothes on bed n smiled thinking geet has kept..he was about to remove his towel when geet shrilled in horror closing her eyes..till now she was gapping at him now she felt shy n embarrassed ..more was maan..he took the dress n rushed to washroom n closed the door with thud..

Geet viewed the room with her one eyes open between her fingers..she smiled n blushed at the thought of his look..she moved from room not wanting 2 embarrass him more..but she can hear her heart beat that was beating fast..same was maan..he changed quickly n came down..

Both did not meet their eyes after that..feeling shy..she came down n sat with dadi n others n had her morning coffee..she then left to kitchen'

Whenever geet was free she will make food..n she made favourites of all..specially for pinky..atlast she was making puri's..nakul was busy cutting vegetables 'geet was lost in thoughts of maan n smiling herself..the puri was burning inside oil'she heard a loud cry of jaanvi..

Mamaaa'..

Geet panicked n turned fast to see why jaanu screamed..it was a bad turn that the hot oil spilled on her hands n legs'now she screamed in pain'

aaahhh

nakul acted fast n poured cold water'by the time maan n others also came there..all were looking geets burnt hands..whereas geet was looking jaanvi..who fell down bcoz of running..n she did not hurt as she fall on carpet'she screamed only in fear'now she was crying seeing her mothers hand..who was flinching in pain when maan applied burnol over it..priya was also crying seeing geets hands..

pinky:dyan kahan hai tumhara..geet..

Maan blow air on geets hand..jaanvi also did same..maan was worried looking geets hands burnt..her white skin turning blue'

n he started to taunt geet..

Maan:who asked u to work in kitchen..when u cant work carefully..from now u will not enter here..samji.. see what happened now..it must be burning na'.i always say, u n ur daughter are chalti phirti disasters..whenever u work u make something fall'or broke' Jaanvi looked maan with frown like she understood what maan said..

Jaanvi:papa..me gud girl..mama is beshhht'she said within hiccups..she was in pain seeing her mama in pain..

Maan said sarcastically:haan haan jaantha hoon..how gud u both maa beti are..

Geet looked at him with cute frown..maan could only fall for that puppy face..

Maan checked her legs..as she was wearing sari her dress saved her n only oil has sprinkled on legs n the leg was not much burnt like her hands..'.

Vicky has already called the dr'

Geet hugged jaanvi n priya n either sides without touching by hands n consoled her..she tried to hide her pain..

Geet:beta..mama ko kuch nehi hua..see..im fine..

Jaanvi:mama..cried..

Geet:no baby..i just tried to imitate u..like u cried..

Jaanvi was lil convinced..

Jaanvi:sachi mama..

Geet:haan beta..

Dadi asked pinky to take kids to her room..pinky took both jaanvi n priya,so that they may not get scared..

Dadi:maan take her to ur room'

Geet tried to walk..again screamed in pain..thats when she lifted her foot n saw it also burnt'

Maan lifted geet immediately n moved to their room'

Dr.came n checked geets wounds..she prescribed medicines..n ointment to apply..

Maan:how much days it will take time to heal dr..

Dr:one week..if she is careful..she must not do any work..n keep her 24x 7 in a/c so the burning sensation will not be there..

Maan:ji dr..

Dr.went away saying she will come to check her after two days..

Maan took her hands in his..

Maan:is it burning geet..

His eyes showed he was in immense pain than her..

Geet:now feeling better maan its burning only a little.

She can see his tears falling on her hands..he gently pecked there..n geet closed her eyes in pain n the sensation he gave to her..

Geets dress were fully oil..she stood up n tried to move..

Maan:what are u doing geet?

Geet:maan,I want to bath n change..my dress is sticky..

Maan:u sit..i will take ur dress first n prepare ur tub..

After preparing her tub he came to her n lifted her in arms n moved to washroom'n placed her on stool..now it striked both..how she will remove clothes,take bath n change'

He came to her..

Geet:I will call someone to help u..

Geet:no maan..

Maan:why geet?

Geet looked here n there..

Geet:wo..all are thinking we are happy..i..i..mean'as couples..we have moved on'but,if u call ..they will get suspicious..we know we married only for jaanvi..but we cant say them..specially dadi'.

Maan:dadi..she know about us..

Geet:it was at starting..she was saying to her friend..that she is so happy that we have moved on..her worry about us has lessened ..i don't want to break her happiness..

Maan looked at geet..now there is noway..

Maan:Geet,u trust me right..

She nodded yes..

Then shall I help u..

Geet was shocked..then thinking about family,she cant say no..they cant explain her..n she trusted maan more than herself..they are staying in same room,n he never looked at her lustfully..he never tried to take his right..though she is her wife'

She nodded yes..

Maan looked at her eyes for confirmation..n his hands went to her pin n removed it'her saree slipped to her arms giving him the view of her beauty..the shyness overpowered her n crossed herself with hands'maan went out immediately n came back with his tie..he blindfolded his eyes with it n started to undress her.geet looked at him admiringly..how much he understands her unsaid words..

