LoveIsBeautiful-Updt-part23(K-Nfanfic)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey I've created this new fan-fic of Kunal and Nimmo. Hope u guys like it. And I cant post the parts everyday since I have school. I am given only limited time for the internet. But I'll try my best to post it for every three days. Anyway now I am having my Holidays so may be I can post everyday till 11th of August.And one more thing; I will writing the dilogues in english as I am not too good in Hindi. But I'll use it in between. So here goes:


PART ONE

The story goes after Natasha is told that N-G is only contract marriage. Gunal and Natasha go out together and come back late night and Nimmo is all sad. But Kunal is unable to realise it.This is the case everyday. Here enters a new character. The name of the person is Rohan and he is a distant relation of Kunal.He is from London and is coming to stay at Sehgal house for a few days as a part of his business.


Sehgal House( Dining table)

Dadi(Di): Kunal tume patha hai na ki aaj Rohan aa raha hai. To main chahti hoon ki tum usse welcome karne ke baad office jao.
Kunal(K): Ok Dadi. I'll wait for him.

Kunal-Nimmo Room

Nimmo(N): Kunal yeh Rohan kaun hai?
K: Woh mera ek distant relation hai but I know him quiet well. He is a very nice guy and talented too.You know he does great work in his business. Its all bcoz of him that their business is in such a high profit.
N: Oh! To woh yahaan kyun aa raha hai.
K: For business. Usse yahaan kuch zaroori kaam hai.

In The Hall
Rohan is entering. He is handsome and is wearing blue jeans and white T-shirt. He comes straight to Dada and Dadi and touches their feet for blessings.

K: Hi Rohan! How are you buddy?
Rohan(R): I'm fine. How are you?
K: I'm fine. So you are here for business?
R: Ya, but not only for business but for some break too. Like a Holiday trip. I am going to enjoy here very well. And you are going to accompany me, OK?
K: Done Dude
Just then Nimmo is coming down wearing a sky blue churi. And Rohan is impressed.He just keeps staring at her and...

R: Hey who is that Miss perfect? (Perfect means he meant the homely look of Nimmo)
K: Oh, This is Nimmo, I mean Namrata, My wife.
R: Wife? You are married. I cant believe it Kunal and that too with such a traditional girl. You must be joking.
K: No really, She is my wife and its been 6 months since our marriage. Its just that everything happened in a lot of hurry that we couldn't inform many of them. I'm sorry yaar.
R: Hey, Its OK. I was just joking.( He turns to Nimmo) Any way nice meeting you Mrs.Namrata. ( He shakes hand with her.)
N: Nice meeting you too.
K: Alright then guys. It is getting late for me for . I had better leave.
N: Kunal but you forgot to bring your case from our room. Wait here I'll bring it.
K: OK ! Natasha, you go and sit in the car.
R: Hey man you are so lucky to get a wife like this. She is so responsible and perfect. And by the way who is this Natasha?
K: She is a friend of mine. I am giving her training at my office.
R: Alright then. Bye. See you in the evening. I'm so tired.
K: OK bye.
While Rohan is going to his room he just glances at Nimmo who is bringng Kunal's case.He smiles to himself shaking his head and thinking-how nice o her.


Please post your comments. My next part will be based on it. I hope u all like it.
This fan-fic will be continued in the fan-fic section. So after reading this please go to the fan-fic section for the continuation.
Have a nice day.
Edited by shalmi27 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART TWO

Nimmo is in the Kitchen making lunch for Kunal with Kantaben. Rohan comes inside looking for something to drink. He searches the fridge there and ses that nothing is there that he likes. He goes to Nimmo...

R: Uh Xcuse me Nimmo. Kya tum mere liye ek madad ker sakti ho.
KB: Kya baath hai. Mein karti hoon na?
R: Woh kya hai ki mujhe fresh juice chahiye-Pineapple. Kya aap mere liye bab sakti hain.
KB: Uske liye to mujhe mixie chahiye.
R: Mixie?
N: Kantamaasi, mixie nahi,juicer. Vahaan pa hai deckiye. You dont worry.I'll send it to your room.
KB: Oh! to yeh juicer tha! Mujhe nahi patha tha.
R: No problem. I can wait here.
Nimmo starts cutting the pineapple and starts putting it in the juicer. After it is over she is pouring it into a glass and putting some sugar and stirring it.
R: Nimmo tho How is your marriage life? How is Kunal? A good Husband?
N: Of course. He is the best husband a girl could ever get.
R: Are you teasing him or are you serious?
N: Come on Rohan. I am serious. And in fact how can I tell that he is not a good husband. Ours was a love marriage.(KB is all shocked.)
R: WOW! Thats new information. I did not know that. So how was love life.
N: Oh, it was just fantastic. I loved those days.
R: So which life is better? Love life or Married life?
N: Yeh tho bohut hi mushkil sawaal hai! Let me think. I think Married life is more beautiful.
R: So tell me about your love life.
N: love life? ( She thinks- Oh no! Ab mein kya kahoongi?)
She hands him the juice. Suddenly Dadi calls Rohan. He leaves to Dadi.
KB: Nimmo tumne aisa jhoot kyun kahaa. Ab phas gayi na? Ab woh ayega aur tumhare love life ke bare mein poochega. Kya karogi?
N: Patha nahi Kantamaasi. Aap kuch sochiye na? Please Kantamaasi mein kahoongi?
R: Sorry Nimmo. Mujhe ek urgent kaam aa gaya hai. So I have to go. Lekhin dont worry. We will continue your love story tommorow.OK? Bye. See you Later.
N: Bye. Offfo yeh kaisa mussibat hai.
KB: Are agar yeh Kunal se yeh sab kahega patha nahin woh kya kehne wala hai.
N: Mein tho uske bare mein bhool hi gayi. Usse Rohan se jo bhi baat hua woh sab kehna padega. ( Sha looks into her watch) Oh no. Bharah bajne wala hai aur abhi tak maine Kunal ki Lunch Pack nahi ki hai. Kantamaasi aap ek kaam keejiye usse phone karke keh dheejiye ki Lunch aane mein dher ho jayegi.
KB: Uski kya zaroorat hai. Usse kuch dher ke liye bhookha rehne do.
N: Please Kantamaasi.Please.
KB: Teek hai teek hai mein phone karti hoon.




