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****Sindoor Tere Naam Ka Fan Fics****

Characters: Vedika Malhotra- A grl who is involved wit her own world, doesn't care about wat others think of her as, has good judge of character, even though she is an only daughter of a rich business man she has a heart of gold. has a older brother named Suraj. Studies Fashion in London, England

Aman Molhotra- Vedika's father, one of the top business men in India, to protective of his daughter, can do anything for her happiness.

Suraj Malhotra- Vedika's older brother. Just like his father to protective of her, studied MBA in Canada, a total slacker, tries his best to avoid the topic of joining the family business. Treats Niharika as his sister.




Niharika Successena- Vedika's childhood friend. Studies Medical in America. Born in a rich family, has a older brother Rudr.

Rudr Successena- Niharika's older brother, takes care of the family business, to protective of Niharika, can do anything to make her happy. Treats Vedika as his Sister.

Sundari Successena- Rudr's and Niharika's mom, divorced her husband because he cheated on her, a caring mother, never made rudr or niharika miss der father.




Dhruv Raizada- Suraj's best friend, studying business in London. Most popular guy in his College. Heard a lot about Vedika from Suraj but never actually met her.

Antrakish Raizada- Dhruv's older brother, helps in the family business, Rudr's best friend, heard alot about Niharika 4m Rudr but never actually met her.

Tara Raizada- Antariksh's nd Dhruv's younger sister, studies medical with Niharika in America, and went to school with Vedika nd Niharika.

Virendra Raizada- Head of the family and owns Raizada Textiles, eversince Antariksh took over da business is trying his best to retire but so far has been unsuccessful.

Kavita Raizada- Viren's wife, a generous person, can do anything for her family's happiness, keeps failing viren's plan to retire, is looking for grls 4 her sons.


I'll continue da rest in 30 mins




SCENE #1

London at London University where Vedika goes to study fashion

Teacher- ok! class nd this will be ur assingment, i suggest u think about it now because u will be getting assigned wit ur partners after lunch so goodluck!

in da hallway

Tania (vedika's fren)- I can't believe it such a gr8 project. I m so excited.

Kim (vedika's fren)- U r not da only one who is excited about dis project. So m i. well technically not the project but wat happens after da projects r marked.

Sania (vedika's fren)- Ya! da one wit da best fashion designs nd the reasonable budget will get one years contract with one of the world's leading fashion company.

Kim- Ya! nd we who dats gonna be!

Sania- Duh! Vedika! she is one of the top student.

Vedika- it night not be.

kim- ya right.

Vedika- c'mon i m good at fashion but i suck at maths nd if u were listening part of the project is making a reasonable budget so u can guess wats gonna happen.

Tania- don't worry bout dat!

Kim- Ya dont worry! u can use the business geek dat u get 4m Oxford.

Vedika- Watever! rit now i don't even want to think about dis project! lets go to da mall.

Everybody- sure we'll take ur new car

Vedika- sure!

Vedika is driving da car while tlking to her frenz and listening 2 music. The stereo is turned up loud.
Suddenly vedika gets a an acident

Vedika gets out of da car angry

Vedika (gets even more angry after seeing da damage on her car)

Vedika- OH MY GOD! MY CAR MY BRAND NEW CAR! (LOOKS AT DA PERSON WHO CAUSED THE ACCIDENT) HEY MISTER! R U BLIND OR WAT CAN'T U SEE A CAR ON DA ROAD.

Person- LISTEN LADY! ITS UR FAULT U DIDN'T HAV 2 TAKE DAT U TURN.

Vedika- SO! NOW U R GOING 2 TEACH HOW TO DRIVE MY OWN CAR

person- IF I HAV 2! I USUALLY DON'T BUT 2 A PERSON WHO THINKS DEY OWN THE ROAD I DON'T MIND. GIV ME DA TIME ND DATE.

vedika (gets even more angry by da person's response)- WAT! WAT DID U SAY! U HAV KNOW IDEA WHO I M, DO U---- (gets interrupted by tania)

tania- vedika apna ghussa thunda karo! dekho damage itna nahi hai, its jus a couple of scrathces tun 2 ispe polish laga sakti ho jus calm down aur chalo.

vedika- no tania! no! ise logoan ko to mein acchi tara se janti hoon! wat do dey think of dem selves--- (gets interrupted by the person)

person- listen 2 ur fren! apni doost ki baat manlo itna ghussa sehat ke liye theek nahi hai.

vedika (her face is all red, by da looks of it she is about to start world war1)- mein---

tania- lisen! mein apni doost ki taraf se uske behavior ke liye maafi mangti hoon pls ise phele isse aur ghussa ajaey pls leave.

person- ok! bye! by da way apni doost ko boliye ke itna ghussa sehat ke liye bilkul theekh nahi hai. (he leaves)

vedika (i total disbelief at tania 4 not supporting her)- tania! tumne uska saath kise dya. mein to sunjhe ke tum meri doost ho.

tania- mein tumhari doost hoom but pls meri baat bhi to sumjho, tum yahan par use daat rahi ho aur wo hai ke tum par insults ke bad insults deta ja raha hai. so dats y i did wat i did. agli baar mile ga na wo to use choro gi nahi.

veidka- fine! lets go to da mall.

Vediak drives to da mall! At da mall

Vedika buys every one lunch nd dey go sit at da table.

Vedika- I'll jus get some some sweet n sour sacue nd napkins ok

Tania- I'll come wit u

everbody- fine
(vedika nd tania leave)

while vedika is walking she bumps into da sameguy and da food he was holding goes on her face. she can't see da face but tania signals da guy to run nd he does while he is running he drops his chain. Vedika clens da food off her face nd notices dat da chain was 4m da same guy she had her accident wit.