.first time when he changed her she was not in senses..but now,his hands were making her weak..her body was burning in desire..same was maan..her soft skin n her nearness was affecting him badly..but he don't want to break her trust..the most hard task for him was removing her inners..both were losing themselves..he took a towel n wrapped her in it ..he can hear her gasp..he opened his blindfold. N saw her turned fully red...now he scooped her n placed her on tub.very carefully without soaking her hands n legs.maan couldn't take his eyes off from her bare shoulders n silky white legs..when he was bathing her moving with his hands he was aroused so much..he controlled himself n ..he showered her with baby pipe..both were looking at each other'an unconditional love but both did not express'after bath he again scopped her n placed her on stool..he blind folded again n wiped her..n again wrapped her in a dry towel'

Adi n Vicky who came to check geet heared sounds from washroom'they both smiled n went away from there,thinking them to give space..

Maan took her inners n was feeling extremely shy..how to wear her this..geet as reading his mind..

Geet:wo erm..maan..no ..ne..ed..i can ad..ju..st ..

Maan sighed n took her.night dress n tried to wear her..she hissed in pain,when her hands touched the sleeves..

Maan removed the blind fold immediately..n took her hands n blowed air on it..

Maan:I did not see it'im sry geet..im sry..does it hurt..

He asked in panic..

Geet:its ok maan..its the sleeves which came in contact there..

Maan looked at her dress..

Maan:just a minute..

He went out with dress n came inside'.now he inserted her nightdress thru her head n geet saw her sleeves were cut off..so it was easy for her to wear without pain'he looked at her eyes n his hands went on her back n pulled the towel..he corrected her dress without breaking the eye contact'now she was fully dressed..maan placed her on bed..

Geet:maan.thanks..

Maan:im ur husband geet..n its my duty to look after u..

Maan:I will get something for u to eat..

Geet:maan..

Maan:yes..

Geet:bindi..

He did..

Geet:maan

Maan:hmm

Geet:sindoor

He applied on her forehead..

Geet:maan.

Maan:now what..

Geet:pls cover me with duvet..

Maan can understand her situation..her nervousness without inners..he covered her..

Maan:that's all na

Geet:ya..but

Maan:what..

Geet:thanks'

Maan:I will bring u food..

Geet:maan

Maan:now what

Geet:check jaanvi..if she had anything or not..

Maan:ok..

Maan went n stood at their door entrance..

Maan:geet,did u forget to say anything..

Geet:no

Maan:after I went don't call maan..ok

He said teasingly n that made geet smile..

Maan went n saw all having breakfast ..even jaanu.

.he prepared geets plate n went back to geet..she looked at her hands..the tried to take from spoon..

Maan saw her struggling n started to feed her..

Geet:u also must have ur bf..

Maan:I will..but afterwards..

Geet took the spoon from him n with great struggle fed him a morsel of food..

Geet:pls..u also have it..

Maan stopped n took it..

Maan:ok..i'll eat..then it became turns..he fed her once n took himself once..they shared one plate..

Maan wiped her lips after feeding her..he had the urge to feel on his..he controlled n gave her the medicines n came out..he want to calm himself..removing her dress,giving bath,changing,her..the feel of her lips in his fingers..all were making him insane..

Geet was also under the spell of maans touch..but she came out of her reverie as dadi,pinky adi,Vicky,priya n jaanvi came there'

All:how r u now..

Geet:f9 now..

All chatted with her n took turns to spend time with her..so she may not be alone..or get bored..

Maan also took care of her..helped her using washroom'

He fed her n applied ointments over her burnt skin..he played with jaanvi n made her to be with geet also without hurting her'

All sat their n played antakshari..the day was full of fun'though geet was hurt,all made her forget her pain.

.at night ,

Maan went to take geets food..he saw pinky feeding both priya n jaanvi..n making them brush their teeth after food..

Maan was feeding geet..

jaanvi as usual came to geet..even after she had her food..

Mama..nini'

Geet extended her hands n she came to her embrace n layed on her lap..jaanvi opened her zip of curve n started to latch..

Maan did not say anything..bcoz..he has fed up repeating her not to feed..

So,he fed geet quietly her dinner n went to kitchen n kept the plate..

When he came back he saw geet trying to settle herself n jaanvi both on bed without disturbing jaanvis sleep'maan came to both..he made geet wrap jaanvi protectively n then made geet settle correctly on bed'he kissed both of them saying gud night n tucked them under spread..

Geet also wished him goodnight n slept'

The next days went same..maan worked from home taking care of geet'

Dr came for check up n said she was healing..her foot was better n she can walk '

That night geet woke up in middle n tried to get up'she saw maan n jaanu sleeping..she wants to use washroom..

The harder geet tried to free herself from baby,,the more she started to suck her'n jaanu was using geets hand as pillow ..she tried to release using her hand..looking at the ointments applied she backed'n tried again'she was only successful taking her hands from jaanvis head'the moments made maan awake..n saw geet awake..

Maan yawning:geet..what happened'

Geet:wo..mujei..washroom jaana hai'but jaanvi is not leaving me..

Maan:do u want me to help u..

