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Posted: 12 years ago
Here's the next update below...

But before that i wanna say thanks to my every loyal reader,commentor or lykor for their tremendous support and co-operation in this work and all the other works too !!!!

I really am very grateful to all of u who lyked my works and patiently and eagerly waited for each of my update...

Thank you for being so patient !!!!

U all are very supportive and kind-hearted !!!

So,with this . . . i.e the last chappy of this SS i wanna say words of thanks to all who has been a part of this work and made it a success !!!!

A whole-hearted thanks !!!!

Cheers to all !!!!

Muaaahhh !!!

~> Sweets 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guyyyz, thank you for the 55 Lykes before...😃

So,with this chappy we came to the ending of this SS !!! 😆

Hope u enjoy this chappy...😳

P.S- This is a long Chappy so Enjoy !!! (=



' ' ' Update 3 ' ' '



Today Amar felt almost half complete ...
He was extra happy and excited to meet shaks...or
to say 'his' Shaku bai...


Amar *self*- Tu kitna bada gadha hai...
Didn't even realise ur love for shaks...
You two are meant to be together and vo bhi alwaz.


Thinking all this , he grined widely and called up
Mukti (Shakti's sis ) and informed her that shaks
would directly come to his house after landing
as he needs to confess his love to her...



Mukti- Finally !!
Chalo Mr.Gadhe ko realise toh hua ki meri stupido
si sissy sirf tere liye bani hai...


Well good combo..gandha nd stupido ek saath
would definitely create more sparks !!!!


Amar-Ho gya..? Main jaun ab !! Nai toh late hua
toh tumhari stupido mujhe jhutte maar maar kar
bhaga bhaga kar maaregi...



Mukti- But yeah avi teko wierd lagta hoga but it's
true ki ur megic is really mEgical !!!



Amar-ya ya...bye !!!

And both hunged up...

Amar- Three different people at diff. places but
same line...
Gosh ! Mujhe pehle yeh realise kyun nai hua ki
we are always meant to be together...

Hmmm...but jo bhi hua vo past tha...avi think of
present Amar !!!

Avi i need to confess my love to shaks !!!

So,here i come Shakti Mohan Sharma...

Tumhe apna na banaya toh mera naam kunwar
nahi...

Saying kunwar he blushed. and said ~
Pehle i used to hate my first name-Kunwar but
jab tum bulati ho toh pata nai kyun but i love it !!

He was so busy in his Shakti that he stopped the car in the middle of the road creating traffic jam.


Cars continuously blowing their horns , traffic police whistling , the pedestrations watching the so-called tamasha and the other two-wheelers flashing the headlights at Amar.

After a lot of attempt Amar finally came back to his senses and started his car ; went away a little embarassed.

He pulled up in front of the gifts shop... Went in and bought a cute teddy holding a little heart withing itself...


Then he bought orchids for his lady love , some candles , streamers for decorations , a full chocolat box with varieties of dark chocolate and finally a bottle of Shampaign for cooling her.. :P


Amar *self*- Aur kuch toh nai bhula lene ko ?! Ummm...lemme think... hmmm...

Shopkeeper-Sir kahin aap yeh toh nahin soch rhe ki u've missed something ??


Amar *perplexed*- How do you know ??


Shopkeeper - Well itna sab kuch ek guy tabhi krta hai when it's ur wedding anniversary or when he's gonna propose to someone... So,wat's ur case . ?

Umm...tumhe dekh kr lagta hai ki u're gonna propose to someone...and that too very special... Right ?!


Amar *blushing* - Yup !!

Shopkeeper-Well...everything is great but u should take a red rose for the proposal... Nd Ladkiyon ko red rose do toh they become extremely happy !

Amar - Sure.. Thanq !!



While on the other hand -

Shakti in plane...
Everybody around her are sleeping peacefully...But shaks is not getting a proper nap from the time she's getting close to reach India...

She is so exited to meet everybody... and especially her sissy and Amar that she couldn't sleep..

Announcements were made that they were about to land in 15 minutes...

Shakti was just dreaming the reactions of their friends on her sudden entry from nowhere...

Shakti- Wow !! I just couldn't believe ki main India mein!!
Yay !!!

After landing she collected her luggages and ws waiting for Mukti to turn up to her as soon as possible...She was so happy to be back to her native land !!

Aftr few minutes her smile fainted and a question mark arised which was quickly turned into an angry grin !!!

Amar was laughing seeing her extreme temperatures and patience...

But now sensing the upcoming thunder..he surrendered and came out to make her angry grin change into a deadly one...

He ran to her and squeezed her under him making her suffocate... :P

Shakti-Aaaooo...Kunwar kya kar rhe ho... Aaj hi saare bones crack krne ka iraada hai kya...Vaise bhi dekho kitni thin ho gyi main...


Amar-Yes !! Yes !!!! Chal ab jo main bolunga tujhe vo krna padega...

Shakti- Haii ??

Amar-Hai kya ?!! Yaad hai jab tu ja ri thi tab humare beech bet lagi thi ki agar tu aur thin hokr aayi toh u'll do whatever i'll demand... And see...tune hi bol diya..So main jeet gya !!!!

Shakti-Fine...kya chahiye..?? *excited*

Amar-Mujhe jo chahiye uska mazza raat ko hi aata hai baby !!!

Shakti-Huh ?? *confused*

Amar-Hahahaha...apne aap ko dekh...!!! Tera face dekhne layak tha... :P

Shakti-Wat...Arggh !!! Get lost... Vaise bhi main Muks ke saath jaungi...tu phut !!! :/

Amar- Arreee...tu toh serious ho gyi...chal sorry...ab chal yahi khade hokr mujhe jo chahiye vo degi kya !!!

Shakti-Kya chahiye tujhe ?? Bol naaa... Sunglases...Tee...Scarf... Kya ??