Veidka- its da same guy tania! woh woh hi ladka hai

tania- r u sure!

Vedika- yes i m sure ! ye chain uski hi thi.

tania- maine to use dekha nahi! so i don't know lets jus go or we'll be late for da assigning 4 da partners. Aur tumhe change karlena chahiye warna i don't think dat will b a good impression of u for ur partner.

veidka- fine! lets go!

they all leave!

Back at da college after vedika is done changing!

teacher- well now as i told u b4 ur partners will be da last year business students jus like u guys 4m oxford university. after i tell u who ur partners are u can proceed to da library 2 work on ur project if u wsih to do so. (starts announcing da partners) Tania u r working wit Steven Brook. Sania u r working wit Jason Pitt. Kim u r working wit Raj Agnihotri. nd Vedika u r wokring wit Dhruv Raizada. As dhruv enters the class vedika is shocked to see him.



Recap: Vedika u r wokring wit Dhruv Raizada. As dhruv enters the class vedika is shocked to see him.


Scene#2

Vedika- (whispers) tania! psst tania!
Tania- (whispers) wat is it!
Vedika- (whispers) its him--- (gets interrupted by the teacher)
Teacher- (in an annoyed tone) Ms. Malhotra is der something dat u would like to share with the rest of the class, because wat u r telling tania seems a lot more important den wat i m talking to da class about.
Vedika- (kind of embarssed) no madam! i m sorry! pls do go on!
Teacher- very well den, but ms.malhotra can u pls go to da library wit mr.raizada.
Vedika- sure madam!
(as vedika is walking towards Dhruv she gives him da evil eye and nudges past him rudely).

Outside the classroom! instead of goign to the library Vedika walks towards her car. Dhurv walks after her.

Dhruv- Listen! wait up! Vedika!
Vedika- Don't u dare say my name.
Dhruv- fine lady! i won't! but we have to work on dis project together so lets jus 4get wat happened between us pls!
Vedika- No Way! nd as far as da project is concern i'll do my part nd u do urs, we will work on it individually got it!
Dhruv- fine! wat ever! jus send me da estimates of da fabric within dis week nd i'll handle da rest.
Vedika- lov 2! but i can't! i m going to india for 2 months, nd dis is an all year assignment so i'll do it wen i come back.
Dhruv- Wat century r u living in! hello mayb u haven't heard of dis invention called da computer!
Vedika- i hav! i own one! duh! but i can't because well i want enjoy atleast 2 months of dis year witout thinking about you or working with u.
Dhruv- fine! glad 2 hear dat i m not da only one wit a life, as u c i m also going 2 india within dis week!
Vedika- (sarcasm tone) o! jus gr8! well u know wat! get something for urself while u r der.
Dhruv- wat?
Vedika- (yells) A LIFE!
Dhruv- watever
Vedika- watever
Dey both walk in da opposite direction.

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Scene 3"

Vedika- (sarcasm tone) o! jus gr8! well u know wat! get something for urself while u r der.
Dhruv- wat?
Vedika- (yells) A LIFE!
Dhruv- watever
Vedika- watever
Dey both walk in da opposite direction


Vedika is now at the airport. She is rushing 4m one place 2another because she is late dat she mite miss her flight.

Vedika- U have 2 let me go! see i hav my ticket and my passport. Pls u hav 2! its an emergency I hav 2 get on dat plane 2day.
Person- I m sorry madam but i can't let u board the plane.
Vedika- Y not?
Person- Because da plane is already moving.
Vedika- Well den stop it! ( now practically crying like a child) I hav 2 go on dat plane pls let me go pls pls pls!
Person- I m sorry! but u know wat der is another flight 2 India dats leaving later during da day. If u want u can check if dey hav an extra ticket or not.
Vedika- Ok! thaku very much sir!

Vedika runs to da register.