HALL
Kunal is enetring the house after work. Rohan is sitting on the sofa reading a magazine. He looks up at Kunal.

R: Hi kunal.
K: Hi Rohan. So how did you spend the day? Did you get bored?
R: It was great. And I was not at all bored. Nimmo gave me very good company in the morning.
Kunal's face changes. He looks confused.
R: Kunal, I wanted to ask you something. I am planning go for a small shopping tomorrow.
K: Oh. Great.
R: I was just wondering if Nimmo could come with me. For company. Its just that I'll get bored if I go all alone. Do you mind?
Kunal thinks for 2 seconds and with a very unsatisfied face says...
K: Why not? Sure. You both can go.
R: Oh thats so great. Alright then. You must be tired and Nimmo will be waiting for you. Go fast. Dont make her wait.And Kunal can you tell Nimmo to come downstairs?
K: Sure(with a very uncomfortable face)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i loved ur fanfic .u did an awesome job
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Edited by tanya - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY
Really good fanfic. Nice start 👏 👏 👏
Love,
Sadaf
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I really like it, it is simply wow and a nice start.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ur ff itz gr8 dude i luv 2 see kannu jealous 4 nimmo itz just awosome and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon cant wait 2 see kannu realise his luv 4 nimmo itz just wowwwwwwwwwww i hope kekta would do somthing lik dis in khnk
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for ur comments.


PART THREE

KUNAL-NIMMO ROOM
Kunal is going inside the room. He finds Nimmo doing something near the cupboard.
K: Nimmo yeh tum wahaan kya kar rahe ho?
N: Cant you see Kunal. My shawl has got stuck here. I am trying to take it out.
K: Let me see.
N: Kunal I am trying this for about 15 minutes.
K: I said I'll just try.
N: Hey. Make sure it does not tear.
K: Lo. Aa gaya. Happy.
N: Thanks.
K: Nimmo, woh Rohan pooch raha tha ki Woh thumare saath kal shopping ke liye jaa saktha hai ya nahi.
N: Aur tumne kya kaha. No,Right.
K: No. Told yes.
N: Kunal yeh tumne kya kar diya. Tume patha hai ki aaj kya hua.
She tells him what all happened in the Kitchen.
K: I am sorry Nimmo. Lekhin mujhe patha nahi tha. I am really very sorry.
N: No problem. I'll manage.
K: Aur haan, woh tume neeche aane ko kahaa.
N: OK
She leaves and Kunal is very disappionted.


HALL

N: Rohan, tumne mujhe bulaya?
R: Haan Nimmo. Woh kya hai ki kya tum mere saath kal shopping ke liye jaoge?
N: Ya I'll come. Kunal ne mujhse kahaa ki tumne usse poocha tha. I'll come.
R: And Nimmo hum lunch bhi bhahar karenge. OK?
N: OK

KUNAL-NIMMO ROOM

K: Kya baath hai. Why did he call you?
N: Kuch nahi. The same thing he told you. About that shopping.
K: Oh
N: Aur Lunch bhahar kar rahen hai.
K: What? To mera lunch ka kya hoga? Who will make my lunch?
N: Mummiji will make your lunch.
K: No need. I'll order from some restaurant.
N: No way.You ahve to eat the lunch Mummiji makes. And thats final.
K: No way Nimmo.
N: To teek hai. I wont make you lunch for you anymore.
K: Nimmo please.
N: No Kunal.
K: Teek hai. Mein Kaooga.
N: Now thats a good boy.
She pats him on his shoulder saying so and goes to change. Kunal touches the part she touched on his shoulder and imitates how she told " thats a good boy".
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome fanfic!!! 👏

😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awosome part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon and right som more bigeer part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just awosome i really loved it thanx a lot and plez do continue soon 👏

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