She nodded yes..as she wants to go soon..

'he slowly removed her nipple from babys mouth..his fingers when touched hers she wanted the moment to freeze..his one touch felt heavenly..jaanu got disturbed n started to cry..

Maan:u go..i 'll look after her..

geet moved fast to use washroom..here maan took jaanu n placed on his shoulder n patted her..geet came back n jaanu immediately throwed herself to geet..geet made her sleep..n maan nodded his head..

In dono ka..koi badal nehi saktha'

Kisko dosh doon..maako ya beti ko..geetki babaji knock some sense in them'

It's a week now..geet was healed n wished to go to office

Maan simply rejected no..she will come to office after 15days..

Geet asked the reason..

Geet:y 15days..im better now..

Maan:

reason no:1:u r still not able to wear dresses..it pains u..see ur still in nighties,,how will u wear sari..that too blouses..

reason no:2:after 10 days,jaanvis birthday'

reason no:3:u have to make arrangements for party n barsi..

reason no:4:I am quiet busy..if u come to officw who will look after u n pinky..so its better u stay here n I will ask dadi n nakul to take care of u both..

geet:hmmm..ok..

maan cupped her face..

geet,,I don't want to see u in painnwhat if ur wound gets affected..pls'n If u want u can work from home..

he said in care..how can she not accept now'

geet:ok'

after 2 days

maan came home from office..

maan:geet,geet..

geet:yes maan..

maan:can u pack my things for a week..

geet:one week..

maan:haan geet,ive got a contract abroad..i want 2 go there to finalise it..

geet:ok..but when are u leaving?

Maan:my flight is in 2 hrs..

she left half heartedly to pack things for him..

maan took jaanvi n talked with her..

maan:jaanu..i know u r a gud girl..phir bhi..papa is going abroad..so behave nicely ..mamako tang mat karna..

jaanu:papa,jaanu will miss u..

her face fell down..maan kissed her cheeks..

maan:I will miss u too..when I return na..i'll bring u loads of gifts..

it enlightened jaanvi..

jaanvi:what gifts papa..

maan:dress,chocos,toys..

she clapped her hands n said

jaanu:papa,bring for priya di also..

maan:I will beta..n for ur future sister or boy also..

he said looking at pinky,who came with his black coffee..

pinky:bhai,go n fresh up..n look after ur wife also..u said so suddenly that u r leaving..might be geet is upset..

maan:pinky,y u r doing this works servants haina..he took the coffee n sipped..

pinky:one side bhabhi n other side u..u both are making me lazy..

maan:take care of urself n baby..he patted her shoulder n left to his room thinking pinkys words..

maan:will geet be upset..

when he entered a smile came to his face..

geet was looking upwards n cribbing to babaji n packing his things..

dekhliya babaji,he is fond of shocking me..he did not say me that he is going abroad'he is saying now..that too before two hours..he did not think im important for him n he must say this when he knew..koi yese kartha hai kya'

maan came n touched her shoulders..she pushed aside n moved to wardrobe to take his next set of dress..maan pulled her n she landed on his chest..he lifted her chin by his finger..

maan:I myself don't know till today..that im leavingthen how will I say u'but im sry..i must have informed u when I expected I may leave any moment..

he apologized..

geet:no maan..u don't ask sorry..just I was cribbing..i was mad..srytho mujei kehna chahiye..

sry..sry..sry..

maan:chup..bilkul chup..

maan kept his fingers on lips..

their eyes locked with each others n both were feeling butterflies..

maan:no sry..no thanks between us..

she nodded her head..

maan left to refresh..

geet kept his luggage in car..n waited for him..he bid bye to all n came to geet n jaanvi..he kissed jaanvi ..

maan:bye janu..

jaanu:bye papa..she kissed him..

maan had a naughty idea..

maan:geet u said sry..so punishment for u..

he kissed her cheek tightly n said bye mrs.khurana'he sat on car leaving a shocking geet..

maan can still see geet standing rooted at her place with mouth wide opened n a hand on her cheek'

maan:I know u will not regret geet..so only I took this step..i think its long time,I've waited for u...now I will make u feel u love me'

precap:dadi knowing about maneet relation'what will be her next step'

maneet confrontation..or consummation'not decided..lol

10.10.2012..5.35pm

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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awesome update...
love it...
maan caring 4 geet...
geets fear...
intersting precap...

i only know how i have finished it in one hour...
so much troubles in between...
power cut, urgent phone call, net connection...
every thing has 2 happen today when i was waiting 4 it like crazy...
continue soon...

Edited by lg001 - 12 years ago
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😊
Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
the way maan is taking care of geet it was superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update di
end was awesome
maan being naughty
cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dii 😊

that oil wala part was very painful but yes much needed lollzz and yesh
Ending ke liyehhh Muaaahhh for u
and yeah I want first confrontation than Consummatuion. but its just my suggestion as u are a creator iof this wonderful FF u know much about it 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
oye hoye what an dhamakadar update di🥳


geet is really chalti phirti disaster😆


loved all the scenes😳


awesome precap😳


update soon next 😊


will wait for it😊

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