Vedika- Is der ne flight for India by today or by tommorrow. Pls say yes.
Person- I m sorry madam all flights 2 India r fully booked for the whole month.
Vedika- WAT! (now getting slightly annoyed) LISTEN U! I DON'T CARE I HAVE A TICKET, I HAV MY PASPORT, ND I HAV 2000 FOR DA NEXT PERSON WHO CANCELS SOMEONE ELSES FLIGHT ND GIVES IT 2 ME.
Person- Frist of MADAM i don't care if u have ur ticket, or ur passport, or 2000 fully booked means fully booked, so pls leavei have other ppl who r waiting in line 2 confirm der tickets.
Vedika- I don't care about dem, I care about me--- (gets interrupted by a person)
Person- Lady! move it! der r other ppl in line.
Vedika- Wat! who said dat!
Person- (comes out of da line) I did.
Vedika- TUM
Person- Haan Main Dhruv, project partner remember.
Vedika- (gets an idea, she grabs dhruv tightly by his shoulder nd drags him 2 da register wit her.) Excuse me!
Person- U again listen, i already told u a million times u can't get a flight for or for 2morrow 4 atleast a month we r fully booked wat don't u get.
Vedika- listen! i understand but u see. Dis here (Digs her nails in dhruv's shoulder) is my husband. He had a later ticket 2 India nd i had an earlier one because we couldn't get 2 tickets for da same flight.
Dhruv- (shocked upon hearing dis) wat! me ur
before he could say nething elses vedika stomps her foot on dhruv's foot. so
Vedika- So pls can u cancel his ticket nd put it under my name.
Perso- (kind fo confused) umm sure madam if ur husband doesn't mind.
Vedika- Don't be silly ofcourse he doesn't--- (gets interuppted by Dhryv)
Dhruv- Ofcure he doen't want to giv his ticket to her. Listen lady she is not my wife i hav no idea who she is, but pls i m begging u confirm my ticket nd let me go otherwise i'll miss my flight (gives da person his ticket)
Person- (gives da evil eye 2 Vedika nd takes dhruv's ticket) sure sir i'll do dat rit now.
Vedika- (screams) WAIT! (calms down a bit) wait hold on 4 a sec shwo me his ticket.
Person- (hesitiates at first but gives it 2 her l8r) sure!
Vedika- Thankyou! (vedika takes da ticket from da person nd starts reading) Dhurv Raizada going to India by the 5:00 pm flight (looks at Dhruv den lookd at da ticket nd rips it into peices)
Dhruv- (shoucked at wat vedika did) Tum ne ye kya kiya mere ticket phar di
Vedika- haan phar di, kyun ke agar main bhi India ajj nahi jaa sakti 2 tum bhi nahi. Got it! (walks away)
Dhruv- Can't u get me a replacement ticket!
Person- i can for tommrorow sir because by da time ur replacement comes u would have already missed ur flight for today.
Dhruv- (in disbelief) okay jus get it here as sson as possible. (dhruv walks toward Vedika)
Vedika- bechara can't go to India today.
Dhurv- (in a angry tone) how dare u! tumhari himmat kaise hovi ke tum meri ticket pahr do.
Vedika- ise tum ek badla sumhaj lo wo car accident ka aur khane ka ok. Aur waise bhi main ajj apni ticket ka intasam karlongi lekin tum tuhtuhtuhtuh.
Dhruv- Kya matlab ke tum intazam karlogi. Jus let me refresh ur memory no tickets 4 india for atleast a month.
Vedika- I know. Lekin tum mujhe nahi jante! jus wait nd watch.


Scene 4:
Dhruv- (to himself) dekhtain hain ke ye ladki ab kya karti hai, kam se kam is pe hasne ka phir se ek muka aur miljae ga. (he follows vedika)
Vedika- tum mera pecha kyun kar rahe ho. Don't u hav a life.
Dhruv- Listen oka! i jus want to enjoy myself ok.
Vedika- enjoy ur self! How?
Dhruv- By laughing at u because u don't hav a ticket.
Vedika- (not paying ne attention to Dhruv notices something) did u say something?
Dhruv- Ya i said--- (interrupted by Vedika)
Vedika- ya ya ya! wat ever (she leaves dhruv and walks toward a grl)
Dhruv- Hey! where r u going! wait 4 me.

vedika to da grl- Excuse me!
grl- yes!
Vedika- r u going 2 india
grl- yes? y?
Vedika- well because i also need to go to India but i missed my flight so i was wondering maybe you could give me ur ticket.
grl- no way!
Vedika- please giv it 2 me!
grl- i already said no! i have ben wait ing for a long time to go on a vacation.
Vedika- tell u wat lets make a deal!
grl- wat deal?
Vedika- u give me ur ticket 2 India, nd i'll buy u a plane ticket to anyplace u want first class.
grl- fine if u can book me a ticket to Hawaii, den nd only den u can get my ticket.
Vedika- dats gr8
(vedika makes a few phone calls 4m her cellfone)
Vedika- ya, good, thanku uncle u r da best.
Vedika to da grl- u will be getting ur first class airline ticket to Hawaii within 10 mins. So now can i pls have my ticket.
grl- here u go. (hands vedika the ticket)
Vedika- thanku
grl- no thanku

da grl leaves. vedika walks past dhruv waves her ticket at his face nd leaves, while dhruv has his mouth open in disbelief.
Vedika walks toward the register to confirm her ticket.

person- madam ur ticket has been changed BON VOYAGE
Vedika- thanks (leaves from da register with her luggage)

Vedika is putting her luggage on da luggage compartment, she jus can't put in wen suddenly someone else's hand comes on her handbag nd helps her put it in.

Vedika- (is about to say tahnks wen she notices da face) TUM! Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho tumhari replacement ticket to kal anne wali thi na.
Dhruv- anne wali thi lekin jaldi aagai (pushes vedika down to her seat)
Vedika- don't touch me
Dhruv- muhe tumhe touch karne ka koi shock nahi hai woh to isliye kya kyunki tumne ek line khari ki hai.
Vedika looks at da big line of ppl behind Dhruv. Dhruv turns toward vedika's seat nd walks past her next to da window seat.
Vedika- tum yahan kyun bet rahai ho?
Dhruv- (puts his ticket in front of vedika's face) because my seat is hear Duh!
Vedika- fine.
Dhruv- fine (he sits)
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Recap: Vedika- tum yahan kyun bet rahai ho?
Dhruv- (puts his ticket in front of vedika's face) because my seat is hear Duh!
Vedika- fine.
Dhruv- fine (he sits)

Scene 5:

throughout the whole flight 4m London 2 India Dhruv nd Vedika kept on fighting with each other with da smallest of problems. People on da plane were getting really entertained with Dhruv nd Vedika throwing tantrums at each, dey didn't even want to watch a movie because seeing Dhruv nd Vedika finght was like a movie itself.

After 8 contionous hours of fighting with eachother dey finally arrive to India.

