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Posted: 12 years ago
sach mein beautiful update.. feel so light hearted...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am speechless ... she finally seems to be coming out of the nightmare ... even through the terrible times, her motherly instincts & joy for the little one is obvious.

Absolutely love this story.

Sorry for the late reply Zehra but I missed out this update's PM in all the recent PM's in my inbox.

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Zehra!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the chapter!!!!

The best one yet!!!!!

Khushi not being able to make Jalebi was a great touch... I could have never guessed it

Why didn't she eat it???

Glad she is coming back to normal but somehow I felt Arnav should suffer a bit more

Khushi shouldn't forgive him or let him touch her

I'm guessing her family members are gathered downstairs

You know what I love most about this story... the unpredictability

I can't figure where the story is going/... what you are going to write next

great going hun🤗

Love ya
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I think this update was longer than usual too :)
Loved it !

Is Arnav planning something for Khushi? What work are they talking about ? I'm not going to guess😛

Am I reading too much or is there more to Aman than you're letting us know ? With every update I'm just more curious ...😕

Like in every update I loved Arnav and Khushi parts in this too...
The slow progress you're showing in Khushi's attitude towards Arnav is awesome...
The jalebi making... It was different ! And he let her do it again and again till she succeeded...Loved it :)
And she didn't eat it ??

Anjali being with them and Dev is helping Khushi a lot ! Khushi's almost her own self when she's with them...She speaks nowadays !!!

WHAT IS THE SURPRISE ???? 😃
Again no guessing😛 ... So you update soon !!
Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res :D .. read after match !!

Edit:

Aww my poor baby, she forgot how to make her signature dish..:(
And I'm glad arnav encouraged her to practise until she got them.perfect.. you can sense she.is.still.frightened of him..

I love that she is opening up more and talking to Di..
Arnav has to be very patient until she fully opens up to him..

Oo, I wonder where anji is taking her.. I have a faint idea.. but ill keep zipped and see if it comes true.

Great update lovey !!! <3
😳
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Un'res !

First of all , I can't believe that I'm on First Page 😉 😆 🤣 After a long time I guess 🤣

Long Update . Yayyy !!

Good to see improvement in Khushi. I'm touched with CD's & Jalebi part !

Awesome Zehra ! ! Damn Good !


Edited by ...Areeba... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's good to see Arnav feeling remorse and regret at the way he treated Khushi. I can't believe how caring Khushi is even after Arnav did all those horrible things to her. I'm glad Khushi's getting better, she even talks to Arnav. I like the fact that Arnav was so patient with her when she was making jalebies. Will she go back to her parents after she has the baby? I wonder what the surprise is. It was a really great update. Can you please pm me the next time you update too?
Edited by awaww - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi has finally started talking to Arnav😊... The part where Arnav cries seeing the video was touching. I guess her parents have come to meet her as promised... Just hope she stays back with Arnav; he would surely not want to get separated but want to see Khushi's perspective about him. Lovely update.
Edited by svj2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Dear.
I luv the fact that she is opening up now. She made jalebies. N didn't eat them.
He was there with her all the while
Her parents are here??? Is it???
Edited by mansi_47 - 12 years ago

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