Amar-Chill !!! Main maand lunga at right time...

Shakti-Hum kahan ja rhe hai ?? Yeh tere ghar nor mere ghar ka path hai... Wait a min..Farmhouse !! ??
Yeh kiska hai ?? And vo bhi hill top pe ?? Main yaha pehle nai aayi...

Amar- Pheww...expected !!! Ummm...yeh Farmhouse kisi ka hai...but avi khaali hai so we can go there...upar se view kaafi achchi hai...
Tu chal upar main aata hun...

Shakti on reaching saw the view and ws mesmerized watching the elegant view infront of her eyes...

She saw Amar's name on the sign board and ws extremely glad... Then she went to the lawn and started running at the soft grass...

She loved the whole atmosphere there...the lovely chirping of birds...the great sunset behind the mountains... the sounds of wind chimes...the strawberry plants surrounding the house...and yeah the end point...

Seeing Amar coming...she went at the center lawn and started sprinkling water on amar via the pipes for gardening...

Amar ran to her and held her hands tightly..little pushing her...They both culdn't control their balance so fell down upon the strawberries with a thud...

At the time all the sprinklers in the field started making them fully drench...

Shakti was however controoling her emotions on seeing Amar wet...She gently removed those strawberry lumps on his face near his lip wid her fingers... (Just like the paint scene between kriyaansh) .

The sprinklers were still on... Amar on seeing her back covered wid strawberry squashes placed his both hands on her back and brushed away the lumps slowly feeling the skin...

{P.s - Amar ws wearing a white tee and Shakti too wearing a white shirt which became transparent }

Shakti ws enjoying the moment...but when got back she got reminded of the past between them...Amar's cofession...

She stepped back and went to the end point..
There she stood with her open arms welcoming the cool wind inside her...

Amar quietly went beside her and took the rose and fixed it on her hair...

Shakti was startled so she went to the lawn...sat there in between the sprinklers which were on...

Suddenly she felt the rain of rose petals..and shampaign together...and there in front of her lay her Kunwar wid the rose...

She quickly ran to him took the rose..and teared the rose into pieces... and went out from there and sat in the car.

Amar came running and looked at her wid confusion...

Shakti-Jaldi baitho...

He quickly sat in the car and started the engine...

Shakti-Tere face pe kuch laga hua hai...Clean it..

Amar-Kya..??

Seeing the rear -view mirror already occupied by shaks,he opened the above mirror !!!
(Guyyz...there's a mirror on the roof of car..Use slide krke open krna padta hai...Sometime we keep cd's too )

On,sliding the shutter...fresh rose petals fell upon him...
There on the mirror it was written '' <3 U 2 ''

Amar-Tujhe kaise pata ki main tujhe propose...

Shakti-Well Mr.Kunwar agar three people saath mein bole toh u need to believe it... :P

Amar-This means ki Muks ne tujhe sab kuch bata diya ?

Shakti-Aareee nai...Mujhe kisi ne nai bataya.. :P

Amar-This means ki tune mujhe realise krvane ke liye yeh sab kiya and then tu badi innocent ban rhi thi...and main Gandha samajh bhi nai paaya...

Shakti-Happy Realization !!! :]P

She ran from there and Amar sat there shocked !!

Amar- Tujhe toh main nai chodunga...Arggh !!!

Shakti-Toh maine kab kaha chodne ko *winking*

He caught her and took her to the back seat of his car...caught her by her thighs and kissed her all over...

Shakti ran from his grip but he caught her again and took her at his back and climbed the treehouse near by...

Then he slowy make her sleep at the couch and he too flopped over her...taking in the scent of her 's..
Kissed her back and hair...

She was again on her way to run when Amar held her and she quickly crossed her legs at his waist..
Her back was on the surface of the wall and Amar was biting her all over...
He came up to kiss her when she teased him by not letting him touch her lucious lips...
After some tries he left her and acted to be angry on her..

Amar was on his to go down when she jumped upon his back and smooched him with all her strength.. !!!

They fell on the bed still kissing fiercely...
Both were so lost in each other that they didn't realize that the bed had broken due to their jump... :P

Finally, Amar had || Happy Realization ||

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Thanq for jheling my SS for a month !!!
Guess u all would have enjoyed it...
If yes then do state ur views abt the chappy... 😆😆

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Before phutting from this Thread do check the KR FF. It's updated !!! 😉


Sweets signing off !!! 😆


Edited by mEgical_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved the ending n Amar's realisation too...:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last chappy 😡
maine kaha tha na ki meko 2-3 chappy's ka fullto romance chahiye ☺️
kunwar is making arrangements to propose shaku . . . . . Awww 🤗
mukti ka lect . . . . Hahahaha . . . . Bechare ki itni jhand kardi 😆
hilltop pe farmhouse . . . . 😊
itni romantic setting . . . . . Strawberry ke pool me lovebirds 😃
shaks ko sab pehle hi pata hota hai . . . . . She replied in her unique way 🥳
backseat romance . . . . . Getting wild . . . . . . Ab nhi jane dega ☺️
bed tod diya . . . . 🤣
tune ye scene daal hi diya na aakhir . . . . . 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome shailu
wow finally dey are ARSHA
n amar realises his feeling...n she did dat
loved it alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Nice ending...
And finally ARSHA together...
Loved it...😊
Edited by shravani97 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful ss...
Loved it
Happy Realisation... Hehe
keep writing more
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update...
Lykd it...
Thankx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ending itni jaldi 😒...
But it was Superb 😃...
Finally Amar realized his feelings , Happy realization 😆...
Their romance was amazing 😳...
Yahan tak ke bed tod dala 🤣...
Loved it ❤️...
Perfect ending 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really awesome ss luved it to the core 👏

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