At Da Airport

Vedika- Dhruv! (in an inoncent tone) I want 2 ask u something.
Dhruv- (to himself) lagta hai ke maafi mangna chahti hai, chal chal maaf kardena afterall use maaf karke tujhe tassali milegi. (to vedika) wat? wat is it dat u want 2 tell me.
Vedika- since we r going to staying in da same country 4 atleast 2 months can u pls do me a big favor.
Dhruv- sure! wat is it?
Vedika- (in an angry tone) TRY NOT TO SHOW ME UR UGLY FACE 4 ATLEST 2 MONTHS.
Dhruv- Wat? i m ugly! wat about you. U r still wearing ur halloween mask.
Vedika- oh please is dat ur best comeback 4 me i hav heard better. Now if u don't mind i hav a life to live. Bye.
Dhurv- Watever.
Dey both walk angrily at da oppsite direction.

Vedika's House

Vedika- (yelling) PAPA! BAHIYA! WHERE R U GUYZ
Ramu Kaka- arre Vedika bitya tum agayi.
Vedika- jee ramu kaka app ki bitya rani aagayi! leking papa aur bahiya kahan hai. Koi mujhe airport pe bhi lene nahi aya.
Ramu Kaka- beta tumhare papa ko last minute pe ek urgent meeting pe jana para to isilye woh tumhe lene nahi a sake.
Vedika- pap nahi aseke, lekin bhaiya kyon nahi aye.
Ramu Kaka- Suraj tujhe airport nahi mila! sab ne toh use tujhe pick kerneke liye bhej diya tha.
Vedika- mujhe toh wan par koi nahi mila! main toh khud taxi se ayyi hoon.
Ramu kaka- pata nahi! beta tu arram karle bahot thaki hui lag rahi ho. tumhari flright kaise rahi.
Vedika- Don't even talk about it my flight Ramu Kaka (she narrates da whole inccident wit dhruv nd da flight)
Ramu kaka after hearing da inccedent starts lughing
Vedika- Ramu kaka ap bhi mujh pe has rehe hain.
Ramu Kaka- beta main tum par nahi tumhare ghuse pe has raha hoon. Tumhe sub log keh keh ke thakh gaye hai ke itna ghusa sehat ke liye theekh nahi hai. Aur jis tarha se tum us Dhruv ke baat kar rahi hai use to yeh hi lagta hai ke us Dhruv ne tere ghuse ko ek kholi kitab ki tarha par liya.
Vedika- Ramu Kaka ab app to uski tarak dari karna band karo. Main thori dair ke liye hone wali dhulan ke ghar ja rahi hoon. Jab papa aur bhaiya ghar aajaine to pls mujhe phone kar dena.
Ramu kaka- theekh hai! lekin phele thora sa to aram karlo.
Vedika- nahi main ja rahi hoon ok bye.
Ramu kaka- theekh hai jaisa tum sahi sumjoh bye beta.

pls wirite ur comments
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Recap: Ramu kaka- theekh hai! lekin phele thora sa to aram karlo.
Vedika- nahi main ja rahi hoon ok bye.
Ramu kaka- theekh hai jaisa tum sahi sumjoh bye beta.

Scene 6:
Vedika's encounter wit Dhruv

Vedika leaves her house to go to her best friend's house

Friend's house

Knock Knock

Someone opens da door

Vedika- Namaste Kavita aunty
Kavita- are Vedika tum! andar aao tum London se kab ayi
Vedika- (enters da house) aunty thori der phele. Woh actually kya howa tha ke bh (is shocked to see her brother der, sitting on the sofa nd chatting wit someone) Suraj bhaiya app!
Suraj- (shocked 2 see his sister) vedika tum! tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.
Vedika- (slightly annoyed) main yahan kya lar rahi hoon! yahan par meri ek best friend bahu ban kar a rahi hai aur meri doosri doost dulhan ban kar jaa rahi hai.
Suraj- o haan tara dulhan ban kar jaa rahi hai aur niharika yahan par bahu ban kar a rahi hai.
Vedika- (sarcasm) right! bhaiya kaka keh rehe the ke app mujhe airport lene gey the lekin mujhe toh airport pe mile hi nahi. I waited 4 atleast 1hr.
Suraj- Vedika main gaya tha lene tumhe lekin tum mujhe milee hi nahi! Main gate 33 pe tumhara intasar kar raha tha. lekin tum mujhe milee hi nahi balke mujhe mera best friend milgaya to mein use choor yahan aagya.
Vedika- (slightly annoyed) Bhaiya main gate 33 se nahi gate 34 se aa rahi the.
Suraj- toh pfone pe khena chaiye tha na! tumhe flight information dene bilkul nahi aata.
Kavita- Now stop it both of u! tum dodn ki larei jab shroo hoti hai to khatam hone ka naam hi nahi leti.
Vedika- yes aunty! by the way bhaiya y don't u introduce me to ur best friend for whom u ditched me.
Suraj- certainly. Vedika i would like u to meet (his best friend stands up)
Vedika- (shocked to see his face) TUM! TUM YAHAN PAR KYA KAR REHE HO. MAINE TUMSE AIRPORT PE SRIF EK FAVOR MANGA THA KE TUM MUJHE APNI SHAKULL DO MAHINE KE LIYE NAHI DHIKANA.
Dhruv- (also shocke 2 see her) MAIN! ME! YE MERA GHAR HAI! MUJHE AIRPORT PE BOLTI HO KE APNI SHAKULL MAT DHEKANA AUR KHUD MERA PEECHA KARTI HO!
vedika- (shocked 2 hear dis 4m dhruv) MAIN TUMHARA PECHA KARTI HOON! AGAR MUJHE PATA HOTA KE YE TUMHARA GHAR HAI TO MAIN YAHAN MARTE DUM TAK NAHI AATI.
Suraj- (shocked) tum- tum wo ho jiske bare main Dhruv mujhe bata raha tha.
Vedika- (shocked) kya bata raha the ye mere bare main
Suraj- ye he ke iska London main ek chorel ke sath accident huwa tha, aur usne uski ticket phar di, aur wo jan jan jaye tum uska peecha karti thi.
Dhurv- Suraj kya saath nibhaya hai tu ne meri doosti ka. Tu ne is dian ko jo jo maine tujhe bola tha woh sab kuch bata diya.
Vedika- (shocked 2 hear dis) tumne mujhe dian kaha.
Dhruv- sorry mujhe tumhe dian nahi kehna chahiye tha. Tumhe dian keh kar main to dian ki insult karonga. To tum dian nahi tum dian ki ma ho.
Vedika- (angry) SHUT UP! (walks towards him grabs his neck nd starts 2 strangle him lightly)
dhruv- (to make vedika let his neck lose he starts to pull vedika's hair) (its like da scene in kuch kuch hota hai wen rahul nd anjali start to fight)
Kavita shocked at seeing dem act like kids breaks da fight nd yells at dem both
Kavita- stop it! stop it both of you! tum dono bacche nahi ho!. Vedika tum tara se milne aayi ho vo upar apne kamre main niharika ke sath hai (vedika leaves). Aur dhruv aur suraj tum dono yahi beetho main tume loogon ke liye kahne ke liye kuch bhejti hoon. by da way dhruv vedika ke ja se phele tum use mere samne maafi mango ge understand.
Dhruv- (like a lil kid)- yes mom!
(kavita leaves)

