Hey friends ! surprized ??
well mee too .. :P
So here i prove that .. this story was alive for me ... the charachter were real to me !!
Seriously earlier i took decision to end it because it was reallly hard for me to write it alone and update it regularly .. but the end i gave , was unstatisfactory so here's a final touch to the story which we (me and our dear Anky ) started ...
A year ago when we met we came up with this track .. All that zest and enthusiam , i can never forget .. Soon it became one of the treats because of tremendous writings by my co writer Ankita who truely is an awsam writer and friend , or i should say my teacher tooo .. even today when i look back into those old grounds i feel amazed and glad you came anky !! ;)
and here's the final end of our story ! "Our Story .." Hope yopu like it ..!!
Love you more ..
Upi .. :D...
The building was quite huge , tall . There was a big Garden at the entrance . Once you enter in the building , you will surely fall for it's interior's . So Mind blowing ! . Mesmorizing .
It's that building where all the hot buzzes get a Life ! . Where all the hot new's get alive and get spreaded to each and every ear . To all the buzzes it was a dream .
It was the building of the India's top rated Celebrity Channel , ZoOm . Hot girl's , Handsome staff. And vivacious people worked there ...
On turning to left , you'll find long glass stair's .After climbing it up you'll find a big hall and when you'll turn Right ...
You'll see a Big purple coloured room , On it's door , a red light was blinking and below it was written "ON AIR" .
Opening the door , there's a girl sitting , right there in front of you ... Hot .. Sensuous !
wearing a short peach dress and speaking into a mike .. The whole room was filled with lot of energy ..
Right in front of that girl is sitting ,someone you know !
A Man with brown hair's , handsome , with hazel orb's and a french beard .
"So Rey .. Thank's a lot for sharing your life with ZoOm , We are so glad to talk to you ..! You are a great singer ..We hope to listen much more from you ..! Wish you very best for your life ..Thank you sir .." said that vedio jockey ..
"Ahhh ... Its my pleasure ... thanks to you ..!! " Said the man sitting in front of her , Reyansh singhania ...
"Umm.. one more thing sir ..!! French beard's suit's you ..!! " and she winks ..
" Hahaha ... thanks .." he replied , laughingly .
And * Cut* .. the director screamed .
It was an formal interview going on in that room ..and that too of the hearthrob Reyansh singhania ...
He climbed down the stair's of the building , in hurry , checking his watch in every two minutes. Blah ,.. He was a fool , and late too .
He rushed into his car and drive his way back home .
On the other side she was waiting for him , She was fully pissed off , He was late , And She was Angry ..
But the moment she closed her eye's , She get lost into her dream world ..Something she recaptured made her blush hard ...
Some sweet moment's re strieked in her mind ..
They were Romantic !
The moment he get's close to her , she could feel those shiver's running down in her knee's , making it difficult to stand or to take a single breath ..! His killing actions , left deep scar's on her heart !! Those beautiful scar's of love!! He kissed the back of her neck and she shuddered again ! She was loosing all she had again in front of him . He slipped his hand into her , feeling her emaciated muscle's !! This night was special to them ... Just hour's before they got married .. and now they were heading towards a proper fullfilment ! Fullfilment of their Love ...
And snap !!!
She was out of her sweet remembering session's .. Now also she was blushing . Hard !!
But when she looked way down at herself she could clearly see the Result of their Mad love ..
She touched her stomach ... Which had now much more in it ..MuCH MORE THAN FOOD !! :p
Ahh !!.. She screaned !! It just kicked her ...
and in the next very second the Bell ranged !
*beeep ...*
It was Rey on the door and she was sure ! She was sure that he will get lots and lot's of her screans today !!
She tripped down the stair's . Slowly . with full patience , holding her 8 month babybump !
"kRIYA ...I'm sorry .. I'm reallly verrr-rry sorry yaar !! .." he pleaded pathetically in front of her ..
"No ... you are not forgiven !! you prmissed you will come early today ... and see again you broke you promise !! ..." she complained...
"But ... see i have got something for you ... but if you are angry then leave it ..."
"What ... K---y--A laye ho tum ??????"
" pehle bolo tum mujse naaraz nahi ho ..??? "
"Achcha baba nahi hooon ... maaf kiya mene tumhe ... ab to batao kya laye ho tum mere liye ?? you know very well na that i can't withstand suspense !!!!! " she said childishly !
"See ... Tantanaaa.." and he takes out her favorite , Mango flavoured ice cream !!
"Ice cream !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she screamed ..!!
"Yaa .. but you have to eat it only when it turns bit warm !! understand !! Doctor's ne mana kiya hai tumhe... "
"Okay ! okay ... we'll have it after 15 minutes ...kay .."
But again it pained !! "ahh ..."
He got worried to see her scream this way , holding her baby bump ...
"Kriyaa .. sab theek hai na ..." he asked , feeling their baby in her stomach ..
"Haan rey .. nothing .. its just that from few day's he kicks me a lot !!! "
And all he could do is smile .. after all he was going to become Dad !!
Later when both sat in front of television watching kriya's favorite T.V Serial's ..rey and kriya got encountered into an disscussion ...
"The Name ??? of the baby ..."
and it just took few minutes , and both gave up ..! No one knew wether it would be a girl or a boy but all both knew was .. it was their own baby ! their own blood ! their own love ...
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Now do leave your reviews !! i seriously want them badly !!!😳 and ya i love you all !! thanks for your tremendous support !!Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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