Scene 7:
Scene# 7

Tara's room

Vedika enters tara's room

Vedika- hi guys! wats up
Tara- (excited jumps up and hugs vedika) vedika tum kab ayee.
Niharika- (also excited hugs vedika) haan vedika wen did u come.
Vedika- i came here 20 mins ago, but had a encounter wit an idiot.
Tara- (jokes) who suraj?
Vedika- no ur older brother Dhruv
Tara- hey don't call my Dhruv bhaiya an idiot.
Niharika- yes pls don't!
Vedika- gr8 now he has support! dis is so unfair u guys r now going 2 be each other bhabis. Tara wit rudr nd niharika wit antraiksh. i m da only one left.
Niharika- don't worry u can still b tara's bhabhi by marrying Dhruv.
Vedika- (slightly annoyed) pls ok i'd rather die den marry him.
Tara- ok lets jus 4get about dhruv bhaiya 4 awhile. Vedika if u remeber we asked u do make something 4 us.
Vedika- don't worry i didn't 4get! ur dresses turned out gr8 especially da wedding dress. I swear wen antraiksh nd rudr see u both dey r going 2 faint.
Niharika- vedika stop compelmenting ur own dresses nd lets us compliment dem! by the way were r dey in ur car.
Vedika- no1 i left dem with Tania in London.
Tara- wat! y did u do dat! now wat r we going 2 wear for da wedding.
Vedika- tara stop panicking. Tania also coming to ur wedding if u remeber. da dresses needed a few finishing touches so i left dem wit her to finish. So dey'll be here by tomorrow because dats wen she's coming.
Niharika- she better come.
Vedika- trust me she will! dis so weird though u r both getting 2 each others brothers so y can't u hav da wedding on da same day. Y a months difference.
Niharika- because kavita aunty is very strict about mahuraat things, so dat is y i m getting married first den tara is.
Vedika- ok den! anyways listen i g2g, i m really tired
tara nd niharika- ok bye! see u tomorrow with tania nd da dresses.
Vedika- ok bye (she leaves)

in da living room

Vedika- aunty main ab chalti hoon ok bye.
Kavita- acha beta ek minute ruko! (she calls out for Dhruv, dhruv comesout of his room) dhruv come here! vedika dhruv has something to say 2 u.
Vedika (confused)- wat is it
Dhruv- o haan suraj ghar chalagya (looks at kavita who gives him a dirty look) acha i m sorry for calling u dian nd insulting u.
Vedika- (has big smile on her face) its okay! ne ways aunty main chalte hoon bye aunty! bye dhruv
Kavita- bye beta.
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Scene 8:
Vedika's house

Vedika- (sees her father, runs 2 him and hugs him) hi papa! i m very upset with u!
Aman- y r u upset with me beta!
Vedika- kyun ke app mujhe airport lene nahi aye aur bhaiya ko galat flight information dede.
Aman- ok beta i m very sorry! acha ab app ye bataye ke app ke ye papa app ko khush karne ke liye kya kar sakta hai?
Vedika- umm abhi to kuch nahi lekin bad me jab bhi mujhe kuch chahiye hoga app mujhe denge.
Aman- theekh hai, lekin maine tumhe kabhi bhi kise cheez se mana nahi kya.
Vedika- i know papa but still.
Aman- ok beta, now go nd sleep u look tired.
Vedika- i m! o papa b4 i 4get can u pls send da driver to da airport in da morning because Tania is coming nd i will b at Niharika's house getting her nd Tara ready for da mehendi. so jus tell da driver 2 bring Tania at her house with da dresses.
Aman- ok beta consider it done now go to bed.
Vedika- ok papa good night.
Aman- good night

vedika leaves

next morning at Niharika's house

Knock Knock someone opens da door

Vedika- namaste sundari aunty.
Sundari- are vedika beta ao under ao niharika apne kamre mein Tara ke saath hai.
Vedika- ok aunty (vedika leaves)

Niharika's room

Niharika- Vedika finally you came. Where is Tania
Vedika- wo--- (interupted by someones entry)
Tania- Tania Yahan hai
Tara- Thank god tum agai
Vedika- okay lets jus get u both ready! tainia u get out da dresses, i'll do da hair, nd u do da makeup nd b4 u know it we will be done.
Tania- u got it


Scene 9:
Vedika nd Tania start doing Tara nd Niharika's makeup nd hair after 3 hrs of hair, makeup, jewellery nd dresses everyone is ready nd dey come down.
Niharika comes down with Vedika nd wen dey r coming down all da guests look at Niharika nd Vedika. Niharika is wearing a sleeveless lahanga. The top is pink nd the bottom is white, her hair is open. Vedika is wearing a lahanga full sleeves with cuts in da middle the top is yellow nd da bottom is purple her hair is tied. While dey r coming down Dhruv enters nd he looks at vedika.
Vedika nd Niharika come down nd Niharika sits next to Antariksh den Tara nd Tania come down. Tara's dress is similar to Vedika's except its blue nd brown, nd Tania's is similar to Niharika's except it is red nd white. Tara comes nd sits next to Rudr.

The mehendi ceremony starts nd Dhruv jus keeps staring nd vedika indirectly, vedika notices dis nd gets really annoyed so she tells some kids something which we can't hear. 10 mins later da same kids start following Dhruv nd while he is bz staring at Vedika a kid comes and lights a fire cracker near him. The fire cracker starts exploding nd Dhruv starts jumping after it stops Dhruv realises dat it was Vedika's idea nd goes up to her nd says

Dhruv- you think u r so smart don't you
Vedika- ye tum ne kaha maine nahi (vedika is about to walk but Dhruv holds her hand nd pulls her forward vedika twirls nd her hands land on dhruv's shoulder, dhruv den holds her by her waist tightly. By did time everyone enjoying.)
Vedika feeling a lil uncomfortable whispers to Dhruv- choro mujhe! leave me!
Dhruv lets go of her vedika starts walking but Dhruv holds her by her dupatta. Vedika stops turns around 2 see dat dhruv is holding her by her duppata. Dhruv lets go nd walks towards her .

nd starts signing

Dhruv: Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti (hits her her lightly on her forehead a couple of times)

Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

(vedika starts walking getting annoyed, nd Antariksh, Rudr, nd Suraj join in with Dhruv to annoy vedika, but Dhruv is da only one signing.)

Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Pyaar Usse Bhi Hai Magar Shuruaat Tumhi Se Chahe
Khudh Mein Ulji Ulji Hai Par Bhaalo Ko Suljaayein

(starts walking fast nd trying to avoid Dhruv but of no use Dhurv finds her nd holds her by her hands)

I Mean You're All The Same Yaar
Hum Achche Dost Hai Par Uss Nazar Se Tumko Dekha Nahin
Woh Sab To Teek Hai Par Uss Barein Mein Maine Socha Nahin

Sab Se Alag Hai Tum Yeh Keh Ke Paas Tumhaare Aaye
Aur Kuch Din Mein Tum Mein Alag Sa Kuch Bhi Na Usko Paiye

Uff Yeh Kaisi Shirt Pehnthe Ho
Yeh Kaise Bhaal Khatathe Ho
Ghaadi Tehz Chalathe Ho
Tum Jaldi Mein Kyo Khaathe Ho
Gimme A Break (gives a lil attitude)

Tumhe Badalne Ko Paas Woh Aati Hai
Tumhe Mitaane Ko Chaal Bichati Hai
Baaton Baaton Mein Tumhe Pasathi Hai
Pehle Hasathi Hai… Phir Bada Rulaati Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

(seeing Vedika getting bullied by Dhruv, Antariksh,, Rudr nd Suraj. Tania, Niharika, Tara ll join in to save Vedika, but vedika is da only one singing)

Vedika: (walks near Dhurv) Eh Itna Hi Khudh Se Khush Ho To Peeche Kyon Aate Ho
Phool Kabhi To Hazar Thofein Akhir Kyon Laaten Ho

(foulds her hands in to fists puts dem on her chin nd walks away 4m Dhruv) Apna Naam Nahin Bataya Aapne
Coffee Peene Chalenge
Main Aapko Ghar Chod Doon
Phir Kab Milenge

Bikhra Bikhra Be Matlab Sa Toota Phoota Jeena
Aur Kehte Ho Alag Se Hai Hum Taan Ke Apna Seena
(fiddles with Dhruv's hair)

Bheega Tolya Kahin Farsh Pe
Toothpaste Ka Dakhan Kahin
Kal Ke Mauze Ulat Ke Pehne
Waqt Ka Khuch Bhi Hosh Nahin

Jeena Ka Tumko Dang Sikhlati Hai
Tumhe Jaanwar Se Insaan Banaati Hai
Uske Bina Ek Pal Rehna Sakhoge Tum
Usko Pata Hai Yeh Keh Na Sakhoge Tum
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Jaane Kaun Kaun Se Din Woh TumkoYaad Dilaayein
Pyaar Ko Chahe Bhool Bhi Jaayein
Taareeqein Na Bhoolayein
First March Ko Nazar Milaayee
Chaar April Ko Main Milne Aayee
Ikees May Ko Tumne Chuwa Tha
Che June Mujhe Kuch Hua Tha

Ladko Ka Kya Hai Kissi Bhi Mor Pe Woh Mur Jaayein
Abhi Kissi Ke Hai Abhi Kissi Aur Se Woh Jud Jaayein

Tumhaare Mummy Daddy Ghar Par Nahin Hai
Great… Main Aaa Jaon?
Tumhaari Friend Akeli Ghar Jaa Rahi Hai
Bechari… Main Chod Aaon
Uff

Ek Haan Kehne Ko Kitna Dehlati Hai
Thak Jaate Hai Hum Woh Jee Behlati Hai

Woh Sharmati Hai Kabhi Chupati Hai
Ladki Jo Haan Kehde Usse Nibhati Hai
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Na Na Na…

(Antariksh getting slightly annoyed goes on his feet for niharika nd begs, same with rudr, nd suraj)

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti (Ladki Kyon… Oh God)
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti (Na Na Na Na, Oh God Shut Up…)
Alright Alright Iss Mein Jagadne Ki Kya Baat Hai Yaar
Pehle Pehle Bawarein Jaise Aas Paas Mand Rai (Arre… But I)
Phir Busy Hoon Kehkar Tumko Woh Tarkai (Come On Vedika)…
Samjha Karo Darling Aaj Bohat Kaam (Arre… Meri Bhi To Suno)
Door Hua To Kya Dil Mein Tumhaara Naam Hai (Oh… wow)
Jiss Chehre Par Marte Hai Woh Boring Ho Jaaye (I'm Not Listening To You)
Kuch Hi Din Mein Nazrein Inki Idhar Udhar Mand Rai (I'm Not Listening To You)
Sirf Pyaar Se Zindagi Nahin Chalti (OK I'm Not With Her)
(gives him ahard dirty look nd waolks away)
Tum Interior Decoration Ka Course Kyon Nahin Karti

Vedika after singing walks away 4m Dhruv. While Dhurv jus stands der in shock of how he jus got insulted.
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Scene 10:
Mehendi Ceremony

Dhruv (walks towards vedika)- hi! dance acha karleti
Vedika (gives Dhruv a dirty look)- Thanks (with attitude walks away)
Dhruv (to himself)- bahut ghusse wali hai ye! watever! he walks toward suraj. (to suraj) yaar teri ye bahen bahut gharam demag wali hai.
Suraj- Hey! dont talk bad about my lil sis.
Dhruv- i was jus speaking genereally.

Tania enters with Vedika in da converstion

Vedika (slightly annoyed at tania for draging her where Dhruv was)- Tania tum---
Tania- Vedika please i wanna tlk 2 some new ppl (looks at suraj)
Vedika (notices dis nd gets da hint)- ookk den! so bhaiya--
Taina- (notices dis nd turns toward Dhruv) so dhruv! hi! how r u.
Dhruv- i m good! so tumhara project kaisa ja raha hai.
Tania- project wat project! o u mean dat project! wo project to cancel hogaya.
Vedika (shocked upon hearing dis gives a dirty look 2 tania) wat do u mean cancel hogaya.
Tania- well u see tumhare airport jaane ke baad, do u remeber wo car accident jo tumhara Dhruv ke saath howa tha.
Vedika- (with attitude) ya!
Tania- ya so jab wo accident howa tha na to jo kim, sania, aur mere partners the na wo sab us waqt us car mein dhruv ke saath the, vo log us waqt dhruv ke satht he. phir unho ne tumhara mazak urana shuru kar diya aur phir ek zabardast larai hui aur koi student oxford ke student ke saath kam nahi karna chaata tha jab tak wo log unse maafi nahi mangte, nd since no one was insisting on apologising da project got cancelled.
Vedika (annoyed)- tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho. aur maine poona mein fabric ka order bhi dediya. Tania i jus feel like killing u rit now.
Tania (in a clam manner)- de diya hai to cancel karlo its not a big deal.
Vedika- kaisay cancel kardo i have to go to poona to cancel it personally because it will get mailed by tommorrow, nd also der r some formalities.
Tania- o.
Vedika- yes now because for ur stupidity i have to leave now. thanks a lot tania.
Tania- welcome, pur maine kiya kya hai.
vedika leaves nd walks toward her dad

Vedika- dad can i tlk 2 for a min
Aman- sure beta (takes her daughter aside) wat is it?
Vedika tells him da whole incident with da assingment nd how she has to go to poona.
Aman- ofcourse beta u can go! but i m not da one u need 2 tell dey r (points toward antariksh, nihraika, tara, nd rudr)
Vedika- yes dad (she leaves, nd walks towrd dem)

Vedika- hi guys nd congrats
Rudr- thanks vedika! wats da problem u seem tensed.
vedika tells dem da whole incident with da assingment nd how she has to go to poona.
Tara (upset)- well if u have 2 go den u have 2 go
Vedika- i know! i know! i m so sorry i promise i'll make it up 2 u guys tommorrow during da sangeet.
Niharika- fine! but u need a punishment for leaving us today
Vedika (confused)- punishment! kaisi punishment?
Niharika- first say dat u'll do it!
Vedika- ok ok! i promise i'll do watever punishment u tell me to do
Niharika (calls out 4 dhruv)
Vedika- usse kyun bolarahi ho
Niharika- kuch kam hai isliye!
Dhruv comes running!
Dhruv- yes bhabhi! app ne mujhe bolaya
Niharika- yes! dekho vedika ko poona jana hai aur tum use leke jao
Vedika (shocked)- KIYA! u know dat i can't stand him
Niharika- yes i know dat! dats y i m telling him 2 go wit u, dats ur punishment! nd u promised dat u'll do watever itell u 2 do.
Dhurv- bhabhi! isme app mujhe kyun involve kar rahi ho
Niharika- Dhruv ye tumhare bhabhi kehrahi hai! nd now u have to do it.
Dhruv- yes bhabhi
vedika- fine! i'll do it

dey both leave

In da car

Dhruv turns on da stereo nd dis really crappy ghazal is coming on which is really annoying Vedika, its also annoying Dhruv but he doesn't show it he jus enjoys looking at vedika getting annoyed.

Vedika- pls! ise band karo
Dhruv- y should i! its my car.
vedika gets annoyed nd turns da stereo off.

Dhruv- tum ne ye kyun kya (turns it back on again)
Vedika- mujhe ghazle sone ka shock nahi hai
Dhruv- par mujhe hai! listen... ye lo tumhari dokhan agyi
Vedika gets out of da car nd slams da door hard.

three hours later Vedika finally comes out nd sits in da car.

Dhruv (annoyed)- thori aur der laga deti!
Vedika (annoyed)- jus shut up nd drive!
Dhruv drives da car nd through out da ride no one says a word 2 each other.



Scene 11:
The Next Day

Raizada's House

Knock Knock
Opens da door

Vedika- Namaste uncle!
Vrien- Namaste beta! bahr kyun khari ho, undar aao
Vedika enters da house
Vedika (worried)- uncle Tara ka SMS aaya tha ke abhi yahan aao. is everything ok. Mere kal jaane ke baad ceremony main ko howa to nahi na
Viren (confused)- Nahi! kuch bhi to nahi howa. Tum Tara ke kamre main kyun ahi jati! shaid wo tumhe kuch zaroori baat batana chahati ho!
Vedika- ok uncle! (vedika leaves)

Tara's Room

Vedika (panicking)- Tara! Tara! Where r u!
A voice comes 4m behind vedika.
Voice- main yahan hoon
Vedika jumps up a bit nd turns around a lil scared nd is shocked 2 see Dhruv der.
Vedika (annoyed)- ise ghatiya mazak nahi mila tha
Dhruv- tha lekin... ne wayz 4get it
Vedika- watever! by da way where is Tara.
Dhruv- tara! tara to niharika ke saath hai!
Vedika (confused)- Niharika ke saath to phri usne mujhe SMS pe kyun bola ke main yahan aajaon
Dhurv- isilye kyun ke wo SMS usne bheja hi nahi tha
Vedika (shocked)- usne nahi, to phri kisne
Dhruv- maine bheja tha, tara ke cell se
Vedika (annoyed)- HOW DARE U TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUWI KE TUM MUJHE SMS KARO
Dhruv- relax! maine srif tumhe ek SMS bheja hai, valentine's card nahi
Vedika (annoyed)- ab mujhe yahan bulaya hai, aur mera time bhi waste kya hai so y don't u just tell y u called me here.
Dhruv- glad 2 tell u! main tumhe yahan bulaya isliye hai kyunke mein tumse doosti karan chata hoon
Vedika (confused)- doosti! mujse, is dis some kind of a sick joke
Dhruv- no! no, its no joke kal ke inccident ke bad mujhe aisa laga ke we should b frenz, i mean dushmaan banana to ek second ka kaam hai, lekin doost banana zindagi bhar ka. So wat say
Vedika- ok! lets b frenz den.
Dhruv (brings our his hand)- hi! i m Dhruv
Vedika (also brings out her hand)- Jaanti hoon! newayz i m vedika
Dey both let go nd laugh!
Vedika- newayz! i hav 2 go now shaam ko saangeet hai na
Dhruv- o ya Sangeet.
Vedika- so bye
Dhruv- bye
Vedika leaves.
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Scene 12:
Sangeet at the Raizada's

Its 4:00 all the guests have gathered at gathered at the Raizada's house for the sangeet Rudr, antraiksh, Suraj, Dhruv, Kavita, Vrien are all present. The only people who are not present are Vedika, Tania, Niharika, and Tara.

Dhruv to suraj- suraj where is Vedika?
Suraj- I have no idea, she said dat she'll come on her own.
Kavita- I hope dat she is okay, she has all da dresses, nd we can't start da ceremony until she comes.
Dhruv- Suraj, call her on her cell.
Suraj- i tried her phone is shut off
Dhruv- I hope she is okay.
Suddenly someone opens the door all the guests look and its none other then Vedika. Vedika walks towards Kavita.

Kavita- Kya Vedika itna time koi lagata hai kya! tumhe bola tha ke 3:00 baje tak tumhe yahan hona chahye.
Vedika- I am
Dhruv joins da converstaion
Dhruv to vedika (annoyed)- wat was da reason now.
Vedika (annoyed)- koi mujhe bolne dega!
Kavita- Dhruv be quiet! vedika you tell us y u came late.
Vedika- as i was saying aunty main yahan a hi rahi the ke mera highway pe ek accident hogaya.
Kavita (worried)- omg vedika r u okay! kaise howa
Vedika- aunty don't worry it was a minor accident luckily no ne got hurt.
Kavita- I m so sorry beta!
Vedika- its okay aunty! anyway aunty jus give me 30mins aur main un dono leke atti hoon.
Kavita- okay beta ab jao
Vedika leaves

Tara's Bedroom

Tara: I'll kill her jab wo mujhe miligi na i'll kill her.
Niharika: calm down! i m sure she has a good excuse.
vedika opens da door
Vedika- hi guys!
Tara (annoyed)- ya bhi koi waqt hai anne ka
Vedika- I m really sorry she tells dem da whole inccident.
Niharika- omg thnakgod ur ok.
Vedika- ok ok! lets jus get u guys ready

After 30 mins everyone is ready and dey all come down.
Niharika is wearing a red saree her hair is tied in a braid
Tara is wearing a pink saree her hair is open
Vedika is wearing a sleeves yellow lahenga he hai is open
and Tania is wearing an orange Kurta pajama.


this credit goes to harry_fan2
Edited by *Priyanka Rox* - 19 years ago
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credit goes to harry fan2!!!
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that was really nice!!! but what happen next!!

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